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Llywenllyn
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Poetry Contest

So basically, I have some songs without lyrics and I want you to write lyrics for them
I will not be using your lyrics so you won't have to worry about that
The topic for the songs can be anything, despite the title of the song
Please include the title of the song with your submission so I can read and listen to the music at the same time

Good luck everyone!

https://www.soundtrap.com/doodl3circl3s?

JohnFeddeler
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         parrish the lonely (video girl)   [ 'all hail me' ]


deep in her blues
deep in a hole
perish her heart
perish her soul

violins tremble
violins call
video girl
stumble & fall

passion of lovers
cradle of sin
video girl
swallowing him

shoot up the moonlight
chasing a thrill
drunk on the downbeat
hot for the kill

eyes in the shadows
kisses that smear
indigo stains
color her tears

love & the lonely
never belong

only the music
only the song…





Llywenllyn
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Thank you JohnFeddeler for your entry!

gazellemon
Bradley J
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written to first bit of "all hail me"

when i pen subversive verses in cursive
it ends with nurses and hearses,
i am a suspicious person with these curses
certainly a little nervous,
as I rehearse this lyrical sermon,
I will service these circuits,
i know no word that is worthless,
each syllable snaps with a purpose,
and you don't have to purchase...
but i am so dope and focused
you may just quote this
flow so sick like i'm floatin,
hoes on dick swallowin' potion,
I'm following a thick commotion,
you already know doh',
i am like a young Frodo,
where I go not even I know though,
like a commando in camo,
with ammo to blow,
And flows fucked like a coke ho's nose,
I keep em coming back like a kilo of snow,
i keep repeating facts and stacking this dough,
defeat is not acceptable,
i stay flexible,
I could be next to go,
or on a beach in Mexico...

Llywenllyn
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thank you gazellemon for your entry!

poet Anonymous

@Llywenllyn what software did you use, do you have a stave that you can send.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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My Queen of Pain...to Bad Day...

Memories
That refuse to die..
Haunt
My bones and I

Numb
Their captive screams
Shout
Hard in my dreams

Body
Racked with old pain
Piercing
Moan through cold veins

Claw
At their footprints in my eyes
Ghost
Memory leave me silent blind

Ancient acts that hunt my happiness
Leave me ruler
My Queen of Pain
Ghosts that shred my wrists to tattered
Lead me to madness
Nothing else remains

Astral projection and I hover over
Out of body
She is so alone
My ghosts genuflect as I descend
Taking me from self
They have built her throne


(Cool stuff doll...thanks for sharing your music.)

LunaLove6963
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              Reality Is A Dream

             

There is so much confusion going on in my head
won't someone shake me,
wake me up from this nightmare,
I've been dreaming for far too long.
maybe it's just my way of coping with the all the pain of my past.
I sit back and close my eyes.
all I can see is a loaded Gun.

there's no escaping my reality
there's no escaping my reality
there's no escaping my reality.

I try to drown my own pity,
so I pour a drink,
then a few more as I open the door to this world
where everything is so complicated.
there is no light only the dark.
 it's the rage inside of my head.

there's no escaping my reality
there's no escaping my reality
there's no escaping my reality.

I try to wake myself from this nightmare
but there is no sense in trying,
I am to weak and don't have what it takes.
Nobody can save me now.

there's no escaping my reality
there's no escaping my reality
there's no escaping my reality.

Llywenllyn
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IronFears said:@Llywenllyn what software did you use, do you have a stave that you can send.

I used a site called soundtrap and yeah I have a save I can send

Llywenllyn
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calamitygin thanks for your entry! lunalove6963, thank you for participating, but what song does your poem go to?

LunaLove6963
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Sorry guess I miss read. It's a song I wrote no music.

hungrypan74
Dantalyon
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"Severed Ties"

We weren't enough,
so, she gave us up -
gave away our love

At one time it was
strong enough to
hold us together,
but, I guess that
over time the tie
that by, we were
tethered, was
severed, and,
we drifted...

Away

Now, I see her here
and there, by-and-by,
around town

She's giving herself
away like she's celebrating,
and, the rounds are on
her; yeah, but, it isn't
shots they're drinking

They're taking shots of
her, and, it seems now
as though the bar is
always open

At one time I was hoping,
that like a rope that's been
cut asunder, we could take
ours and with a knot, put it
back together

But, I think that this one's
been irreparably frayed,
and, that each strand is
now, a new connection
to a new relation

So, I guess that for now I'll...

Just be satisfied to see her
here and there, by-and-by,
around town

Because, she's giving herself
away like she's celebrating,
and, the rounds are on her;
yeah, but, it isn't shots that
they're drinking

They're taking shots of her,
and, it seems now, that the
bar is always open

This I do know though... that
if you continue to remove the
strands that make up the rope,
one day it'll all be used up







Jade-Pandora
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Gwendolyn
(Lyrics written to "All Hail Me")


Do I need it or do I want it
Does it matter or don't I know it
Dunno yet!

Do I need it or do I want it
Does it matter or don't I know it
Dunno yet!

You have to show me before you know me,

He's a bad dog but his tail wags hard,
and knocks me down.

He's a strong cock o' the walk lover,
and grinds it hard.

And I can't get him to sex me nice,
What he does to me he does it twice.

My head is spinnin' just like a top,
My body rotates and doesn't stop.

And I can't get him to sex me nice,
What he does to me he does it twice.

My head is spinnin' just like a top.
My body rotates and doesn't stop,

Do I need it or do I want it
Does it matter or don't I know it
Dunno yet!

You have to show me before you know me.
You have to show me before you know me.
You have to show me before you know me.


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JohnVincent
JVD
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"All Hail Me" reminds me of Two Door Cinema Club, and I love that. Working on something now for it.

Trixareforkids
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JohnFeddeler said:          parrish the lonely (video girl)   [ 'all hail me' ]

love & the lonely
never belong

only the music
only the song…




I like this entry, LOVE this ending, I got a L. Cohen feel

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