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ThePalestRider
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IDryad
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Poetry Contest

Create a World from your own imagination
Write out a World of your own imagination. It can be a future world or a past, a world of fantasy etc and create your story around it. Any length but not a book.
1. No erotica
2. No collaboration
3. AI not encouraged
4. No chatting on comp thread

ThePalestRider
Thought Provoker
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Canto I:The New Jerusalem

Beneath the ash-gray skies they roamed
The faithful few with heads bent low
Across the endless, barren loam
To where the desert winds did blow

A voice, like thunder, called them forth
The patriarch, his eyes aflame
A shepherd from the hollow North
Who wore a tattered prophet’s name

With cross held high, he led them on
To build anew Jerusalem
Upon the bones of ages gone
Beneath a sky that knew no sun

He called the land a holy waste
The prairies wide, the broken plain
A place where sins could be erased
And man could taste of death and pain

Canto II: The Chant of Ash and Dust

In worn procession through the dust
They carried icons black with rust
And kissed the wood, and kissed the stone
In whispered tongues, in solemn tone

“Rejoice, O Mother,” came the cry
“For we have left the world behind
To walk this path where martyrs lie
And cleanse the blood from mortal mind.”  

Yet in the night strange visions came
The saints they saw were twisted, pale
With faces veiled in shadow’s flame
And halos cracked and dimmed and frail

Canto III:The Patriarch’s Sermon

“O sons and daughters,” cried their priest
His voice like fire, his robe like night
“This place was wrought for holy feasts
This ground will purge all earthly blight

We build a kingdom here in dread
The city of the prophet’s tale
Where angels fear and devils tread
We raise our prayers, though voices fail.”  

Yet murmurs stirred beneath his words
The faithful’s faces, gaunt and gray
For death had stalked them like a bird  
That knew the scent of souls astray

Canto IV: The Vision of Bones

Beneath the moon’s relentless stare
The dead rose up in silent rows
The prophets, saints, and martyrs fair
Arrayed in robes, in crimson glows

They gathered ‘round with hollow eyes
Their fingers long as twisted reeds
And sang as mourners, bleak and wise
Of holy fire and mortal needs

“We built the walls of Heaven’s gate,”  
The phantoms cried in ghostly song
“We carved the stones of blood and hate
And died in faith, yet suffered wrong.”  

And there the patriarch did kneel
To kiss the bones of saints laid bare
Yet in his heart a frozen steel
A silence void of love or prayer

Canto V: The End of Days

At dawn they saw, in eastern light
The city risen, sharp and black
A kingdom in the morning’s blight
Where towers cast their shadows back

Yet none dared enter through its doors
For shrieks did rise from deep within
As if some ancient, restless war  
Had found new voice in songs of sin

And there the patriarch, alone
Stood silent ‘neath the barren sun
A king upon a shattered throne
Where time and faith had come undone

In that desolate New Jerusalem
No trumpets sang, no candles burned
And all who sought to be redeemed  
Were lost to dust, and never learned


LunasChild8
Dangerous Mind
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The Ones Up Above

Far beyond the valley lies a Kingdom,
With rivers of gold and hearts full of love;
The King and his people cherished their freedom,
As they worshiped the ones up above.
 
Beautiful beings with incredibly pure souls,
Unaffected by corruption;
Once broken, the people were made whole,  
The beings saved them from destruction.
 
Up in the sky, they live in peace,
Free from all worries and cares of the world;
As they spared the people from a life full of grief,
Every man and woman, every boy and girl.
 
It’s naïve to say that evil only comes out at night,
With the fading light comes our doom;
But even in the lasting void there’s a light,
That reaches even the dark side of the moon.
 
