Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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Uncovered
It's as simple as
I love you,
and yet it feels
like a conundrum,
a crossword
with answered questions
and no blank spaces,
so I fumble my way through,
but fail to convey,
yet again that
which should be simple.
So while you read this
I just want you to know,
that you are still the giant
who split mountains
and discovered something eternal,
even if it was left in your wake
I love you,
and yet it feels
like a conundrum,
a crossword
with answered questions
and no blank spaces,
so I fumble my way through,
but fail to convey,
yet again that
which should be simple.
So while you read this
I just want you to know,
that you are still the giant
who split mountains
and discovered something eternal,
even if it was left in your wake
#FallingInLove
#grief
#hope #love
#hope #love
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Pendulum
I can feel the weight of gravity,
it's pressure on my skin,
Living lifetimes in
the past and future
between the pendulums swing.
The self affacing tragedies
The comedies of youth,
The drama's in the romance
The romance in the truth.
Powerless to retain her love
it slips into the night,
Fracturing me like victorian glass,
Oblivions dark delight.
it's pressure on my skin,
Living lifetimes in
the past and future
between the pendulums swing.
The self affacing tragedies
The comedies of youth,
The drama's in the romance
The romance in the truth.
Powerless to retain her love
it slips into the night,
Fracturing me like victorian glass,
Oblivions dark delight.
#breakup
#FeelingLost
#loneliness
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My Tender Bliss
A taste of yearning for him, to be within the umbrella of his convalescent runs so deep
Beautiful, combined rainfalls, passion escalating higher than the snowcap mountain peaks
Mm…Psalms of his tender heart making me hunger unjustly for you
My sexy red panties slowly he peels off, gently fingering your carnal food
A night of relishing our heart desires
This moth getting hot from the heat of his flaming fire
Here I stand in the shadow of lust
Anticipating his touch
Soothe me
Caress my skin, kissing me all over tenderly
Softly...
Beautiful, combined rainfalls, passion escalating higher than the snowcap mountain peaks
Mm…Psalms of his tender heart making me hunger unjustly for you
My sexy red panties slowly he peels off, gently fingering your carnal food
A night of relishing our heart desires
This moth getting hot from the heat of his flaming fire
Here I stand in the shadow of lust
Anticipating his touch
Soothe me
Caress my skin, kissing me all over tenderly
Softly...
#passion
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Feathers of Intimacy
In myriads of dreams collecting feathers
and alluring shadows in photographs
soft the whispers flow like rain on a pillow
over brooks and stones in Twilight's eyes
spawning the breath of poetic intimacy
listening to musical strings in potpourri
in myriads of dreams collecting feathers
and alluring shadows in photographs
soft the whispers flow like rain on a pillow
over brooks and stones in Twilight's eyes
spawning the breath of poetic intimacy
listening to musical strings in potpourri
in myriads of dreams collecting feathers
#erotic
#love
#sensual
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Daffodils
we could count
daisies, daffodils
and dandelions
You and me
track the flight
of the ladybugs
bumble bees
& butterflies
dance in the
dunes in june
lie on the grass
and talk for hours
& as we go to sleep
we can count the stars
daisies, daffodils
and dandelions
You and me
track the flight
of the ladybugs
bumble bees
& butterflies
dance in the
dunes in june
lie on the grass
and talk for hours
& as we go to sleep
we can count the stars
#butterfly
#flowers
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Kisses To Mend Shattered Souls
Silent rain drops fell
As they shimmered in
The neon lights,
before vanishing
Into the darkness of night,
We stood close,
under midnight's spell
Cast between the two that had fell
In love with magic and music
Where cartographers scribe,
The maps of their love under watchful eyes of the gods of the past
And beauty of the future
Past pain faded away with
Kisses like sutures.
As they shimmered in
The neon lights,
before vanishing
Into the darkness of night,
We stood close,
under midnight's spell
Cast between the two that had fell
In love with magic and music
Where cartographers scribe,
The maps of their love under watchful eyes of the gods of the past
And beauty of the future
Past pain faded away with
Kisses like sutures.
#hope
#love
#relationships
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Revelation
I just realized
love does not exist.
