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push into me
succumbing to thoughts of
tasting your bewitching scent
with adamantine soft kisses
imbued with wicked intentions
searching for places
undiscovered in you
in me
come feel my ebon embrace
hands trace flawless lines
of ivory satin skin untied
emotions run wild
I could take you now
enveloped by the need to feel
the squeeze of your wet grip
I resist while fingers dance
with dulcet tones that
render your name
so beautiful
on the wall, on the floor
upside fuck'n down
push into me
push into me
tasting your bewitching scent
with adamantine soft kisses
imbued with wicked intentions
searching for places
undiscovered in you
in me
come feel my ebon embrace
hands trace flawless lines
of ivory satin skin untied
emotions run wild
I could take you now
enveloped by the need to feel
the squeeze of your wet grip
I resist while fingers dance
with dulcet tones that
render your name
so beautiful
on the wall, on the floor
upside fuck'n down
push into me
push into me
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 11th May 2014
| Edited 8th Jan 2017
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Re: push into me
11th May 2014 10:41am
Re: push into me
I'm thrilled you like it, considering who I had in mind when writing it =p...
happy for the list add too...
happy for the list add too...
Re: push into me
11th May 2014 2:05pm
Re: push into me
11th May 2014 4:29pm
Re: push into me
11th May 2014 9:17pm
The voice-over was creepy and I couldn't listen to the whole thing. I read it, though--don't worry. I love it. I love the meter--6 1 4 1 5 1 3 1. Very well-paced. You sound like the Dominant type. My favorite lines are "undiscovered in you" and "the squeeze of your wet grip". Made me tingle. Good job. :)
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Re: push into me
Re: push into me
11th May 2014 10:59pm
.....utterly beautiful and sensual ink, Fenom.
Your voice was just an added perk....but damn, what a perk. That last 'push into me' was extra hot...Xo
Your voice was just an added perk....but damn, what a perk. That last 'push into me' was extra hot...Xo
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Re: push into me
Well thanks so much for reading/listening, Rain, and the kind words. I was starting to wonder after that 'creepy' comment above =p
Re: push into me
12th May 2014 5:18am
Re: push into me
Yep, my voice...
Thanks a lot for reading/listening and the kind words Hades...
Thanks a lot for reading/listening and the kind words Hades...
Re: push into me
6th Jul 2014 8:09am
Well, I had a feeling this would happen. You are an addictive beast. :-*
There is just something about the way you write, the way you sound, something that evokes an instinctive response that disconcerts, jangles me. And further, I am ever so slightly, inexplicably moist.
You are, no doubt about it, fiercely talented. Kudos.
There is just something about the way you write, the way you sound, something that evokes an instinctive response that disconcerts, jangles me. And further, I am ever so slightly, inexplicably moist.
You are, no doubt about it, fiercely talented. Kudos.
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re: Re: push into me
6th Jul 2014 8:32am
Re: push into me
21st Jul 2014 9:53pm
enveloped by the need to feel
the squeeze of your wet grip
I resist while fingers dance
with dulcet tones that
render your name
so beautiful
what a lovely push one can anticipate frnd
the squeeze of your wet grip
I resist while fingers dance
with dulcet tones that
render your name
so beautiful
what a lovely push one can anticipate frnd
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re: Re: push into me
21st Jul 2014 11:58pm
Re: Re: push into me
1st Aug 2016 4:00am
I TRIED TO PUSH AGAIN
SHE CALLED MY NAME
AGAIN AND AGAIN
I WONDERED WHO SHE WAS CALLING
NOW AGAIN
SHE CALLED MY NAME
AGAIN AND AGAIN
I WONDERED WHO SHE WAS CALLING
NOW AGAIN
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Re: Re: push into me
1st Aug 2016 3:48pm