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Sacred Place
This site is so much
a part of who I am now
I feel such a deep connection
to the people here
I'm so grateful to the Web Mistress
for bringing us all together
on these sacred grounds
those not meant to be dare not tread here
slightly psychic I can feel the guardians
warding the doors with magic
this is an enchanted place
when these gates are closed
I feel anxious
my demons tugging on their chains
only free to roam here
other poetry sites dead to me
like locked doors
they must be talking in coded ink
I just don't get it
I'm sure other supernatural sites
are around but this is the one
that the powers that be saw fit to open to me
a part of who I am now
I feel such a deep connection
to the people here
I'm so grateful to the Web Mistress
for bringing us all together
on these sacred grounds
those not meant to be dare not tread here
slightly psychic I can feel the guardians
warding the doors with magic
this is an enchanted place
when these gates are closed
I feel anxious
my demons tugging on their chains
only free to roam here
other poetry sites dead to me
like locked doors
they must be talking in coded ink
I just don't get it
I'm sure other supernatural sites
are around but this is the one
that the powers that be saw fit to open to me
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 4th Apr 2014
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Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 1:04am
I agree Brenda
There is no other site that allows the writer this kind of freedom and kinship
Not having access for 2 days was enough to leave me in near depression
Well said comrade, well said
xx
There is no other site that allows the writer this kind of freedom and kinship
Not having access for 2 days was enough to leave me in near depression
Well said comrade, well said
xx
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4th Apr 2014 1:40am
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 1:06am
Indeed! perfectly described! It was hard not to be apart of this place for two days, much apart of my life xx
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4th Apr 2014 1:41am
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 1:07am
Enchanting tribute, to a noteworthy site. The energy is swirling and coursing through and through. Bows.. to you Crim.. very perceptive :)
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4th Apr 2014 1:42am
it is special and enchanted isn't beautiful Angel thank you for getting that :) with love Crim
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 1:49am
it's the freedom of expression that we hunger for. no hangups & no restrictions here. we all crave it, Crim...
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4th Apr 2014 1:54am
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 1:55am
Wistfully well written. Spot on!
Ahh, anything less from you lovely Crim is unacceptable. :)
Ahh, anything less from you lovely Crim is unacceptable. :)
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4th Apr 2014 2:20am
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 7:20am
addicts of the underground, unite! ^.^ lordi lord, i had withdrawls from two days offline.
heartfelt sentiments that i'm sure many of us can echo Brenda.
heartfelt sentiments that i'm sure many of us can echo Brenda.
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4th Apr 2014 7:57am
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 10:54am
Yup yup! I'm with ya 100 my dear Crim, n yea
No place like the underground! :)
No place like the underground! :)
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5th Apr 2014 11:36pm
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 1:12pm
Ripping emotions from thy very heart. This site is more than a poetry site. I had no clue the importance until the past few days. It is a portal to people that have much impact in my life. Thank you DUP
Thank you Crim for expressing
Thank you Crim for expressing
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5th Apr 2014 11:37pm
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Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 3:13pm
Beautifully expressed sentiments for DU and what it means to you.. from the comments.. many feel the same or similiar.. and I am counted among those who found myself checking access to site every couple hours.. didn't realize how much DU has become part of my "everyday" with love and respect.. xoxo domore
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4th Apr 2014 6:44pm
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Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 7:01pm
Well thought and written out
Brenda.
Having the site closed to us
for a couple of days was
excruciating.
I now have all kinds of thoughts
floating around my head.
Not being able to get into the site
lets you realize that there are people
that you enjoy reading submissions
from just as if you were to sit down
and have a cup of coffee with them
or rounds of Rum and bull-hatred
with each other.
A bond.
Great ode here... Peace, Pan
Brenda.
Having the site closed to us
for a couple of days was
excruciating.
I now have all kinds of thoughts
floating around my head.
Not being able to get into the site
lets you realize that there are people
that you enjoy reading submissions
from just as if you were to sit down
and have a cup of coffee with them
or rounds of Rum and bull-hatred
with each other.
A bond.
Great ode here... Peace, Pan
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re: Re: Sacred Place
5th Apr 2014 11:43pm
thank you Pan I agree it was hell being away from all of you that I hold dear :) with love Brenda
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4th Apr 2014 7:03pm
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Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 8:34pm
Such a cool and lovely spill of ink here, Crim!
You're such a beautiful soul! I thank you for sharing your gift of words here with all of us. I respect your courage, truth and authenticity through poetry...Xo
~Tara~
You're such a beautiful soul! I thank you for sharing your gift of words here with all of us. I respect your courage, truth and authenticity through poetry...Xo
~Tara~
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re: Re: Sacred Place
5th Apr 2014 11:45pm
Thank lovely Tara what a beautiful name :) so blessed you are among us :) with love Brenda
Re: Sacred Place
4th Apr 2014 11:06pm
Wonderful words of love crimsin...happy to hang with you and all your friends (a big bow to the web lady) :)
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re: Re: Sacred Place
5th Apr 2014 11:46pm
Hash so happy to see you again and yes bows to the Web Mistress :) with love Crim
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5th Apr 2014 00:06am
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5th Apr 2014 11:47pm
I agree with you Ricky this is the only site I feel at home.. glad you are here :) with love Crim
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Anonymous
5th Apr 2014 2:35am
Great tribute to DU! Amazing place this is for sure. Connections with souls that touch our lives here that help is thru each day to just breath. Impressive heart felt piece. Enjoyed very much. Xo :)
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re: Re: Sacred Place
5th Apr 2014 11:50pm
thank you beautiful Flower you are one I count as dear so glad you're here :) with love Crim
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6th Apr 2014 5:28pm
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