Poetry competition CLOSED 8th May 2020 5:31pm
WINNER
slipalong
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RUNNERS-UP: souladareatease and Ahavati

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WAR POETRY RETROSPECT

runaway-mindtrain
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 30th July 2017
Forum Posts: 760

New world disorder

Is said all the world needs is water and society  
But that is all that hell needs to bring it's reign  
Skeptics and the credulous in their false piety  
Never hindered by the burden of proving sane...  

Foolish striving for utopia and ending in dystopia  
Their cold light of truth as a voltaic spark insight  
With mental conundrums of new social myopia  
Ancient blood washed temple as spirit birthright...  
 
An early world 'show me' ruled the old discourse  
It birthed from a purer intent flowing to source  
And now a mental shifting to glorious apotheosis--/  
 
Or every wanting idea goes streaking down in flames  
Salvation blood to cover the inner stain and pain...  
 
So everyone is a maker of the abstraction of art  
Letting all minds have something they can weigh  
To gain full command over the conflicting heart  
Through your higher dimensional soul gateway...  
 
Divinely wrought mold an intricate manifestation  
Into the body of man, a composite temple of clay  
Godhead mysterious rite of centered causation  
Dark matter lights your old soul's right of way...
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.

Thank you to the following members for voting:

Stoney223, nutbuster, JohnnyBlaze, AspergerPoet56, Layla, Grace, buddydog, Josh, Billy_Snagg, alcedoathis, Marks, Phantom2426, gifteth, ReggiePoet, Frustrated_prole, Ripper, FromTheAsh

Ahavati
Tyrant of Words
United States 116awards
Joined 11th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 14669

Oh wow! I truly wasn't expecting to place in this comp! Congratulations, Slip! Well deserved! And to soul as well!

JohnnyBlaze
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 20th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 5573



Whoa! Congrats, Slip! And Soul!

Well done on the Betties Bouncing, Bestie! 📝❤

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