Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
16th Jun 2021 4:08pm
16th Jun 2021 4:08pm
On a string ~A collaboration with AspergerPoet56
(i.)
Hanging on a string
Lonely swinging waiting heart
Indescribable ache living inside
Feelings say its no sunday thing
More an everyday all night long sensation
Dangling over the abyss
Where surrender breathes
Sending electrical shivers
Delightful jolts through senses
Giving that awareness of life
Love's madness keeps seeping
Yearnings biting hard
Forever burning
Fire rushes
Forever connecting
.
.
.
(ii.)
Forever connecting
Mirroring one another
Conjoined pain...
Hanging on a string
Lonely swinging waiting heart
Indescribable ache living inside
Feelings say its no sunday thing
More an everyday all night long sensation
Dangling over the abyss
Where surrender breathes
Sending electrical shivers
Delightful jolts through senses
Giving that awareness of life
Love's madness keeps seeping
Yearnings biting hard
Forever burning
Fire rushes
Forever connecting
.
.
.
(ii.)
Forever connecting
Mirroring one another
Conjoined pain...
#love
#loneliness
#fate
#collaboration
#NoPoo
47 reads
20 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:04pm
Yesterday 2:04pm
WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME
TRUTH
It is so easy to say
what YOU mean
to me.
WHY?
Because I know
what my heart knows.
YOU
are my sunshine
in the darkest nights.
YOU
are the glow I
feel in my soul.
YOU
are the happiness
that guides my spirit.
YOU
are the comfort
I feel when I hurt.
YOU
are the breath that
lifts my spirits higher.
YOU
are my fantasy
that has come true.
YOU
are my love in
a hateful world.
YOU
are the healing touch
when I am hurting.
I could go on...
It is so easy to say
what YOU mean
to me.
WHY?
Because I know
what my heart knows.
YOU
are my sunshine
in the darkest nights.
YOU
are the glow I
feel in my soul.
YOU
are the happiness
that guides my spirit.
YOU
are the comfort
I feel when I hurt.
YOU
are the breath that
lifts my spirits higher.
YOU
are my fantasy
that has come true.
YOU
are my love in
a hateful world.
YOU
are the healing touch
when I am hurting.
I could go on...
#happiness
#love
#strength
#inspirational
#admiration
30 reads
4 Comments
SLYMBEKQUEEN
Poem Published
15th Jun 2021 4:02pm
15th Jun 2021 4:02pm
She's a keeper
Yeah she can cook your favorite dishes on command
Loyal
Smells good
AND
Her pussy is wet on demand
She's a keeper!
Yo momma don't like her -says she a hoe...
Tell yo momma she know how to roll your dough
Bodacious
Salacious
Fucking bitch is so vivacious
She's a keeper!
Yo daddy say the bitch is fine
But can she wind?
Can she grind?
Tell yo daddy she a Queen - Unrefined
A god damn sexual mastermind!
She's a keeper!
Yo bro says she's bad news
She dresses like a slut and she got...
Loyal
Smells good
AND
Her pussy is wet on demand
She's a keeper!
Yo momma don't like her -says she a hoe...
Tell yo momma she know how to roll your dough
Bodacious
Salacious
Fucking bitch is so vivacious
She's a keeper!
Yo daddy say the bitch is fine
But can she wind?
Can she grind?
Tell yo daddy she a Queen - Unrefined
A god damn sexual mastermind!
She's a keeper!
Yo bro says she's bad news
She dresses like a slut and she got...
#courage
#admiration
#respect
37 reads
14 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
1st Jun 2021 2:35pm
1st Jun 2021 2:35pm
If I Could Hold You
there are times
you know them
when only a hug will do
I may be far away
but in my heart I'm close by
rushing to find you
finally I'm there
taking you in my arms
a year of weight lifting
doing you proud
you know them
when only a hug will do
I may be far away
but in my heart I'm close by
rushing to find you
finally I'm there
taking you in my arms
a year of weight lifting
doing you proud
#love
#kindness
#confessional #passion
#confessional #passion
96 reads
34 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
17th Jun 2021 10:22am
17th Jun 2021 10:22am
...A Voice...
