deepundergroundpoetry.com
Loving you
Dedicated to CY
I love you
I know not how to adequately express
What
These three words are meant to convey
I love thee
Still
Not adequate enough
Every part of me loves thee
Mayhap
This is too intimate for me to put
To words
A phrase
Far easier to convey
My passion for
Your touch
My longing
To caress
Along the length and breadth
Of thee
Have all of you
On
All of me
You
Inside
Me
tightly fitting
As tightly as two can be
Entwined
Holy
Sacred
Sacrosanct rites as old as humankind
Bound in blood by flesh in seed
By soul in musk by sweat in
Pain by transcendent
Joy
This
Effort
To
Write
Love
Hurts
Feels woefully inadequate
Words: meaningless void
We love enough to be free together
Free
To explore others
To communicate wholly
Completely
To always be each other as we are for ourselves and for each other
With you I am not stifled
I do not pretend to something I am not
To someone I cannot be
I am, simply, me
And you accept
And love
As I accept you
And love
I never thought could be this way
You are the miracle
Within my life
My heart
My soul
You helped to set me free
From constraints binding me so tightly
I could not breathe freely, yet I feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am
Then
Along you came
Unbeknownst to me, you were my bruised and battered knight and I, your not so maidenly, Joan of Arc
Nor so virtuous, pious, or pure
No matter
I battle by your side
And you have me there
We two
Have I told thee
How I love you?
I love you
I know not how to adequately express
What
These three words are meant to convey
I love thee
Still
Not adequate enough
Every part of me loves thee
Mayhap
This is too intimate for me to put
To words
A phrase
Far easier to convey
My passion for
Your touch
My longing
To caress
Along the length and breadth
Of thee
Have all of you
On
All of me
You
Inside
Me
tightly fitting
As tightly as two can be
Entwined
Holy
Sacred
Sacrosanct rites as old as humankind
Bound in blood by flesh in seed
By soul in musk by sweat in
Pain by transcendent
Joy
This
Effort
To
Write
Love
Hurts
Feels woefully inadequate
Words: meaningless void
We love enough to be free together
Free
To explore others
To communicate wholly
Completely
To always be each other as we are for ourselves and for each other
With you I am not stifled
I do not pretend to something I am not
To someone I cannot be
I am, simply, me
And you accept
And love
As I accept you
And love
I never thought could be this way
You are the miracle
Within my life
My heart
My soul
You helped to set me free
From constraints binding me so tightly
I could not breathe freely, yet I feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am
Then
Along you came
Unbeknownst to me, you were my bruised and battered knight and I, your not so maidenly, Joan of Arc
Nor so virtuous, pious, or pure
No matter
I battle by your side
And you have me there
We two
Have I told thee
How I love you?
Published 10th Aug 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 15
reading list entries 4
comments 30
reads 1887
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
10th Aug 2014 5:56am
Great ink!My fav,I love you
I know not how to adequately express
What
These three words are meant to convey
I love thee
Still
Not adequate enough
Every part of me loves thee
Mayhap
I know not how to adequately express
What
These three words are meant to convey
I love thee
Still
Not adequate enough
Every part of me loves thee
Mayhap
10th Aug 2014 8:09am
Savaja, you describe so well how I yearn to be accepted and loved deeply, spiritually, unconditionally. This passage is, to me a stark reality:
"I could not breathe freely, yet I feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am"
The intimacy in this passage is phenomenal:
" Have all of you
On
All of me
You
Inside
Me
tightly fitting
As tightly as two can be
Entwined
Holy"
Intertwined and entwined olf my favorite romantic words.
"I could not breathe freely, yet I feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am"
The intimacy in this passage is phenomenal:
" Have all of you
On
All of me
You
Inside
Me
tightly fitting
As tightly as two can be
Entwined
Holy"
Intertwined and entwined olf my favorite romantic words.
10th Aug 2014 8:21am
Ah, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-* ~
I am deeply aching as I read and reread your words to me. I want for you to have that for which you yearn, luv. I want that stark reality not to be and I know that dark passage, luv, too well. Yet, know this: there is ever hope, no matter how bleak it may be now.
