Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
26th Jun 2022 12:38pm
26th Jun 2022 12:38pm
Like melted dark chocolate and lips of rose
(¡)
One glance
time falls away
our youth swirls memories
between us
lush flashbacks
take us there
when all we knew
burned the midnight sun.
(¡¡)
His charisma
aged like fine wine
weakening resolve
{low cleansing breaths
stealthily sucked-in}
piercing sable eyes,
were velvet warmth always burned
a melted dark chocolate gaze
unrepentantly pours over
purposely pausing
on my lips ...
One glance
time falls away
our youth swirls memories
between us
lush flashbacks
take us there
when all we knew
burned the midnight sun.
(¡¡)
His charisma
aged like fine wine
weakening resolve
{low cleansing breaths
stealthily sucked-in}
piercing sable eyes,
were velvet warmth always burned
a melted dark chocolate gaze
unrepentantly pours over
purposely pausing
on my lips ...
#lover
#memories
#aging
#redemption
#FirstLove
149 reads
31 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
22nd May 2022 4:30pm
22nd May 2022 4:30pm
Kiss, with my breath, tongue, and lips...
Oh, how I want to kiss you:
And simple and complex, and sweet and sour,
Oh, how I want to hug you with a kiss:
Invisibly and strongly, excitedly, without looking back ...
Oh, how I want to get into your soul:
With my breath, tongue and lips ...
Oh, how I want to seal with a kiss
All the closeness between us, removing the distances ...
Oh, how I want to explode with "I want",
I want to scatter with "Desire" into fragments,
To collect them for you with a kiss,
Search for them with my lips like needles in a haystack...
...
And simple and complex, and sweet and sour,
Oh, how I want to hug you with a kiss:
Invisibly and strongly, excitedly, without looking back ...
Oh, how I want to get into your soul:
With my breath, tongue and lips ...
Oh, how I want to seal with a kiss
All the closeness between us, removing the distances ...
Oh, how I want to explode with "I want",
I want to scatter with "Desire" into fragments,
To collect them for you with a kiss,
Search for them with my lips like needles in a haystack...
...
#love
287 reads
41 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Jun 2022 8:49pm
16th Jun 2022 8:49pm
If Only
If only love was true to life like a story in the pages of a novel
How many of us would have stood the test of time?
Which of us would still hold on to a dream
Even as innocence is lost
Hoping against hope
When the cards we’re dealt are not the ones we want
If only our devotion to a childhood love was like the chapters of a book
Would our story be as good
No –
As Great
As we come of age
Committed in the heart of hearts
Even when misfortunes set us back
They shaped us and helped us grow
If...
How many of us would have stood the test of time?
Which of us would still hold on to a dream
Even as innocence is lost
Hoping against hope
When the cards we’re dealt are not the ones we want
If only our devotion to a childhood love was like the chapters of a book
Would our story be as good
No –
As Great
As we come of age
Committed in the heart of hearts
Even when misfortunes set us back
They shaped us and helped us grow
If...
#memorial
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
76 reads
1 Comment
S-m-sawyer
Poem Published
25th Jun 2022 11:07pm
25th Jun 2022 11:07pm
Treat her right, or someone else will....
Hold a door
Pull out a chair
Tell her she looks nice
She has great hair
Flirt with a text
Leave her a note
Comfort her
Help her to cope
Look into her eyes
Get her flowers
Arrange a surprise
Make love for hours
Slap her ass
Cuddle and kiss
Under the stars
Create bliss
Spoon her in bed
Keep her warm
Legs spread
Erotic storm
Treat her right
Tell her you love her still
Because if you don't
someone else will.....
Pull out a chair
Tell her she looks nice
She has great hair
Flirt with a text
Leave her a note
Comfort her
Help her to cope
Look into her eyes
Get her flowers
Arrange a surprise
Make love for hours
Slap her ass
Cuddle and kiss
Under the stars
Create bliss
Spoon her in bed
Keep her warm
Legs spread
Erotic storm
Treat her right
Tell her you love her still
Because if you don't
someone else will.....
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#admiration
#respect
106 reads
10 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
28th Jun 2022 2:50am
28th Jun 2022 2:50am
Scoff At Poetry, I Used To
somewhere in the midst of night
emotions are set to words
cracking through
the redundancy of the working class
where the cold comfort of the bottom of a glass
is a mother's hug
a lover's kiss
a dream fractionated into a nightmare
it folds like a paper people chain
doused in metho'
millimetres from a lit match
heart on fire in the burn of spirits
at 2am legs are rudderless bastards
I can only lisp a shattered fury into the ether
there's rage
frantic burning and vivid brush strokes ...
emotions are set to words
cracking through
the redundancy of the working class
where the cold comfort of the bottom of a glass
is a mother's hug
a lover's kiss
a dream fractionated into a nightmare
it folds like a paper people chain
doused in metho'
millimetres from a lit match
heart on fire in the burn of spirits
at 2am legs are rudderless bastards
I can only lisp a shattered fury into the ether
there's rage
frantic burning and vivid brush strokes ...
#alcohol
#obsession
65 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
Today 8:15pm
Today 8:15pm
A Voice Writing our Story
There's a kinetic energy
Between lovers
It's unspoken
It floats in aura
Supreme and unflinching
Bold but telling
There are things
I want to say them to you
But can't, so I write these poems
I'm around you on every corner
In your rear view mirror
A voice writing our story
Between lovers
It's unspoken
It floats in aura
Supreme and unflinching
Bold but telling
There are things
I want to say them to you
But can't, so I write these poems
I'm around you on every corner
In your rear view mirror
A voice writing our story
#relationships
#confessional
#lover
#WritingPoetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
37 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:19pm
Yesterday 10:19pm
love letters
you're hurting me
I am that broken
you know it to be true
lacing my corset of pain tighter
I say I love you and mean it
but it doesn't matter, does it?
my ache in scarlet speaks of the touch I will never feel
I bear the scars of loyalty
my soul counted for knows you intimately
you are not a man that lets women close
you pull in so deep to caress, to fuck
then cut me open to see what I'm made of
it's honesty she is reserved for you
I have felt you near me
so near your presence invades my senses
do you...
