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Love Me
The feeling of his touch
along my warm nakedness
I whisper, Love me
He parts my soft lips
and my heart is ablaze
Taking my sighs, he loves me
My breasts against him
he treasures my scent
He whispers, Love me
My fingers glide into his
and he's drenched in me
Taking our time, we make love
along my warm nakedness
I whisper, Love me
He parts my soft lips
and my heart is ablaze
Taking my sighs, he loves me
My breasts against him
he treasures my scent
He whispers, Love me
My fingers glide into his
and he's drenched in me
Taking our time, we make love
Published 11th Dec 2014
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11th Dec 2014 7:49pm
Yes, taking some time, and savoring every second. Beautiful and sensual, Tommie.
11th Dec 2014 8:03pm
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11th Dec 2014 9:05pm
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12th Dec 2014 1:38am
You are too kind Poet. I'm rusty but it feels so good to be back. You've been busy, I have some reading to catch up on.
Always great to hear from you. Thank you Poet ;)
Always great to hear from you. Thank you Poet ;)
12th Dec 2014 4:24am
Beautiful write.. sometimes it's nice to slow down, and take our time..
Dave
Dave
12th Dec 2014 10:42am
12th Dec 2014 2:23pm
Love me some, Whitesnake.. and great song.. Although, Slide It In, is also a great song...
Dave
Dave
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12th Dec 2014 5:08pm
I am so glad to again read one of your poems. You describe, in this piece, a beautiful, sensual interlude. Welcome back Tommie!
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