You make me wish I had used both intertwined and entwined not solely one. I hear you, luv. I feel you. I've walked in dire, desperate paths and loathsome places. This, too, shall pass... :-*
I am deeply aching as I read and reread your words to me. I want for you to have that for which you yearn, luv. I want that stark reality not to be and I know that dark passage, luv, too well. Yet, know this: there is ever hope, no matter how bleak it may be now.
You make me wish I had used both intertwined and entwined not solely one. I hear you, luv. I feel you. I've walked in dire, desperate paths and loathsome places. This, too, shall pass... :-*
Anonymous
10th Aug 2014 7:28am
Aye, stellar work Sav. Very intimate read.
10th Aug 2014 8:30am
Thank you very much, SugarSkull, luv :-*!
Sav now, eh? :-* I'm taking this as a compliment, a subtle nod to your other friend who I rather like. ;-)
This IS an intimate poem for my primary, who is about as intimate as one can get with me. :-*
Sav now, eh? :-* I'm taking this as a compliment, a subtle nod to your other friend who I rather like. ;-)
This IS an intimate poem for my primary, who is about as intimate as one can get with me. :-*
10th Aug 2014 8:14am
I like these lines - so much Savaja:
Bound in blood by flesh in seed
By soul in musk in sweat@
Bound in blood by flesh in seed
By soul in musk in sweat@
10th Aug 2014 8:32am
10th Aug 2014 8:37am
10th Aug 2014 8:45am
10th Aug 2014 12:05pm
such an honest, deep, loving, caring, unconditional piece of ink savaja....to be accepted for who you are....what more could you ask for...
its obviously touched something deep in me because i'm crying....god.....sensitive sole that i am....
its obviously touched something deep in me because i'm crying....god.....sensitive sole that i am....
10th Aug 2014 4:28pm
Ah, Kate, luv :-* ~
Thank you for such a depth of response, GeniusGirl. Perhaps, you responded so deeply because I dug so deeply within me to create this and we connected... :-*
Better to be sensitive, luv, then insensate, that's my take, but then I'm often told I'm a sensitive creature as well... :-p
Thank you for such a depth of response, GeniusGirl. Perhaps, you responded so deeply because I dug so deeply within me to create this and we connected... :-*
Better to be sensitive, luv, then insensate, that's my take, but then I'm often told I'm a sensitive creature as well... :-p
10th Aug 2014 12:38pm
10th Aug 2014 4:48pm
Thank you very much, blackhyde, luv :-*!
You are welcome, luv, though thank you for being willing to experience my poesy.:-*
You are welcome, luv, though thank you for being willing to experience my poesy.:-*
10th Aug 2014 1:00pm
10th Aug 2014 4:51pm
Thank you very much, Granite, luv :-*!
'Tis always lovely when you grace me with your presence, luv. :-*
'Tis always lovely when you grace me with your presence, luv. :-*
10th Aug 2014 7:05pm
beautifully done.. heartfelt ink..honest and pure.. truly enjoyed the read.. kudos.. with love and respect to you.. xoxo domore
10th Aug 2014 7:39pm
Thank you very, very much, domore2014, luv :-*!
Your accolades as well as expressions of love and respect do me immense honor, luv. :-*
Your accolades as well as expressions of love and respect do me immense honor, luv. :-*
Anonymous
10th Aug 2014 11:01pm
<< post removed >>
11th Aug 2014 5:38am
Ah, Jack Tex, luv :-* ~
You keep leaving me without words to say. I will try, though.
Let's see:
I am poetry.
Inner space - stars - supernova
That pretty much sums it up, right?
Oh, and something...living voice...
Huh. Okay. All right then.
It is too much for me to absorb.
But, it is very beautiful, exquisite even, and I thank you for it nonetheless, luv. :-*
You keep leaving me without words to say. I will try, though.
Let's see:
I am poetry.
Inner space - stars - supernova
That pretty much sums it up, right?
Oh, and something...living voice...
Huh. Okay. All right then.
It is too much for me to absorb.
But, it is very beautiful, exquisite even, and I thank you for it nonetheless, luv. :-*
11th Aug 2014 5:07am
Oh my god Sav!! What a powerful, deeply touching n passion filled spill! Honestly amazing n yea to know that feeling... Smh... Brava... :)
11th Aug 2014 5:45am
Thank you very much, Erotic Ninja, luv :-*!