I am that broken
you know it to be true
lacing my corset of pain tighter
I say I love you and mean it
but it doesn't matter, does it?
my ache in scarlet speaks of the touch I will never feel
I bear the scars of loyalty
my soul counted for knows you intimately
you are not a man that lets women close
you pull in so deep to caress, to fuck
then cut me open to see what I'm made of
it's honesty she is reserved for you
I have felt you near me
so near your presence invades my senses
do you...
#love
65 reads
9 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
29th Jun 2022 4:02am
29th Jun 2022 4:02am
The Soft Calling Of The Moon
I searched for you in the essence of time
Upon the mountaintops I heard the reminisce of the past
Cascading waterfall cleansing the depth of my jaded soul
My feet kissed the dew of earth as I danced under the moonlight
Praising upon the Heaven the skies heard my prayers of contentment
My heart suspended in the moment of now
The charismatic of my mind bathing in the solace of the stars
Naked in my wonderment, I find myself showered in truth, answered of I
In the darkness finding my purpose to atone
I am the Queen of many echoes...
Upon the mountaintops I heard the reminisce of the past
Cascading waterfall cleansing the depth of my jaded soul
My feet kissed the dew of earth as I danced under the moonlight
Praising upon the Heaven the skies heard my prayers of contentment
My heart suspended in the moment of now
The charismatic of my mind bathing in the solace of the stars
Naked in my wonderment, I find myself showered in truth, answered of I
In the darkness finding my purpose to atone
I am the Queen of many echoes...
#universe
#moon
#night
#passion
#seductive
87 reads
12 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
18th Sep 2021 12:01pm
18th Sep 2021 12:01pm
Poetess XX
I once saw a human
get his face slashed
Wide open
Over a carton
of
milk,
Pulsating scarlet
silk
outlet
of
Deep red,
That made me
kind
of
Blue -
But as such things became common place
from
Face
to
face,
I felt only
Emptiness
or
nothingness…
But
Nothing
was
more
disappointing
than when
I
...
get his face slashed
Wide open
Over a carton
of
milk,
Pulsating scarlet
silk
outlet
of
Deep red,
That made me
kind
of
Blue -
But as such things became common place
from
Face
to
face,
I felt only
Emptiness
or
nothingness…
But
Nothing
was
more
disappointing
than when
I
...
#shadows
220 reads
8 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
Today 3:57pm
Today 3:57pm
Your picture f**king broke my soul
I sat on the balcony
legs between the bars,
sandals dangling
on the tips of my
toes, peeling the
label off bottle in my lap
a little weepy
because survival mode
kicked in
and it’s
numbing that fast.
You’re numbing that fast.
You have to.
You went that deep
and I can’t bleed out
on a balcony.
I hate that I’m so
good at not bleeding out.
I pick another strip off
the bottle, and I can’t
get the image of your
pain to leave;
the picture
of something ...
legs between the bars,
sandals dangling
on the tips of my
toes, peeling the
label off bottle in my lap
a little weepy
because survival mode
kicked in
and it’s
numbing that fast.
You’re numbing that fast.
You have to.
You went that deep
and I can’t bleed out
on a balcony.
I hate that I’m so
good at not bleeding out.
I pick another strip off
the bottle, and I can’t
get the image of your
pain to leave;
the picture
of something ...
#sadness
#love
#hurt
44 reads
0 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
5th Jun 2022 5:50am
5th Jun 2022 5:50am
Python Prison
Chiseled flesh arms
Slithering around my waist
Not wanting any space
Nuzzling my face
My crushing safety
Of masculine security
Coveting me freely
Making me feel alive
Squeezing just enough
To feel my heart beat
Through muscle and bone
Reminding me I’m not alone
His stiletto beacon
With matching dress
His favorite possession
That hisses fashion
Who wraps me up
In a silk cell
A man made heaven
My Python Prison
Slithering around my waist
Not wanting any space
Nuzzling my face
My crushing safety
Of masculine security
Coveting me freely
Making me feel alive
Squeezing just enough
To feel my heart beat
Through muscle and bone
Reminding me I’m not alone
His stiletto beacon
With matching dress
His favorite possession
That hisses fashion
Who wraps me up
In a silk cell
A man made heaven
My Python Prison
#love
#strength
#FallingInLove
175 reads
20 Comments
paperstains
Poem Published
Today 4:06pm
Today 4:06pm
You're an Asshole, but...
I have it still
the poem you wrote for me
in your heavy scrawl
about the polish in my poetry
the way you want to stroke
my metaphors
And I stare at it sometimes
wonder if you remember why
it was written
or understand the importance
of each little cross out
and correction
That in this digital world
of easy edits and erased mistakes
you held us in your hands
stains on paper
and we became the poem
the poem you wrote for me
in your heavy scrawl
about the polish in my poetry
the way you want to stroke
my metaphors
And I stare at it sometimes
wonder if you remember why
it was written
or understand the importance
of each little cross out
and correction
That in this digital world
of easy edits and erased mistakes
you held us in your hands
stains on paper
and we became the poem
#love
#WritingPoetry
41 reads
4 Comments
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