Love Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 8:45am
25th Oct 2024 8:45am
Seductive Whisper
Seductive whisper taunts a fragile soul
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
Peddling fantasies to obtain full control
Coincidence's don’t happen by chance
Unable to read intent in a passing glance
Loving her could end in spiritual death
Cursing me under her cinnamon breath
#relationships
126 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:39pm
Yesterday 7:39pm
Lost My Love
I'm at a loss
I can't come up for air
The celebrations aren't the same without you there
I stay quiet but I want to scream
The circle was broken the absence is felt
Please help me cope
Another death another loss
I can't take what's been taken away
It's just a task to make it day to day
I feel like I'm losing my mind
I feel all alone
I sit in silence
Does anybody else feel this at all?
I can't come up for air
The celebrations aren't the same without you there
I stay quiet but I want to scream
The circle was broken the absence is felt
Please help me cope
Another death another loss
I can't take what's been taken away
It's just a task to make it day to day
I feel like I'm losing my mind
I feel all alone
I sit in silence
Does anybody else feel this at all?
#death
#emptiness
#IMissYou
#loneliness
#sadness
39 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 3:55pm
Today 3:55pm
soul child
you came in and truly saw me
not just a vision or idea of who I am
but the real me in the soul of my heart
then you held me
just held me while I cry
then you withdrew
alone in the emptiness I thought I would die
my soul groan within
and I felt its loneliness because it was mine
I cradled it like a child
nourishing its sorrow
took my time to cultivate sadness
melancholy blossomed and I gently tend to the blooms
seeing there was beauty in pain
I bear a child of regret
with new insight I look out at the...
not just a vision or idea of who I am
but the real me in the soul of my heart
then you held me
just held me while I cry
then you withdrew
alone in the emptiness I thought I would die
my soul groan within
and I felt its loneliness because it was mine
I cradled it like a child
nourishing its sorrow
took my time to cultivate sadness
melancholy blossomed and I gently tend to the blooms
seeing there was beauty in pain
I bear a child of regret
with new insight I look out at the...
#love
#metaphor
20 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 4:41pm
1st Dec 2024 4:41pm
Refrained
(Moon_bather/Fia Naturie)
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chains, making me stay
I’ll send help....
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chains, making me stay
I’ll send help....
#anger
#frustration
#regret
77 reads
12 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
4th Aug 2021 4:34pm
4th Aug 2021 4:34pm
Old Love
is knowledgeable and wise;
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
#love
#relationships
#spiritual #aging
#spiritual #aging
966 reads
43 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 9:50am
27th Nov 2024 9:50am
Beneath The Stars
Laying there
In all your glory
Beneath the stars
We'll share our story
Soul's laid bare
Let's kiss the night
Love declares, as
Hearts take flight
In all your glory
Beneath the stars
We'll share our story
Soul's laid bare
Let's kiss the night
Love declares, as
Hearts take flight
#emotions
#love
95 reads
16 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
I UNDERSTAND
I understand,
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
#friendship
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
#support
156 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
20th May 2024 11:38pm
20th May 2024 11:38pm
Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
#IMissYou
#love
369 reads
20 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 4:31am
27th Nov 2024 4:31am
Everyone Has A Lover
I'm dazzled by her beauty
The stories she tells
The songs she sings
The things I learn from her at all times of the day and night
Regretfully , I use her and abuse her sometimes
Carelessly discarding her or leaving her at the mall
But
When my fingers wrap around her delicate frame I am beguiled by her tight little holes.
A frame so fragile that a sudden bump could damage her seriously
I know all the buttons she has for me to press and I press them often and instinctively
She comes alive when I look at her or sometimes just say hello ...
The stories she tells
The songs she sings
The things I learn from her at all times of the day and night
Regretfully , I use her and abuse her sometimes
Carelessly discarding her or leaving her at the mall
But
When my fingers wrap around her delicate frame I am beguiled by her tight little holes.
A frame so fragile that a sudden bump could damage her seriously
I know all the buttons she has for me to press and I press them often and instinctively
She comes alive when I look at her or sometimes just say hello ...
#gratitude
73 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 9:39pm
14th Oct 2024 9:39pm
Troubadour Nights
The campfire heat and moonlight
in midair fell in love
and went and danced all through the night
in consequence thereof.
The moonbeams were a pale gold
beyond the amber flames
because their space is very cold
in dark entropic shames.
Both owe their lives to caustic Sol
as their echoes flower
all through autumn's lengthening call
for more solar power!
A call increasing day by day
to which night children dance
where poet souls all love to play...
with comely maids from France!
in midair fell in love
and went and danced all through the night
in consequence thereof.
The moonbeams were a pale gold
beyond the amber flames
because their space is very cold
in dark entropic shames.
Both owe their lives to caustic Sol
as their echoes flower
all through autumn's lengthening call
for more solar power!
A call increasing day by day
to which night children dance
where poet souls all love to play...
with comely maids from France!
#fall
#Halloween
#pagan #sky
#pagan #sky
130 reads
4 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:00pm
Yesterday 2:00pm
Crescendos
allow me to wipe
off the dust love
slide my fingers
over your keys
play you softly
pour light into
your darkness
ease the black
revive the white
bring back to life
the sound of your
soul & heal your
years old scars
create a private
silent symphony
divine harmony
in delicate notes
& elegant tones
from the depths
of despair to the
peaks of pleasure
in a slow crescendo
until you moan in music
off the dust love
slide my fingers
over your keys
play you softly
pour light into
your darkness
ease the black
revive the white
bring back to life
the sound of your
soul & heal your
years old scars
create a private
silent symphony
divine harmony
in delicate notes
& elegant tones
from the depths
of despair to the
peaks of pleasure
in a slow crescendo
until you moan in music
#healing
#music
84 reads
TheOralizer
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 4:01pm
7th Sep 2024 4:01pm
TRILOGIES OF WORDS
MY
lover, please accept
my sincere trilogies:
YOU are right
I was wrong
.
I am sorry.
It's my fault.
I wasn't thinking.
PLEASE forgive me
Let's try again.
REMEMBER OUR TIMES.
The passion hours
The exploration tasting.
I LOVE YOU
YES, ONLY YOU
NEED ONLY YOU
PLEASE ACCEPT MY TRILOGIES.
lover, please accept
my sincere trilogies:
YOU are right
I was wrong
.
I am sorry.
It's my fault.
I wasn't thinking.
PLEASE forgive me
Let's try again.
REMEMBER OUR TIMES.
The passion hours
The exploration tasting.
I LOVE YOU
YES, ONLY YOU
NEED ONLY YOU
PLEASE ACCEPT MY TRILOGIES.
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
#redemption
139 reads
10 Comments
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