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Undressed
Undressed
She stood in front... packing Christmas presents …
she smiled at me
I framed her in my mind’s eye
unclothed what lay hidden
my eyes traveled all the distance
from top to toe
and my palms upon her bosom
love did bestow …
She smiled as I stared in my mind’s nakedness
unknown ,
as my hands slipped in to the valley warm
within me was raging a storm,
she could feel it
as she went wet
and to me stare at her
she did wantonly let…
Published 22nd Dec 2013
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22nd Dec 2013 4:05am
Peek a boo, she sees you. :) Soft flow and rhythm. I kind of tripped on the last two lines, though. next to last line precisely.
22nd Dec 2013 4:35am
and to me stare at her
she did wantonly let…
let to rhyme with
yes wet.....
as a gal u would know ur an angel
little mix up
to say
she was also participating
with my minds inklings...was she or is it still my imagination glad u liked it.... blue
she did wantonly let…
let to rhyme with
yes wet.....
as a gal u would know ur an angel
little mix up
to say
she was also participating
with my minds inklings...was she or is it still my imagination glad u liked it.... blue
24th Dec 2013 10:20am
24th Dec 2013 3:04pm
