Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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It Must Be
How do my hours go, within a flash?
How are victories before you, merely a dash?
It must be your voice, that carries me away, on your dream....
Your blinding smile, that doubles as my sun beam.....
How does a second suffocate me, in finding you're not there?
How is it, that you're a minute, a moment & my air?
It must be that my lungs, are in your devine clutches....
That my very existence, relies alone, on your indelible touches.
How are victories before you, merely a dash?
It must be your voice, that carries me away, on your dream....
Your blinding smile, that doubles as my sun beam.....
How does a second suffocate me, in finding you're not there?
How is it, that you're a minute, a moment & my air?
It must be that my lungs, are in your devine clutches....
That my very existence, relies alone, on your indelible touches.
#love
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crossroads
notifications like a wink in the dark
I keep a letter in the back of my bottom drawer
read every syllable of your elegant hand
twice over and I'll accept this friend request
could it be coincidence? are you who she sent
to meet me at the crossroads this time?
did just a thought of the past open the door?
the fear left and you stepped across the threshold
I know why I buried it
I never looked back over my shoulder
uncovered dirty truths within myself
now I can't help but to wonder
if all of that trauma was completely...
I keep a letter in the back of my bottom drawer
read every syllable of your elegant hand
twice over and I'll accept this friend request
could it be coincidence? are you who she sent
to meet me at the crossroads this time?
did just a thought of the past open the door?
the fear left and you stepped across the threshold
I know why I buried it
I never looked back over my shoulder
uncovered dirty truths within myself
now I can't help but to wonder
if all of that trauma was completely...
#confusion
#love
#regret
#relationships
#shame
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Gone
When will I finally forget you?
I can't stop myself from seeing your face
Everytime I close my eyes
Every wrinkle that appears when you smile
I want to let my fingers run over your body
Learning and memorizing every trace
I want your eyes to follow only me
I want to be the only person you look for
I want to see you first thing in the morning
When my eyes flutter open to meet yours
I want to kiss your lips like they're mine
And make you utter noises that are so fine
So now that you aren't here anymore ...
I can't stop myself from seeing your face
Everytime I close my eyes
Every wrinkle that appears when you smile
I want to let my fingers run over your body
Learning and memorizing every trace
I want your eyes to follow only me
I want to be the only person you look for
I want to see you first thing in the morning
When my eyes flutter open to meet yours
I want to kiss your lips like they're mine
And make you utter noises that are so fine
So now that you aren't here anymore ...
#crush
#FallingInLove
#MovingOn
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Love Never Dies.........
The room was dark
I could feel her breath
On the nape of my neck
As her soft lips
Brushed past my own
I longed for her
As i grieved her loss
Yet i felt she was here with me
Right now!
I could feel her body
Close to mine
And felt her heartbeat
And her loss.......
I was aware of the madness of my grief
That possessed my every waking moment
And was reaching new levels
As i struggled with her loss
She whispered my name
I could feel the soft breath of her words of love
I cried...........
Hoping that...
I could feel her breath
On the nape of my neck
As her soft lips
Brushed past my own
I longed for her
As i grieved her loss
Yet i felt she was here with me
Right now!
I could feel her body
Close to mine
And felt her heartbeat
And her loss.......
I was aware of the madness of my grief
That possessed my every waking moment
And was reaching new levels
As i struggled with her loss
She whispered my name
I could feel the soft breath of her words of love
I cried...........
Hoping that...
#emotions
#grief
#love #sadness
#love #sadness
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dancing in the night
in nature
that fire
awakens,
desires
to be
holding,
to be
held,
watching
the joy
in her
early
bloom,
as
we dance,
i hear
her singing
from the
darkness.
that fire
awakens,
desires
to be
holding,
to be
held,
watching
the joy
in her
early
bloom,
as
we dance,
i hear
her singing
from the
darkness.
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#passion
#sexy
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6:31 a.m.
You're my sun rise.
My 6:31 am.
You're my open eyes.
Not just a single minute, but you're every one of them.
You are my day break.
The coffee, in my cup.
You're my, "I'm glad I'm awake".
The reason, that I get up.
You're my rising prayer.
The Who, I'm thankful for.
You're my blanket's warmest layer.
You're the everything after, when there was nothing before.
My 6:31 am.
You're my open eyes.
Not just a single minute, but you're every one of them.
You are my day break.
The coffee, in my cup.
You're my, "I'm glad I'm awake".
The reason, that I get up.
You're my rising prayer.
