Crim VS Brenda

This is poetry as therapy
You are very brave to own up to this in public
Maybe this will help you heal
You must remember who you are now:
a talented poet and a good human being.
Joyce Meyer, the tele-evangelist has a good
saying: "You are NOT your history"
Go forward, do not look back
Good work
Peace
Kitty

thank you Kitty for the beautiful advise lovely lady.. peace Brenda

Very strong and courageous write.
I applaud you for the emotional honesty that shines thru in this gritty poem...

thank you Scarlet for such a loving comment.. peace Brenda

Thank you Theo for you loving support.. I appreciate it :) .. peace Brenda

Bang! No holds barred. Almost an exorcism. It's tantalising, harrowing and somehow optimistic in its coming. All of that. Well bloody done.

thank you Jamie you made me smile wide.. i'm trying to grow as a writer and person stripping it down to the facts as I've been advised.. peace Brenda

Advised by Hemi, I presume? I could see his influence in this piece. :)

Gemini

while Hemi didn't advise me on this poem.. he did look this one over

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/100515-to-be-a-junkie/

and advised me to make my life more real with details.. good eye Gemini

Honesty and emotion..this piece is solid gold. In writing it, you've cracked that cocoon ...

Thank you Petit this was tough to write but it just poured out of me.. thank you for the add to your list that touched my heart.. peace Brenda

I'm sure this was such a liberating experience to pen down and let it go of the past demons, all these were part of you, but they were fragmented and needed to pull together to find the center of your core being.
It looks like you have embraced it, and that's the light at the end of the tunnel.
Im so touched by this piece that im taking it to my list.

Thank you beautiful lady for the add to your list.. sigh yes I must embrace my past and my present and find some yin to my yang.. thank you again.. peace Brenda

Sinful Criminal aka Brenda, this was amazing! You let us in to a side of you that I knew existed but never read about it in explicit detail such as:

"so when they pulled my hair
or fucked me hard in the ass
I got off with the most sinister of men
 
sucking their cocks
squirting all over my juicy breasts
awaiting that sweet cum on my tits"

Fucking hot, crim!

Gemini

Thank you Christian you put a smile on my face :) peace Crim

thank you for the love, hugs and beautiful compliment.. hugs back peace Crim

Always the Multi-layer-Dear Crim, Lovely Brenda...strength in tenderness as well You know...self preservation and self understanding seems to be a life long endeavor eh?
Hats off to You for digging In!!!
You ARE a glowing Soul-Gabe

Thank Gabe you're right it is life long endeavor thank you for the kindness you shown my.. peace Brenda

you are such a beautiful soul Brenda and so strong to purge these thoughts and feelings publicly.
This was a raw and powerful write.

thank you Mia for such a loving comment.. You are a beautiful soul as well who has shared her heart with us I thank you.. peace Brenda

Brenda you are emerging as a very talented poet, BRAVO my friend I am so proud of you. Michael

Thank you Michael i'm humbled by your comment.. peace Brenda

It took everything in me not to cry from this piece... I really don't have any sufficient comments for this but I will say I love you babe...

I love you too Kourtniss you are in my heart your poems always touch my soul.. much love Brenda

I keep coming back to this poem.....inside/outside; subsidence and retroflection; reverse engineering and re-inventing oneself.....hmmmmmmmm.

thank you RT for the insightful comment reinventing myself is the plan.. :) glad this one drew you in.. peace Crim

A Brenda shot might eventually seal the deal..molting is a disclosure....

I'm afraid there is no molten disclosure there just a married lady who likes to paint.. thank you for the interest though RT.. peace Crim

Oh goodness how this made me want to cry for some strange reason. Maybe it was the magnitude of your time wandering in the wilderness, or the impact of recognizing your darkness and inking it so potently. Maybe it was the overall toxicity of Crim's power over Brenda. Whatever the case, you young lady make my heart tremble with joy, from fighting your way out of a self-destructive life style, staring it in the face and having the courage to take it one day at a time. Xoxo

Hugs&Love~

Dear Rain thank you for the hugs and love yes Crim does have an over powering affect on me at times.. peace Brenda

Been there on that dry heave highway of blurred echoing dreams that never came true, draggin my ass up and down too - but its our past that makes our present and you ROCK IT HARD Crim,,,well said, I admire your courage and your rock hard beauty!
 
Peaceeeeee

Thank you Tami for getting this poem and for such a beautiful comment you touched my heart.. wishing you peace Crim :)

as the phoenix emerge from the ashes...
poetry is a good bonfire.

i really really love your work , the boldness and daring ways of your literature...i wish you the best

What a beautiful way to put it Cesar you have a way with words.. thank you Cesar for such a lovely comment.. peace Brenda

Wow... Almost too hard to read the reality of this
deep, dark, raw ink... Never been a fan of hardcore drugs, but mostly becuz I know once you let them inside you
They GOT you... Still it is amazing to see you
are trying to keep that in ur past, as for the drinking
that can be a horrible ride too if one can't control it...
Exceptional n superbly brave ink my friend :)
Well

yes it was a dark path indeed to follow.. I've left that life style far behind me now.. thank you for such a beautiful comment :) peace Crim

This was beautifully written.. such raw energy, painted with dark emotion.. and it bleeds the truth, that made you who you are.. brave write.. thanks for sharing.. into my list it goes.. much respect..


Dave

yes this was part of my life and makes me who I am today thank you for showing this write love with respect Crim

thank you beautiful Dani this is a really old poem of mine but one I think I needed to read today.. I deeply appreciate your support.. love Brenda

thank you beautiful Daniella you gifted me with smiles today :) love Brenda