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Rain Soaked
Listen to the rain
drumming, pitter-patter song
liquid treacle down corrugated roof
What madness frolicking
here on rain-soaked
winter's night
drumming, pitter-patter song
liquid treacle down corrugated roof
What madness frolicking
here on rain-soaked
winter's night
Published 13th Jun 2013
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13th Jun 2013 4:07pm
I love the rain song, even more so with the crash of thunder and electric pulse of lightening.
Wonderful ditty Carpe.
Wonderful ditty Carpe.
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 8:13pm
well done noctem...strider
16th Jun 2013 11:41am
Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 9:39pm
love it! I heard the rain..:-)
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 2:56pm
Very visual, subtle, a melody there...
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4th Sep 2013 1:07am
I like this... I pictured the image and sounds in my mind. I love falling asleep to the rain... :)