Love Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
Unable To Forget
I had a vision of her walking across heaven
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
#heartbroken
264 reads
21 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 11:08am
4th Apr 2025 11:08am
Virgins to the Whores
I can see you lurking in the shadows
How my scent is intoxicating you
Drawing you into my dark world
An Angel is just a Demon in disguise
And reality is the flames pulling you
My fantasies consuming your attention
Making you surrender to the damage
This cycle of the Fallen, forever longing
I want to eat your presence, to steal it
You lick my lips and I suck your tongue
As you gaze into my eyes seeing a universe
This cycle of the Fallen, forever dying
I want to consume every feeling, each drop
As you dominate me...
How my scent is intoxicating you
Drawing you into my dark world
An Angel is just a Demon in disguise
And reality is the flames pulling you
My fantasies consuming your attention
Making you surrender to the damage
This cycle of the Fallen, forever longing
I want to eat your presence, to steal it
You lick my lips and I suck your tongue
As you gaze into my eyes seeing a universe
This cycle of the Fallen, forever dying
I want to consume every feeling, each drop
As you dominate me...
#dark
#erotic
#lust
#sensual
#sex
84 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 3:02am
Today 3:02am
filler up
my loneliness echoes inside me
cruelly deceptive within my hollows I fill the empty space with you
but you are not mine to have
and I wonder, would you fill these places if things were different
seeking ever seeking for a way to cope
Holding my breath underwater is my life
I know I can't hold it long
I'm on razor blade tight rope walking
Anxiety is getting worse by the day
my hold is tenuous at best
The worst has me wondering how long I can do this
Will every day be torture
hold my breath sobriety
take a...
cruelly deceptive within my hollows I fill the empty space with you
but you are not mine to have
and I wonder, would you fill these places if things were different
seeking ever seeking for a way to cope
Holding my breath underwater is my life
I know I can't hold it long
I'm on razor blade tight rope walking
Anxiety is getting worse by the day
my hold is tenuous at best
The worst has me wondering how long I can do this
Will every day be torture
hold my breath sobriety
take a...
#anxiety
#dark
#LifeStruggles
21 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 10:31pm
5th Apr 2025 10:31pm
The silence of betrayal
The trials of the truth of the pain and hurt of love, is devastating for anyone who has been affected, by a crime of passion and deception and deep manipulations. Even though it appears to the naked eyes 👁️ 👁️ that with everything, that is going on between us and we truly thought it was well between us. YET beneath the surface of a mask as a disguise to hide your eyes. For your eyes are the key 🗝️ to the very deepness of your own soul. Yet Subconsciously we start to realize that there is something, that doesn't just feel like as it did BEFORE. For...
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
30 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 4:10pm
22nd Feb 2025 4:10pm
First Touch
Each day brought on that familiar smile.
Like rays of sunshine so warm and tactile
Every morning the dream got closer to reality
Knowing some exchanges are a mere formality
Beauty and elegance seem to have a smolder
Especially in the eyes and mind of the beholder
And when attraction brings two strangers nearer
They can reflect each other’s emotions like a mirror
Until one day just like it has been envisioned
Each breath will synchronize with precision
Hearts beat as one with a rhythm of pure elation
While ravenous...
Like rays of sunshine so warm and tactile
Every morning the dream got closer to reality
Knowing some exchanges are a mere formality
Beauty and elegance seem to have a smolder
Especially in the eyes and mind of the beholder
And when attraction brings two strangers nearer
They can reflect each other’s emotions like a mirror
Until one day just like it has been envisioned
Each breath will synchronize with precision
Hearts beat as one with a rhythm of pure elation
While ravenous...
#admiration
#love
150 reads
8 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 10:03pm
1st Mar 2025 10:03pm
You wanted freedom
I have read beauty in the sweet abandoned
To let go and be free
To enjoy life in all its splendor
When the sweet turns sour
Abandon turns to forsaken
Beauty is fleeting
The freedom you crave becomes a lonesome trek
You wonder
Your mind strolls
Trying to see the detour in the road
There was no sign to turn left or stop
Now your at the end of your road
To let go and be free
To enjoy life in all its splendor
When the sweet turns sour
Abandon turns to forsaken
Beauty is fleeting
The freedom you crave becomes a lonesome trek
You wonder
Your mind strolls
Trying to see the detour in the road
There was no sign to turn left or stop
Now your at the end of your road
#dark
#loneliness
157 reads
18 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 6:43pm
5th Apr 2025 6:43pm
I can't say this is about you but you know it is ....
