Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
TheOralizer
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2023 2:37pm
22nd Sep 2023 2:37pm
WHY, PLEASE, WHY?
Why?
Why please?
Why am
I
perpetually
drawn to
YOU?
I know
why?
BECAUSE
of ALL of
YOU from head
to toes is so amazing,
tempting and perfect
in sharing pleasure;
no restraints or
shyness, open to
the new and different.
Meet me at the
KISSING PLACE
and I'll discover
MORE.
OKAY?
Why please?
Why am
I
perpetually
drawn to
YOU?
I know
why?
BECAUSE
of ALL of
YOU from head
to toes is so amazing,
tempting and perfect
in sharing pleasure;
no restraints or
shyness, open to
the new and different.
Meet me at the
KISSING PLACE
and I'll discover
MORE.
OKAY?
#love
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
#emotions
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2023 6:08pm
22nd Sep 2023 6:08pm
the mark of the beast
I wept tears of regret in the morning
sullen of hope lest you see me
I turn inward and pull back
not all was as it seemed
I sought you from far off
and you retreated in your reverie
I couldn't find you there
in my need I sulk
I desire you greatly
do you know how much?
so much it hurts
it breaks me into heaving mounds of flesh
my heart tears from my breasts
leaving me utterly exposed
I desire you in the heat of me
where soul fucks soul
and there is nothing else in that moment
you kissed...
sullen of hope lest you see me
I turn inward and pull back
not all was as it seemed
I sought you from far off
and you retreated in your reverie
I couldn't find you there
in my need I sulk
I desire you greatly
do you know how much?
so much it hurts
it breaks me into heaving mounds of flesh
my heart tears from my breasts
leaving me utterly exposed
I desire you in the heat of me
where soul fucks soul
and there is nothing else in that moment
you kissed...
#lust
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robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2023 2:19pm
22nd Jul 2023 2:19pm
Long lasting....or not.
It was lust at first sight
Intensity at first night
Pregnancy, marriage
Looks of happiness, a mirage
For the chemestry not present
They could not for long tolerate
The other's presence
Despite the love-child of their union
Which meant, sadly, a very acrimonious
Dissolution..
Intensity at first night
Pregnancy, marriage
Looks of happiness, a mirage
For the chemestry not present
They could not for long tolerate
The other's presence
Despite the love-child of their union
Which meant, sadly, a very acrimonious
Dissolution..
#sadness
#disappointment
#bittersweet
77 reads
1 Comment
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 12:30pm
1st Jun 2023 12:30pm
Broken Charm
Your fuzzy veins are my yarn.
Entangle me in your arms.
My soul spell-bound and hungered
for your charms.
Never-ever saw the alarm.
Your blinding smile and electric eyes
disarm.
Swirling in ecstasy's swarm.
A thousand nights long you kept
me warm.
A thousand and one, you were gone.......
Entangle me in your arms.
My soul spell-bound and hungered
for your charms.
Never-ever saw the alarm.
Your blinding smile and electric eyes
disarm.
Swirling in ecstasy's swarm.
A thousand nights long you kept
me warm.
A thousand and one, you were gone.......
#love
#lust
#heartbroken
160 reads
12 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
Today 4:44am
Today 4:44am
His Sheet Music
He is the hushed soft melody of my heart
Silhouettes moving to the cadence of such a soulful tune
The symphony of our minds in sync
Heart strokes gently plucked
Feeling the tenderness of his strings, pounding at the percussion of my inner Chi
Killing me softly with his desired songs
Reviving me with each touch, weakening from the taste of his harmonic passion
My unheard music lays bare for him to play, echoing my sentiments as my body sings out
Gentle hands turning the sheet music of my temple, virginal with each new page of my essence he glances...
Silhouettes moving to the cadence of such a soulful tune
The symphony of our minds in sync
Heart strokes gently plucked
Feeling the tenderness of his strings, pounding at the percussion of my inner Chi
Killing me softly with his desired songs
Reviving me with each touch, weakening from the taste of his harmonic passion
My unheard music lays bare for him to play, echoing my sentiments as my body sings out
Gentle hands turning the sheet music of my temple, virginal with each new page of my essence he glances...
#sensual
#passion
#seductive
90 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2023 6:17am
23rd Aug 2023 6:17am
I WOULD WANT TO BE A KEEPER
I would want to be a "keeper",
not a cheater, love-her-leave-her;
not content to be a "shafter",
I would want an "ever after".
If she put her hand in my hand
she'd not be just a one-night stand:
I'd respect her in the morning,
greeting her not just with yawning....
We'd want to grow old together,
facing whatever the weather.
Of her love I would want to be
worthy, committed, not flighty,
In return she would be someone
to command love not for mere fun
I would want...
not a cheater, love-her-leave-her;
not content to be a "shafter",
I would want an "ever after".
If she put her hand in my hand
she'd not be just a one-night stand:
I'd respect her in the morning,
greeting her not just with yawning....