Far beyond the valley lies a Kingdom,
With laughter in the air and hearts full of love;
The King and his people valued their wisdom,
As they worshiped and thanked the ones up above.
Written by LunasChild8
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Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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ThePalestRider, thank you for starting the competition and LunasChild8, thank you for your participation.

olliec
Oliver Cocks
Lost Thinker
Joined 15th Oct 2023
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Desert Broom

I am nothing
and everything

is against me
yet here I am

I am a desert broom
brittle wilted
yet still here,

growing beneath a
volcano’s shadow
amid ash and rock
a surly survivor

Empires and houses
rise and crumble
around me, but
here I am, still

I dream of roses,
but know only thorns

I dream of the sky,
but know only storm

I dream of ending,
but am only forever

I am- I am…
Written by olliec (Oliver Cocks)
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Grace
IDryad
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olliec, thank you for your entry

PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 26th May 2022
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Entropy is a Planet in the Galaxy of Hypnosis

 
In the quiet embrace of countless worlds
where peace is the gentle heartbeat of existence
and love is the light that guides every soul,
there is a song of life, pure and unbroken.

There, hearts beat in harmonious rhythms,
each pulse a testament to boundless joy
where the essence of being is celebrated
and the beauty of existence is a given.

No shadows of regret linger in these realms,
where every day is a canvas of possibility,
painted with the colors of compassion and hope
and the air is filled with the whispers of dreams.

Communities flourish in unity and understanding,
bound not by the chains of fear or strife
but by the bricks of shared humanity,
built into a mansion of infinite kindness.

In these places, laughter is the common language,
a melody that resonates through every heart,
lifting spirits with its lightness and grace
and turning the binary into the extraordinary.

Here, the past is a story of lessons learned,
the present, a dance of joy and contentment
and the future, a promise of endless potential
where every soul finds its place in the grand design.

There is no sorrow that love cannot mend,
no fear that peace cannot soothe,
for in these worlds, the human spirit is boundless
and the gift of life is cherished beyond measure.

In the embrace of these utopian realms,
every soul knows its worth and purpose.
Basking in the glow of unconditional acceptance,
forever alive in the symphony of peace and love.
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you for your entry PAR

CasketSharpe
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 12th June 2013
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The Wish of Universal Annihilation

      “Those who are fascinated by forbidden lore
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
      “Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,

      “The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
      “Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,

      “Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly disintegrate emotions and makes the heart cold,
      “Gaining anathema wisdom from things exiled to teach
Now at a nightmarish altar they listen to the Baernoloth preach,

      “Words of blasphemy that curses the mind
Focus alone, against the divine is considered an unforgivable crime,
      “But punishment has never been factored into the equation
While pieces of flesh and memory feed the pit of annihilation,  

      “Along a cataclysmic path to the unknown far fringe  
Is the destiny still forbidden knowledge or personal revenge?
      “Of everything that has been consumed entirely too slowly disappear
A fraction of the individual they have become year after year,

      “Blinded by ancient black holes that cloud the sight
Causing visions to strobe randomly, between day and night,
      “Twisting their fractured reality without end
Until waking up violently transformed and caged within a hellish den,

      “A torn soul, consumed flesh, family love and knowledge
The thought of the sacrifice crashes like a wave, causing one to vomit,
      “Of blood that reshapes itself into a reflection of the quested path
 Will clarity prevail or will they become permanently mad,  
      
      “Not knowing anymore what the goal was for
As a hand devoid of flesh is placed on an ancient black door,
      “With a final thought along with a mucus infested breath
The universe is granted a final wish and that is an annihilating death”.
Written by CasketSharpe
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Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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CasketSharpe, thank you for your entry

AfterSexDilemma
Fire of Insight
United States 3awards
Joined 8th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 42

I Do Not Agree With Reality

I am alive.
Open my body, what do you find?
Periods and question marks.
A useless hide.
A meat sack of trivial answers and lies.

Locks of hair entangling my mind.
Wading through emotional turmoil tides.
Combing through the who's and why's.
Leaving all of reality behind.

I'm just a cunt. Some useless meat.
Come prize me as your specialty.
I'll give you your dose of prime protein.
And fatten you with psychological schemes.

Keep me alive in your dreams.
Keep me close, don't try to hide.
Keep me wet, squeaky and clean.
Keep me exposed; opened wide.

I am alive, for you to question.
Make a statement and you are wrong.
What you think is the lesson.
I've been leading you astray all along.

I'm your world of your creation.
That cunt that always lies.
I'm the beast you're hunting for predation.
While I mimick my enemies crimes.

