Love Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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Kaleidoscope_Heart
Poem Published
Today 5:41pm
Today 5:41pm
I’m sorry for This
I remember always anticipating the moment that your love would one day come pouring out of you.
The day you would fill up so high, that you would have to spill your heart all over me.
I remember the tension of careful confessions here and there.
A game we played. My favorite kind.
When you were emotionally available.
Back when I excitedly waited for the day, that you would finally tell me that you love me.
That day never came.
10 years as friends
6 years as lovers
5 years domestic partners
...
The day you would fill up so high, that you would have to spill your heart all over me.
I remember the tension of careful confessions here and there.
A game we played. My favorite kind.
When you were emotionally available.
Back when I excitedly waited for the day, that you would finally tell me that you love me.
That day never came.
10 years as friends
6 years as lovers
5 years domestic partners
...
#love
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Michael_Goodridge
M_Goodridge
M_Goodridge
Poem Published
Today 4:33pm
Today 4:33pm
God's Soulmate
#romantic
#God
#FallingInLove #sensual
#FallingInLove #sensual
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1 Comment
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 3:55pm
Today 3:55pm
Shadoe
vodka notes sing to my soul
my ballerina something's missing
you're not here screaming obscenities into my mouth
pressing into my pneuma with masochism's lust
fuck I miss you...you're here today dancing across my thoughts
I catch sight of you on the horizon just out of reach
pirouetting at your Sadist's command
little prayers escape me to a god I don't believe in
we are Goddess us two beating back the night with our sex
taste me on the winds--
conjuring you back to the place of our knowing
I bind the tiny...
my ballerina something's missing
you're not here screaming obscenities into my mouth
pressing into my pneuma with masochism's lust
fuck I miss you...you're here today dancing across my thoughts
I catch sight of you on the horizon just out of reach
pirouetting at your Sadist's command
little prayers escape me to a god I don't believe in
we are Goddess us two beating back the night with our sex
taste me on the winds--
conjuring you back to the place of our knowing
I bind the tiny...
#love
#friendship
#beauty #IMissYou
#beauty #IMissYou
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4 Comments
Stoney223
melvin scott
melvin scott
Poem Published
Today 12:49pm
Today 12:49pm
I AM YOUR WOMAN
When I hurt it runs through my heart like a river down a stream as well as my soul of souls, for when I cry it comes from deep down inside of my very being as feelings my body trembles with an deep aching pain that not even mere words can explain, unless you ever felt the true deepness of what is real pain as it dives into the abyss of your mind taking you even deeper into the depth of the unknown.
...
...
#love
#strength
#hope
#courage
#motivational
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2 Comments
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Poem Published
Today 11:42am
Today 11:42am
s•M*I•L*e
Saturated movement in love equation
A invitation to chilling body thrills
Why eyes lock hands like out stretched rubber bands
Salivating a gland
In the distance horizon a vegan ICE CREAM stand
Sprinkles affection with a plugged in connection
Knowing after the rush here comes the blush
Making my heart feel like mush
Hush Hush
Alignment strategic invasion
SATURATED MOVEMENT in LOVE EQUATION—>S+m+I+L+E :)
A invitation to chilling body thrills
Why eyes lock hands like out stretched rubber bands
Salivating a gland
In the distance horizon a vegan ICE CREAM stand
Sprinkles affection with a plugged in connection
Knowing after the rush here comes the blush
Making my heart feel like mush
Hush Hush
Alignment strategic invasion
SATURATED MOVEMENT in LOVE EQUATION—>S+m+I+L+E :)
#rhyming
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PencilScribbles
Poem Published
Today 7:52am
Today 7:52am
Pure
How can you say that you love someone, unconditionally, and then not be happy for them when they have to walk away?
How can you love someone and not understand that you may not be what is best for them?
Why does love turn into a sense of possessiveness? Dependancy? Greed?
I will love no matter what,
No matter how long or how far away.
As I would my brothers or sisters.
I will love enough to say, "Goodbye and be happy."
I will do what is best for the one I love.
If that means walking away,
If that means letting...
How can you love someone and not understand that you may not be what is best for them?
Why does love turn into a sense of possessiveness? Dependancy? Greed?
I will love no matter what,
No matter how long or how far away.
As I would my brothers or sisters.
I will love enough to say, "Goodbye and be happy."
I will do what is best for the one I love.
If that means walking away,
If that means letting...
#love
#philosophical
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LiamReeduus
LiamReedus
LiamReedus
Poem Published
Today 5:24am
Today 5:24am
I'm your man
Like so many times before
I hold the woman i adore
My best friend my hearts rapport
Every day i act as if we just start to court
Smiling as we move down the hall
In love again i fall
Was it something needed said
Jasmine petals all on the bed
Treat me like our souls
Hold me close and dont let go
I remeber the first time i saw that smile
In every essence of your feminine guile
I hope its plain to see
Your always the queen of me
I live for every moment like this
For the healing touch of your kiss
You are the reason...
