First Blood

Bloody HELL

I saw him over by the bar, flirting with another whore
H e came here everynight and left with a girl who wouldn't return again
Perhaps he was a cop, arresting prostitutes
But he was TOO casual even for undercover
Tonight, I decided to find out
After my shift was over, I rmoved my apron and sat politely next to him
He was extremely handsome
Pleasant as sin
After a few drinks, I gave in
He helped me into the big black truck
I didn't know I was on a ride of a lifetime
After what seemed to be forever,
The truck stopped I barely remember the house, but it was Huge!
He led me inside with an eerie smile
As I sat on the couch, waiting for his return
A chill crept over me
He came in with a knife in hand
But I was prepared
I ran at him with fire inside
And took his knife
Clutting and slicing awayat his evil soul
His final words  
were nothing but...
REMEBER

Danii said:Bloody HELL

I saw him over by the bar, flirting with another whore
H e came here everynight and left with a girl who wouldn't return again
Perhaps he was a cop, arresting prostitutes
But he was TOO casual even for undercover
Tonight, I decided to find out
After my shift was over, I rmoved my apron and sat politely next to him
He was extremely handsome
Pleasant as sin
After a few drinks, I gave in
He helped me into the big black truck
I didn't know I was on a ride of a lifetime
After what seemed to be forever,
The truck stopped I barely remember the house, but it was Huge!
He led me inside with an eerie smile
As I sat on the couch, waiting for his return
A chill crept over me
He came in with a knife in hand
But I was prepared
I ran at him with fire inside
And took his knife
Clutting and slicing awayat his evil soul
His final words  
were nothing but...
REMEBER


lol thats why your suposed to drug the girl before you leave the bar! Good poem

ThePintSizdSlasher said:[quote-84445-Danii]Bloody HELL

I saw him over by the bar, flirting with another whore
H e came here everynight and left with a girl who wouldn't return again
Perhaps he was a cop, arresting prostitutes
But he was TOO casual even for undercover
Tonight, I decided to find out
After my shift was over, I rmoved my apron and sat politely next to him
He was extremely handsome
Pleasant as sin
After a few drinks, I gave in
He helped me into the big black truck
I didn't know I was on a ride of a lifetime
After what seemed to be forever,
The truck stopped I barely remember the house, but it was Huge!
He led me inside with an eerie smile
As I sat on the couch, waiting for his return
A chill crept over me
He came in with a knife in hand
But I was prepared
I ran at him with fire inside
And took his knife
Clutting and slicing awayat his evil soul
His final words  
were nothing but...
REMEBER


lol thats why your suposed to drug the girl before you leave the bar! Good poem [/quote]
lol! thx  ;)

Hmm... idk danii you have a one in one chance of winning so far, those odds seem pretty slim

We stood there,
Side by side and eye to eye
She moves like I move,
But her smile
Is a little more sickly.
The twinkle in her eyes
A little more dim.
I remember her
Too well,
And watched her do things,
I wouldn't care to repeat.
Twisting hearts on strings
And breathing death
Through straws,
Not noticing the scars she's caused
And collected.
I know she liked it.
No, loved it.
Reveled in it,
Then walked away smiling,
Like nothing mattered and nothing happened.
I feel I cannot let her continue,
Cannot let her exist.
But she has the joy
I am not brave enough to live with.
It's her or me!
I lunge,
Glass shatters,
blood flows.
No body,
no trace.
I walk away
With her shame.

Looks like I've got competition!

You can't do that, copy and paste or something.

UHG! fine!

Murder first degree

His smile radiant as the sun
His eyes blue like the eastern sky
His caress,  heat of pleasure
Against my skin
Loving him, a vocation
Serving him, a need
Being with him a desire
Loving him was my fire
Stoked by needs
Blown by passion

His love overflowed
From me to her
A maid so fair
I paled to the wall
Non-entity personified
She took over
And rode him
Like a stallion in vast fields
Where lusts surmounted
All common sense

The knife I weld
I did not feel
Slashing his pretty face
And then his whore
Still astride his lower body
I slashed and gored
and their innards poured
splashing into one another
Crimson blood they splattered
All over the walls and floor

When at last I was done
They lay entangled in a ruin
Where limbs of which and whom
Were unknown
So mixed were they….
The glorious feel of vengeance
Made me scream in delight
As I dance upon their flesh
Under my feet they were at last
Laying in pieces of defeat.

