Love Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
4th Dec 2024 7:28am
Unable To Forget
I had a vision of her walking across heaven
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
Realizing this while in the pits of a fiery lake
My time’s broken it’s always half past eleven
On the night I committed that crucial mistake
Hell is designed to torment the human mind
By violating emotions that’ll never truly heal
Damnation a cruel device when love is blind
Without any light left darkness will slowly kill
God did not want her pain to forever flow
He erased our history underneath a sunset
In her smile happiness has a cosmic glow
She’ll never remember I’m...
#heartbroken
139 reads
19 Comments
Her
Poem Published
Today 6:56pm
Today 6:56pm
The Mark I Left
For every attempt
To be the reason
For your smile
I was the stain
You tried to remove
To be the reason
For your smile
I was the stain
You tried to remove
#FirstLove
#heartbroken
#regret
9 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 7:05pm
5th Dec 2024 7:05pm
I Want A Divorce!
What happened to you?
You use to have the biggest smile on your face
You would always seem so positive & optimistic about everything
You were my inspiration, my confidant, my friend, my lover
You made me strive to become what I am today
Do you remember, we had nothing?
We struggled terribly
Barely any money for bills, food or decent clothing
I grew the company from just me to having over 100 employees
We made it!
I was able to buy whatever we needed or wanted
We have three homes and enough money in the bank for the rest of our lives ...
You use to have the biggest smile on your face
You would always seem so positive & optimistic about everything
You were my inspiration, my confidant, my friend, my lover
You made me strive to become what I am today
Do you remember, we had nothing?
We struggled terribly
Barely any money for bills, food or decent clothing
I grew the company from just me to having over 100 employees
We made it!
I was able to buy whatever we needed or wanted
We have three homes and enough money in the bank for the rest of our lives ...
#greed
#heartbroken
#money
#poverty
#relationships
93 reads
10 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 4:41pm
1st Dec 2024 4:41pm
Refrained
(Moon_bather/Fia Naturie)
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chains, making me stay
I’ll send help....
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chains, making me stay
I’ll send help....
#anger
#frustration
#regret
132 reads
14 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:56am
Yesterday 3:56am
burn
dining on self hatred
my razor shape feelings turn inward
inflicting real damage
insulted trust, I can't rectify
the feelings I feel, with the honesty of the moment
emotional larceny, I feel you owe me
your love exchanged for mine
but it's not like that
one of us always burns brighter
we take turns ignoring each other
vulnerable when the power shifts
needy rebellion, I need you more right now
sanctuary in soul I count on you
fractured hurt, my pain makes me cruel
misunderstood vanity, I used to be your...
my razor shape feelings turn inward
inflicting real damage
insulted trust, I can't rectify
the feelings I feel, with the honesty of the moment
emotional larceny, I feel you owe me
your love exchanged for mine
but it's not like that
one of us always burns brighter
we take turns ignoring each other
vulnerable when the power shifts
needy rebellion, I need you more right now
sanctuary in soul I count on you
fractured hurt, my pain makes me cruel
misunderstood vanity, I used to be your...
#love
44 reads
3 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
4th Aug 2021 4:34pm
4th Aug 2021 4:34pm
Old Love
is knowledgeable and wise;
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
#love
#relationships
#spiritual #aging
#spiritual #aging
968 reads
43 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:42am
9th Dec 2024 8:42am
Gold
My love resides
Across the skies
In fields of green
Deep ocean eyes
You've touched
My soul
Took a hold
Your beautiful smile
Drips liquid gold
Across the skies
In fields of green
Deep ocean eyes
You've touched
My soul
Took a hold
Your beautiful smile
Drips liquid gold
#emotions
#love
98 reads
14 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:43am
Yesterday 1:43am
energy better invested elsewhere should be...
I wanted it
badly enough
I was willing to fight for it
I let it go
how can battle hold
what love could not
& throwing myself
relentlessly
against the cliffs of desperation
gains me nothing
what does not come willing
never comes at all
I wanted it
badly
so I let it go
badly enough
I was willing to fight for it
I let it go
how can battle hold
what love could not
& throwing myself
relentlessly
against the cliffs of desperation
gains me nothing
what does not come willing
never comes at all
I wanted it
badly
so I let it go
#confessional
#honesty
#love
74 reads
14 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
1st Jul 2024 6:20am
I UNDERSTAND
I understand,
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
#friendship
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
#support
168 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 4:59am
6th Dec 2024 4:59am
Incantations
Veiled, she sweeps back into view.
Conjured from thaumaturgist nights
the new moon in the old moon's lieu
has crescent gold for her last rites,
though lingering is not allowed
when her orbit has dates to keep,
behind clear skies, or cryptic cloud,
conducive to Morphean creep,
slowly...slewing...into...a...DREAM....
where sunlight off high castles bounce
into a laudanum lunar beam
and crater dragons lurk and pounce
in druidic charms of making...
another spell of love...awaking!
Conjured from thaumaturgist nights
the new moon in the old moon's lieu
has crescent gold for her last rites,
though lingering is not allowed
when her orbit has dates to keep,
behind clear skies, or cryptic cloud,
conducive to Morphean creep,
slowly...slewing...into...a...DREAM....
where sunlight off high castles bounce
into a laudanum lunar beam
and crater dragons lurk and pounce
in druidic charms of making...
another spell of love...awaking!
#magic
#pagan
135 reads
11 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 1:37am
Today 1:37am
I JUST WANT YOU TO THINK
It's me again the story teller of unspoken WORDS ✍️. For sure I just want you to know and think for thyself, 🤔 for what I want to know from you 🤔 do you know what you want and need, 🤔 or do you continue to just settle for what you don't want or need to sustain your own life. 🙏 For sure I see your thoughts process, turning in the deepness of your own SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF YOUR MIND 🧠 LET'S dive deeper into the deepness of your own thoughts, and insight and feelings 😞 into the outer limits, of your own mind thoughts...
#BestFriend
#fatherhood
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#motherhood
36 reads
3 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 2:00pm
8th Dec 2024 2:00pm
She Speaks
in warm metaphors
from the heart for it's
what she knows
a way to survive
she's a true fighter
exposing her soul
the agony of her past
shamelessly despite her
fears and insecurities
yet do not ever let
her softness fool you
she is fiercely protective
of the ones she loves
razor sharp in her
smart observance
sensually seductive
in her erotic ink
as she breathes
new life into her fire
worn-out & weary
taking us with her
our precious...
from the heart for it's
what she knows
a way to survive
she's a true fighter
exposing her soul
the agony of her past
shamelessly despite her
fears and insecurities
yet do not ever let
her softness fool you
she is fiercely protective
of the ones she loves
razor sharp in her
smart observance
sensually seductive
in her erotic ink
as she breathes
new life into her fire
worn-out & weary
taking us with her
our precious...
#gratitude
#love
#sister
139 reads
20 Comments
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