I hold the woman i adore
My best friend my hearts rapport
Every day i act as if we just start to court
Smiling as we move down the hall
In love again i fall
Was it something needed said
Jasmine petals all on the bed
Treat me like our souls
Hold me close and dont let go
I remeber the first time i saw that smile
In every essence of your feminine guile
I hope its plain to see
Your always the queen of me
I live for every moment like this
For the healing touch of your kiss
You are the reason...
#love
#kindness
#admiration #respect
#admiration #respect
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2 Comments
cpizzi
Poem Published
Today 4:53am
Today 4:53am
where i stand
standing here for what feels like an eternity
too afraid to contemplate my own fate
for so long you played me like a plague
like acid rain washed your face away
once ingrained in my brain
your memory is a haze
that i can’t completely erase
today finally came the day
that i no longer throw my heart away
broke free from the chains
you forcefully tied to me
no longer restrained
with this strain of decay
even if my bones may break
cast your shadow of doubt
instead of wasting away
i’ll find my way out...
too afraid to contemplate my own fate
for so long you played me like a plague
like acid rain washed your face away
once ingrained in my brain
your memory is a haze
that i can’t completely erase
today finally came the day
that i no longer throw my heart away
broke free from the chains
you forcefully tied to me
no longer restrained
with this strain of decay
even if my bones may break
cast your shadow of doubt
instead of wasting away
i’ll find my way out...
#depression
#heartbroken
#MovingOn
#acceptance
#hurt
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:56pm
Yesterday 11:56pm
Eyes Deep Blue (with TrueLover)
Eyes deep blue
like the ocean,
I’m drowning in them.
A voice like music
I can blare
and get lost in it.
A face like the sunset,
it’s mesmerizing,
makes me treasure it forever.
like the ocean,
I’m drowning in them.
A voice like music
I can blare
and get lost in it.
A face like the sunset,
it’s mesmerizing,
makes me treasure it forever.
#love
#FallingInLove
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fieryangelsouljia
MorriganFey
MorriganFey
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:35pm
Yesterday 11:35pm
a Grave Fit For a Queen of Nothing
You could sit next to me
and never once hear me
scream
We could spend a thousand nights
tangled in each other's arms
and you'll never once see me
bleed
You could ask me if I'm okay
but you'll never know my pain..
I thought that if I carved it out,
the piece of me that kept me warm
I wouldn't desire anything beyond
the cold of this hell I told myself
would become my home
But all I long for now
is the warmth
of a genuine
embrace
the sweeter side of you ...
and never once hear me
scream
We could spend a thousand nights
tangled in each other's arms
and you'll never once see me
bleed
You could ask me if I'm okay
but you'll never know my pain..
I thought that if I carved it out,
the piece of me that kept me warm
I wouldn't desire anything beyond
the cold of this hell I told myself
would become my home
But all I long for now
is the warmth
of a genuine
embrace
the sweeter side of you ...
#despair
#suffering
#emptiness #hurt
#emptiness #hurt
24 reads
2 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:56pm
Yesterday 9:56pm
Winter's Blush
Midwinter’s season on her lips,
a thawing blush tranquilizes the senses.
The dark of winter’s solstice
leaves me no lips to see to kiss.
Those pine-green eyes,
dusts of snow feathering upon her blushed cheeks.
There they melt,
glissading down her face.
a thawing blush tranquilizes the senses.
The dark of winter’s solstice
leaves me no lips to see to kiss.
Those pine-green eyes,
dusts of snow feathering upon her blushed cheeks.
There they melt,
glissading down her face.
#love
#winter
#FallingInLove
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1 Comment
Kaleidoscope_Heart
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:51pm
Yesterday 4:51pm
Boomerang Soul
To a fellow Boomerang Soul,
Attempting to figure you out has been one my favorite on and off past times.
Around you, I’ve felt both my most real and unreal. Feeling these switches has brought me both exhilaration and existential crisis.
It’s like we are on a rollar coaster, and we go from that incredible feeling of rise and fall free-fall-flow, to that awful feeling of when its not supposed to come full stop but it does.
We never talked about this, we always just reacted accordingly.
Our glitches have taught me so much about...
Attempting to figure you out has been one my favorite on and off past times.
Around you, I’ve felt both my most real and unreal. Feeling these switches has brought me both exhilaration and existential crisis.
It’s like we are on a rollar coaster, and we go from that incredible feeling of rise and fall free-fall-flow, to that awful feeling of when its not supposed to come full stop but it does.
We never talked about this, we always just reacted accordingly.
Our glitches have taught me so much about...
#UnrequitedLove
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