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The Right Words
If I could only find the right words
to explain how emotionally messed up I am feeling this instant,
this would be a pretty epic poem.
Probably the best that I've never written.
Sorry to waste your time with this one.
to explain how emotionally messed up I am feeling this instant,
this would be a pretty epic poem.
Probably the best that I've never written.
Sorry to waste your time with this one.
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Re: The Right Words
1st May 2014 8:53pm
.....it's never wasted time when others can relate to what you never written.. ;) Xo
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1st May 2014 9:01pm
Re: The Right Words
1st May 2014 9:27pm
No worries son
We'll let you know when it's great and when it sucks
So far, you are batting 1,000
We'll let you know when it's great and when it sucks
So far, you are batting 1,000
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re: Re: The Right Words
2nd May 2014 3:12am
Thank you PoetSpeak! That is one of the nicest comments I ever got. Sincerely. Thank you!
Re: The Right Words
1st May 2014 9:39pm
I feel you on this poem though you did an amazing job of expressing how you are feeling.. with love Crim :)
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