Lost to the Dark

i could have written this. right.there.with.you.

unfortunately.

i will not say that i like or enjoy this, but i will say that it is written very well.

Thank you, Minverva and I am very sorry you have had to undergo this kind of terribleness.  Seems you and I have a lot in common.  

I love the way you put this,your imagery is very well done. I felt like I was in the room facing my own fears.

I also really like the flow.

Xx

Thank you for the read and your generous comment, Harley.  

I get scared of the same thing...

Maybe we all do....

"Lost to the Dark" as opposed to "Lost In the Dark."  Maybe I'm overanalyzing, but that "to" implies some distance to me.  The dark hasn't enveloped you.  Maybe a temporary victory at best.  You obviously acknowledge the dark's presence, and may fear it.  But it hasn't consumed you.  Give it a good hard look, find it's weaknesses.  Keep it close like you would an enemy.  I think you're probably doing this already.  I promise I'll try to ease up on the abstractions.  

Crow, I so much appreciate your commentary.  I am not sure about changing it yet.  I am thinking it over. I like lost TO the dark...but as you said, I'm not lost yet. At the same time, in that moment I was lost to the dark-hard thinking. Love your comments so much.  

Well crafted

Creepy and eerie

Feel it Like

I am all too familiar with this. The dark of sleep awakens deep stirrings of feelings better left lying in the dark than deceiving in the mind.

Just remember that the dark isn't a place, just a state that fades with the help of light and warmth and those can be found and made.

A heavy write. I am sorry you have felt this too. Much love to you my dear Virginia.

oooh this is really good, sorry you feel this way though.  I hope it gets better for you!!!

night terrors, the wailing, the dancing shadow. something touching you, that isn't there. something wants to love you...

Great atmosphere projected right here !