Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
10th Jun 2020 5:43am
10th Jun 2020 5:43am
Summer Rain
Somber pains hide carefully,
Behind a stoic mountain face—
With a crooked smile that always seems
Just a little out of place.
Summer rain, scratch the surface,
Sink beneath my aching skin;
Soothing cracks and pains
that wrack my brain.
Moving mountains deep within.
I lift my arms and let it drip,
Let the waters wash away the pain.
Let the gentle rain upon my lips
Eclipse the winter’s icy bane.
Stripped of all my sorrow,
Redemption seeps into my marrow;
Singing songs of a new tomorrow, ...
Behind a stoic mountain face—
With a crooked smile that always seems
Just a little out of place.
Summer rain, scratch the surface,
Sink beneath my aching skin;
Soothing cracks and pains
that wrack my brain.
Moving mountains deep within.
I lift my arms and let it drip,
Let the waters wash away the pain.
Let the gentle rain upon my lips
Eclipse the winter’s icy bane.
Stripped of all my sorrow,
Redemption seeps into my marrow;
Singing songs of a new tomorrow, ...
#love
#forgiveness
#rain
#spiritual
#redemption
108 reads
19 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
26th Jan 2020 2:59pm
26th Jan 2020 2:59pm
White Windows
I’m not easy to love;
I work too much
—my mind drifts—
inclined to deep focus
forgoing rest, balance;
but, you effortlessly allot
distance to do what I enjoy
—minus stipulation—
whatever makes me happy
in that particular moment
without condition
Our time will come;
and, you’ll be there
If not, it’ll be painless
shaping space for your freedom
—beyond expectation—
whatever makes you...
I work too much
—my mind drifts—
inclined to deep focus
forgoing rest, balance;
but, you effortlessly allot
distance to do what I enjoy
—minus stipulation—
whatever makes me happy
in that particular moment
without condition
Our time will come;
and, you’ll be there
If not, it’ll be painless
shaping space for your freedom
—beyond expectation—
whatever makes you...
#love
#relationships
#historical
#philosophical
#wisdom
512 reads
61 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
29th Jun 2020 3:01am
29th Jun 2020 3:01am
Nice Guys vs. Bad Boys
Do women want:
Nice Guys or Bad Boys
Nice Guys treat women
with kindness and
respect and some
guys are nice just so
they can get laid
But bad boys are
guys who treat women
like shit and then
hit it and quit it which
sometimes means that
they leave a woman
pregnant and alone
So you choose:
good guys or bad boys
Nice Guys or Bad Boys
Nice Guys treat women
with kindness and
respect and some
guys are nice just so
they can get laid
But bad boys are
guys who treat women
like shit and then
hit it and quit it which
sometimes means that
they leave a woman
pregnant and alone
So you choose:
good guys or bad boys
#kindness
#women
#men
#sex
#lies
50 reads
0 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
16th May 2020 7:41pm
16th May 2020 7:41pm
The Vaquero's Vow
Thirteen minutes!
That’s all that was necessary.
Silently meet, fall madly in love and marry the brute.
His love was warmth on a cold winter’s eve.
And the cooling touch to a feverish,
nubile love struck girl.
She could see nothing else before her
but happiness, passion and love.
He could see only money,
idleness and the bottom of a bottle.
Her Vaquero saw it all.
He warns the brute to care for her or else...
His love for her was unmatched, he wanted only her happiness.
He defended her honor,...
That’s all that was necessary.
Silently meet, fall madly in love and marry the brute.
His love was warmth on a cold winter’s eve.
And the cooling touch to a feverish,
nubile love struck girl.
She could see nothing else before her
but happiness, passion and love.
He could see only money,
idleness and the bottom of a bottle.
Her Vaquero saw it all.
He warns the brute to care for her or else...
His love for her was unmatched, he wanted only her happiness.
He defended her honor,...
#hope
#passion
103 reads
14 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Jun 2020 10:04pm
18th Jun 2020 10:04pm
Knowing when to Quit
I'm Bossy
I'm Dominant
I'm a pain in your ass
I'm everything you want
That you can't have
Nor can I
I've walked away
Lone rider
Table for one
I'm Dominant
I'm a pain in your ass
I'm everything you want
That you can't have
Nor can I
I've walked away
Lone rider
Table for one
#breakup
72 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
30th Jun 2020 1:03am
30th Jun 2020 1:03am
IT'S SO HARD TO TRUST
Through the cycles of your life stories, there will come a time when you put your heart and soul out there, as you take a leap of faith and trust someone. Base on trust and honor and devotion and respect, as you slowly begin to unlock the very core of your spiritual soul and heart. For it is through those life's experiences, when we are tested in so many ways yet there seems to be something, hiding behind the mask of honesty and truth and trust. For even though you love them with all your heart and soul, that feeling that grabs at the pit of your gut, screams within the depth of your...
#relationships
#friendship
#lover
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
100 reads
20 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2020 10:46pm
2nd Jul 2020 10:46pm
Skyblue
I want to touch you in the aether
caress your wavelength
seduce your aura
divine seer over the North
come to me upon the winds
bring your greedy lust
pink blush invokes the right
swirl the mists and taste the divine
I am no mortal woman
providence speaks through me
scry the mysteries hidden from the beginning
inside your womb are the sacred hollows
the lady over eternity's slumber approaches
I feel her tremble the mountains
the tempest carries her message
she is of unstable temperament ...
caress your wavelength
seduce your aura
divine seer over the North
come to me upon the winds
bring your greedy lust
pink blush invokes the right
swirl the mists and taste the divine
I am no mortal woman
providence speaks through me
scry the mysteries hidden from the beginning
inside your womb are the sacred hollows
the lady over eternity's slumber approaches
I feel her tremble the mountains
the tempest carries her message
she is of unstable temperament ...
