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Her rain ~ His thunder
She was rain upon his flesh
dripping from in between
He was thunder inside her
with each powerful stride
dripping from in between
He was thunder inside her
with each powerful stride
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Re: Her rain ~ His thunder
11th Dec 2014 8:09pm
Meteorological imagery, poignant when we in the British Isles are facing a 'weather bomb' which, in my part of England, is heavy rain.
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2014 4:22am
Storms are beautiful.. And so is this.. Thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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12th Dec 2014 6:41am
Rain and Thunder
they say when it rains it pours
drown my flesh, wash away my wants for another
feel my stroke rumble inside you like thunder
hear the sound of beating hands against your war drum
the mixture of rain and thunder a melodic symphony
rain on me, turn my dry hardened flesh into drench-fulness
delight in my thunder let no other put us asunder
Tommie Lynn I could never stay away for very long.. your so sexy with the pen
they say when it rains it pours
drown my flesh, wash away my wants for another
feel my stroke rumble inside you like thunder
hear the sound of beating hands against your war drum
the mixture of rain and thunder a melodic symphony
rain on me, turn my dry hardened flesh into drench-fulness
delight in my thunder let no other put us asunder
Tommie Lynn I could never stay away for very long.. your so sexy with the pen
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re: Re: Her rain ~ His thunder
12th Dec 2014 10:37am
I really like the way you put it Watcher. Talk about a sexy pen! Always appreciate your words. Thank you :)
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