Love Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 11:39am
17th Jan 2025 11:39am
Imprisoned
When sorrow fills the void
I torment those who I adore
An homage for the living lost
I cannot hide anymore
I torment those who I adore
An homage for the living lost
I cannot hide anymore
#dark
#death
#FeelingLost
#love
#sadness
51 reads
10 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
Unable To Forget
I had a vision of her walking across heaven
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
#heartbroken
210 reads
21 Comments
Her
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 6:15pm
15th Jan 2025 6:15pm
A Thousand Tiny Deaths
I die a thousand tiny deaths
Each time I hear his voice
Memories of how I waited in anticipation
My heart beating erratically
Beats of sweat rolling between peaks and valleys
My breath in staccato before he opened my door
The sounds our bodies made
As he brought me to unimaginable heights of pleasure
My tear stained pillow when he left
My life on hold as I yearned for his return
The cycle of shame, damnation and denial each time I walked away
Then went back
The jolt I felt
When I saw that my yearning had turned into...
Each time I hear his voice
Memories of how I waited in anticipation
My heart beating erratically
Beats of sweat rolling between peaks and valleys
My breath in staccato before he opened my door
The sounds our bodies made
As he brought me to unimaginable heights of pleasure
My tear stained pillow when he left
My life on hold as I yearned for his return
The cycle of shame, damnation and denial each time I walked away
Then went back
The jolt I felt
When I saw that my yearning had turned into...
#heartbroken
#hope
#lover
#shame
#UnrequitedLove
118 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 9:13pm
7th Jan 2025 9:13pm
Online Only
I did not see it coming
Your arrival was like a feather floating on the breeze
A low hum of your name
Then it started to nag at me
I looked
Why did I look?
Hooked on words
Your words ...
I raged and condemned
Could not let them see
They would all see
I am bending
Breaking
I will tell…..
No, I will demand
Cease and desist!
I'M NOT READY!
Secretly, I have goals
Goals with cobwebs
But they are my goals
What...
Your arrival was like a feather floating on the breeze
A low hum of your name
Then it started to nag at me
I looked
Why did I look?
Hooked on words
Your words ...
I raged and condemned
Could not let them see
They would all see
I am bending
Breaking
I will tell…..
No, I will demand
Cease and desist!
I'M NOT READY!
Secretly, I have goals
Goals with cobwebs
But they are my goals
What...
#emotions
114 reads
11 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 2:25pm
14th Jan 2025 2:25pm
WITHOUT YOU!
YOU! Yes, YOU!
Without YOU music is dull,
Without YOU food is bland,
Without YOU sunsets fade,
Without YOU the moon hides,
Without YOU dreams become nightmares;
Without YOU I feel friendless,
Without YOU smiles turn to frowns,
Without YOU time is an eternal chain,
Without YOU nature is only a desert
Without YOU love is only a sad word,
Without YOU passion is an iceberg.
Without YOU tomorrow is dreaded,
May I never be without YOU.
Meet me at the Kissing Place and
I'll know I HAVE YOU.
YES! The key word is Y O U,...
Without YOU music is dull,
Without YOU food is bland,
Without YOU sunsets fade,
Without YOU the moon hides,
Without YOU dreams become nightmares;
Without YOU I feel friendless,
Without YOU smiles turn to frowns,
Without YOU time is an eternal chain,
Without YOU nature is only a desert
Without YOU love is only a sad word,
Without YOU passion is an iceberg.
Without YOU tomorrow is dreaded,
May I never be without YOU.
Meet me at the Kissing Place and
I'll know I HAVE YOU.
YES! The key word is Y O U,...
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#love
#motivational
106 reads
10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 3:12am
Today 3:12am
attraction
attraction diabolical, full of need
something stirs inside
it's a dare compelling me to answer
seducing the dark, with come hither stares
looking into your danger
your essence challenges
I answer with a growl
temptation in a touch
sinful need, i want you too much
peaking lust enflames, my passion
you can see through to me
and I blush, thrilling desire
captivating charm, escalating
I have to taste your divine
scrying fate, I look to see what's good
flirting with disaster
my mind can't...
something stirs inside
it's a dare compelling me to answer
seducing the dark, with come hither stares
looking into your danger
your essence challenges
I answer with a growl
temptation in a touch
sinful need, i want you too much
peaking lust enflames, my passion
you can see through to me
and I blush, thrilling desire
captivating charm, escalating
I have to taste your divine
scrying fate, I look to see what's good
flirting with disaster
my mind can't...
#lust
13 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:25pm
Yesterday 9:25pm
In cased inside of glass
If you could change your life what would you consider, to change about your own life. FOR it's true that we have the ability and power, to alter our lives and further along, the direction of our lives as well, as our dreams. For sure if you could get one thing right, in your own life what would it be, that you have done that you would, want to be truly undone. FROM the deepness of the hurt and pain, that you caused, and left so many levels of feelings, unattended with emotional scars. That still to this day is lingering, in the dark deepness of some people's, heart and mind that you had...
#confusion
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#rejection
16 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
I UNDERSTAND
I understand,
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
#friendship
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
#support
194 reads
4 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:22pm
19th Jan 2025 10:22pm
For Don Juan
Chanting towards
seraphim kites
soaring upwards
vowels vortexed
into quivers
it is time
sequence
scent descend
pheromone
in transmuted droplets
jubilant singular stars
awakened me
linger now against beguiled breath
lean towards my silhouette
enclose me
a gentle
chest
fluttering
our hands
become ten petaled
flowers
speaking
through
weeping
fingertips
canvassed
we will remember
what skin...
seraphim kites
soaring upwards
vowels vortexed
into quivers
it is time
sequence
scent descend
pheromone
in transmuted droplets
jubilant singular stars
awakened me
linger now against beguiled breath
lean towards my silhouette
enclose me
a gentle
chest
fluttering
our hands
become ten petaled
flowers
speaking
through
weeping
fingertips
canvassed
we will remember
what skin...
#FallingInLove
#love
57 reads
6 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 6:19am
8th Jan 2025 6:19am
CPR
I love you so much
I want to rip your tortured heart
from your body
place it next to mine
and bring us both back to life.
I want to rip your tortured heart
from your body
place it next to mine
and bring us both back to life.
#emotions
#kindness
#love
87 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 1:29pm
15th Jan 2025 1:29pm
A Romantic..
want and romance
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you...
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you...
#love
#romantic
#Romanticism
112 reads
18 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 8:07am
17th Jan 2025 8:07am
Interlace
Souls interlace
Flowering shoots
Allow me to taste
Those hidden fruits
Your heart an oasis
Lies within
Body embraces
Delicate skin
Senses transmit
In too deep
A perfect fit
This love unique
Flowering shoots
Allow me to taste
Those hidden fruits
Your heart an oasis
Lies within
Body embraces
Delicate skin
Senses transmit
In too deep
A perfect fit
This love unique
#emotions
#love
81 reads
12 Comments
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