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By The River
We all walk on down the road that leads to understanding so many things.
Strode a long, cold, lonely journey to a colored land where dreams never lie.
We've all been stranded by the river,
while searching for the answer.
Restless by river,
of hope.
We all wait for that someday, the chance or a break that'll make it alright.
Most of us expect it, but for some, those days never really come around.
It's the same old story, by the river,
begging for the answer.
Wading by the river,
of hope.
We all climb different slopes as our spirit tries to cope through the tide.
Armed with only mighty faith in a struggle with fate that lasts a lifetime.
We keep on flowing like the river,
wondering,"Is there any answer?".
Pessimistic, lonely drifters,
optimistic for an answer.
Drinking from the river,
till we drown.
Strode a long, cold, lonely journey to a colored land where dreams never lie.
We've all been stranded by the river,
while searching for the answer.
Restless by river,
of hope.
We all wait for that someday, the chance or a break that'll make it alright.
Most of us expect it, but for some, those days never really come around.
It's the same old story, by the river,
begging for the answer.
Wading by the river,
of hope.
We all climb different slopes as our spirit tries to cope through the tide.
Armed with only mighty faith in a struggle with fate that lasts a lifetime.
We keep on flowing like the river,
wondering,"Is there any answer?".
Pessimistic, lonely drifters,
optimistic for an answer.
Drinking from the river,
till we drown.
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re: Re: By The River
25th Jun 2014 8:17am
Re: By The River
25th Jun 2014 5:08am
re: Re: By The River
25th Jun 2014 8:13am
Hey there, thanks a lot shadowsfallsoftly for reading and that awesome comment too.
Re: By The River
25th Jul 2014 1:57pm
this was a very thought provoking and profound write...much enjoyed.
Wisdom by the river... I have spent much time by the river contemplating those very things you wrote about
xoxo
Fire
Wisdom by the river... I have spent much time by the river contemplating those very things you wrote about
xoxo
Fire
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re: Re: By The River
25th Jul 2014 2:28pm
It's such an awesome feeling when somebody reads your poem and understands. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reading and for the nice comment too, Firebyrd.
Re: By The River
Anonymous
18th Aug 2014 3:05am
Thrilled to have read this. Really like a lot. :)
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18th Aug 2014 1:59pm
Re: By The River
19th Aug 2014 5:25pm
I agree with shadows ... There's something melodic to this ink that could translate into a probing song
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re: Re: By The River
19th Aug 2014 11:13pm
Thank you very much, bro. You, giving it some time to read and telling me what you think of my poem is very much appreciated.
Re: By The River
2nd Dec 2014 6:39am
I absolutely love this poem. Very well written :) I enjoyed reading. I understand exactly what these words say. And know what you mean. I actually have written a poem with the a similar meaning.
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re: Re: By The River
2nd Dec 2014 12:45pm
Thank you very much, TheUnkownSoul for reading and telling me what you think of my poem. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I would like to see the poem you're talking about there.
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2nd Dec 2014 3:11pm
Re. By The River
Anonymous
12th Apr 2018 7:56pm
Wow what a wonderful poem
Been down this road before or should I say river...
This poem like a river drowns you in once u begin to read
Well done
Autumn
Been down this road before or should I say river...
This poem like a river drowns you in once u begin to read
Well done
Autumn
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Re: Re. By The River
13th Apr 2018 2:37pm
Thank you very much, black_magik_gypsy for reading my poem and sharing what you think about it.
Re. By The River
13th Apr 2018 00:40am
It was gentle soft as though a certain reader was the one left by the river alone & you wanted to ensure some kindness your personal kindness, reassured there was still some time left. Amazing write definitely provoked my thought just feeling your raw emotions. Much Respect,
Shadow
Shadow
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Re: Re. By The River
13th Apr 2018 2:41pm
Thank you, Shadow_Dancer for your time reading my poem. And even though the poem is somewhat on the sad side, I hope you enjoyed it. The comment was awesome. It's always nice to see what other people think. Thanks.
Re: Re. By The River
14th Apr 2018 00:18am
I most definitely enjoyed it also what good would poetry be if life was nothing but sunshine and bliss hmmm...I also agree it's always intriguing to see another's interpretation. Mad Respect,
me
me
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Re. By The River
25th May 2019 1:03am