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A 'Write' to Choose...
come to me...
let me kiss
you til you fall
feel at ease,
in these
comforting arms
I will joyously
give you my all
taste these lips...
wet with hunger
for your glowing bliss
softly I blow,
such sweet surrender
into a love like this...
as you thrust your hips,
working that phat ass
up, n' down my thick dick
I grip you quick,
n' drink of honey
so sweet I just gotta lick,
n' lick do you want this
nice, or nasty?
as you can see
all u need to do is pick..! :)
let me kiss
you til you fall
feel at ease,
in these
comforting arms
I will joyously
give you my all
taste these lips...
wet with hunger
for your glowing bliss
softly I blow,
such sweet surrender
into a love like this...
as you thrust your hips,
working that phat ass
up, n' down my thick dick
I grip you quick,
n' drink of honey
so sweet I just gotta lick,
n' lick do you want this
nice, or nasty?
as you can see
all u need to do is pick..! :)
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Re: A 'Write' to Choose...
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 2:26pm
Nice erotic poem......
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20th Jul 2013 2:41pm
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20th Jul 2013 2:50pm
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20th Jul 2013 3:05pm
Lmao yea that works too! thank you sweetness
u greedy lil doll lol jk... Grateful as always for the support :)
u greedy lil doll lol jk... Grateful as always for the support :)
Re: A 'Write' to Choose...
20th Jul 2013 2:56pm
Holy Molly!!! I want someone to that to me and mean it for real, its on baby!lol
Red
Red
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re: Re: A 'Write' to Choose...
20th Jul 2013 3:07pm
Lol aaaawwww well you know I'm happy you enjoyed this
Red n yea, the real part is the only way to go! lol thank u sweetie :)
Red n yea, the real part is the only way to go! lol thank u sweetie :)
Re: A 'Write' to Choose...
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 3:28pm
Wonderfully done :) x
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20th Jul 2013 3:44pm
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20th Jul 2013 3:50pm
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20th Jul 2013 4:37pm
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21st Jul 2013 00:05am
Thank u my sweetie, pleased you thought so... Appreciate ur support always :)
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20th Jul 2013 6:27pm
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 8:05pm
Love it when you write like this - I can feel every word...
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re: Re: A 'Write' to Choose...
21st Jul 2013 00:22am
How appros becuz I love when you love when I write like this lol... Muah! Appreciate u sweetness :)
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21st Jul 2013 8:02am
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21st Jul 2013 11:41am
Aaaawww thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed this n truly appreciate your time n comment :)
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