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That I am not
Pessimist, that I am not
Although I have been told
my cup is usually half empty
by my closest self
I tend to agree with him
Pessimist, what a word
If I missed the plane
and I found the one
would I pessimise
Or would I optimise
Pessimist, sounds fine
sounds like perfume
a brand like Paris Hilton
a good word, a fine one
Pessimist, it is.
Although I have been told
my cup is usually half empty
by my closest self
I tend to agree with him
Pessimist, what a word
If I missed the plane
and I found the one
would I pessimise
Or would I optimise
Pessimist, sounds fine
sounds like perfume
a brand like Paris Hilton
a good word, a fine one
Pessimist, it is.
Published 6th May 2013
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6th May 2013 4:25am
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6th May 2013 6:23am
Anonymous
6th May 2013 10:17am
Good luck grace..I am optimistic about you winning!
6th May 2013 12:42pm
Anonymous
6th May 2013 11:31am
while the pessimist and optimist argue, the opportunist seizes...
this is a wonderful write and read..great work, Grace
this is a wonderful write and read..great work, Grace
I did not show the opportunist, so now that you reminded me, I will:-) The brand of perfume....Haha...thanks Miki for reading and commenting.
6th May 2013 12:07pm
I like what Miki said, the opportunist wins. Great thought provoking piece Grace. Good luck.
6th May 2013 12:49pm
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7th May 2013 11:15am
7th May 2013 1:52pm
Well 'realist' sounds more like it. All this positive stuff is for cheesy greetings cards.
Now that is a 'pesimist' in action. Nice write young Grace
Now that is a 'pesimist' in action. Nice write young Grace
7th May 2013 2:08pm
Thank you for commenting SuiGen...nice name. Cheesy greeting cards are inspiring sometimes.
7th May 2013 4:17pm
There is something about this piece I like very much, the feel of it I think.
Red
Red
7th May 2013 4:29pm
Thank you dear Red...yes, it does give you that 'ists' doesnt it. Hugs for being here.
