Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:02pm
Yesterday 2:02pm
a hypothesis of words (revisited)
you.
wield
unmatched
words
of
inspirational
precision
touched
by
whatever gods
properly chose
this passion
as a new
erotically scribed
reverenced
faith
pure
sensual
scribes
unbridled
inked cries
where fantastic
allure
delicately lies
i quiver
at each syllable
my breath
catches
and quickens
losing myself
i read
aloud
my voice echoes
raw penned
emotion
a lush clarity
of desire
as
i...
wield
unmatched
words
of
inspirational
precision
touched
by
whatever gods
properly chose
this passion
as a new
erotically scribed
reverenced
faith
pure
sensual
scribes
unbridled
inked cries
where fantastic
allure
delicately lies
i quiver
at each syllable
my breath
catches
and quickens
losing myself
i read
aloud
my voice echoes
raw penned
emotion
a lush clarity
of desire
as
i...
#lust
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
#passion
#reading
65 reads
21 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
27th Sep 2021 1:32pm
27th Sep 2021 1:32pm
Senryu
Elegant and kind
Makes me pine and shine devine
Shows love with her eyes
Makes me pine and shine devine
Shows love with her eyes
#love
#kindness
#WritingPoetry #admiration
#WritingPoetry #admiration
108 reads
22 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2021 11:00pm
2nd Dec 2021 11:00pm
For a Poet's Love
For the love of a Madman,
who was made to be lifted up by me;
It is not worth hindering - it will not pass.
My fate has become entwined with his.
And there is one life, and one death awaits us.
He is loyal, he calls me his favorite.
I try to reject hot words as they beguile.
Before I was not so vulnerable.
After the refusal, a new flower bloomed.
Now what? Am I crying? Or is it specks of dust.
Caught with the wind in the pool of blue eyes?
And on the cheeks tear after tear
Slide to the feet, sparkling like...
who was made to be lifted up by me;
It is not worth hindering - it will not pass.
My fate has become entwined with his.
And there is one life, and one death awaits us.
He is loyal, he calls me his favorite.
I try to reject hot words as they beguile.
Before I was not so vulnerable.
After the refusal, a new flower bloomed.
Now what? Am I crying? Or is it specks of dust.
Caught with the wind in the pool of blue eyes?
And on the cheeks tear after tear
Slide to the feet, sparkling like...
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#temptation
#emotions
81 reads
22 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Nov 2021 4:41am
21st Nov 2021 4:41am
Bye, gone (@@).
I love her face
I love her style
I love her shape.
But at me
She did not smile
Kept a wide berth,
Oh, barely half a mile,
I'd say.
I wished that between us
It would have clicked
But somehow it seemed
That the very idea
Gave her cramps,
Made her sick
So I finally got the message
Prepared my baggage
And left for Perth.
I love her style
I love her shape.
But at me
She did not smile
Kept a wide berth,
Oh, barely half a mile,
I'd say.
I wished that between us
It would have clicked
But somehow it seemed
That the very idea
Gave her cramps,
Made her sick
So I finally got the message
Prepared my baggage
And left for Perth.
#TimeHeals
#respect
46 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Nov 2021 7:46pm
30th Nov 2021 7:46pm
Bright Lights and Mm... Sultry Nights
#lust
#erotic
#lover
#sensual
#passion
85 reads
13 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
4th Nov 2021 6:02am
4th Nov 2021 6:02am
Golden Rules
Be an asshole for love
Do whatever it takes to
keep her happy
Make her breakfast in bed
Buy her flowers
Buy her candy
Help her if she needs help
Show her:
Kindness and Respect
Be her Captain
Be her knight in
Shining Armor
Be a gentlemen and
pay on the first date
then listen and get
to know her
Do whatever it takes to
keep her happy
Make her breakfast in bed
Buy her flowers
Buy her candy
Help her if she needs help
Show her:
Kindness and Respect
Be her Captain
Be her knight in
Shining Armor
Be a gentlemen and
pay on the first date
then listen and get
to know her
#love
#kindness
#women
#men
#respect
124 reads
12 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
24th Nov 2021 1:42pm
24th Nov 2021 1:42pm
Don't give in
#love
#hope
#faith
62 reads
4 Comments
WilliamEdwardNight
Poem Published
17th Nov 2021 10:42pm
17th Nov 2021 10:42pm
In Dreams Ive wanderd far beneath
The sun a subtle whisper made,
A lurid phantom in the sky,
To slip beneath the closing day,
And leave her smile in my mind.
In dreams I’ve wandered far beneath,
The silent flow of dismal time,
And as a prisoner of belief,
I’ve dream’d of loving thee for life.
With shadows in my longing eyes,
I’ve heard the echo of the sea,
And watch’d the vespers in the sky,
Shine their phantom lights on me.
