Love Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
5th Mar 2021 9:24pm
5th Mar 2021 9:24pm
Daisy-girl
This is a lament I wrote on Blackwolf's thread
For The Love Of Animals, last Oct.
She passed on 10/14/20 I'll never forget that
I was going to rewrite it into more of a poem format but then decided against it.
I think about her every day. ]
Lost my Daisy-girl yesterday
I posted a shitty poem about it yesterday too, but hated it and took it down.
I was in a state, to put it mildly.
She was a big golden girl of love
and pure bright sunshine.
No matter how bad your day
may have been going
she...
For The Love Of Animals, last Oct.
She passed on 10/14/20 I'll never forget that
I was going to rewrite it into more of a poem format but then decided against it.
I think about her every day. ]
Lost my Daisy-girl yesterday
I posted a shitty poem about it yesterday too, but hated it and took it down.
I was in a state, to put it mildly.
She was a big golden girl of love
and pure bright sunshine.
No matter how bad your day
may have been going
she...
#love
#BestFriend
#heartbroken
#dogs
#rainbow
76 reads
42 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
5th Mar 2021 1:42pm
5th Mar 2021 1:42pm
JEALOUSY: Enemy of Healthy Relationships
It hides in many places,
wears many disguises,
known by different names,
denied, justified, and
master blame game player.
JEALOUSY!
Few actions and reactions
among persons have caused
more harm than jealousy.
The results of jealousy
can be seen in arguments, anger,
courts, divorce, fights, hospitals,
jails, fear, hatred, violence, lying,
insecurity, injuries, poverty, justifying,
accusations, spying, and so forth.
JEALOUSY ACROSTIC:
Jealousy is ...
...
wears many disguises,
known by different names,
denied, justified, and
master blame game player.
JEALOUSY!
Few actions and reactions
among persons have caused
more harm than jealousy.
The results of jealousy
can be seen in arguments, anger,
courts, divorce, fights, hospitals,
jails, fear, hatred, violence, lying,
insecurity, injuries, poverty, justifying,
accusations, spying, and so forth.
JEALOUSY ACROSTIC:
Jealousy is ...
...
#strength
#courage
#motivational
#inspirational
#emotions
30 reads
5 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
5th Mar 2021 1:09pm
5th Mar 2021 1:09pm
Lost Answer
At the crossroads of destinies
Mind and Soul argue everything ...
And every argument leads,
Still not finding a solution ...
But the Heart smiled silently,
In the dark lighting up
And quietly touched the Mind,
Whispering the lost answer
Mind and Soul argue everything ...
And every argument leads,
Still not finding a solution ...
But the Heart smiled silently,
In the dark lighting up
And quietly touched the Mind,
Whispering the lost answer
#love
#LifeStruggles
76 reads
34 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th Mar 2021 4:41am
6th Mar 2021 4:41am
Cadence Exploding
Erotic
Eclectic
Eccentric
Exciting
Eclectic
Eccentric
Exciting
#LifeAsAWriter
24 reads
7 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
16th May 2020 7:41pm
16th May 2020 7:41pm
The Vaquero's Vow
Thirteen minutes!
That’s all that was necessary.
Silently meet, fall madly in love and marry the brute.
His love was warmth on a cold winter’s eve.
And the cooling touch to a feverish,
nubile love struck girl.
She could see nothing else before her
but happiness, passion and love.
He could see only money,
idleness and the bottom of a bottle.
Her Vaquero saw it all.
He warns the brute to care for her or else...
His love for her was unmatched, he wanted only her happiness.
He defended her honor,...
That’s all that was necessary.
Silently meet, fall madly in love and marry the brute.
His love was warmth on a cold winter’s eve.
And the cooling touch to a feverish,
nubile love struck girl.
She could see nothing else before her
but happiness, passion and love.
He could see only money,
idleness and the bottom of a bottle.
Her Vaquero saw it all.
He warns the brute to care for her or else...
His love for her was unmatched, he wanted only her happiness.
He defended her honor,...
#hope
#passion
235 reads
14 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:44am
Yesterday 8:44am
The Depths of My Emotion
The Depths of My Emotion
#love
#rejection
#emotions
35 reads
5 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
19th Feb 2021 3:36pm
19th Feb 2021 3:36pm
Us
Not easy for me to be me
Not easy for you to be you
so how could we be.....
You and me?
Not easy for you to be you
so how could we be.....
You and me?
#love
45 reads
2 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
6th Feb 2021 7:19am
6th Feb 2021 7:19am
Love's Journey
Love is special
Love is caring
Love is listening
Love is kindness
Love is respect
Love is catching a
compromising position
Love works in
Screwed up ways
Love is endearing
Love is painful
Love also hurts
Love has no guarantee
But when love
works then give
it everything you got
Go full Throttle
Love is caring
Love is listening
Love is kindness
Love is respect
Love is catching a
compromising position
Love works in
Screwed up ways
Love is endearing
Love is painful
Love also hurts
Love has no guarantee
But when love
works then give
it everything you got
Go full Throttle
#love
#kindness
#women
#men
#relationships
74 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
9th Feb 2021 2:50pm
9th Feb 2021 2:50pm
You Softly Complete My Circle Of Infinity
Infinity
#love
#passion
109 reads
19 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:52am
Yesterday 10:52am
Is this love
Is this love
The moment you come to mind, a smile comes to their face, everything else they were thinking of is gone without a trace
They can see you in their mind, like a clear picture their head, they dream of you every night, whilst lying in their bed
Everyday is sunny, they can't feel the cold harsh rain, gone are the sad days, you seem to take away their pain
Life is much sweeter, they dream your kisses taste like Strawberries on their lips, succulent and juicey, they'd die for just one sip
You live inside their heart, it beats...
The moment you come to mind, a smile comes to their face, everything else they were thinking of is gone without a trace
They can see you in their mind, like a clear picture their head, they dream of you every night, whilst lying in their bed
Everyday is sunny, they can't feel the cold harsh rain, gone are the sad days, you seem to take away their pain
Life is much sweeter, they dream your kisses taste like Strawberries on their lips, succulent and juicey, they'd die for just one sip
You live inside their heart, it beats...
#happiness
#love
#dreams
15 reads
8 Comments
RiAN
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2021 7:29am
3rd Mar 2021 7:29am
unrequited
I bathe in slumbering wishes
to tear each angle seven folded
I breed these basking shades in which
tender violence grew into sunsets
still I watered these black dahlias
to evoke embedded lusts
an epitaph escaped through
these searching hands
in the caskets of brokenness
pain purifies fallen star
I practiced the dying arts
to tear each angle seven folded
I breed these basking shades in which
tender violence grew into sunsets
still I watered these black dahlias
to evoke embedded lusts
an epitaph escaped through
these searching hands
in the caskets of brokenness
pain purifies fallen star
I practiced the dying arts
#love
#breakup
#UnrequitedLove
22 reads
4 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
6th Mar 2021 1:56am
6th Mar 2021 1:56am
Softly the winds...
..softly the winds blow piccolo
a medium-size gray flycatcher
whistling like a wood-pewee
in the trees of early dawn
a chorus of a morning song
until my tea weeps happiness
with my bride's trousseau...
a medium-size gray flycatcher
whistling like a wood-pewee
in the trees of early dawn
a chorus of a morning song
until my tea weeps happiness
with my bride's trousseau...
#happiness
#love
26 reads
7 Comments
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