Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems written by the DU Poetry top critiquers
(members who have given lots of useful comments to other poets this month)
LilDragonFly
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:36am
Yesterday 11:36am
Knick Knack Kerouac
I want to plunge
keep ever falling
in love with you
my beatnik poet
As we ditch then hitch
chasing the Southern Cross
hiking to Aqua Calientes
kissing bliss at the Sun Gate
All the while
capturing each breath
sigh
in the freest most verse
Drifting fast asleep
my head in your lap
while you jit and jot
me into a lyric
Making raveled love
eye locked gazes
a tickle of whispers
your deftest tracings
keep ever falling
in love with you
my beatnik poet
As we ditch then hitch
chasing the Southern Cross
hiking to Aqua Calientes
kissing bliss at the Sun Gate
All the while
capturing each breath
sigh
in the freest most verse
Drifting fast asleep
my head in your lap
while you jit and jot
me into a lyric
Making raveled love
eye locked gazes
a tickle of whispers
your deftest tracings
#FallingInLove
52 reads
27 Comments
adamtherapy69
adam templar
adam templar
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:46am
Yesterday 00:46am
the search for love
THE SEARCH FOR LOVE
Is love
The pulse racing
heaven chasing
need fulfilling
dream making
cries of night?
Or the tender kindness
in your eyes
stopping to hold the hand
of a child
as you cross the road ?
The tears you shed
at the funeral
of your much missed spouse
the ache within
when love has left
your life
The money you give
secretly
because you know
what not having
is like
The fight for those
who have not the strength
to fight
...
Is love
The pulse racing
heaven chasing
need fulfilling
dream making
cries of night?
Or the tender kindness
in your eyes
stopping to hold the hand
of a child
as you cross the road ?
The tears you shed
at the funeral
of your much missed spouse
the ache within
when love has left
your life
The money you give
secretly
because you know
what not having
is like
The fight for those
who have not the strength
to fight
...
#love
#hope
#inspirational
#lover
#uplifting
4 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:01pm
Yesterday 2:01pm
a woman of a certain age
I'm frequently asked if the woman in the picture is me
the fact is it's Angelina Jolie
I don't know why I chose her for my avatar
perhaps it's because I secretly have a crush on her
the truth is I'm a woman of a certain age
my estrogen is on the slow side now
still menstruating but getting ready to stop
I have a fine little mustache that grows in
that I frequently wax off
but there's one course little hair
who persists on growing
and the strange thing is I like it
I like to run my fingers over its roughness ...
the fact is it's Angelina Jolie
I don't know why I chose her for my avatar
perhaps it's because I secretly have a crush on her
the truth is I'm a woman of a certain age
my estrogen is on the slow side now
still menstruating but getting ready to stop
I have a fine little mustache that grows in
that I frequently wax off
but there's one course little hair
who persists on growing
and the strange thing is I like it
I like to run my fingers over its roughness ...
#beauty
#SelfDiscovery
53 reads
17 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:58pm
Yesterday 3:58pm
Twirling In My Mind
Strumming along with my heartstrings
Drawing me in with each note
Playing the most beautiful love song
Hearing each word that you wrote
Only distance holding away intentions
Still I'm locked in your trance
Two hearts apart, sing together
Oh how I wish we could dance
A kiss on your delicate tresses
Feeling you close and so tight
Slow dancing under the stars
The girl, the boy and the night
Drawing me in with each note
Playing the most beautiful love song
Hearing each word that you wrote
Only distance holding away intentions
Still I'm locked in your trance
Two hearts apart, sing together
Oh how I wish we could dance
A kiss on your delicate tresses
Feeling you close and so tight
Slow dancing under the stars
The girl, the boy and the night
#happiness
14 reads
2 Comments
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Poem Published
18th Oct 2018 5:56pm
18th Oct 2018 5:56pm
Phoenix winds
Winter solstice wore
A wreath resembling
The hours when
I walked this
Road alone
We honour
Nurtured
Tenderness
Beneath my
Mouth I
Enter the
Temple of
Your kiss
Crimsoned
Embers
Glowing
Of love
Silent looms
Weave silk
Stilk threads
Willow branches
Bend tight
We are fallen
Fractals
Distance
Speaks a
Torment
Tone
There is
No compass
Though
At first glance
I knew
In you
I would
Find my way ...
A wreath resembling
The hours when
I walked this
Road alone
We honour
Nurtured
Tenderness
Beneath my
Mouth I
Enter the
Temple of
Your kiss
Crimsoned
Embers
Glowing
Of love
Silent looms
Weave silk
Stilk threads
Willow branches
Bend tight
We are fallen
Fractals
Distance
Speaks a
Torment
Tone
There is
No compass
Though
At first glance
I knew
In you
I would
Find my way ...
#love
26 reads
1 Comment
bcpoet
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:20pm
Yesterday 6:20pm
Vacant Dream
now is the time
here in this place
with gossamer wings
thoughts fly into space
softly and gently
fluttering
thoughts with wings
now arrive in
your consciousness
your mind and your heart
no longer are we
so far apart
no longer is there
in between
an empty space
or vacant dream -
I want you to know
I want you
to feel the same things
which I now do
thoughts with wings
are how that I
can let you know
the reason why
I'm writing these words ...
here in this place
with gossamer wings
thoughts fly into space
softly and gently
fluttering
thoughts with wings
now arrive in
your consciousness
your mind and your heart
no longer are we
so far apart
no longer is there
in between
an empty space
or vacant dream -
I want you to know
I want you
to feel the same things
which I now do
thoughts with wings
are how that I
can let you know
the reason why
I'm writing these words ...