It is an illusion,
a dark shadow of a foggy mist.
What we feel
we think is real
is just a dream,
a scar we wait for our hearts to heal.
Fluids we pass
between succulent reds,
making love,
all a pretense to get in our lover’s beds.
For thousands of years
we lived and lied,
making up fairytales
for lovers of lovers who selfishly died.
What do we see
when we think it is the one?
We only see our lives,
passing by the chance of having fun. ...
love does not exist.
It is an illusion,
a dark shadow of a foggy mist.
What we feel
we think is real
is just a dream,
a scar we wait for our hearts to heal.
Fluids we pass
between succulent reds,
making love,
all a pretense to get in our lover’s beds.
For thousands of years
we lived and lied,
making up fairytales
for lovers of lovers who selfishly died.
What do we see
when we think it is the one?
We only see our lives,
passing by the chance of having fun. ...
#love
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Between The Stars
It used to be, when we kissed
the world fell away,
hearts were full and nothing mattered
as long as we had each other,
now, we fall away,
from each other,
I’ve danced to this song before
and the tempo feels the same,
The notes feel similar,
and I hope, more than ever
that this intuition is way off….
Because the gaps between the stars
are cold when I’m alone.
the world fell away,
hearts were full and nothing mattered
as long as we had each other,
now, we fall away,
from each other,
I’ve danced to this song before
and the tempo feels the same,
The notes feel similar,
and I hope, more than ever
that this intuition is way off….
Because the gaps between the stars
are cold when I’m alone.
#breakup
#loneliness
#relationships
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How many
How many
pieces?
How many
parts?
can you
smash open
my heart.
How many
times?
How many
ways?
can you
crack open
my soul.
Before
I break.
Before
I no longer
wish
to love.
Before
I no longer
care.
Thousands?
Millions?
of times?
I stopped
counting.
Like stars
scattered.
Like dust
sprinkled
beneath
your feet.
Stop
I beg you.
Stop
before
my love
stops to ...
pieces?
How many
parts?
can you
smash open
my heart.
How many
times?
How many
ways?
can you
crack open
my soul.
Before
I break.
Before
I no longer
wish
to love.
Before
I no longer
care.
Thousands?
Millions?
of times?
I stopped
counting.
Like stars
scattered.
Like dust
sprinkled
beneath
your feet.
Stop
I beg you.
Stop
before
my love
stops to ...
#love
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25 Comments
Monogamy
is important to me
i'm loyal to the core
one man kinda girl
when i'm in love
other guys, how
should i say this
simply cease to
exist- however i
like conversations
and friendships too
i just don't engage
in (online) flirtations
to me there's only one
i'm loyal to the core
one man kinda girl
when i'm in love
other guys, how
should i say this
simply cease to
exist- however i
like conversations
and friendships too
i just don't engage
in (online) flirtations
to me there's only one
#dating
#lover
73 reads
11 Comments
Breathless
I can sincerely say
I am helpless
in your gravity
laying naked in the bosom of your vernacular
blissfully fragmenting into
velvet tones that flow
over my bones
like silk on glass
(there are no more barriers
for you to traverse)
autumn skin
fires my imagination
in unfathomable ways
where I watch entire galaxies
fall silent, perchance to observe
those words
leave
your
lips
I was not prepared;
Undulating waves of adoration that
bathe my spirit in...
I am helpless
in your gravity
laying naked in the bosom of your vernacular
blissfully fragmenting into
velvet tones that flow
over my bones
like silk on glass
(there are no more barriers
for you to traverse)
autumn skin
fires my imagination
in unfathomable ways
where I watch entire galaxies
fall silent, perchance to observe
those words
leave
your
lips
I was not prepared;
Undulating waves of adoration that
bathe my spirit in...
#FallingInLove
#hope
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
68 reads
6 Comments
When Hearts Divide
I miss you,
Like the tide misses the moon
I miss you.
My surface does not move,
I am still, stagnant,
yearning for your pull.
Like the tide misses the moon
I miss you.
My surface does not move,
I am still, stagnant,
yearning for your pull.
#breakup
#grief
#hurt #love
#hurt #love
60 reads
4 Comments
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