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'Untitled'
I want to...
I feel an urge to...
Oh damn passion's
drivin' me to...
wanna, taste the lips
of a beauty so fine
hold her closely...
her hand in mine
kiss her tenderly
'pon soft full lips
amazed, a gaze
in those sweet eyes
that brightly flash
then I'd 'take her...'
at a moments notice,
no need to ask
suckle her
sweetness
til the morn's light
because
anything less
just wouldn't
be right...
whisper words
that stoke
her fire
stroke her
gently,into
passion's desire
lay her
naked thoughts
before me
like dinner...
she whispers,
"your pleasure
is my name"
but with her
the treasure
I'd claim
I'd feel
like a lottery WINNER...
I feel an urge to...
Oh damn passion's
drivin' me to...
wanna, taste the lips
of a beauty so fine
hold her closely...
her hand in mine
kiss her tenderly
'pon soft full lips
amazed, a gaze
in those sweet eyes
that brightly flash
then I'd 'take her...'
at a moments notice,
no need to ask
suckle her
sweetness
til the morn's light
because
anything less
just wouldn't
be right...
whisper words
that stoke
her fire
stroke her
gently,into
passion's desire
lay her
naked thoughts
before me
like dinner...
she whispers,
"your pleasure
is my name"
but with her
the treasure
I'd claim
I'd feel
like a lottery WINNER...
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14th Aug 2014 1:08pm
untitled, eh?....
is this so every woman can just insert
her own name?....lol....
you my dear PM are incorrigble....
i think the women who flock at your feet would say they're the lottery winners....lol.... :)
is this so every woman can just insert
her own name?....lol....
you my dear PM are incorrigble....
i think the women who flock at your feet would say they're the lottery winners....lol.... :)
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14th Aug 2014 1:30pm
Lmao nah, a loooonnng time ago I had an idea to write a book
of poetry called, The Untitled Ink... This just happens to be an add to that lol... N aaawww gosh ur sweet lady!
I wish u were right though! I ain't that fortunate though lol
Thank u so much sweetness :)
of poetry called, The Untitled Ink... This just happens to be an add to that lol... N aaawww gosh ur sweet lady!
I wish u were right though! I ain't that fortunate though lol
Thank u so much sweetness :)
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14th Aug 2014 1:10pm
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14th Aug 2014 1:32pm
I'm just a pathetic, hopeless romantic bro.
This is just more proof! lol
Thank you, truly n always appreciate the support :)
This is just more proof! lol
Thank you, truly n always appreciate the support :)
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14th Aug 2014 2:08pm
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14th Aug 2014 8:13pm
Aaaawwww Thank you sweetheart, I'm pleased you enjoyed
n truly appreciate your continued support :)
n truly appreciate your continued support :)
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14th Aug 2014 3:36pm
PoeromantiK Mind stealing the hearts of our DUI ladies. You are holding the golden ticket my friend.
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14th Aug 2014 9:39pm
Oh bro. You're far too kind! But I deeply appreciate it :)
Thanks a bunch bro. I hope you never feel like your
time's been wasted when you visit my page :)
Thanks a bunch bro. I hope you never feel like your
time's been wasted when you visit my page :)
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14th Aug 2014 4:16pm
"lay her
naked thoughts
before me
like dinner..." that line was oh so tasty!!! Beautiful Ink Poetik ..enjoyed!!!!
naked thoughts
before me
like dinner..." that line was oh so tasty!!! Beautiful Ink Poetik ..enjoyed!!!!
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16th Aug 2014 4:13am
So strange I thought sure I replied to this... Anyways
Thank you my dear, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :) truly n always appreciate you
Thank you my dear, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :) truly n always appreciate you
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14th Aug 2014 5:37pm
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14th Aug 2014 8:12pm
Lay her naked thoughts in front of me like dinner- Awesome line Bro. PK!!!
Great piece man!!
Love the read!!
You ink well Bro.!!
Sir Lancelott
Great piece man!!
Love the read!!
You ink well Bro.!!
Sir Lancelott
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14th Aug 2014 9:46pm
Lance my dear bro. Considering how masterfully you weave your sensual gems I'm truly honored by your
praise n appreciate your support always :) thank u much bro.
praise n appreciate your support always :) thank u much bro.
