Crimsin

Very beautiful write. I’m sure you hate me regardless. Though I still have a deep appreciation for art and poetry. You are kind…stay that way

I hate what you're doing that's all.. let go of your anger and leave Muse alone.. then all will be peaceable in this sacred place again..

Your darkness does shine, Crimsin.  There are clearly battles both external and internal, but you're up for both.  You're a warrior and a friend.

thank you Crowfly for such a heartfelt comment and for seeing me as a warrior and a friend.. as I see you as well with love Crim

Love this

Street tough, arrogant, great line

I celebrate the whore in you, beautiful mayhem

thank you Sir Poet for loving my dark side with love and respect Brenda

"not beguiled and bewildered of mind  
street smart cunt  
hardened and vengeful if crossed"

real passionate ball kicker - the whole poem has real power

:-)

thank you David for such a great comment.. with love and respect Crim :)

Wow. You are so beautiful, Crim. Thank you for sharing about your heartbreaking opposing personalities--they are both heart-rendering and endearing in different ways. I think this one is my new fave of yours. "I just want to go back to being a whore on this macabre stage"--perfect ending. You are truly a magical, fascinating individual.  

Toni words can not express how much you touched my heart with your kindness.. thank you most graciously lovely lady :) with love Crim

Sweet Crim.......YOU......regardless of the beauty or darkness that shines thru.....are luved by many here......including me......you're such a sweetheart and great friend.....anything you write......ROCKS!! You write like no one else......expressive and totally YOU......Luv and hugs xo :)

beautiful Flower thank you for such a loving comment making my day brighter with your sun.. I love you dear friend with love Crim :)

My dearest Crim, (I mean this total affection) u can be my Whore anytime!! lol
Very strong ink as always! :)

thank you Poe you made me smile wide with your comment :) with love Crim

This is honest and
gritty which is the
way most of your
renderings coma across.

the only way to be is to
let the real you shine,
however so darkly it is.

But, hey that's who we are'
Never let the chains bind
you... They suck the life
from your genuine personality.

  Pan

thank you Pan for the insightful and wise comment.. you made my day with your add :) with love and respect Crim

Ahh Crim..you really bleed words as ever, in the toughness n macabre. The more delicately stronger u are, the more darkness u exude. Its a vent afterall. Remain the lovely lively lightful love dear. Much respects.Xx.

Uma you see through to my soul so clearly yes I'm just venting thank you lovely one for such an insightful comment with love and respect Crim

Sometimes I wonder if you and I have the same wildness of heart, despite me being significantly younger and less experienced in life. Your pieces always rouse a sense of familiarity in me.

Darkly beautiful writing<3

Kitty could be but I feel a fierce beauty in you that surpasses mine thank you for leaving your thoughts with love Crim :)

you write such cutting honest pieces with an unapologetic [&] unforgiving pen, it's difficult not to leave without my own scars opened up to breathe [like cheap wine]

this piece reminded me so much of an Anaïs Nin quote that often brings into perspective my own duel personality...
"There were always in me, two women at least, one woman
desperate and bewildered, who
felt she was drowning and
another who would leap into a
scene, as upon a stage, conceal
her true emotions because they were weaknesses, helplessness,
despair, and present to the world
only a smile, an eagerness,
curiosity, enthusiasm, interest."

another poignant, thought provoking poem, beautiful Brenda
peace & love xo

beautiful one I love you.. I hate that this may have opened any scars.. thank you for loving me still, for being here and a eye opening quote.. thank you from my heart love Brenda

the two of you fight like sisters, but you also seem to protect each other. your writing is always fierce...

thank you John for an insightful comment with love Crim

This is so so beautiful..tender and loving with every stroke..I love both sides to u..the sweetest combination of fiery spirit and cuddly love..your perfect in my eyes beautiful sister and right now your face and words are the ones that bring my spirt of fire back..thank u ❤️

thank you lovely one for loving all sides of me.. I'm happy that your fierce fire is coming back :) thank you for a heartfelt comment with love Brenda

Oh My Lovely Crim...
Never more beautiful words have been spoken...

I feel you here.
Deeply

XOXO
Fire

thank you beautiful Fire for understanding :) with love Crim

i love the play of the opposites in this. the crass words sitting right next to the delicate ones. stirring and lovely.

thank you for showing love to this write Goddess :) with love Crim

Crim,

Sometimes you have to stake clam to your hill and unfurl that flag and let 'er fly! Great write!!!

tornado

thank you Tornado you make me smile :) with love Crim

hey i'm me fuck you = good poetry

i like the recent no punches pulled mam....

thank you John you made me smile :) with love and respect Crim

love you both :)

thank you Hashman :) love you too with love Crim

I'm "calling Crimsin forth" while
simultaneously dialing Brenda.
Being a fan of all that is you, I must
call to congratulate both on this
fantastic, raw, tenderly powerful ink.

Honored to know you, both. :)
Sending love,
Chad

thank you Chad you made me smile with your comment :) with love Brenda

Very brilliant write. Thanks for sharing.

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

Who better to entice her savage tongue than the delicate, wingless object of her obsession? Savoring, always - blue angel

thank you beautiful Angel you made me smile today :) with love Crim