Open my body, what do you find?
Accusations and remarks.
You're wrong to trust your own creation.
It's your mind that's in the dark. ;)




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Grace
IDryad
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AfterSexDilemma thank you for your entry

Rew
Fire of Insight
England 16awards
Joined 30th Sep 2022
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The Wisdom of the Supreme Orange

Sold by orders of the old Orange king  
damned the grand canyon becomes a sea of oil,  
as millions puckered up to kiss his ring,  
 
In tattered rags the blews now poor drab things  
thankful for Rouge-Leaders few cents of toil  
sold, by orders of the old Orange king...  
 
As from state rest camps migrant voices sing  
Praise Him, who's smog saved their rations from sun's spoil,  
as millions puckered up to kiss his ring,  
 
(The sky, dark, from slag-heaps fug, still burning,  
smog from coast to coast churns the spoiled earth moils  
sold! by order of the old Orange king!)  
 
As seas rise Antarctica keeps warming  
to a sweet place to drill for gas and oil  
as millions puckered up to kiss his ring,  
 
Now, Rouge-Leaders state " From menses... No school!"  
you read and write, we've no use for more skills,  
you're sat on your fate get used to it, fool...  
 
We'll find suitors for you, just play it cool,  
till we give the nod then go for the kill,  
Now Rouge-Leaders state " from Menses... No school!"  
 
And keep your hand on your Vag, that's our rule  
we'll not allow the use of sheaf or pills,  
you're sat on your fate get used to it fool,  
 
Your body will provide womanly tools  
the schools will just teach about some false will,  
Now, Rouge-Leaders state " From menses... No school!"  
 
You'll get used to work, just like the mule,  
hell, you're women now with wombs to fill,  
you're sat on your fate get used to it fool,  
 
We'll find a guy you'll obey, not too cruel,  
He'll keep you preggers, hell, You'll be fulfilled!  
As Rouge-Leaders state " From menses... No school!"  
You're sat on your fate, get used it fool...  
 
The wisdom of the Supreme Orange decreed  
only registered Rougers can own guns  
and abolished that nasty word of "greed "  
 
So when the Supreme Orange Leader needs  
you must give and give to this Supreme One  
the wisdom of the Supreme Orange decreed  
 
That only the chosen will get taught to read  
You'll not need that, the chore of voting is done!  
And abolished that nasty word of greed  
The wisdom of the Supreme Orange decreed...
Written by Rew
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IDryad
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Thank you Rew for your entry

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
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Drive

From the Walternate Universes  
 
Delta – 2.0
 
I had taken a day off from work
There was a lot to think about, to plan and write
I was home alone with nothing but time
When a familiar portal opened nearby
 
It was my old amigo, my (W)alter ego
Spinning a set of car keys on his index finger
“Bro” I said as we hugged, he smiled and said…
“Let’s go for a drive”
 
The portal led to a barnlike garage
The sight in front of me left me speechless and stirred
As I walked around the car the top automatically came down
A cherry red 1955 Thunderbird
 
“Delta 2.0” he said
“It’s a great balance of the all the worlds I’ve visited”
As he revved the engine he added
“…and this machine, this baby is perfectly clean”
 
I could see the metropolis in the distance
A scenery of greenery and skyscrapers neatly intertwined
The skies were blue feeling the cool autumn air
And with music blasting the road ahead felt sublime
 
He’d been travelling between parallel worlds
Going on vacation, or holiday as some say
But when he came upon this alternate universe
He thought of me and how I’d love to see the bay
 
The drive through the valley was stunning
Rolling hills were green and lush as the car coasted
And upon driving up a mountain we could see
A blue ocean at which then my alternate boasted
 
“Here, in this universe, there is no war
Every person is given an opportunity to live in peace
Every citizen has a right to thrive and with education
They’ve made it into a stunning masterpiece”
 
We stood leaning against the hood of the Thunderbird
Beers in hand watching the ships and boats in the bay
Watching a free world that had fulfilled its potential
“It’s perfect” he said “though I’m not trying to sound cliché”
 
Like old friends we caught up watching the sunset  
Until the device on his wrist beeped “it’s time”
And as the portal opened, I took another look  
At a world so sublime I didn’t want to leave behind…
Written by wallyroo92
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