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< strawberry milkshake >
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short version:
< strawberry milkshake >
i think of this as a poem
but you don't need to
in fact
if you want
you can think it's a milkshake
but if you do
i hope it's strawberry
- - -
long version:
< strawberry milkshake >
ray thinks he wrote me
but i was the one using his hands
i'm a thief
i take anything i want
the version of me in HD video should be attached
(if you didn't get it, you probably can't)
my reader is more important than my writer
for instance: what are you right now?
i'm not counting on quality
there are readers out there
(not you, of course)
who haven't read anything better
they
are my audience
writing is not a process of better and better
the dinosaurs were every bit as capable as mammals
bacteria are more capable
it really doesn't matter
you can think of me as a poem
you can think of me as a milkshake
you can capitalize me wherever you want
you can pause or stutter any time you want
i can't control your creativity
(neither can you)
i'm about choice
choice is about ambiguity
i love the word "and"
i hate the word "redolent"
one adjective is fine,
two give me pneumonia
a 3.75 inch millipede is crawling across me right now
it has alternating stripes of orange and black
it tickles
that millipede is every bit as important as me
(and both of us are willing to kill if it suits us)
thoughts come to me from the outside
but once they're here
they can't get out
there's no need to judge me
just eat me
and let your intestines take what they want and turn the rest to shit
i was dead until you started reading me
but you
have made me a zombie
- - -
short version:
< strawberry milkshake >
i think of this as a poem
but you don't need to
in fact
if you want
you can think it's a milkshake
but if you do
i hope it's strawberry
- - -
long version:
< strawberry milkshake >
ray thinks he wrote me
but i was the one using his hands
i'm a thief
i take anything i want
the version of me in HD video should be attached
(if you didn't get it, you probably can't)
my reader is more important than my writer
for instance: what are you right now?
i'm not counting on quality
there are readers out there
(not you, of course)
who haven't read anything better
they
are my audience
writing is not a process of better and better
the dinosaurs were every bit as capable as mammals
bacteria are more capable
it really doesn't matter
you can think of me as a poem
you can think of me as a milkshake
you can capitalize me wherever you want
you can pause or stutter any time you want
i can't control your creativity
(neither can you)
i'm about choice
choice is about ambiguity
i love the word "and"
i hate the word "redolent"
one adjective is fine,
two give me pneumonia
a 3.75 inch millipede is crawling across me right now
it has alternating stripes of orange and black
it tickles
that millipede is every bit as important as me
(and both of us are willing to kill if it suits us)
thoughts come to me from the outside
but once they're here
they can't get out
there's no need to judge me
just eat me
and let your intestines take what they want and turn the rest to shit
i was dead until you started reading me
but you
have made me a zombie
- - -
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