Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Ahavati
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2019 3:41pm
2nd Aug 2019 3:41pm
it may not always be so; (after ee cummings )
it may not always be so; these stone
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it...
walls lining castle ruins, where these
fortresses of our heart seem invincible-
in love, their towering turrets a standard’s
base upon these dusty ramparts-
witnessing architecture wed landscape-
supporting our unyielding faith.
it may not always be so; victors
come and go; wars fought and lost-
as much as they are won; should
another champion capture your heart
as I myself have done, your attention
a profession of new-found love-
then, shall it...
#sadness
#love
#heartbroken #lover
#heartbroken #lover
232 reads
20 Comments
highlyfunctional
Poem Published
27th Jul 2019 4:20am
27th Jul 2019 4:20am
Perfect Jealousy
measuring out
just the right amount
of jealousy
to feel how much
you want me
to be me.
your confidence
in my love and in
your own worth
is my absolution,
my aphrodisiac:
“she’s beautiful”
you like her body?
the way she moves
her breasts
and hips
pink lips
small mouth (careful)
“let your eyes feast, my love”
I am not vexed
by your aesthetic tastes
I consume your joy
and hold...
just the right amount
of jealousy
to feel how much
you want me
to be me.
your confidence
in my love and in
your own worth
is my absolution,
my aphrodisiac:
“she’s beautiful”
you like her body?
the way she moves
her breasts
and hips
pink lips
small mouth (careful)
“let your eyes feast, my love”
I am not vexed
by your aesthetic tastes
I consume your joy
and hold...
#love
#jealousy
#art
194 reads
18 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
Today 00:39am
Today 00:39am
WHEN YOU CAME INTO MY WORLD
From the depth of my deepness within my heart and soul it is you who has turned my life around, for you shown me what is a rare thing when you stepped into my world as you shown me your love and understanding.
For somewhere in between the feelings and emotions, the vibe in me reemerged from the deepness of my heart, for it was you who awaken within me what I thought and felt had died long ago.
...
For somewhere in between the feelings and emotions, the vibe in me reemerged from the deepness of my heart, for it was you who awaken within me what I thought and felt had died long ago.
...
#love
#kindness
#FallingInLove
#gratitude
#admiration
4 reads
0 Comments
LostGirl18
Poem Published
1st Mar 2017 6:21am
1st Mar 2017 6:21am
Aurora
Aurora,
I know you play games.
I'm aware of your style,
but I've come calling again.
As we touch,
your caress sparks my flame.
The soft allure ,
I'm helpless as a paper crane.
My lovely,
as colourful as an icy sprinkle.
Soft like jelly on the inside;
your shell as hard as a periwinkle.
As the sun kisses the early bird,
I await your unspoken word.
I hear only lovely sounds
as your walls fall down.
Your sweet solace,
fills my empty plate.
In sorrow,
we are no longer irate. ...
I know you play games.
I'm aware of your style,
but I've come calling again.
As we touch,
your caress sparks my flame.
The soft allure ,
I'm helpless as a paper crane.
My lovely,
as colourful as an icy sprinkle.
Soft like jelly on the inside;
your shell as hard as a periwinkle.
As the sun kisses the early bird,
I await your unspoken word.
I hear only lovely sounds
as your walls fall down.
Your sweet solace,
fills my empty plate.
In sorrow,
we are no longer irate. ...
357 reads
11 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
17th Sep 2019 12:42pm
17th Sep 2019 12:42pm
Locus Focus
We need
not (to)
…have …
amorous atoms
after
molecules mingling
mindlessly
moving
aroused auras
fingering
physically in
coition
and trade
tracing
Our
existences
together
eternally
…to have…
* * *
we
can love
one
another
even if
Both
are not in the
same place
same space
not (to)
…have …
amorous atoms
after
molecules mingling
mindlessly
moving
aroused auras
fingering
physically in
coition
and trade
tracing
Our
existences
together
eternally
…to have…
* * *
we
can love
one
another
even if
Both
are not in the
same place
same space
#love
#relationships
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#LongDistanceRelationship
81 reads
28 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
30th Aug 2019 5:22pm
30th Aug 2019 5:22pm
see no evil, hear no evil...what the hell...you know the rest...
i thought i saw
something in
your eyes that
said you cared
I was wrong
guess i was
blind and
deaf
and thats all
i have to
say
something in
your eyes that
said you cared
I was wrong
guess i was
blind and
deaf
and thats all
i have to
say
#disappointment
75 reads
13 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
25th Apr 2019 6:51pm
25th Apr 2019 6:51pm
We're Learning
He's learning my soul's intricate compass
Arms outstretched
Gently bids shelter to pain and numbness
Peering intently into beloved blue irises
My complexities searched over
Capturing still frames of all kept silenced
Hands skim the jagged roadmap of scars
Rendering my ugly, his beauty
Perfection upon a battlefield of wars
In my wellspring of hurt, tears taking form
He catches each burden to drop
From speckled hazels, his own are torn
He lays with me upon my bed of...
Arms outstretched
Gently bids shelter to pain and numbness
Peering intently into beloved blue irises
My complexities searched over
Capturing still frames of all kept silenced
Hands skim the jagged roadmap of scars
Rendering my ugly, his beauty
Perfection upon a battlefield of wars
In my wellspring of hurt, tears taking form
He catches each burden to drop
From speckled hazels, his own are torn
He lays with me upon my bed of...