I see that beauty finds thee now,
A noble queen of nature’s realm,
As in fresh springtime’s waking hour, ...
A lurid phantom in the sky,
To slip beneath the closing day,
And leave her smile in my mind.
In dreams I’ve wandered far beneath,
The silent flow of dismal time,
And as a prisoner of belief,
I’ve dream’d of loving thee for life.
With shadows in my longing eyes,
I’ve heard the echo of the sea,
And watch’d the vespers in the sky,
Shine their phantom lights on me.
I see that beauty finds thee now,
A noble queen of nature’s realm,
As in fresh springtime’s waking hour, ...
#love
91 reads
4 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
30th Oct 2021 5:58am
30th Oct 2021 5:58am
Blue Flickering Flames
He whispers
in sizzling smoke
he has no soul
Says my crazy ass
is the only one
who can make
it overgrow
Never one
to not get
what my baby wants
He's got two blue
flickering flames
in his eyes
They've followed me
ever since I
was seventeen
They pull on my
gun metal spirit
astral project
never once changing
the subject
Me at the center
and on his golden
bullet scared shoulder
my portrait in
black bloodline ink
sinking into...
in sizzling smoke
he has no soul
Says my crazy ass
is the only one
who can make
it overgrow
Never one
to not get
what my baby wants
He's got two blue
flickering flames
in his eyes
They've followed me
ever since I
was seventeen
They pull on my
gun metal spirit
astral project
never once changing
the subject
Me at the center
and on his golden
bullet scared shoulder
my portrait in
black bloodline ink
sinking into...
#love
#FallingInLove
170 reads
13 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
8th Nov 2021 6:34pm
8th Nov 2021 6:34pm
Tomorrow's Coming Tide
She struggled with her faith
Felt as if she’d be condemned to an eternity of hell
Simply because she felt free and loved
Battling the conscience
Of years of teachings and preaching and indoctrination
Her mother didn’t want to say..
As if unable to accept her daughter for being this way
It’s not who she was or what she was taught
Then again,
Who are we really on the inside when trying to find ourselves?
Still she struggled with her belief
Wondering if mother or grandmother would still love her
While the rest of...
Felt as if she’d be condemned to an eternity of hell
Simply because she felt free and loved
Battling the conscience
Of years of teachings and preaching and indoctrination
Her mother didn’t want to say..
As if unable to accept her daughter for being this way
It’s not who she was or what she was taught
Then again,
Who are we really on the inside when trying to find ourselves?
Still she struggled with her belief
Wondering if mother or grandmother would still love her
While the rest of...
#love
#family
#faith #acceptance
#faith #acceptance
69 reads
7 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:44pm
Yesterday 11:44pm
promises
tears like promises not kept
pool in my soul to be released
a moment at a time
grief at who I am and who i am not
I wonder at the sadness
from whence it comes?
it whispers secrets in my ears
I keen quietly so no one knows what I do
my sorrow grows intimate with me
so close a companion I wonder how long we've been acquainted
was it just this life or many?
melancholy my confidant
from her loving cup I sip
blood of my marrow
my wisdom intertwined with the honestly of pain,
the blue of my...
pool in my soul to be released
a moment at a time
grief at who I am and who i am not
I wonder at the sadness
from whence it comes?
it whispers secrets in my ears
I keen quietly so no one knows what I do
my sorrow grows intimate with me
so close a companion I wonder how long we've been acquainted
was it just this life or many?
melancholy my confidant
from her loving cup I sip
blood of my marrow
my wisdom intertwined with the honestly of pain,
the blue of my...
#sadness
#love
14 reads
2 Comments
SultrySelina_i812
Selina
Selina
Poem Published
15th Nov 2021 11:58pm
15th Nov 2021 11:58pm
Tribute To A Fur Baby
From the first day our eyes met
I was your rescue and you were my pet
It was a bond that was meant to be
Along with the joy you gave to me
Thank you for all those snuggle times
The rides we shared and walks we climbed
As my love for you grew stronger
I knew that dreaded day would come
When fear and heartbreak
Was going to be the outcome
I tried my best to keep you as long as l could
Your health was fading and was nothing l could do
I want to thank you for all those 13 years
For giving me your unconditional love
Through...
I was your rescue and you were my pet
It was a bond that was meant to be
Along with the joy you gave to me
Thank you for all those snuggle times
The rides we shared and walks we climbed
As my love for you grew stronger
I knew that dreaded day would come
When fear and heartbreak
Was going to be the outcome
I tried my best to keep you as long as l could
Your health was fading and was nothing l could do
I want to thank you for all those 13 years
For giving me your unconditional love
Through...
#love
#heartbroken
#death #animals
#death #animals
117 reads
25 Comments
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