She begs for her life as I advance upon her.
She still has no idea I came to this place for the sole purpose of killing her.
She's pressed against the wall now, no more room to back away from me.
I slowly close the gap, knife outstretched, a homicidal grin spreading across my face.
She probably thinks I'm here to rape her. There is a noise.
I turn to the door and her mother is standing there, a scream of utter terror resonating from her open mouth like a siren.
She is quickly dispatched with a small cough from my silenced beretta.
As her already dead mother slumps to the ground, I tell my querry that the same fate awaits her, but in a much more gruesome manner.
She tries to scream, but I pull the gun on her and tell her to shutup or I will blow her brains out right there.
She whimpers, slides to the floor.
I gaze upon her face: snoting, crying, striken with mortal fear, agonizing grief at seeing her mother gunned down in an instant.
I step forward, she scrambles back up the wall.
The look on her face was almost enough to make me turn around and go home satisfied. Almost, but no cigar. I came here to kill the bitch and thats what I plan on doing.
I tell her that unfortunately, my face is the last thing she will ever lay her eyes on.
I'm standing directly in front of her now.
I rear back and slap her as hard as I can.
Then, without warning, I slash her left eye before she can recover.
She fell to the ground and grabbed her profusely bleeding face.
Then with another stab to the side of her head I took away the remainder of her sight.
Dispite my warning she screams like a banshee the entire time.
It's orgasmic.
I push her bed against the door. Now she can flounder around all she wants, there is no way out.
No one can hear her screams but the trees and I.
Certainly not the neighbors that live 2 miles away.
She's crawling now, begging me to stop.
I laugh. I haven't even started yet.
I walk over, purposely, knowing I have all the time in the world, and slowly push my weapon of choice deep into her side.
Her kidney I hope, but then, as long as she's in pain it doesn't really matter.
I turn her onto her back, pull up her shirt, and carve my name into her flawless body. She wails loud enough to wake the dead, she bucks and begs for mercy, but I'm stronger. I get on top of her straddling her body with my legs.
I strangle her, whilst simultaneously driving my knife into her neck, face, and chest. After 20 seconds she stops thrashing.
Then, I look at her body. I derobe and fuck whats left of her.
She insisted on having sex with so many others but never settled on me.
Now I've gotten what I wanted, even though I had to kill her to do it.
And as one last humiliation, I cut slits into her asshole so it can accomodate me while i fuck her in the ass.
She is now my submissive bitch.

my trick

spent to many nights
dreaming of your face,
what a waste

spent to many days
lost in your essence,
god you were so unpleasant

spent to many hours
jacking off to you in the shower,
my hand got sore

spent to many years
wishing you were here,
i shed no tears

but spending all my time
sitting behind this bar
thinking about the scars
etched across my heart
doesn’t help the fact
that you’re never coming back

and it really doesn’t matter,
scratching my balls, scratching my brain,
what was that dude’s name?
Oh yea. . .Jack!
the one you jacked off
behind the Jack in The Box

lighting a generic cigarette,
i laugh then whisper,
Sweetheart, can you dig it?
but i forget we are through
or at least i was through
with you jacking off other dudes

yup, somewhere buried in Reno
is right where i left the two of you.
and they ask me do i regret
severing your hand, severing his dick?
hell no ‘cause it’s one last whore
doing my trick!

Wow. Looks like it's gotten started now. I threw in so it wouldn't be a clean sweep. Haha

Deontejordan said:
She begs for her life as I advance upon her.
She still has no idea I came to this place for the sole purpose of killing her.
She's pressed against the wall now, no more room to back away from me.
I slowly close the gap, knife outstretched, a homicidal grin spreading across my face.
She probably thinks I'm here to rape her. There is a noise.
I turn to the door and her mother is standing there, a scream of utter terror resonating from her open mouth like a siren.
She is quickly dispatched with a small cough from my silenced beretta.
As her already dead mother slumps to the ground, I tell my querry that the same fate awaits her, but in a much more gruesome manner.
She tries to scream, but I pull the gun on her and tell her to shutup or I will blow her brains out right there.
She whimpers, slides to the floor.
I gaze upon her face: snoting, crying, striken with mortal fear, agonizing grief at seeing her mother gunned down in an instant.
I step forward, she scrambles back up the wall.
The look on her face was almost enough to make me turn around and go home satisfied. Almost, but no cigar. I came here to kill the bitch and thats what I plan on doing.
I tell her that unfortunately, my face is the last thing she will ever lay her eyes on.
I'm standing directly in front of her now.
I rear back and slap her as hard as I can.
Then, without warning, I slash her left eye before she can recover.
She fell to the ground and grabbed her profusely bleeding face.
Then with another stab to the side of her head I took away the remainder of her sight.
Dispite my warning she screams like a banshee the entire time.
It's orgasmic.
I push her bed against the door. Now she can flounder around all she wants, there is no way out.
No one can hear her screams but the trees and I.
Certainly not the neighbors that live 2 miles away.
She's crawling now, begging me to stop.
I laugh. I haven't even started yet.
I walk over, purposely, knowing I have all the time in the world, and slowly push my weapon of choice deep into her side.
Her kidney I hope, but then, as long as she's in pain it doesn't really matter.
I turn her onto her back, pull up her shirt, and carve my name into her flawless body. She wails loud enough to wake the dead, she bucks and begs for mercy, but I'm stronger. I get on top of her straddling her body with my legs.
I strangle her, whilst simultaneously driving my knife into her neck, face, and chest. After 20 seconds she stops thrashing.
Then, I look at her body. I derobe and fuck whats left of her.
She insisted on having sex with so many others but never settled on me.
Now I've gotten what I wanted, even though I had to kill her to do it.
And as one last humiliation, I cut slits into her asshole so it can accomodate me while i fuck her in the ass.
She is now my submissive bitch.

Now that is truely sick! hahaha nice imagery