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-fervent shadoe
patchwork vision
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found
drifting in a deadpan gaze
cascading memories
of iron maiden affection
suppress box-cutter blues
impaled by betrayal
her soul yearns to dance
the black swan pas de deux
writing forsaken heart passages
in aphotic love diaries
exploring the depths
of her velvet talon devotion
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found
drifting in a deadpan gaze
cascading memories
of iron maiden affection
suppress box-cutter blues
impaled by betrayal
her soul yearns to dance
the black swan pas de deux
writing forsaken heart passages
in aphotic love diaries
exploring the depths
of her velvet talon devotion
Published 4th May 2014
| Edited 18th Nov 2021
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would you believe that i'm speechless?
this is something else, Ed... thank you xoxo
this is something else, Ed... thank you xoxo
It was inspired by the passion in your amazing writing, and the little bit I know of you.
And it is my pleasure...
And it is my pleasure...
Anonymous
4th May 2014 11:01am
Great diction and composing of sentences!
This piece of work has much dark intensity and strength, much enjoyed your fabulous poem!!!
This piece of work has much dark intensity and strength, much enjoyed your fabulous poem!!!
4th May 2014 11:21am
4th May 2014 11:56pm
there's a hard and cold
beauty here, and it is
so softly done that it
moves like a swan..:)
beauty here, and it is
so softly done that it
moves like a swan..:)
Thanks for reading Paul. That's pretty much to tone I was looking for, thx for the feeback...
5th May 2014 4:00pm
a more exquisite write for such a beautiful lady I can't imagine.. pure excellence :) with love and respect Brenda
5th May 2014 4:03pm
6th May 2014 9:06pm
"patchwork vision
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found"<- fav.
Beautiful ink there sir....Xo
plays a dysmorphic game
of alabaster beauty
lost and found"<- fav.
Beautiful ink there sir....Xo
6th May 2014 9:41pm
7th May 2014 1:37am
Beautiful write to a graceful dancing Lady who is luved by many. Great tribute. :)
7th May 2014 2:23am
