Love Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
Unable To Forget
I had a vision of her walking across heaven
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
#heartbroken
230 reads
21 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 12:40pm
17th Feb 2025 12:40pm
Treating Love Letters Like Junk Mail
She told the police on her boyfriend
They nailed him with a suitcase full of heroin
He was tried & sent to jail
She was paid in full, the money that she was promised for helping out
She moved into a nice apartment
After a while, she got some letters from him
He didn't know that she was the one that had set him up
His letters were full of declarations of eternal love
The only thing that kept him going was thinking of her each & every day he sat in his rotten, stinking cell
She laughed at the letters and threw them away
After a few...
They nailed him with a suitcase full of heroin
He was tried & sent to jail
She was paid in full, the money that she was promised for helping out
She moved into a nice apartment
After a while, she got some letters from him
He didn't know that she was the one that had set him up
His letters were full of declarations of eternal love
The only thing that kept him going was thinking of her each & every day he sat in his rotten, stinking cell
She laughed at the letters and threw them away
After a few...
#apathy
#heartbroken
#prison
#rejection
#suicide
80 reads
15 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 3:55pm
18th Feb 2025 3:55pm
the beauty of movement
enterig this reamiy my entroutage proceeds me
with a beautiful offering to Him
they have perfected the art of gesture
they can convey a feeling with a look
I've learned many secrets of the unviverese
grave sexcrets no to tell
some are not made to know such things
or others are unready
I a deep shame when I am corrected
it was bad day yesterdey
he promises I will learn
the beautiful silence
and a heart that burns with psassion to serve
doing so with joy and gratiude
my entougage aprrpoached ...
with a beautiful offering to Him
they have perfected the art of gesture
they can convey a feeling with a look
I've learned many secrets of the unviverese
grave sexcrets no to tell
some are not made to know such things
or others are unready
I a deep shame when I am corrected
it was bad day yesterdey
he promises I will learn
the beautiful silence
and a heart that burns with psassion to serve
doing so with joy and gratiude
my entougage aprrpoached ...
#dance
#love
89 reads
3 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 8:36am
23rd Feb 2025 8:36am
celestial body
early vespers plead
into mourning mornings
write me a compendium
bring into the knowing
each occultation
I am a vessel
beguiled by
eros rattling my bones
we said farewell to Aphrodite
cleared all visions
Raphael hands Leonardo his final paint brush
made from finest horse hair
from a mare grazing upon pastures lost
free maned her pearlescence
becomes mildew
o impetus victor!
lend me words
from fools ...
into mourning mornings
write me a compendium
bring into the knowing
each occultation
I am a vessel
beguiled by
eros rattling my bones
we said farewell to Aphrodite
cleared all visions
Raphael hands Leonardo his final paint brush
made from finest horse hair
from a mare grazing upon pastures lost
free maned her pearlescence
becomes mildew
o impetus victor!
lend me words
from fools ...
#love
70 reads
8 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 2:25pm
14th Jan 2025 2:25pm
WITHOUT YOU!
YOU! Yes, YOU!
Without YOU music is dull,
Without YOU food is bland,
Without YOU sunsets fade,
Without YOU the moon hides,
Without YOU dreams become nightmares;
Without YOU I feel friendless,
Without YOU smiles turn to frowns,
Without YOU time is an eternal chain,
Without YOU nature is only a desert
Without YOU love is only a sad word,
Without YOU passion is an iceberg.
Without YOU tomorrow is dreaded,
May I never be without YOU.
Meet me at the Kissing Place and
I'll know I HAVE YOU.
YES! The key word is Y O U,...
Without YOU music is dull,
Without YOU food is bland,
Without YOU sunsets fade,
Without YOU the moon hides,
Without YOU dreams become nightmares;
Without YOU I feel friendless,
Without YOU smiles turn to frowns,
Without YOU time is an eternal chain,
Without YOU nature is only a desert
Without YOU love is only a sad word,
Without YOU passion is an iceberg.
Without YOU tomorrow is dreaded,
May I never be without YOU.
Meet me at the Kissing Place and
I'll know I HAVE YOU.
YES! The key word is Y O U,...
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
156 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 1:47am
21st Feb 2025 1:47am
Life is short live it
Let's take a few seconds to let what I've said be an eye opener, 👁️👁️ for you to just THINK, If you could go back in your own thoughts, for just a minute I want you to be honest with thyself. FOR you should never let your emotions, and feelings lead you on your decisions. For if you could go back in time and really analyze, the depths of your own journeys and travels and walks. Within your own relationships in the past, for what would you change on how, you handled some situations, rather wrong or right. I want you to be honest and truthful, with your answers as...
