Miscellaneous Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Random, diverse and unusual poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Litany of a Life, Boring
In lieu of words,
Which will be left unread
Inside the small café atop Snowdon
Where coffee tastes of midnight blue,
The view is breath of my very existence
In no particular unholy order
(Counted by mathemagicians)
Preying priests of solace to bury:
2,683 hangovers (hangovers are Hell’s psychiatrists)
64 front door keys
2 babies lost in womb-space (or trapped in nightmares) somewhere
1 ballerina pirouetting away
835 unfinished manuscripts of ‘Forever Yesterday’ under various beds
3 unsliced wedding cakes (rings...
Which will be left unread
Inside the small café atop Snowdon
Where coffee tastes of midnight blue,
The view is breath of my very existence
In no particular unholy order
(Counted by mathemagicians)
Preying priests of solace to bury:
2,683 hangovers (hangovers are Hell’s psychiatrists)
64 front door keys
2 babies lost in womb-space (or trapped in nightmares) somewhere
1 ballerina pirouetting away
835 unfinished manuscripts of ‘Forever Yesterday’ under various beds
3 unsliced wedding cakes (rings...
#unicorns
186 reads
11 Comments
Mind Sex
#WritingPoetry
767 reads
4 Comments
Lifeless
Between ash and dust
Lest carbon dating gathered
Infinite repose
Lest carbon dating gathered
Infinite repose
#haiku
#humankind
#metaphor
#senryu
#spiritual
90 reads
4 Comments
When you are crying in the rain
to what end
true tears of joy
or streams of sorrow
moments all washed way
true tears of joy
or streams of sorrow
moments all washed way
#grief
#love
#memories
50 reads
3 Comments
Why Do Recovering Alcoholics Love Diet Coke?
Mariah brings me carrots, and pasta, and money for thirty diet cokes, if I want.
She hugs me in her orange puffer coat, because she knows I have been scream crying
and bargaining with the universe, again. She’s been doing the same.
She grips me tightly and I cling to her, and we cast a spell that makes the five pm winter darkness
feel less like a life sentence.
Boys said they loved us and left. And that is the familiar knife we keep turning inside ourselves.
We give every twist a new name, but the hole looks the same.
I tell her that I hope they can...
She hugs me in her orange puffer coat, because she knows I have been scream crying
and bargaining with the universe, again. She’s been doing the same.
She grips me tightly and I cling to her, and we cast a spell that makes the five pm winter darkness
feel less like a life sentence.
Boys said they loved us and left. And that is the familiar knife we keep turning inside ourselves.
We give every twist a new name, but the hole looks the same.
I tell her that I hope they can...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#healing
#heartbroken
#prose
103 reads
2 Comments
Ned's Algorithm
Music has its patterns and formats. Most of us know it, even if we can't say what it is.
Think of a standard blues tune and you'll see what I mean.
Some of the masters
have their own signature thing
Especially in rap
Dr. Dre had the Formula.
A smooth 70's beat with heavy bass grooves
and cool ass California lyrics laid across em.
Jay-Z had the Blueprint.
New York rap at its best known, best presented,
and most highly acclaimed.
Jay ain't makn much music
but he a Legend.
Don't have to.
His...
Think of a standard blues tune and you'll see what I mean.
Some of the masters
have their own signature thing
Especially in rap
Dr. Dre had the Formula.
A smooth 70's beat with heavy bass grooves
and cool ass California lyrics laid across em.
Jay-Z had the Blueprint.
New York rap at its best known, best presented,
and most highly acclaimed.
Jay ain't makn much music
but he a Legend.
Don't have to.
His...
#learning
#music
#PopCulture
93 reads
3 Comments
Bear Ass Excuses
For four months been dating this girl always with an excuse about sex
From being tired, funerals and the ultimate bullshit-‘I don’t wanna get wet’,
“But the grand female real or unreal excuse is ‘I’m on my cycle’
Thirty days straight, bitch if that’s the case your chances are slim on survival,
“If it is that bad, she should get surgery or some pills for the shit
So, her insides can Stormtrooper clone the length and width of my dick,
“She denied the suggestions with another excuse of no sex before marriage ...
From being tired, funerals and the ultimate bullshit-‘I don’t wanna get wet’,
“But the grand female real or unreal excuse is ‘I’m on my cycle’
Thirty days straight, bitch if that’s the case your chances are slim on survival,
“If it is that bad, she should get surgery or some pills for the shit
So, her insides can Stormtrooper clone the length and width of my dick,
“She denied the suggestions with another excuse of no sex before marriage ...
#MovingOn
#women
194 reads
6 Comments
Snowflakes
Beautiful
stunning
snowflakes
like tiny magic crystals
I try to catch them
then make a wish
sometimes I dance around
when theres a huge flurry
I love the beautiful silence
with my gorgeous snowflakes
stunning
snowflakes
like tiny magic crystals
I try to catch them
then make a wish
sometimes I dance around
when theres a huge flurry
I love the beautiful silence
with my gorgeous snowflakes
#nature
81 reads
11 Comments
the real you won't be framed on a wall
I let a lifetime of lies
crash over me
and I would rather deny
the truth than see you
as you really are
It's embarrassing now
that I held you up so high
a pedestal you shouldn't
have been gifted with
in my childhood memories
that I haven't outgrown
Because I wanted to be like
the best parts of you
and pretend that everything else
wasn't toxic
But you're so toxic
and I'm left searching
for an antidote
only to come up empty
and self medicate instead
...
crash over me
and I would rather deny
the truth than see you
as you really are
It's embarrassing now
that I held you up so high
a pedestal you shouldn't
have been gifted with
in my childhood memories
that I haven't outgrown
Because I wanted to be like
the best parts of you
and pretend that everything else
wasn't toxic
But you're so toxic
and I'm left searching
for an antidote
only to come up empty
and self medicate instead
...
#family
#TruthOfLife
65 reads
8 Comments
The Dog
The moment fleeting
quick is the flash from the past
brown leaves and gray skies
fox feels the forest winter cold
jumped with ideas trampling peace
over the moon with anxiety
the night looming in the distance
lazy breezes becoming a trap as
dog days leave you aching
quick is the flash from the past
brown leaves and gray skies
fox feels the forest winter cold
jumped with ideas trampling peace
over the moon with anxiety
the night looming in the distance
lazy breezes becoming a trap as
dog days leave you aching
#anxiety
#bittersweet
#emotions
11 reads
9 Comments
New Years
HI ALL JUST WANTED TO WISH YOU ALL A HAPPY NEW YEAR. THANK YOU FOR YOUR ON GOING SUPPORT AND FOR SHARING YOUR FANTASTIC READS
LOVE AND LIGHT
RON
HAPPY NEW YEAR PEEPS XXX
LOVE AND LIGHT
RON
HAPPY NEW YEAR PEEPS XXX
#love
163 reads
5 Comments
This Guy's Indeed In His Happy Place
You
could say
that once I'm
inside my own
apartment, this guy's
indeed in his happy
place for he could do what it
is without having anyone...
including his family... come to
drive him out of his mind whatsoever.
could say
that once I'm
inside my own
apartment, this guy's
indeed in his happy
place for he could do what it
is without having anyone...
including his family... come to
drive him out of his mind whatsoever.
#confessional
#dialogue
#home
#nonfiction
#uplifting
51 reads
0 Comments
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