The Who, I'm thankful for.
You're my blanket's warmest layer.
You're the everything after, when there was nothing before.
#happiness
#love
#motivational
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Straitjacket Of Longing
slipping
in and out
of your gravity
ebb and flow
of emotions
luscious torture
detailed thoughts
about you
wishes about us
were a craving
i have tried
to deny
how
your beauty
unfolds
blooming
within
the universe
such a
delicious
paradox
that simply
drives me
to madness
be my
straitjacket
in and out
of your gravity
ebb and flow
of emotions
luscious torture
detailed thoughts
about you
wishes about us
were a craving
i have tried
to deny
how
your beauty
unfolds
blooming
within
the universe
such a
delicious
paradox
that simply
drives me
to madness
be my
straitjacket
#love
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Nothing More To Say To You
Sometimes, I talk too much.
I did that once, & then we lost touch .
Sometimes, it's what we say,
That gets in the way.
I'm trying to do better,
Not put all my efforts into a letter.
I have nothing more to say to you,
Than I love you, I love you.
Sometimes, I'm a fool,
Holding you to some made up rule.
Sometimes silence, says it all.
Not always a reason, for me to call.
Though trying too hard,
I guess, has always been my calling card.
I have nothing more to say to you, ...
I did that once, & then we lost touch .
Sometimes, it's what we say,
That gets in the way.
I'm trying to do better,
Not put all my efforts into a letter.
I have nothing more to say to you,
Than I love you, I love you.
Sometimes, I'm a fool,
Holding you to some made up rule.
Sometimes silence, says it all.
Not always a reason, for me to call.
Though trying too hard,
I guess, has always been my calling card.
I have nothing more to say to you, ...
#love
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The Cadence Of Soft Whispers
Soothing caresses of my soft hands
In my touch, worshipping the stature of God’s first plan
Lay unto me as ecstasy embraces the aura of my submissive Chi
Parting the divination of my mystique as you ease deep inside
Breath to breath, pulsating hearts, entwined minds
Blended tongues resonating sensations in the ether of time
Mm... feel the secretions of my hunger, the famine in the depth of your soul
The peninsula of my yearns cocooning your needs in the heat of the console
Alluring passion, desires transpiring ...
In my touch, worshipping the stature of God’s first plan
Lay unto me as ecstasy embraces the aura of my submissive Chi
Parting the divination of my mystique as you ease deep inside
Breath to breath, pulsating hearts, entwined minds
Blended tongues resonating sensations in the ether of time
Mm... feel the secretions of my hunger, the famine in the depth of your soul
The peninsula of my yearns cocooning your needs in the heat of the console
Alluring passion, desires transpiring ...
#lover
#passion
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
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Landmines
I thought that I could see just
what it was that's killing me
I stepped in holes up to my knees,
my courage tested my reality
From hell to heaven, I will declare,
just what angels really dare
to lend me wings with feathers strong so
I can fly from all the wrongs
I lift my feet from this ground
But every step brings me back down
These holes are landmines in disguise
Past loves and losses that still rise
Exploding truth into my eyes
And tearing open old goodbyes
Yet angels whispered in my...
what it was that's killing me
I stepped in holes up to my knees,
my courage tested my reality
From hell to heaven, I will declare,
just what angels really dare
to lend me wings with feathers strong so
I can fly from all the wrongs
I lift my feet from this ground
But every step brings me back down
These holes are landmines in disguise
Past loves and losses that still rise
Exploding truth into my eyes
And tearing open old goodbyes
Yet angels whispered in my...
#confusion
#regret
#strength
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Boyfriend
My boyfriend is the queen of love
He is made to be in bed
For you to take pictures of him
Youth
Agility
In his thrust
You just want to remain.
He is made to be in bed
For you to take pictures of him
Youth
Agility
In his thrust
You just want to remain.
#lover
#passion
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What Makes Me Dangerous:
I dont need a man's house of dreams,
I have my own,
And within this sanctuary,
I built our home.
These walls echo with strength,
not with fear,
I stand here with my God,
this vision, never more clear.
What makes me dangerous?
Ha! Can’t you see?
I don't have to depend,
on any soul, except for me!
I don’t need a man's...
I have my own,
And within this sanctuary,
I built our home.
These walls echo with strength,
not with fear,
I stand here with my God,
this vision, never more clear.
What makes me dangerous?
Ha! Can’t you see?
I don't have to depend,
on any soul, except for me!
I don’t need a man's...
#courage
#love
#strength
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