Love Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Betty
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 9:15pm
11th Jan 2025 9:15pm
David Lewis and the concept of bearded men
The concept
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
#love
#lover
#passion
#philosophical
#romantic
117 reads
23 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
13th Feb 2024 6:47am
13th Feb 2024 6:47am
These Dreams...
In this dream, we are together,
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that,...
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that,...
#coffee
675 reads
41 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 10:09am
30th Dec 2024 10:09am
Tell me
how did it feel?
when you stood there
out on the reels
looking down
from the building
did night
lean
apologetic
against you?
Sometimes I bleed
unfinished letters
my pencil hesitant
opening into acceptance
revealing how
he must have landed in my heart chamber
when he jumped from the 14th floor
I incubated lavender in each splinter
knowing it is his birthday soon
and once again I remember
how his chestnut hair ...
when you stood there
out on the reels
looking down
from the building
did night
lean
apologetic
against you?
Sometimes I bleed
unfinished letters
my pencil hesitant
opening into acceptance
revealing how
he must have landed in my heart chamber
when he jumped from the 14th floor
I incubated lavender in each splinter
knowing it is his birthday soon
and once again I remember
how his chestnut hair ...
#FirstLove
#suicide
151 reads
14 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 9:31pm
27th Dec 2024 9:31pm
be the fire
in the early hours of morning
as dawn warmed the darkened sky
I stood transfixed
when a single star flashed brightly
lighting up a fading night
leaving me deeply moved
thoughts whispering softly
stirring in my mind
what would I say to you
if this was my last day
what wishes would I cast your way
what images would I press into your upturned palms
kissing & imbuing them with all my hopes
infusing your dreams
willing them into being
and then it occurred to me
I don't want you reading an unsent...
as dawn warmed the darkened sky
I stood transfixed
when a single star flashed brightly
lighting up a fading night
leaving me deeply moved
thoughts whispering softly
stirring in my mind
what would I say to you
if this was my last day
what wishes would I cast your way
what images would I press into your upturned palms
kissing & imbuing them with all my hopes
infusing your dreams
willing them into being
and then it occurred to me
I don't want you reading an unsent...
#daughter
#love
131 reads
5 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 4:04pm
12th Jan 2025 4:04pm
Shattered Love
You told me that you loved me...
...you gave me everything...
...so much - that it was too much!
I clutched the material things...
...wonderful memories...
...unbelievable feelings...
and the years of safety - so tightly!
I wanted it to be real.
But it was unbelievable...
...it wasn't what I had ever had...
...or ever known - I hesitated!
I tried to return feelings...
...but I hurt us both -
trying too hard to hold on to me...
and be what you deserved.
The weight of my past...
...piled too...
...you gave me everything...
...so much - that it was too much!
I clutched the material things...
...wonderful memories...
...unbelievable feelings...
and the years of safety - so tightly!
I wanted it to be real.
But it was unbelievable...
...it wasn't what I had ever had...
...or ever known - I hesitated!
I tried to return feelings...
...but I hurt us both -
trying too hard to hold on to me...
and be what you deserved.
The weight of my past...
...piled too...
#breakup
#love
41 reads
2 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
20th May 2024 11:38pm
20th May 2024 11:38pm
Find Me
To be looked at like yours is the only existence
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
there ever was.
To be known down to your bone.
Every touch has the electric intensity
of the very first and the very last.
You feel immediate and a thousand years.
Lips colliding twisted
with soft euphoric kisses.
We were alchemy.
My beacon eyes
flood love's iridescent light.
Find me.......
#IMissYou
#love
393 reads
20 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
4th Aug 2021 4:34pm
4th Aug 2021 4:34pm
Old Love
is knowledgeable and wise;
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
it didn't allow bitterness
to strangle out Life;
but, weeded
its garden instead
Old Love
has experienced pain,
healed inflicted wounds
by lovers and friends
and cherishes
each moment it lives
without regret
Old Love
isn't afraid to try—
it doesn't lock away its heart
because it knows
even through loss
it will survive
~
#love
#relationships
#spiritual #aging
#spiritual #aging
991 reads
43 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 1:02am
5th Jan 2025 1:02am
Demon Slayer
Ooh I could never be that way again
Tender morsels of us became nothing but pain
Do you still think of us as if we had been trained
Or do you consider what we both have shared as something strange
I've pictured words known only to you and I as life
Yeah, bitch check that fuck shit and roll the dam dice
Tumbles started rumbling, hell our destinies may have been spliced
Just tell me how much misery it takes for orphans of pain to survive
We've done as we thought, endured what was brought
Although we bot fought, it was the demons that you...
Tender morsels of us became nothing but pain
Do you still think of us as if we had been trained
Or do you consider what we both have shared as something strange
I've pictured words known only to you and I as life
Yeah, bitch check that fuck shit and roll the dam dice
Tumbles started rumbling, hell our destinies may have been spliced
Just tell me how much misery it takes for orphans of pain to survive
We've done as we thought, endured what was brought
Although we bot fought, it was the demons that you...
#dark
#love
68 reads
6 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 7:36pm
5th Jan 2025 7:36pm
~back off the mindless mindkill... a roadkill is better off? not so either
#conflict
#identity
#love
#lust
#spiritual
62 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 2:20pm
13th Nov 2024 2:20pm
I still love remembering you.
I want to know
if you heard...
If you know what the scar tastes like
that your voice placed in my soul.
Maybe we even dream,
the same dream...
Maybe you'll call me from above
from the mountains of your dream...
A subtle bitterness, your name loaded
on cold lonely nights.
I feel the weight of time, endless,
dragging every worn memory.
In the dark silence of the bowels,
an echo resonates, empty and lost.
A deep, never-ending tiredness
marks of a love
that was never called love.
The words we always...
if you heard...
If you know what the scar tastes like
that your voice placed in my soul.
Maybe we even dream,
the same dream...
Maybe you'll call me from above
from the mountains of your dream...
A subtle bitterness, your name loaded
on cold lonely nights.
I feel the weight of time, endless,
dragging every worn memory.
In the dark silence of the bowels,
an echo resonates, empty and lost.
A deep, never-ending tiredness
marks of a love
that was never called love.
The words we always...
#illness
#lover
#lust
#passion
#silence
107 reads
6 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 10:45am
5th Jan 2025 10:45am
pursue her
if there
was a
way to
pursue her,
without
just my
thoughts,
to find
myself in
her dreams,
memories,
to be
the sound
that echos
when she
sighs
my name.
was a
way to
pursue her,
without
just my
thoughts,
to find
myself in
her dreams,
memories,
to be
the sound
that echos
when she
sighs
my name.
#crush
#happiness
#obsession
#relationships
#romantic
129 reads
8 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 1:55pm
26th Dec 2024 1:55pm
Unfettered Heart
her chaos
unfettered thoughts
fearless heart
stormy soul
was uncompromising
her love
shakes worlds
her soul
shakes mine
as it always has
unfettered thoughts
fearless heart
stormy soul
was uncompromising
her love
shakes worlds
her soul
shakes mine
as it always has
#admiration
#crush
#love #UnrequitedLove
#love #UnrequitedLove
133 reads
9 Comments
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