Penetration!

I know I'm kind of stealing a concept here but I was really kind of impressed with Jack's "Masturbation".  When I read the title, I didn't expect much then I read some of the entries and they were quite good.  So I decided to do one of my own.  So here it goes.

Write a description of Sexual Pentration.  Specifically from the perspective of the initial point of entry-be it physical,artificial or mental.  What does it feel like to you?  Male or female.  Both points are valid and should be significantly different. Be as descriptive as you can but remember to keep to the subject.  The initial feeling of any form of insertion.  Try not to write a short story if you can and as with Jack's rules-let this post be something you have not posted at the DU already.  Let it be original.  I'll try to give a worthy example here:

"So hard and tingly.  Almost painful, the anticipation of contact. My swollen head enters the waiting mouth of her hot cat. The moist silky wetness that awaits is almost indescribable. No words do it justice less I try.   A hot, liquid fire that coats my thick cock completely.  A feeling of  physical transformation.  Maybe more than that. It's metaphysical.  It transcends time and space.  My whole being.....from solid state to molten, plasmotic.  Cosmic, electric.  Other-worldly!  And then those vaginal muscles begin to rhythmically contract. She bites me and it's on..."

I run this one from 4/23 until 4/30.  Myself and 2 select anonymous judges (I hate that word) will pick a winner. I promise that the persons helping me pick are DU members and they will not post their own works in this competition.

Ok one question how about the homosexuals they have part to no??
I'm not but still a lot of poets are and you can't stick to just what a male and female would feel because then you have a number of people out of the loop no??

[quote]Gg78 said:
Ok one question how about the homosexuals they have part to no??
I'm not but still a lot of poets are and you can't stick to just what a male and female would feel because then you have a number of people out of the loop no??

No not left out at all.  If we were talking strictly about "physical penetration" then possibly there would be some exclusion.  I'm speaking of "sexual (even erotic) penetration" which could even speak to the first a lovers "mental stimulation" enters into your being for example.  I would think (no pun intended) that males would have no problem describing physical penetration homosexually.  Having said that, women (lesbians) could from the perspective of the first oral entrance, the first finger, the first toy, etc.  It's all sexual penetration hopefully causing some type sensation.  The possibility of writing about a "mental" penetration would be really intriguing to me as that one would really cause one to really have to think and be creative.  So, no one would be left out.

Here I'm not shy I'll be the first it's not that great but it's a poem non of the less..

The way he is looking at me 
The way he is touching me 
I can't hold back any longer 
I need to feel him inside of me 
Him with His long hot sexual organ's tip touching my clit 
He's rubbing it over and over he's teasing me he knows I want it all the way in 
Feeling it enter slowly gives me a jolt an overwhelming feelings that makes me almost cum 
I gasp and bite down on my lip
This man knows what he has and uses it well 
His member so rock hard making my insides swell..
But that one moment of entering me slow and him pausing for me to feel the  fill of him is what I call a good fucking mind blow..
 

Off to a good start GG.  (I also went back and clarified the instructions so it doesn't exclude anyone)

Thanks but it was a quickie lol and that's good you did that

Where Do we Post Our Entry?
I can Type Mine Off the Top of My Head Before I'm Done With My Brunch

[quote]LaSean Tajee said:
Where Do we Post Our Entry?
I can Type Mine Off the Top of My Head Before I'm Done With My Brunch

Just post it here at this thread.  Yeah I know, it kind of feels like "American Idol"  The American Idol Of DU Poetry.  Hmmmmm

This has happened quickly. Hurried kisses.
The plunge of hungry tongues.
Pulling at each other's trouser buckles.
You push me against the wall and pin me there,
I can feel your cock through your trousers.
I want to feel you inside me. No foreplay.
No teasing. Just the hard thrust of your hips
And the first rub of your erection against my clitoris.
Aaahhh, I moan and cry, oh my god, I can't believe
You feel this good. But this
Is just
The beginning.

[quote]MusicallyMrM said:
as with Jack's rules-let this post be something you have not posted at the DU already.  Let it be original.

That wasn't my rule. I asked entrants to just post one poem, it doesn't matter if it's an old one.

[font=Verdana]Impact

Out of the dust bowl
new flowers emerge, colours serene
yet perturbing. You place your hands on my thighs,
I squeeze the blanket, my knees resting
on cushions we chose especially for this.
More blooming. Pink leaves. Then indigo stalks
and hazel faces as you enter me
like a satellite drifting through space.
The dust bowl is coming alive. Filling
with flowers, a scented leaf dish on a kitchen table.
But I've not seen these plants before.

Jack Heslop said:
[quote][quoted=competitions--612-0-0]MusicallyMrM said:
as with Jack's rules-let this post be something you have not posted at the DU already.  Let it be original.

That wasn't my rule. I asked entrants to just post one poem, it doesn't matter if it's an old one.

I misunderstood what you said sir.  Sorry about that so your rule seems to work well so.........

"Everyone, please just one post".

My Entry

I sit playing my video game
Trying to make a name
For myself, in a world that doesn't really exist
Killing enemy players, tearing up the game to a crisp
Then it starts to lose its touch
I don't feel like playing that much
It's late and my hormones are kicking
It's that time, I feel my dick ticking
Ticking, counting the time till it can be in my hands
This is never in my late night plans
I can't kill anyone, my score not going higher
It's time to watch the dirty, make my dick raise higher
I quit the game on my Playstation 3
Go to the built in web browser, it's time for me...
To satisfy these urges down in my pants
To feel my hard throbbing dick in my hands
Type in the url rawgonzo.com, what to choose
I gotta pick something for my dick and my mood
Anal, Blowjob, Deepthroat my usual picks
Lets pick something for shits and gigs
Hmmm hentai seems to make you throb the most
Now get ready for your after hours dose
I get the vaseline and massage it down my cock
Click play, and prepare to masturbate till I have to stop
Oh yea, you use your hard cartoon dick to rub her wet cartoon clit
Time for my dick dripping with pre-cum to enter my well lubed hand, this is it
I gasp as the head of my dick slides through my tightly closed hand
My mind & heart is racing, my lust wandering in no mans land
He's fucking her cartoon pussy hard, she's moaning and moaning
I'm sliding in and out of my hand, while slightly groaning and groaning
My eyes closed I hear the the cartoon say, "Oh girl,I'm about to cum"
Thank god I'm already finished and done
:)

Just a note-to all participants so far, really good and diverse stuff.  Keep 'em cummin'.  I've done something similar to this in a live forum once and I always found it fascinating that as openly sexual as our society has become and as seemingly intellectual we are as people-how most people cannot describe what this feels like. Seriously.

Just checking in

Im sure you'd like to check these naughty poems out :)http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12719/
andhttp://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12553/ :D