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Re: My champion, where art thou?
Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 9:22pm
I am sure he does somewhere red...goes both ways darling!
strider!
strider!
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5th Aug 2013 9:25pm
Re: My champion, where art thou?
5th Aug 2013 9:32pm
This was magnificent Gypsy.
He is out there so keep looking
but don't let one take advantage
of your search because some a-holes
can also read into that.
Pan
He is out there so keep looking
but don't let one take advantage
of your search because some a-holes
can also read into that.
Pan
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re: Re: My champion, where art thou?
5th Aug 2013 9:35pm
Yes, you are too right Pan I have run in to them, it makes me not trust easily. Thank you for the great comment!
Red
Red
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5th Aug 2013 9:40pm
Yea, I know that it's kicking guys under the bus but I can't stand it when a man reads into a woman's needs and then plays on that long enough to get in with them and then abuses the relationship.
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5th Aug 2013 9:58pm
Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 00:10am
Exactly how I feel Gypsy, I'm sure we will both find our man one day.
A wonderful write.
A wonderful write.
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6th Aug 2013 1:06am
Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 1:26am
I can never be a champion, but if
ever you need a court jester I'm
always ready to play the fool...:)
ever you need a court jester I'm
always ready to play the fool...:)
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6th Aug 2013 1:39am
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6th Aug 2013 1:36am
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6th Aug 2013 1:48am
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6th Aug 2013 2:27am
Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 1:51am
Never let the 'little girl' in you cease to be for that is the origin of all things pure inside you..the sparkle that would act as a beacon for your champion to home in on... this is a lovely write Red...it speaks more of hope than sadness..
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I am trying Naaj some days that beacon's light goes very dim, there is hope and sadness. Thanks for stopping by to read. It is heartspeak.
Red
Red
Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 3:42am
My girl! My Shero! I bow down to your pen,
for it is due great respect!
I had to read this twice!
Ya know, like good food; warmed-up seconds are always better! DAMN! Xo
for it is due great respect!
I had to read this twice!
Ya know, like good food; warmed-up seconds are always better! DAMN! Xo
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6th Aug 2013 3:10pm
Girl I swear I am gonna bottle you like a fragrance and wear you always lol you are so good for my ego! Thanks sweets!
Red
Red
Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 8:34am
So beautifully written! There ARE men out there like that, I know from experience. They tend to show up when you're not looking :)
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6th Aug 2013 3:13pm
Then I shall keep the faith, because testimonies like yours reaffirms what my heart tells me. Thanks Rachel I appreciate the visit!
Red
Red
Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 1:11pm
So many hope, pray, look long for that 'ONE'
to be all they need, n some never find it, I hope you are among those who do my friend :) a touching ink u spilled
to be all they need, n some never find it, I hope you are among those who do my friend :) a touching ink u spilled
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re: Re: My champion, where art thou?
6th Aug 2013 3:14pm
I hope so too Poe, I really do!Hope springs eternal, no?
Thanks baby cakes!
Red
Thanks baby cakes!
Red
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6th Aug 2013 5:15pm
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Re: My champion, where art thou?
7th Aug 2013 2:35am
Excellent Write to the worthy ones Dear Red--Indeed, when not in search they will be found--faith and want go hand in hand You know-serve the self first (You know what i mean...the correct way:) Lovely Write:)
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7th Aug 2013 2:55am
Re: My champion, where art thou?
9th Aug 2013 1:10am
Amazing how many times this last year I've felt one of your pieces and thought it your best offering... and here I am again.
Your heartspeak is as valiant as your life service to us through your work. Such a beautiful soul.
Your heartspeak is as valiant as your life service to us through your work. Such a beautiful soul.
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9th Aug 2013 1:47am
My sweet friend you know what your comment tells me beyond the words? That I have improved my writing beyond my initial expectation. Thank you so much!
Red
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