#love
#rhyming
15 reads
3 Comments
Orenda
Poem Published
6th Oct 2018 6:53pm
6th Oct 2018 6:53pm
Unforgettable you...
I pen down thoughts of you
with indelible ink of love
Shaping you into beautiful words
Filling up every page of moments of mine
Adorning the book of my life
with sweet memories of you...
P.S. My love doth the calligraphy define
flowing through every curve and line
of your memories sublime...
with indelible ink of love
Shaping you into beautiful words
Filling up every page of moments of mine
Adorning the book of my life
with sweet memories of you...
P.S. My love doth the calligraphy define
flowing through every curve and line
of your memories sublime...
#love
#IMissYou
110 reads
12 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
18th Oct 2018 10:15pm
18th Oct 2018 10:15pm
Discretion
I try to be discreet
But age is just a number
When you come around
I find it hard to look away
Intelligent conversation
Delicate situation
But sometimes
You just click with a person
The desire
Built by the discretion
An unintended consequence
But I’m happy it’s had that effect
Because you’ve touched my heart
And your sexiness goes without saying
You’ve broken through my exterior
Opened the door to my interior
mon coeur est tien
But age is just a number
When you come around
I find it hard to look away
Intelligent conversation
Delicate situation
But sometimes
You just click with a person
The desire
Built by the discretion
An unintended consequence
But I’m happy it’s had that effect
Because you’ve touched my heart
And your sexiness goes without saying
You’ve broken through my exterior
Opened the door to my interior
mon coeur est tien
#romantic
#admiration
#respect #crush
#respect #crush
32 reads
6 Comments
DaVinci_07
Leo
Leo
Poem Published
10th Oct 2018 8:02pm
10th Oct 2018 8:02pm
La Mode
You
Me
Are we.
That's all we need.
Everything else,
makes no sense.
Fit together like
ice cream and pie.
Well you are
the apple of my eye.
Not just a trend or a mode.
We are "a' la mode!"
Take a bite,
hot and cold.
Sweet and tasty,
enjoy before it gets old.
Me
Are we.
That's all we need.
Everything else,
makes no sense.
Fit together like
ice cream and pie.
Well you are
the apple of my eye.
Not just a trend or a mode.
We are "a' la mode!"
Take a bite,
hot and cold.
Sweet and tasty,
enjoy before it gets old.
#love
#funny
42 reads
10 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:10pm
Yesterday 10:10pm
What Love Is II.
Is it about being a
Hero?
No!
rather It is having
ZERO
self-control
when it comes to gifting
wanting to share every
uplifting sentiment
the very moment
it's penned to paper
before the ink dries
instead of waiting
for occasions special --
Valentines, birthday
or even Christmas
Surprise!
And
then
when
you are greeted by said
milestones and holidays
on the doorstep
you
wipe your feet
clean
...
Hero?
No!
rather It is having
ZERO
self-control
when it comes to gifting
wanting to share every
uplifting sentiment
the very moment
it's penned to paper
before the ink dries
instead of waiting
for occasions special --
Valentines, birthday
or even Christmas
Surprise!
And
then
when
you are greeted by said
milestones and holidays
on the doorstep
you
wipe your feet
clean
...
#love
#WritingPoetry
19 reads
3 Comments
Lookawaynow
Rose
Rose
Poem Published
18th Oct 2018 6:00am
18th Oct 2018 6:00am
Falling Shadows
Waiting on the falling,
much like dreaming,
Raining, feeding &
life giving,
it's journey
meandering down from
mountain tops
finally reaching coastal shores
Now the sun, rising,
making out
birds taking flight,
in the sky
riding
warming wings
casting
dark shadows
against the wall
earthbound;
Spreading over you and me,
finding us without sound,
Hands reaching out
across the...
#love
17 reads
0 Comments
runaway-mindtrain
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:29am
Yesterday 6:29am
Her color of sound
She fires flames into a living force of cold rival
Makes invisible world spelling her archetypal,
-
So the cycle in mind to form her world round
Angel song to chorus a mass held spellbound,
-
Of revealing the woman transference
Everything creates by a spoken word,
-
Then attuning her ever finer currents
Eternally rebuilding a new crossword,
-
Always staying as a hidden whisper to a shaded wind
Feminine mystery unlocked a knighted kingdom end.
-
Her tender dew-kiss petals float unrequited streams ...
Makes invisible world spelling her archetypal,
-
So the cycle in mind to form her world round
Angel song to chorus a mass held spellbound,
-
Of revealing the woman transference
Everything creates by a spoken word,
-
Then attuning her ever finer currents
Eternally rebuilding a new crossword,
-
Always staying as a hidden whisper to a shaded wind
Feminine mystery unlocked a knighted kingdom end.
-
Her tender dew-kiss petals float unrequited streams ...
#love
#kindness
27 reads
1 Comment
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