I feel close to you
Often
Even in turmoil
I'm bound by your near smile
It illuminates a path
One day there will be glory
Until then
I'm your mentor
Wise ?
Sometimes
In desire ?
Almost always
Your time ?
Precious stones
Often
Even in turmoil
I'm bound by your near smile
It illuminates a path
One day there will be glory
Until then
I'm your mentor
Wise ?
Sometimes
In desire ?
Almost always
Your time ?
Precious stones
#crush
#lover
#wisdom
108 reads
18 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 11:44am
5th Apr 2025 11:44am
uncanny & delightful
5 of 30
it's the little things
ya know...
details others miss
but not him
he knows the sound of my cough
...when it's normal
just my asthma acting up
& when it's...different
never let's it pass unnoticed
I don't like the sound of that
to him it's very evident
when I'm not quite...solid
struggling to process
maybe it's just that I'm too quiet
I don't know what it is
somehow he knows when something's amiss
invariably...he reaches out
calming my mind
telling me to take my time ...
it's the little things
ya know...
details others miss
but not him
he knows the sound of my cough
...when it's normal
just my asthma acting up
& when it's...different
never let's it pass unnoticed
I don't like the sound of that
to him it's very evident
when I'm not quite...solid
struggling to process
maybe it's just that I'm too quiet
I don't know what it is
somehow he knows when something's amiss
invariably...he reaches out
calming my mind
telling me to take my time ...
#friendship
#gratitude
#love
81 reads
4 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 2:09pm
18th Mar 2025 2:09pm
NO MORE BEGGING
I
tried to be coy...
then suggestive...
then a little bolder;
finally an open but
somewhat sharing
between us...me too far,
YOU guarded and
suggestive.
OCCASIONALLY
it seemed the barrier was
collapsing as a few more
indications that YOU
were all in.
MY
desire is still YES.
BUT NO MORE BEGGING.
Remove your mask and
meet me at the Kissing Place.
OKAY?
tried to be coy...
then suggestive...
then a little bolder;
finally an open but
somewhat sharing
between us...me too far,
YOU guarded and
suggestive.
OCCASIONALLY
it seemed the barrier was
collapsing as a few more
indications that YOU
were all in.
MY
desire is still YES.
BUT NO MORE BEGGING.
Remove your mask and
meet me at the Kissing Place.
OKAY?
#emotions
#inspirational
#kindness
#love
#TimeHeals
119 reads
5 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:00pm
Yesterday 8:00pm
~a letter of love...
(an inspired love lyrical from the fav ever #ActorVijay song link below .. from 1995 Tamil film Deva)
https://youtu.be/hxMKi90d7V8?feature=shared
1.
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
in those shape of words
had sent myself to you…
my love… love me
my love… love me
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
2.
my dear, the soil you walk
your path of foot… i will
revere...
https://youtu.be/hxMKi90d7V8?feature=shared
1.
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
in those shape of words
had sent myself to you…
my love… love me
my love… love me
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
2.
my dear, the soil you walk
your path of foot… i will
revere...
#admiration
#inspirational
#love
#music
#spiritual
42 reads
3 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 7:58pm
21st Feb 2025 7:58pm
Love to a Gunfight
"We're bringing love to a gunfight."
~ Janiva Magness
Your enemies are your greatest teachers
—the ones who step on your triggers
revealing wounds that haven't yet healed
Each lesion that re-lacerates history
is an opportune time to decide
how we're going to react or reply
There are no coincidences in life
nor mistakes, only experience
lessons to spiritually advance
Thank those who perceive you
their adversary—their gift
is the greatest...
~ Janiva Magness
Your enemies are your greatest teachers
—the ones who step on your triggers
revealing wounds that haven't yet healed
Each lesion that re-lacerates history
is an opportune time to decide
how we're going to react or reply
There are no coincidences in life
nor mistakes, only experience
lessons to spiritually advance
Thank those who perceive you
their adversary—their gift
is the greatest...
#conflict
#love
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
380 reads
25 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 7:01pm
13th Mar 2025 7:01pm
I'LL TAKE YOU FOR A SPIN
I'll take you for a spin,
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
#dating
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
77 reads
0 Comments
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