Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Sex an cigarettes
She was someone I didn’t mind stickin my dick in
The beer was somethin I had to drink
She liked to fuk my lungs out
an hear me call her name out loud, over & over again,
Ahhh man, I tell ya… young people…
Since Chloe first found me, passed out drunk,
layin in the ally behind the club;
Every few nights, she would come over,
after workin her midnight shift dancing at Venom
when I would see her
The night smelled like sex an cigarettes,
I had my bourbon, fireball whisky & beer,
The record player was playin Delta blues / blues...
The beer was somethin I had to drink
She liked to fuk my lungs out
an hear me call her name out loud, over & over again,
Ahhh man, I tell ya… young people…
Since Chloe first found me, passed out drunk,
layin in the ally behind the club;
Every few nights, she would come over,
after workin her midnight shift dancing at Venom
when I would see her
The night smelled like sex an cigarettes,
I had my bourbon, fireball whisky & beer,
The record player was playin Delta blues / blues...
#love
#lust
#alcohol
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my song
if there
were
some way
for me
to convince
you
to be
enticed
by
my song,
maybe adorn
myself
with words,
wrap myself
in lines
from poems,
would you
accept
all these
things,
would you
be interested?
were
some way
for me
to convince
you
to be
enticed
by
my song,
maybe adorn
myself
with words,
wrap myself
in lines
from poems,
would you
accept
all these
things,
would you
be interested?
#dialogue
#emotional
#metaphor
#symbolism
#uplifting
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AND SO I WADE...
So very not sure where we stand
we must talk and agree on a plan
sure mistakes for sure were made
somewhere did your feelings fade
I'm no longer feeling so very sure
and how much longer I will endure
since often soliciting to ensure
for quite awhile I was your demour
Now its all quiet and you're hidden
are you no longer with me smitten
and our together has since ridden
finding our love no longer forgiven
And so I wade....
So is this the end of our past days
will we now just go different...
we must talk and agree on a plan
sure mistakes for sure were made
somewhere did your feelings fade
I'm no longer feeling so very sure
and how much longer I will endure
since often soliciting to ensure
for quite awhile I was your demour
Now its all quiet and you're hidden
are you no longer with me smitten
and our together has since ridden
finding our love no longer forgiven
And so I wade....
So is this the end of our past days
will we now just go different...
#bittersweet
#heartbroken
#hope
#love
#rejection
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My pen won't dry up
The ink never ceases to flow,
For my thoughts of you, they never go.
Page after page, they take their form,
A torrent of words, a literary storm.
Some shared with the world, others just for you,
Capturing the moments we shared, the things we do.
In dreams and waking, my pen takes flight,
Bringing to life my deepest, burning desire.
The words, they dance across the page,
Tuning the strings of passion's endless stage.
Together we revel in this company divine,
Your presence, my muse, a symphony sublime.
No end in...
For my thoughts of you, they never go.
Page after page, they take their form,
A torrent of words, a literary storm.
Some shared with the world, others just for you,
Capturing the moments we shared, the things we do.
In dreams and waking, my pen takes flight,
Bringing to life my deepest, burning desire.
The words, they dance across the page,
Tuning the strings of passion's endless stage.
Together we revel in this company divine,
Your presence, my muse, a symphony sublime.
No end in...
#romantic
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#sensual
#seductive
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Its Only Words
its only words
say it and let it out
it wont carve into stones
lamentations of love unrequited
don't speak out your thoughts
don't bother to say sorry
your vows had been snapped
cut by both of you
your new love
the one that sprang
from old wishing well
in your almost dry feelings
to you she is a fresh bloom
sprouting from the soil
of your turbulent emotion
deep down in your soul
hold on to love
embrace it close
its your lifeline
just remember Words
spoken,...
say it and let it out
it wont carve into stones
lamentations of love unrequited
don't speak out your thoughts
don't bother to say sorry
your vows had been snapped
cut by both of you
your new love
the one that sprang
from old wishing well
in your almost dry feelings
to you she is a fresh bloom
sprouting from the soil
of your turbulent emotion
deep down in your soul
hold on to love
embrace it close
its your lifeline
just remember Words
spoken,...
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove
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If I don't buy you roses
If I don't buy you roses
Don't bother asking why
Their life spans but a moment
Compared to you and I.
Their petal's scented pleasures
May soothe a troubled soul
Yet what you've done for me love
so few have ever known.
Through years if you desire
Bouquets to see and touch
In simple ways I need you
To want me just as much.
But if by chance it happens
I fail to wake one day
look for me where roses bloom
on earth or far away.
Don't bother asking why
Their life spans but a moment
Compared to you and I.
Their petal's scented pleasures
May soothe a troubled soul
Yet what you've done for me love
so few have ever known.
