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Long or thin
[b]Long or thin
Your poetry is always
longer than wider
I told you before
it do put men to shame
they don't have that long
may be wider...
thanks friend
you are the
D U P ...POET
the widest
no, may be not
but sweetest yes
a great sexy sport
of poetic sort[/b]
Your poetry is always
longer than wider
I told you before
it do put men to shame
they don't have that long
may be wider...
thanks friend
you are the
D U P ...POET
the widest
no, may be not
but sweetest yes
a great sexy sport
of poetic sort[/b]
Published 25th Jan 2014
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25th Jan 2014 6:56pm
25th Jan 2014 7:06pm
ur the inspiration
hope you are the one for ur hubby too
he is a lucky man
tell him again
I said so
again
hope you are the one for ur hubby too
he is a lucky man
tell him again
I said so
again
25th Jan 2014 7:41pm
25th Jan 2014 7:50pm
do let me know
his reactions
did you let him >>>>...
do
hahahahahaaaaa
laff u will
i knew
his reactions
did you let him >>>>...
do
hahahahahaaaaa
laff u will
i knew
25th Jan 2014 9:06pm
Yes, I don't enjoy reading lengthy poems on here. I grow bored easily, especially if the writer isn't good with conveying feelings. I pass them up quickly.
25th Jan 2014 9:34pm
that's why I always advise
poetry ten to 15 maximum 20 lines
thanks for being on my side
poetry ten to 15 maximum 20 lines
thanks for being on my side
25th Jan 2014 9:31pm
25th Jan 2014 9:35pm
