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"Your Eyes"
connected eyes, wanton need
delicious pools to drown my soul
colors of blue love, your haunting hue
your hypnotic stare .. captures me
imbues my heart, surrendering
in delirium .. of tears of joy
your smiling eyes melt to breathe
batting lashes .. of promises shy
your downward glance betrays
your perfect cries, your attempt
to hide your indelible gaze
angel spheres of heaven sent
orbs of shining stars portray
my only love .. I can see
(entered in for your eyes only comp)
delicious pools to drown my soul
colors of blue love, your haunting hue
your hypnotic stare .. captures me
imbues my heart, surrendering
in delirium .. of tears of joy
your smiling eyes melt to breathe
batting lashes .. of promises shy
your downward glance betrays
your perfect cries, your attempt
to hide your indelible gaze
angel spheres of heaven sent
orbs of shining stars portray
my only love .. I can see
(entered in for your eyes only comp)
Published 14th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 10:05pm
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14th Dec 2013 11:12pm
Thanks Gabriel for commenting on my piece. I always enjoy your unique style and flare.
15th Dec 2013 3:06pm
The eyes truly are the windows to the soul...
Such delicate, and intense, imagery--
"...angel spheres of heaven sent
orbs of shining stars portray...."
This is a tenderly, engaging piece, my friend.
Such delicate, and intense, imagery--
"...angel spheres of heaven sent
orbs of shining stars portray...."
This is a tenderly, engaging piece, my friend.
15th Dec 2013 8:19pm
This is so true to me, "windows to the soul" always revealing. You're a romantic friend; I always enjoy your comments and insight. Thank you for stopping by to read me.
15th Dec 2013 5:37pm
Sweetest tribute, so much noticed in a loved one's glance. A lovely ink, jake...
15th Dec 2013 8:26pm
31st Dec 2013 7:18pm
gentle sentiment.
your poem flows like a brook, w/the subtle rhymes bouncing off pebbles...
your poem flows like a brook, w/the subtle rhymes bouncing off pebbles...
31st Dec 2013 7:33pm
A nice compliment John. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Thanks for stopping by.
5th Feb 2014 3:49pm
How in the hell did I miss this?Beautifully written, expressed well.Really enjoyed. :)
5th Feb 2014 4:20pm
Anonymous
4th Sep 2014 2:56am
So romantic......like this a lot. :)
4th Sep 2014 2:12pm
12th Nov 2014 6:59pm
13th Nov 2014 2:00pm
Yup, that's why I covered my eyes in my avatar; I don't want just anyone seeing my scheming... I mean, seeing my soul.Eyes and perceptions, that's me. The shadows from the blinds are my mask. Thank you for your use of beautiful to my poem Kizzy.