We'd want to grow old together,
facing whatever the weather.
Of her love I would want to be
worthy, committed, not flighty,
In return she would be someone
to command love not for mere fun
I would want...
#love
#romantic
#rhyming
175 reads
6 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Snaggy
Snaggy
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2023 10:17pm
23rd Feb 2023 10:17pm
Her Pedestal
Tongue-tied, my hands are clammy,
Nervous, I'm looking down, no eye contact!
I'm worried you'll fancy me once our eyes lock.
How crazy is that?!
You're fucking hot and that's just makin' it worse!
I'm frightened of putting you on a pedestal -
And by the way, I'm scared of you!
You hate that cos you want a strong man,
Not some geek who's just gonna roll over -
And DO everything you say...
Mind you, some women like that!
But, I know you girls -
And that behaviour can wear thin after a while,
Cos deep down you want a...
Nervous, I'm looking down, no eye contact!
I'm worried you'll fancy me once our eyes lock.
How crazy is that?!
You're fucking hot and that's just makin' it worse!
I'm frightened of putting you on a pedestal -
And by the way, I'm scared of you!
You hate that cos you want a strong man,
Not some geek who's just gonna roll over -
And DO everything you say...
Mind you, some women like that!
But, I know you girls -
And that behaviour can wear thin after a while,
Cos deep down you want a...
#confusion
410 reads
12 Comments
Her
Poem Published
7th Aug 2023 2:15am
7th Aug 2023 2:15am
Love is Never Enough
I will always stand before you
My heart and soul stripped naked
Watching you reach for anything
To cover me
My heart and soul stripped naked
Watching you reach for anything
To cover me
#sadness
#UnrequitedLove
179 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Aug 2023 7:26am
16th Aug 2023 7:26am
In Love with His Illusion
There he goes again
Building a picturesque world
Creating the perfect reverie to escape to where he fully dives in
It’s more than a fantasy
It’s more than just a dream
It’s a flawless delusion he composes with heart and mind and pen
Without hesitation
His new infatuation
Gives him the inspiration to make a realm of love and nothing more
But the immense intense elation
Coupled with his imagination
Invokes a hollow fire that burns deep within like it never has before
…again…
How long will this happiness last? ...
Building a picturesque world
Creating the perfect reverie to escape to where he fully dives in
It’s more than a fantasy
It’s more than just a dream
It’s a flawless delusion he composes with heart and mind and pen
Without hesitation
His new infatuation
Gives him the inspiration to make a realm of love and nothing more
But the immense intense elation
Coupled with his imagination
Invokes a hollow fire that burns deep within like it never has before
…again…
How long will this happiness last? ...
#love
#dreams
#UnrequitedLove #despair
#UnrequitedLove #despair
140 reads
6 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
14th Jul 2023 3:09am
14th Jul 2023 3:09am
Burning Light
My Light burns with
desire to find the woman
who makes your heart beat
for her and who
challenges me to
become a better
version of myself
Once we find each other
we push each other
to become better
versions of ourselves
we support each other
we help each other
we will love
each other
for the rest of our lives
desire to find the woman
who makes your heart beat
for her and who
challenges me to
become a better
version of myself
Once we find each other
we push each other
to become better
versions of ourselves
we support each other
we help each other
we will love
each other
for the rest of our lives
#love
#women
#men
#support
#emotional
193 reads
4 Comments
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
26th Aug 2023 11:57am
26th Aug 2023 11:57am
Dancing upon the brim of betterment (an ode)
sleep quietly circles
clingy essences
penetrate
through 4am silence
I feel it
how it pulls
tugging me back
quietly calling
through a shiver'd
caliginous recess
intimate moments
trudge along
slinking their way
down a periphery
where night and day
delicately dance
of tango-transcendent
dreamt dreams
into a solidity of
steamy want
slowly
senses lazy-stir
synapses begin to fire
arousing wits
yet...
clingy essences
penetrate
through 4am silence
I feel it
how it pulls
tugging me back
quietly calling
through a shiver'd
caliginous recess
intimate moments
trudge along
slinking their way
down a periphery
where night and day
delicately dance
of tango-transcendent
dreamt dreams
into a solidity of
steamy want
slowly
senses lazy-stir
synapses begin to fire
arousing wits
yet...
#coffee
#lover
#TruthOfLife
162 reads
37 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Sep 2023 2:36am
15th Sep 2023 2:36am
JUST THE TWO OF US
There will come a time in each and everyone of us, that we may become confuse and feel that nothing, is ever gonna to change. For we may have to go through somethings to get a better understanding, that we are different in our own unique ways. YET we are one in the same going through the same, process of a human nature of discovery of what we need, more than what we want. For there's gonna come a few twists and turns with a few ups and downs, but ask thyself what is expected of you. If you close your eyes and heart are you willing and able, to take the opportunity and chance to explore the...
#love
#kindness
#hope
#TimeHeals
#respect
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