#love
#husband
#inspirational
224 reads
24 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
1st Aug 2019 11:24am
1st Aug 2019 11:24am
Once In A Beautiful Lifetime
Once in a beautiful lifetime there comes a spiritual soul of a man, a strong existence whose aura fits within the lock of my life to turn the master key, exploring the seven voyages of my lunar Chakras.
Scaling the reverent awareness of my inner thoughts, touching the efference of my Chi, kissing upon my queen’s nature, heightening my sacred revelations spoken in spirituality and in truth.
In the dominion of realty, my head bowed in reverence, the gift of blind knowledge, waiting to be exposed, appreciated, utilized.
Lessons of ancient taught and...
Scaling the reverent awareness of my inner thoughts, touching the efference of my Chi, kissing upon my queen’s nature, heightening my sacred revelations spoken in spirituality and in truth.
In the dominion of realty, my head bowed in reverence, the gift of blind knowledge, waiting to be exposed, appreciated, utilized.
Lessons of ancient taught and...
#StreamOfConsciousness
131 reads
4 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
18th Aug 2019 7:33pm
18th Aug 2019 7:33pm
Carousel
Here I go again
Round and round
Dressed and painted
Like the colorful horses
On the merry-go-round
Attached to the cold metal pole
Moving at a trot
Up and down
Going nowhere
Peripheral vision captures
The beauty of cultured gardens
Flowers bowing in reverence
To silenced agony
Trees
Majestic in quiet stately beauty
Nodding in pathos
Yet unable to free me
Savage my screams
Primitive my needs
Wanton my desires
Your painted
Papier mache ears
Will...
Round and round
Dressed and painted
Like the colorful horses
On the merry-go-round
Attached to the cold metal pole
Moving at a trot
Up and down
Going nowhere
Peripheral vision captures
The beauty of cultured gardens
Flowers bowing in reverence
To silenced agony
Trees
Majestic in quiet stately beauty
Nodding in pathos
Yet unable to free me
Savage my screams
Primitive my needs
Wanton my desires
Your painted
Papier mache ears
Will...
#heartbroken
99 reads
8 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Sep 2019 6:13am
5th Sep 2019 6:13am
The Heaviest Matter in the Universe
Love can flip your entire world upside down, with no logic and no sense. Your emotions are stirred with an unexplainable desire deep in your core you’re often left wondering, how did I come to this?
Science can explain the chemical reactions, between physical attraction and spiritual attachment, the heart doesn’t care for rationalization, it just wants.
Love has a special effect on the soul. It's tormenting when far away and it heals all wounds with a tender touch, a soft caress and the most caring kiss. Yes, love can make you do crazy things, from crossing deserts and...
Science can explain the chemical reactions, between physical attraction and spiritual attachment, the heart doesn’t care for rationalization, it just wants.
Love has a special effect on the soul. It's tormenting when far away and it heals all wounds with a tender touch, a soft caress and the most caring kiss. Yes, love can make you do crazy things, from crossing deserts and...
#love
#lust
#UnrequitedLove #despair
#UnrequitedLove #despair
83 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 4:51pm
Today 4:51pm
Natural
I'm just a lady who should have been a man
so it would be alright
alright to love you
I can't cause I'm a woman
women are vicious
women are cutthroat we'd tear each other down
so would it be okay if I lick your poetry?
hide it away inside me with my attraction for you
because it makes me uncomfortable
to be a woman with a taste for a girl like you
hide it where I'm really me
just a human with love for another human
inside me where I'm free
without labels or prejudice
it's just you and me ...
so it would be alright
alright to love you
I can't cause I'm a woman
women are vicious
women are cutthroat we'd tear each other down
so would it be okay if I lick your poetry?
hide it away inside me with my attraction for you
because it makes me uncomfortable
to be a woman with a taste for a girl like you
hide it where I'm really me
just a human with love for another human
inside me where I'm free
without labels or prejudice
it's just you and me ...
#love
#beauty
#SelfDiscovery #crush
#SelfDiscovery #crush
46 reads
11 Comments
LiamReeduus
LiamReedus
LiamReedus
Poem Published
15th Sep 2019 5:24am
15th Sep 2019 5:24am
I'm your man
Like so many times before
I hold the woman i adore
My best friend my hearts rapport
Every day i act as if we just start to court
Smiling as we move down the hall
In love again i fall
Was it something needed said
Jasmine petals all on the bed
Treat me like our souls
Hold me close and dont let go
I remeber the first time i saw that smile
In every essence of your feminine guile
I hope its plain to see
Your always the queen of me
I live for every moment like this
For the healing touch of your kiss
You are the reason...
I hold the woman i adore
My best friend my hearts rapport
Every day i act as if we just start to court
Smiling as we move down the hall
In love again i fall
Was it something needed said
Jasmine petals all on the bed
Treat me like our souls
Hold me close and dont let go
I remeber the first time i saw that smile
In every essence of your feminine guile
I hope its plain to see
Your always the queen of me
I live for every moment like this
For the healing touch of your kiss
You are the reason...
#love
#kindness
#admiration #respect
#admiration #respect
66 reads
2 Comments
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