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"Self Autonomous."
I'm sorry; I didn't mean to
be such a bother to you...
When all these things through
me, showed their face
Young and confused
disassociated and self-abusive
I know that my malicious behavior
intruded upon your pristine
lifestyle
So flash your premeditated smiles
when you look at me
But I know that resentment is your
real feelings
Your Christianity and my wild, (so
called, rebellious attitude: but really
me trying to be me), clashed in an
epic battle of wills
You with your allegiance to your
deity, which you insisted on imposing
on me...
And me with my growing feeling of
individuality
We are all autonomous, even when
still young
You can guide me discreetly but,
don't force shit down my fucking
throat
Cause that's when we'll go toe to toe
I respect your lifestyle: now fucking
respect mine
be such a bother to you...
When all these things through
me, showed their face
Young and confused
disassociated and self-abusive
I know that my malicious behavior
intruded upon your pristine
lifestyle
So flash your premeditated smiles
when you look at me
But I know that resentment is your
real feelings
Your Christianity and my wild, (so
called, rebellious attitude: but really
me trying to be me), clashed in an
epic battle of wills
You with your allegiance to your
deity, which you insisted on imposing
on me...
And me with my growing feeling of
individuality
We are all autonomous, even when
still young
You can guide me discreetly but,
don't force shit down my fucking
throat
Cause that's when we'll go toe to toe
I respect your lifestyle: now fucking
respect mine
Published 20th Mar 2014
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20th Mar 2014 2:11am
Pan I feel your rage and just emotions at having Christianity stuffed down your throat!!! you rock the way you are with love and the deepest respect Crim
20th Mar 2014 2:55am
I really appreciate your support
and that when you comment on
my writings you are positive Crim.
I think if more parents were friends
to their children and not drill sergeant
there would be better families.
I try to be that way with mine.
Thanks for your kind words.
Pan.
and that when you comment on
my writings you are positive Crim.
I think if more parents were friends
to their children and not drill sergeant
there would be better families.
I try to be that way with mine.
Thanks for your kind words.
Pan.
20th Mar 2014 4:26am
Brother, You have hit the " Son, You Will Get A Haircut Tomorrow! I Will Not Have No Hippies Living In My House! You're going to hell in a hand basket!" nail on the head.
I was lucky I didn't have to wear damn uniform.
I really had to work on it but I finally got to hell on my own two feet.
Yep, I feel your pain, Brother.
I was lucky I didn't have to wear damn uniform.
I really had to work on it but I finally got to hell on my own two feet.
Yep, I feel your pain, Brother.
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2014 2:41am
Nice write hun!
22nd Mar 2014 12:16pm
when force fed too much bullshit, one is bound to start choking.
i hear ya Thomas.
i hear ya Thomas.
