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Her face is...
The beauty
of her face,
is poetry
Not just any poetry
it's classic...
Like, a Pablo Neruda sonnet
Aglow, with the passion
of an Emily Dickinson Prose
Soul-Full of life consciousness
Like, a Langston Hughes
poem...waxing the intellectual
Bold, and brazen
like a Bukowski
rant...
Overflowing with a
wealth of stories of
desires and ecstasy
like an Ann Rice Novella...
A masterpiece, a wonder
Too complicated to articulate
yet quite simply put...
her face is so beautiful...
it's like Sweet Poetry...
of her face,
is poetry
Not just any poetry
it's classic...
Like, a Pablo Neruda sonnet
Aglow, with the passion
of an Emily Dickinson Prose
Soul-Full of life consciousness
Like, a Langston Hughes
poem...waxing the intellectual
Bold, and brazen
like a Bukowski
rant...
Overflowing with a
wealth of stories of
desires and ecstasy
like an Ann Rice Novella...
A masterpiece, a wonder
Too complicated to articulate
yet quite simply put...
her face is so beautiful...
it's like Sweet Poetry...
Published 30th Sep 2013
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30th Sep 2013 3:08pm
Omg! You have me all fluttered n blushing so much! :) thank you! Truly deeply appreciate you my sweet sweet lady
30th Sep 2013 2:26pm
30th Sep 2013 3:09pm
Never left baby! lol I'm happy that you're happy though n truly thank u tons... I heart u lol
30th Sep 2013 2:49pm
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30th Sep 2013 2:49pm
Oh em gee,you just made me fall in love with her face. :D
Beautifully written piece,sir (:
Beautifully written piece,sir (:
30th Sep 2013 3:12pm
Aaaawwww well I bet you'd love get if you saw her her! lol
N of course I thank you endlessly! :)
N of course I thank you endlessly! :)
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 3:18pm
oh my, with such comparisons to legends covering one spectrum to another in the artistic world and if she is as you say;
Bold, and brazen
like a Bukowski
rant...
stay thirsty my friend, she'll make you crave for more
Extremely well done, i'm taking this to my list..:)
Bold, and brazen
like a Bukowski
rant...
stay thirsty my friend, she'll make you crave for more
Extremely well done, i'm taking this to my list..:)
30th Sep 2013 3:21pm
Ah I see you must be a big BUK fan! lol
well I'll say this much... As deeply passionate as I am
I need an equal or more lol thank u my sweetie
I'm flattered n truly appreciate u...
well I'll say this much... As deeply passionate as I am
I need an equal or more lol thank u my sweetie
I'm flattered n truly appreciate u...
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 4:04pm
This is a beautiful woman; your words painted what an artist would, and the result is so stunning, it could hang in the finest museum.
Bravo
Kitty
Bravo
Kitty
30th Sep 2013 5:42pm
OMG... This is the best comment ever! Wow... I'm deeply flattered, n I don't know what to say to adequently rely my gratitude my dear sweet friend, THANK YOU!
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30th Sep 2013 5:48pm
Dude, bro... You are a treasure! Thank you so much! I'm more than flattered n forever grateful to you n for your unyielding support... much love kid :)
30th Sep 2013 5:04pm
Well, if she's that beautiful....I've got a whole new list of poets to put on my reading list... Thanks a lot, you lucky devil....
30th Sep 2013 5:50pm
Lol well yea I think you can never have too many great poets!
lol n I thank you my friend, bro., poet... Always :)
lol n I thank you my friend, bro., poet... Always :)
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30th Sep 2013 7:55pm
That's a stunnung idea to compare a woman's face to the varied facets of poetry. A clever and beautiful piece, Poe! I like that a lot!
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25th Oct 2013 2:15am
Aaaaawwww thank you my friend! I'm happy you did
n I appreciate ur saying so :)
n I appreciate ur saying so :)
5th Dec 2013 1:29am
all im gonna say is im going to look up every artist u mentioned specifically...u know if I see my face in this piece...beautifully written! toast to forerunners!
5th Dec 2013 4:17am
Aaaawwww well I wish u luck finding stuff on them all, n I thank you so much... I appreciate this wonderful comment! :)
6th Feb 2014 4:43pm
Bravo!
You are beyond talented.
The visual images you paint with your words are simply amazing.
You are beyond talented.
The visual images you paint with your words are simply amazing.
6th Feb 2014 7:36pm
Aaaawww sweetheart, thank you! U got me feeling
all special over here lol... Appreciate you much :)
all special over here lol... Appreciate you much :)