To have touched you so deeply, I count quite a coup, luv, you who so easily stroke us sensually and then turn around and pull on our hearts with such emotionally strong poetry as well. :-*
To have touched you so deeply, I count quite a coup, luv, you who so easily stroke us sensually and then turn around and pull on our hearts with such emotionally strong poetry as well. :-*
11th Aug 2014 2:13pm
"I could not breathe freely, yet I
feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am"
this reads like a long soft sigh after waiting years to exhale. i love the balance of sexy, sensual and romantic you've created here, lovely oracle.
tres belle, tres doux, apprécié
feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am"
this reads like a long soft sigh after waiting years to exhale. i love the balance of sexy, sensual and romantic you've created here, lovely oracle.
tres belle, tres doux, apprécié
12th Aug 2014 8:30am
Thank you, lovely Snowcrystal, luv :-*!
You are ever-so-perceptive, my dear. It IS the long sigh after years, such desolate, bleak years of pent-up breaths.
I wished for a juxtaposition and melding of all that love is: the sweet and sexy and sensual and serious; I am glad that balance was found and that you have enjoyed it, luv :-*.
You are ever-so-perceptive, my dear. It IS the long sigh after years, such desolate, bleak years of pent-up breaths.
I wished for a juxtaposition and melding of all that love is: the sweet and sexy and sensual and serious; I am glad that balance was found and that you have enjoyed it, luv :-*.
11th Aug 2014 4:02pm
I do not pretend to something I am not
To someone I cannot be
I am, simply, me
And you accept
And love
As I accept you
And love
I never thought could be this way
You are the miracle
Within my life
My heart
My soul
You helped to set me free
From constraints binding me so tightly
I could not breathe freely, yet I feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am ...
... In these wonderful lines you've conveyed everything I've tried to express and display in deed to mi reina.
I've told her I knew I loved her and would love her the moment she stepped out of a cab on our first date ... Her womanly instincts told her to proceed with caution, the words weren't enough.
Sis, this is an eloquent write filled with deep expression ... I love your confession of not being perfect - of having your own faults ... Yet you battle on moving forward.
Writer's note: I do pretend to "be", and I never thought "it" could be this way
To someone I cannot be
I am, simply, me
And you accept
And love
As I accept you
And love
I never thought could be this way
You are the miracle
Within my life
My heart
My soul
You helped to set me free
From constraints binding me so tightly
I could not breathe freely, yet I feared this was how I had to live, had to be, that none would ever know or accept me just as I am ...
... In these wonderful lines you've conveyed everything I've tried to express and display in deed to mi reina.
I've told her I knew I loved her and would love her the moment she stepped out of a cab on our first date ... Her womanly instincts told her to proceed with caution, the words weren't enough.
Sis, this is an eloquent write filled with deep expression ... I love your confession of not being perfect - of having your own faults ... Yet you battle on moving forward.
Writer's note: I do pretend to "be", and I never thought "it" could be this way
12th Aug 2014 8:47am
Ahh, LobodeSanPedro, luv :-* ~
Sometimes, I swear you inhabit part of my brain, brother mine. :-D I feel you with me at times, your passion for life and love and tu reina a thing beating against my own flesh, the knowledge of it a certain thing within me.
Lobode, bro, whatever you're pretending to be, you probably are - I highly doubt you're very good at subterfuge, just ask la reina, she knows, believe it ;-)...
Sometimes, I swear you inhabit part of my brain, brother mine. :-D I feel you with me at times, your passion for life and love and tu reina a thing beating against my own flesh, the knowledge of it a certain thing within me.
Lobode, bro, whatever you're pretending to be, you probably are - I highly doubt you're very good at subterfuge, just ask la reina, she knows, believe it ;-)...
14th Aug 2014 10:27pm
15th Aug 2014 00:54am
Ah yes, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*.
'Tis truth you write here. Thank you for reminding me, luv... :-*
'Tis truth you write here. Thank you for reminding me, luv... :-*
Anonymous
17th Aug 2014 6:06pm
Very sweet poem. Like it! :)
17th Aug 2014 6:10pm