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14th Aug 2014 10:48pm
Excellent tempo in this wonderful piece.
I enjoyed the light and smooth flow and of course the honesty and desire to have "her" the one true love, even if only for one night of passion!
I loved it!
Cheers
Broomie
I enjoyed the light and smooth flow and of course the honesty and desire to have "her" the one true love, even if only for one night of passion!
I loved it!
Cheers
Broomie
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14th Aug 2014 10:56pm
Aaaawwww Broomie, c'mere n let me kiss u my sweet baby! lol thank u so much sweetheart, truly appreciate you so much n always :)
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15th Aug 2014 00:24am
lay her
naked thoughts
before me
like dinner...
Oh, that's so sensual ... the metaphor of consuming this and that way ...
Love the underlying tenderness and sweetness, Poe.
naked thoughts
before me
like dinner...
Oh, that's so sensual ... the metaphor of consuming this and that way ...
Love the underlying tenderness and sweetness, Poe.
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16th Aug 2014 4:14am
Wow my I got my CHI back! get it? lol
So happy to hear from u again sweetheart
n yea so thankful too! :)
So happy to hear from u again sweetheart
n yea so thankful too! :)
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15th Aug 2014 7:34am
"lay her naked thoughts
before me
like dinner..."
~fanning myself
well, Papi... that was something else entirely. sexy & sensual delivery. enjoyed
before me
like dinner..."
~fanning myself
well, Papi... that was something else entirely. sexy & sensual delivery. enjoyed
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16th Aug 2014 4:16am
Mami! Love when my ink makes you feel what I'm saying! :) thank u mi amour :)
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15th Aug 2014 7:50am
Okay this was sexy to me... Glossed in beauty and love, but sexy as heck... :)
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16th Aug 2014 3:52pm
Teasing? lol not me sweetheart, it's a desire that I'd HAPPILY
do lol... Thank u sweetheart for ur support :)
do lol... Thank u sweetheart for ur support :)
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16th Aug 2014 3:25pm
Mercy me, Erotic Ninja, luv :-* ~
I HAVE been missing out, I see. Good. Lord. Man.
What happens when you do poetry readings where you're from, luv? I'm just curious. Are there mass conflagrations? Firefighters called out to douse the flames of women going up in spontaneous combustion? Or do women merely throw themselves at you, hoping they'll catch you... ;-)
I'm just trying to envision it in my mind's eye, that's all. :-*
I HAVE been missing out, I see. Good. Lord. Man.
What happens when you do poetry readings where you're from, luv? I'm just curious. Are there mass conflagrations? Firefighters called out to douse the flames of women going up in spontaneous combustion? Or do women merely throw themselves at you, hoping they'll catch you... ;-)
I'm just trying to envision it in my mind's eye, that's all. :-*
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16th Aug 2014 3:54pm
Ha! ONLY in my wildest dreams lady! nope the reality is no more than five people in my real life even know that I write lol
three of them are family who also write lol
Thanks for ur very sweet n funny comment n ur support as always :)
three of them are family who also write lol
Thanks for ur very sweet n funny comment n ur support as always :)
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16th Aug 2014 7:00pm
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23rd Aug 2014 1:07pm
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23rd Aug 2014 6:23am
Poet any woman would as if she was the winner if these words had been penned for her. Love this sir
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23rd Aug 2014 1:17pm
Well thank you for making me blush! lol
N thanks for the support, it's greatly appreciated
sweetheart :)
N thanks for the support, it's greatly appreciated
sweetheart :)
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27th Aug 2014 2:55am
I loved this it was sexual, but never lost its sweetness, or forayed into raunchy. :) Good read.
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27th Aug 2014 4:12am
Thank you, your words are so sweet I think I got a toothache! lol... Truly grateful for your time n thoughts
on my ink. :)
on my ink. :)
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2014 1:16am
Some good shit, poet. Lot of killer language. You strike me as quite the romantic
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Re: 'Untitled'
6th Jul 2016 11:50am
Damn...I feel terrible for having completely missed this for this long!
Truly apologiE for that, yet truly thank you for your kindness. :)
Truly apologiE for that, yet truly thank you for your kindness. :)
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5th Jul 2016 8:49pm