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My wish
I wish you could so fill me
that if I stood
I'd have white rivers
running down my thighs.
I wish you could so fill me
that on my desperate
panting breath,
I'd taste you.
I wish you could so fill me
that my appreciative stomach
would start to bulge
with your presence.
I wish you could so fill me.
I so wish you could fill me.
I wish...
that if I stood
I'd have white rivers
running down my thighs.
I wish you could so fill me
that on my desperate
panting breath,
I'd taste you.
I wish you could so fill me
that my appreciative stomach
would start to bulge
with your presence.
I wish you could so fill me.
I so wish you could fill me.
I wish...
Published 4th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 8:45pm
Very creative line: I wish you could so fill me
that if I stood
I'd have white rivers
running down my thighs.
At the end it sounds like wanting to
be pregnant.
that if I stood
I'd have white rivers
running down my thighs.
At the end it sounds like wanting to
be pregnant.
4th Jun 2013 9:20pm
I'm glad you liked it, AD :)
The ending part is intentionally left vague so that it could imply that as well *nods*
The ending part is intentionally left vague so that it could imply that as well *nods*
9th Jun 2013 00:58am
Oh baby I could so fill you!! Mmmmm yes gosh yes I could sooooo fill you!!! I promise if you eat a dinner cooked by me...I COULD fill you! lmao oh n yea love that suggestive concept n it left me a tad bit wanton lol excellent ink :)
9th Jun 2013 4:40am
Yep, that response surely got a blush outta me! XD
I'm happy you liked it, Poetikmind :)
I'm happy you liked it, Poetikmind :)