#love
#beauty
#spiritual
58 reads
10 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
28th Jun 2020 8:50am
28th Jun 2020 8:50am
Becoming One
Go back to the first time you ever laid
eyes on eachother, remember the electricity? Did you sense
the c o n n e c t i o n that was o n another level, did you revel in one
another’s presence as hearts beat in synchronicity? But for some of us the
emotion then takes on a journey, as i f traveling beyond the universe. W e begin
to t h i n k of words to express the feeling, dealing w i t h the specs o f these complex ...
eyes on eachother, remember the electricity? Did you sense
the c o n n e c t i o n that was o n another level, did you revel in one
another’s presence as hearts beat in synchronicity? But for some of us the
emotion then takes on a journey, as i f traveling beyond the universe. W e begin
to t h i n k of words to express the feeling, dealing w i t h the specs o f these complex ...
#love
#spiritual
#confessional
#respect
#SelfDiscovery
62 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
4th May 2020 11:33am
4th May 2020 11:33am
The Sweetest Hangover
I loved you from the first day I saw you
Your smile is contagious to my soul
The echoes of your accent tickles my heart
In your stalwart absence
My mind seems to unravel
Let me softly play off the caresses of your love notes
You uphold my head above the clouds of spiritual enlightenment
My name is whispered off your lips in the cloak of night
The dalliance of your serenity overtakes me, captivates me
Whispers in accordance my name as you taste the droplets of my sweet ambrosia
Allow it to slowly trickle, staining...
Your smile is contagious to my soul
The echoes of your accent tickles my heart
In your stalwart absence
My mind seems to unravel
Let me softly play off the caresses of your love notes
You uphold my head above the clouds of spiritual enlightenment
My name is whispered off your lips in the cloak of night
The dalliance of your serenity overtakes me, captivates me
Whispers in accordance my name as you taste the droplets of my sweet ambrosia
Allow it to slowly trickle, staining...
#passion
129 reads
8 Comments
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
21st Apr 2020 11:00pm
21st Apr 2020 11:00pm
The Magician
He who [awakens] must suffer. And even in our sleep, pain that cannot forget falls drop by drop upon the heart, and in our own despair, against our will, comes wisdom to us, by the awful grace of God.” Aeschylus
..
“Alright,”
I said,
With a deep inhalation, and
Exhalation
Of breath,
Cleansing, gathering the
Calm
Swell of
Immutable force,
That would be
Necessary
Let’s talk
About then,
A single
Solitary
Moment,
To which my
Wings
Are pinned
Stars boiling in...
..
“Alright,”
I said,
With a deep inhalation, and
Exhalation
Of breath,
Cleansing, gathering the
Calm
Swell of
Immutable force,
That would be
Necessary
Let’s talk
About then,
A single
Solitary
Moment,
To which my
Wings
Are pinned
Stars boiling in...
#love
#family
#universe
#WritingPoetry
#magic
291 reads
32 Comments
Calamityofgin
Poem Published
24th Jun 2020 7:02pm
24th Jun 2020 7:02pm
Little birds
Little trails into a soul setting sun
Little birds into a Cairo view
Through the doorways of blue tiled mansion walks
Plays a karyokinesis tune
Splitting by an eye wink
Spitting haze into Set
And to dream of this un reality
With out the microscopic oblivion
Held perversions of dreams
Of when you....
Dot dot dot... so clearly
That I
Twisted in dance there
With sheer red skirts
Go round and round
So lost in it
That...
Little birds into a Cairo view
Through the doorways of blue tiled mansion walks
Plays a karyokinesis tune
Splitting by an eye wink
Spitting haze into Set
And to dream of this un reality
With out the microscopic oblivion
Held perversions of dreams
Of when you....
Dot dot dot... so clearly
That I
Twisted in dance there
With sheer red skirts
Go round and round
So lost in it
That...
#emotional
40 reads
8 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2018 00:00am
2nd Jan 2018 00:00am
Love Has Set (ottava rima)
Now his brief light has set, life is one long
and everlasting sleep, so I'll just make
the least fuss every day - I'll sing my songs
of love and lust and passion; I'll equate
each day to his short lifetime; repeat wrongs
to support needs and frailties; I will wake,
denying possibilities; repose
is not for sleepless ones; I'd kiss his nose...
In photographs upon the mantelpiece,
he stares so luminously; decayed suns
leave me at dusk to shine elsewhere; release
my bleak...
and everlasting sleep, so I'll just make
the least fuss every day - I'll sing my songs
of love and lust and passion; I'll equate
each day to his short lifetime; repeat wrongs
to support needs and frailties; I will wake,
denying possibilities; repose
is not for sleepless ones; I'd kiss his nose...
In photographs upon the mantelpiece,
he stares so luminously; decayed suns
leave me at dusk to shine elsewhere; release
my bleak...
#heartbroken
#breakup
#conflict #IMissYou
#conflict #IMissYou
420 reads
16 Comments
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