A voice
is…
The vibration of the vocal chords
implying music
or…
Music implies a voice...
an inverse
like the last becoming the first
or…
the first becoming the last
like poetry in motion
or…
motion in poetry
a verse
For…
Your -
Voice
That sweeps over the surface of my heart & soul like the wings of angels
or…
Angels of wings
When angels appear in our Earth bound dwellings
garnering second looks like second sight
or…
Second...
is…
The vibration of the vocal chords
implying music
or…
Music implies a voice...
an inverse
like the last becoming the first
or…
the first becoming the last
like poetry in motion
or…
motion in poetry
a verse
For…
Your -
Voice
That sweeps over the surface of my heart & soul like the wings of angels
or…
Angels of wings
When angels appear in our Earth bound dwellings
garnering second looks like second sight
or…
Second...
#beauty
#angels
#honesty
#admiration
#fear
40 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
9th Feb 2021 2:50pm
9th Feb 2021 2:50pm
You Softly Complete My Circle Of Infinity
Infinity
#love
#passion
199 reads
19 Comments
Timagination543
Poem Published
9th Jun 2021 8:40pm
9th Jun 2021 8:40pm
The wildflowers and you.
The purple violet in your hair blooms for all the days
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.
Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.
Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.
you spoke with a sparkle in your eye.
Fields of wildflowers dance at your presence.
The moon off the water winks;
cool winds turn warm.
Now, speak to me as if all the flowers were jealous and listening.
#love
44 reads
14 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
21st Mar 2021 11:13am
21st Mar 2021 11:13am
Teach
us to love and laugh
while we breathe;
teach us tradition
and appreciation;
teach us to cook
clean, and save;
teach us to extend
mercy and grace;
teach us to say no
to what we do not need;
teach us to accept
death as a beginning;
teach us to say goodbye
and carry on living
~
while we breathe;
teach us tradition
and appreciation;
teach us to cook
clean, and save;
teach us to extend
mercy and grace;
teach us to say no
to what we do not need;
teach us to accept
death as a beginning;
teach us to say goodbye
and carry on living
~
#love
#friendship
#death
306 reads
38 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
7th Jun 2021 5:59am
7th Jun 2021 5:59am
Love's Adventure
Love is blown up
on you tonight
because you are
feeling warm
and fuzzy all over
She's bring your
heart out into
the open for
true love's
Adventure of a Lifetime
which cause you
guys to take
the leap into
the Fury of the Jungle
on you tonight
because you are
feeling warm
and fuzzy all over
She's bring your
heart out into
the open for
true love's
Adventure of a Lifetime
which cause you
guys to take
the leap into
the Fury of the Jungle
#love
#women
#men
#emotional
#passion
36 reads
13 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
17th Jun 2021 2:22pm
17th Jun 2021 2:22pm
Penny Postcard
Of love and sensuality
With you as my trove
And a breath of herbs
Words that I have embrace
Making dreams reality
Each sound like a melody
Leaving imprints on my soul
Like a lingering lover’s kiss
Awakening my desires
With the essence of you surrounding me
Your voice whispering softly
Poetic words filling my heart
Silencing the madness within
Often spicing my cliché
With your lips stimulus
Reducing me to mache
As I scribe your aphrodisiac
On a penny postcard
...
With you as my trove
And a breath of herbs
Words that I have embrace
Making dreams reality
Each sound like a melody
Leaving imprints on my soul
Like a lingering lover’s kiss
Awakening my desires
With the essence of you surrounding me
Your voice whispering softly
Poetic words filling my heart
Silencing the madness within
Often spicing my cliché
With your lips stimulus
Reducing me to mache
As I scribe your aphrodisiac
On a penny postcard
...
#love
#romantic
27 reads
2 Comments
Laluma
Poem Published
31st May 2021 2:51am
31st May 2021 2:51am
Guilty In Love
One person in love with two people
Some may say that is quite a great headache to have
Whoever you choose someone always gets hurt
The heart that loves genuinely
May find it difficult to let go of the person they love
It is in accepting the choice that the other has made
When allowing them to have the freedom to live without them
By acknowledging that decision true love shines through
Even when letting go
Some may say that is quite a great headache to have
Whoever you choose someone always gets hurt
The heart that loves genuinely
May find it difficult to let go of the person they love
It is in accepting the choice that the other has made
When allowing them to have the freedom to live without them
By acknowledging that decision true love shines through
Even when letting go
#love
#relationships
#heartbroken
#conflict
#MovingOn
48 reads
3 Comments
Chords_of_red
Gayle
Gayle
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:18pm
Yesterday 6:18pm
So Near~So Far
So near yet so
far away
One thousand miles,
one thousand tears
May the tears
let me swim to you
May the thousand
miles dwindle as I go
far away
One thousand miles,
one thousand tears
May the tears
let me swim to you
May the thousand
miles dwindle as I go
#love
#admiration
29 reads
10 Comments
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