Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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carried away
Lets get
ourselves
carried away
in
oceanic bliss
lets
float effortlessly
upon
marine waves
that
will pull
us
down if
struggling
to get
carried
away, love.
ourselves
carried away
in
oceanic bliss
lets
float effortlessly
upon
marine waves
that
will pull
us
down if
struggling
to get
carried
away, love.
#sea
#lover
#MovingOn #acceptance
#MovingOn #acceptance
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A short haiku (wait haikus are the same length nvm)
A dark bed with tears.
The puddle chills the night air.
unfaithful woman.
The puddle chills the night air.
unfaithful woman.
#heartbroken
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The Search
(for Henry Cavill)
My love.
Why did you leave me here alone?
I do not know how many years ago
we were together.
I do know I once shared your bed.
You wrapped me safely
in your strong arms
and protected me against a world
congested by cold hearts
and even colder intentions.
For centuries,
I searched for you.
But you left me
with this gut-wrenching emptiness
like a hunger never to be sated
by any food.
I scanned the faces of men
for your...
My love.
Why did you leave me here alone?
I do not know how many years ago
we were together.
I do know I once shared your bed.
You wrapped me safely
in your strong arms
and protected me against a world
congested by cold hearts
and even colder intentions.
For centuries,
I searched for you.
But you left me
with this gut-wrenching emptiness
like a hunger never to be sated
by any food.
I scanned the faces of men
for your...
#love
#loneliness
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our world
Our World
This is not a day for clear sky and sun
This is not a day for jubilant spring
This is not a day for summer drizzle
This is not a day for crisp snow
This is not a starlit night
This not a time for love and romance
This is a day of grief and mourning
She gave us a fertile world
What did we do?
We polluted her rivers and sea
We stole her precocious minerals
We befouled her scented air
We lay waste to her forests and land
We killed the fauna
Worst of all, we stole her beauty
This is not a day for clear sky and sun
This is not a day for jubilant spring
This is not a day for summer drizzle
This is not a day for crisp snow
This is not a starlit night
This not a time for love and romance
This is a day of grief and mourning
She gave us a fertile world
What did we do?
We polluted her rivers and sea
We stole her precocious minerals
We befouled her scented air
We lay waste to her forests and land
We killed the fauna
Worst of all, we stole her beauty
#countryside
#forest
#beach
#clouds
#nature
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Oh So You Love Me Huh?
When I hear the word 'love'
I run.
Not physically, maybe yes
But mentally I evade, disappear, compulse into a fit
Die a thousand miserable deaths.
It's having every glass around me shatter into a million pieces aimed at and racing into my direction.
Cutting, piercing, lunging through my flesh
Cause 'love ' that word is my trigger
A ticking time bomb buried so deep in my subconscious
I don't even think of it.
But you said it,
I love you, I've fallen for you, blah blah blah
Then I begin to sink
Into a whirl pool of my...
I run.
Not physically, maybe yes
But mentally I evade, disappear, compulse into a fit
Die a thousand miserable deaths.
It's having every glass around me shatter into a million pieces aimed at and racing into my direction.
Cutting, piercing, lunging through my flesh
Cause 'love ' that word is my trigger
A ticking time bomb buried so deep in my subconscious
I don't even think of it.
But you said it,
I love you, I've fallen for you, blah blah blah
Then I begin to sink
Into a whirl pool of my...
#sadness
#love
#breakup #lies
#breakup #lies
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The Woman in the Black Dress
#depression
#heartbroken
#breakup
#secrets
#UnrequitedLove
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...as love
opaqued over
her obsidian pillar did love
manifest
condensing miles into moments
pausing time
drawing spirit & mind
intertwining into a single breath
monumental
in sheer movement
shared in a hemisphere of kindredness
of inexplicable familiarity
did love drape
fold..mold
and steadied itself
...
her obsidian pillar did love
manifest
condensing miles into moments
pausing time
drawing spirit & mind
intertwining into a single breath
monumental
in sheer movement
shared in a hemisphere of kindredness
of inexplicable familiarity
did love drape
fold..mold
and steadied itself
...
#love
#lover
#gratitude
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unrestrained emotion
unrestrained
emotion,
your
pale smile
decorated
my morning,
we slept
and woke,
caressing hands
secretly touching,
what
went on
in between
our quiet
walls,
we kept
between us.
emotion,
your
pale smile
decorated
my morning,
we slept
and woke,
caressing hands
secretly touching,
what
went on
in between
our quiet
walls,
we kept
between us.
#relationships
#romantic
#beauty
#admiration
#dating
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Returned Unto Eden (Genesis)
A moment in time where hearts know no bounds
Desires of affection of unforgotten yearns
Blind hearts burning the flames of silken sheets
Soaked with crimes of instilled passion
Stirs so strong, weakness asunder we fall
Whispers cry out in the calling of the still night
Weakened moans, grunted groans
Echoing of denied needs
Sacred promises, oaths we bond with each thrust and uplift
Over the horizon pieces of me you beautifully merge
Over the rainbow broken remnants of you I am
Freedom in our movements...
Desires of affection of unforgotten yearns
Blind hearts burning the flames of silken sheets
Soaked with crimes of instilled passion
Stirs so strong, weakness asunder we fall
Whispers cry out in the calling of the still night
Weakened moans, grunted groans
Echoing of denied needs
Sacred promises, oaths we bond with each thrust and uplift
Over the horizon pieces of me you beautifully merge
Over the rainbow broken remnants of you I am
Freedom in our movements...
#spiritual
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LITTLE DROPS
#depression
#acceptance
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full moon *
full moon,
desperate
for attention,
your
celestial light
is a
majestic
presence,
and
the one
i love,
those
soft charms,
i will
gladly accept
your poet's
rhymes,
desperate
for attention,
your
celestial light
is a
majestic
presence,
and
the one
i love,
those
soft charms,
i will
gladly accept
your poet's
rhymes,
#happiness
#inspirational
#moon
#admiration
#emotions
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Butterflies
i am blessed to
have met you
My Lion King
you gorgeous
beautiful being
YOU make the
butterflies in my
belly go crazy
ever since our
very first date
You, yes you
make me feel
like a teenager
at freaking forty 8
have met you
My Lion King
you gorgeous
beautiful being
YOU make the
butterflies in my
belly go crazy
ever since our
very first date
You, yes you
make me feel
like a teenager
at freaking forty 8
#love
#dating
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