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k.
Every time we text,
All I get from one is one word
Did I do something when we met?
Or are you always bored?
Why do you treat me like this?
Was it because I hung out with someone else?
You make me feel like a piece of shit.
Can I redeem myself?
I tried texting you the other day
But you seemed to still hate me.
All you said was,"k."
you're on a one word texting spree.
***a year later------
You texted me saying hey,
I replied to you and said hi
you told me you missed me and we should hang in may
And all I told you was k.
You keep texting me everyday.
and I'm only sending you one word messages
How does it feel to be k'd?
go lay in a pile of leaches.
K.
All I get from one is one word
Did I do something when we met?
Or are you always bored?
Why do you treat me like this?
Was it because I hung out with someone else?
You make me feel like a piece of shit.
Can I redeem myself?
I tried texting you the other day
But you seemed to still hate me.
All you said was,"k."
you're on a one word texting spree.
***a year later------
You texted me saying hey,
I replied to you and said hi
you told me you missed me and we should hang in may
And all I told you was k.
You keep texting me everyday.
and I'm only sending you one word messages
How does it feel to be k'd?
go lay in a pile of leaches.
K.
Published 4th Apr 2014
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- Edited 6th Apr 2014 2:32am
6th Apr 2014 1:03am
I know what you're getting at here.I think it just needs slightly better phrasing.I can't quite explain how it doesn't quite work but maybe one line for e.g could read, 'But all I said was k'. The subject of texting is modern and relevant in today's ever expanding techno world.I like the one letter theme running throughout this piece and that in the end the subject reduces you to doing exactly the same as them.