Through years if you desire
Bouquets to see and touch
In simple ways I need you
To want me just as much.
But if by chance it happens
I fail to wake one day
look for me where roses bloom
on earth or far away.
#love
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Your pain
Give me your pain
that I might understand it
that I may take it away from you
that your pain might be mine
that we can share and suffer together.
Men can never understand that
this makes a woman and
for some separates the sexes
so that a clear divide creates a
barrier and for those women they
celebrate this difference as a right
and a blessing.
Many call it the curse as pain has
been related to punishment for
sin by some religions but if this
term relates to religious
punishment why is this not felt ...
that I might understand it
that I may take it away from you
that your pain might be mine
that we can share and suffer together.
Men can never understand that
this makes a woman and
for some separates the sexes
so that a clear divide creates a
barrier and for those women they
celebrate this difference as a right
and a blessing.
Many call it the curse as pain has
been related to punishment for
sin by some religions but if this
term relates to religious
punishment why is this not felt ...
#husband
#motherhood
#ILoveYou
#LifeCycle
#admiration
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Dutch Oven
I hear, the gases that you keep…
When you’re fartin’ in your sleep”
(So Romantic)
She told me that this morning
(Yeah, she got jokes too)
Then she let me have it
The whole truth and nothing butt
Now I don’t feel ass charming
Here I thought
If I kept it quiet and not toot around her
I was keeping some kind of mystery
Turns out in my sleep my Annie has been a suffering
(Is she OK?)
Talk about Misery
“You’ve Dutch Oven’d me countless times”
She said with...
When you’re fartin’ in your sleep”
(So Romantic)
She told me that this morning
(Yeah, she got jokes too)
Then she let me have it
The whole truth and nothing butt
Now I don’t feel ass charming
Here I thought
If I kept it quiet and not toot around her
I was keeping some kind of mystery
Turns out in my sleep my Annie has been a suffering
(Is she OK?)
Talk about Misery
“You’ve Dutch Oven’d me countless times”
She said with...
#love
#wife
#funny
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A Recovering Love Addict
Im done with love
I'm kicking the habit
All that sentimental bullshit
You can have it
Dont want your affection
To get me high
Don't need more reasons
For me to cry
The euphoria was fleeting
Never lasted that long
Just an addict hooked
My will wasnt strong
Fiending for your presence
When you weren't around
Cloud hopping is great
Until you crash down
Trapped in a cycle
Of highs and withdrawals
Giving my dignity away
Without a seconds...
I'm kicking the habit
All that sentimental bullshit
You can have it
Dont want your affection
To get me high
Don't need more reasons
For me to cry
The euphoria was fleeting
Never lasted that long
Just an addict hooked
My will wasnt strong
Fiending for your presence
When you weren't around
Cloud hopping is great
Until you crash down
Trapped in a cycle
Of highs and withdrawals
Giving my dignity away
Without a seconds...
#determination
#freedom
#love
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Self-Survival
I am nothing but a piece of cork, bobbing up and down in a sea of darkness
There is absolutely nothing to grab on to and remind me what started this
Unexpected solar winds often sets my mind adrift
I reach for the only line that I cared to know praying for another lift
Just like a boulder falling into still waters there's a splash followed by waves
Each ripple that tosses me about is a denial to me being saved
Farther and farther I'm being moved away from my center, your loving force
And me an abandoned ship at sea continually being blown off course ...
There is absolutely nothing to grab on to and remind me what started this
Unexpected solar winds often sets my mind adrift
I reach for the only line that I cared to know praying for another lift
Just like a boulder falling into still waters there's a splash followed by waves
Each ripple that tosses me about is a denial to me being saved
Farther and farther I'm being moved away from my center, your loving force
And me an abandoned ship at sea continually being blown off course ...
#love
#MentalHealth
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Old Love
is knowledgeable and wise;
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
#love
#relationships
#spiritual #aging
#spiritual #aging
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Relationships
What She Wants:
Lustful trickery
Betrayal embodying
Experimental
Love Not:
Dwelling not upon
After all of the head games
Drama nevermore
She Doesn't Know:
Throwing yourself to
Many men being trapped and
Always have your way
Frustration:
Your maturity
Dismal communication
Never seeing past
Signs:
Marrying decides
Why your eroticism
Understanding want
Happy Marriage:
...
Lustful trickery
Betrayal embodying
Experimental
Love Not:
Dwelling not upon
After all of the head games
Drama nevermore
She Doesn't Know:
Throwing yourself to
Many men being trapped and
Always have your way
Frustration:
Your maturity
Dismal communication
Never seeing past
Signs:
Marrying decides
Why your eroticism
Understanding want
Happy Marriage:
...
#haiku
#love
#marriage
#morality
#relationships
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