Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
He’s Out There Somewhere
Writing furiously
Banishing the ghosts of his past
Wrestling his demons
I had to stop myself
From reaching out
And asking if he’s taken the time
To eat
To shower
To shave
It’s not up to me
To make sure he takes care of himself
Letting go
Letting him
Be him
Is the best gift
I could give
And the best way
To pay homage
To what we had
Banishing the ghosts of his past
Wrestling his demons
I had to stop myself
From reaching out
And asking if he’s taken the time
To eat
To shower
To shave
It’s not up to me
To make sure he takes care of himself
Letting go
Letting him
Be him
Is the best gift
I could give
And the best way
To pay homage
To what we had
#admiration
#love
#respect #TimeHeals
#respect #TimeHeals
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Snowy Days
She can snare you with a gleam in her eye
Dead before you even hit the floor
Serpents scream while angels begin to cry
Tangled in the web of wanting more
Empty heart so cold like a November rain
Feel the ache growing in your bones
Through sultry pleasure revealing her pain
Pins and needles, sticks and stones
Red-headed beauty with a temper to match
Closing the door hearing the lock latch
She keeps you intoxicated with a sexy smile
Losing your balance now free-falling
Black cat moaning under moonlight’s guile ...
Dead before you even hit the floor
Serpents scream while angels begin to cry
Tangled in the web of wanting more
Empty heart so cold like a November rain
Feel the ache growing in your bones
Through sultry pleasure revealing her pain
Pins and needles, sticks and stones
Red-headed beauty with a temper to match
Closing the door hearing the lock latch
She keeps you intoxicated with a sexy smile
Losing your balance now free-falling
Black cat moaning under moonlight’s guile ...
#relationships
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Nothing left to See
It's time to dry the tears off the floor
You will never see them anymore
I sit here thinking about how this all went wrong
Like the melody of a tragic love song
Once upon a time, there was a me
Shiny and new for everyone to see
The ending of this perfect melody
Was the day you said hello to me
There
is
no
more
of
me
for
you
to
...
You will never see them anymore
I sit here thinking about how this all went wrong
Like the melody of a tragic love song
Once upon a time, there was a me
Shiny and new for everyone to see
The ending of this perfect melody
Was the day you said hello to me
There
is
no
more
of
me
for
you
to
...
#despair
#emptiness
#sadness
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Blues Song
He knows what he wants
He wants her
Too bad he's too fucked up to do anything about it
All he could do is hurt you
He's a wounded animal blinded by headlights
This could be the universal blues song
He wants her
Too bad he's too fucked up to do anything about it
All he could do is hurt you
He's a wounded animal blinded by headlights
This could be the universal blues song
#addiction
#frustration
#hurt
#relationships
#sadness
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WHAT IS TRUE LOVE in
The eclipse of the moon is a eclipse of the sun, as it hides a change is gonna come as the same is true. FOR love is our happiness and support and encouragement, and respect with honesty and truth and trust. For sure we are still human beings, just looking for the betterment of our lives and life. YET with a positive level of substance in our relationship, that they are still by our side in the good times and the bad times. As in love with respect and supporting us together as one. That with a real honest commitment and consistency, and real communications between us. AS twin flames one...
#conflict
#deception
#heartbroken
#lies
#TimeHeals
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Soul Lovers
it feels like we are
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
#lover
#stars
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Crumbling to dust
I feel so empty
without you
like a carcass floating
in memories
tossed n flung
to an island desolate
pecked at by vultures of agony
bit by bit...piece by piece
without you
like a carcass floating
in memories
tossed n flung
to an island desolate
pecked at by vultures of agony
bit by bit...piece by piece
#breakup
#despair
#heartbroken #love
#heartbroken #love
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TRILOGIES OF WORDS
MY
lover, please accept
my sincere trilogies:
YOU are right
I was wrong
.
I am sorry.
It's my fault.
I wasn't thinking.
PLEASE forgive me
Let's try again.
REMEMBER OUR TIMES.
The passion hours
The exploration tasting.
I LOVE YOU
YES, ONLY YOU
NEED ONLY YOU
PLEASE ACCEPT MY TRILOGIES.
lover, please accept
my sincere trilogies:
YOU are right
I was wrong
.
I am sorry.
It's my fault.
I wasn't thinking.
PLEASE forgive me
Let's try again.
REMEMBER OUR TIMES.
The passion hours
The exploration tasting.
I LOVE YOU
YES, ONLY YOU
NEED ONLY YOU
PLEASE ACCEPT MY TRILOGIES.
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#hope
#redemption
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Collide
Midnight blue
Halley plays
Soaring through
Her clustered gaze
Flaming stars
Sear beside
Lunar hearts
Here, collide
Halley plays
Soaring through
Her clustered gaze
Flaming stars
Sear beside
Lunar hearts
Here, collide
#emotions
#happiness
#love
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Old Love
is knowledgeable and wise;
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
#love
#relationships
#spiritual #aging
#spiritual #aging
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43 Comments
Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
#IMissYou
#love
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Platonic Love
Can platonic love
Survive when lust takes over?
I always wonder
(A 5-7-5 haiku)
Any thoughts on the matter?
Survive when lust takes over?
I always wonder
(A 5-7-5 haiku)
Any thoughts on the matter?
#love
#temptation
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