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#memories
#relationships
#responsibility
64 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 4:38pm
22nd Feb 2025 4:38pm
~of the bond(ed), [love’s] labour :: in a pureform freeflow
#1~an unself
a wanton drowning
forgottenness this is..
imbibing unto your oceanic
juices.. an osmosis so drunken
drowsy mesmerise …am a mere
skeletal mermaid swimming walking
breathing .. in just your firing fluidic
essence, pithy or bloody or bony
or lighted or airy.. a solidifying
nothingness .. perhaps more
of a zeroing in fullness
yet in this becoming you, i
have a consciously meted out
#2. a dire ignorance
on you, yes you
as an ever...
a wanton drowning
forgottenness this is..
imbibing unto your oceanic
juices.. an osmosis so drunken
drowsy mesmerise …am a mere
skeletal mermaid swimming walking
breathing .. in just your firing fluidic
essence, pithy or bloody or bony
or lighted or airy.. a solidifying
nothingness .. perhaps more
of a zeroing in fullness
yet in this becoming you, i
have a consciously meted out
#2. a dire ignorance
on you, yes you
as an ever...
#love
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
82 reads
7 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 3:05am
21st Feb 2025 3:05am
Cruel to be kind is BS
Couple I passed on my morning walk.
She says from her spot about five steps behind him " you don't want to help yourself do you, you like playing the victim".He trudged on, head down and crestfallen.Im sure he was crying inside
I found the content and tone of her words rather cruel,others may not.
All I know about love (and that's very little) is that you don't cause any deliberate harm to your other half.
Words used to harm are the cruellest of all weapons.
She says from her spot about five steps behind him " you don't want to help yourself do you, you like playing the victim".He trudged on, head down and crestfallen.Im sure he was crying inside
I found the content and tone of her words rather cruel,others may not.
All I know about love (and that's very little) is that you don't cause any deliberate harm to your other half.
Words used to harm are the cruellest of all weapons.
#marriage
49 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 7:58pm
21st Feb 2025 7:58pm
Love to a Gunfight
"We're bringing love to a gunfight."
~ Janiva Magness
Your enemies are your greatest teachers
—the ones who step on your triggers
revealing wounds that haven't yet healed
Each lesion that re-lacerates history
is an opportune time to decide
how we're going to react or reply
There are no coincidences in life
nor mistakes, only experience
lessons to spiritually advance
Thank those who perceive you
their adversary—their gift
is the greatest...
~ Janiva Magness
Your enemies are your greatest teachers
—the ones who step on your triggers
revealing wounds that haven't yet healed
Each lesion that re-lacerates history
is an opportune time to decide
how we're going to react or reply
There are no coincidences in life
nor mistakes, only experience
lessons to spiritually advance
Thank those who perceive you
their adversary—their gift
is the greatest...
#conflict
#love
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
133 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
I UNDERSTAND
I understand,
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
#friendship
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
#support
227 reads
4 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 3:33am
16th Dec 2024 3:33am
My Grief, Mine Alone
I want desperately
to write about you
To tell the world
how wonderful you were
and how lucky,
anyone who had the
Privilege
of knowing you,
would be
My thoughts…
won’t settle down
and let me
pen my feelings
I’m too afraid
if I do the flood gates
holding back my tears
will tear loose their hinges
and the tsunami of grief
will drown my soul
to write about you
To tell the world
how wonderful you were
and how lucky,
anyone who had the
Privilege
of knowing you,
would be
My thoughts…
won’t settle down
and let me
pen my feelings
I’m too afraid
if I do the flood gates
holding back my tears
will tear loose their hinges
and the tsunami of grief
will drown my soul
#death
#grief
448 reads
40 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 8:59am
19th Feb 2025 8:59am
Ocean
Waves crashing rocks
Slow gestured winks
Passion dune locks
Lips dance in sync
Caverns bewitched
Blue turns to red
A flick of the switch
Wet thoughts embed
Bodies in motion
Slither soft touch
Swim in my ocean
I want you so much
Slow gestured winks
Passion dune locks
Lips dance in sync
Caverns bewitched
Blue turns to red
A flick of the switch
Wet thoughts embed
Bodies in motion
Slither soft touch
Swim in my ocean
I want you so much
#love
102 reads
12 Comments
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