Poem of the Month June 2023
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Bluevelvete
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Tyrant of Words
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PoetSpeak
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Joined 17th Nov 2013Forum Posts: 169
South
”Growing up Southern is a privilege, really. It’s more than where you’re born, it’s an idea and state of mind that seems imparted at birth. It’s more than loving fried chicken, sweet tea, football, and country music. It’s being hospitable, devoted to front porches, magnolias, moon pies and coca-cola… and each other. We don’t become Southern – we’re born that way.”
Unknown
*
It’s hot
As I sit outside night drawing down
Humid
The damp of perspiration covers me
As the first stars appear
Through the haze, and clouds, and distant contrails
Which mask the deepening blue
A warm breeze idly stirs
And its touch awakens the thought
If only it was more
Its summer in the south
And there’s a depth which hides behind the veneer of day
Like a character at the crossroads
Struggling to find her way
But the freight of the past
Is like a lone train whistle in the night
There’s a deep here to feelings
Poignant beyond the knowing
They just is
Old things are remembered here
Good and bad
Side by side
The south is an old soul set in her ways
Intangible as the scent of honeysuckle and pine
Adamant as the summer’s heat
In drought dry fields
The myth which slew the truth
Though the truth rises again with the dawn
There’s a waiting here
An expectancy here
Amid shuttered mills and sagging mill homes
And urban sprawl of the "new south"
As the lights go out
Of dreams that whisper
There’s yet a final act
The south will rise again
But is it a south that’s ever been?
The cicadas hum in the evening heat
A warm breeze idly stirs
And its touch awakens the thought
If only it was more
Unknown
*
It’s hot
As I sit outside night drawing down
Humid
The damp of perspiration covers me
As the first stars appear
Through the haze, and clouds, and distant contrails
Which mask the deepening blue
A warm breeze idly stirs
And its touch awakens the thought
If only it was more
Its summer in the south
And there’s a depth which hides behind the veneer of day
Like a character at the crossroads
Struggling to find her way
But the freight of the past
Is like a lone train whistle in the night
There’s a deep here to feelings
Poignant beyond the knowing
They just is
Old things are remembered here
Good and bad
Side by side
The south is an old soul set in her ways
Intangible as the scent of honeysuckle and pine
Adamant as the summer’s heat
In drought dry fields
The myth which slew the truth
Though the truth rises again with the dawn
There’s a waiting here
An expectancy here
Amid shuttered mills and sagging mill homes
And urban sprawl of the "new south"
As the lights go out
Of dreams that whisper
There’s yet a final act
The south will rise again
But is it a south that’s ever been?
The cicadas hum in the evening heat
A warm breeze idly stirs
And its touch awakens the thought
If only it was more
Written by AverageJoe
(Average Joe. AJ. Joe)
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PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
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PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 26th May 2022Forum Posts: 339
Queen of Insects...
The walls of this destination are so haunting.
Rejects of society all gather here.
It isn't a prison although it may as well be.
The skittering of insects along the floor.
Agonizing screams each with unique tones.
Banging heads against the door in hopes of release.
My voice is religion everyone adheres to.
Do you want to lick my shoe's heel?
I just might allow it.
Flickering fluorescent lights all along the corridor.
A long list of numbers with names no one cares about.
Except for me.
Of course, I care.
I'm a doctor.
Here to make you feel better.
Do as you're told so you won't get worse.
Don't resist my treatment.
This is for your own good.
Tell me your secrets so I can begin assessing.
Is this place where you hurt the most?
That bitch has got us lined up again.
Who's going to be her plaything tonight?
I hate myself for wanting to be the one.
I hate myself and want to kill myself!
My deteriorating mental state Is her doing.
What did she say?
"Feel better...?"
Money has erased my existence.
No birth certificate just number on a list.
I'm the one who you answer to.
Don't forget you're my responsibility.
Come to me like a moth to a flame.
This black widow is starving.
There's no one by that name.
I swear, so don't look into it.
I'm the queen of this hive.
Caring for insects everyone has no problem squishing...
Rejects of society all gather here.
It isn't a prison although it may as well be.
The skittering of insects along the floor.
Agonizing screams each with unique tones.
Banging heads against the door in hopes of release.
My voice is religion everyone adheres to.
Do you want to lick my shoe's heel?
I just might allow it.
Flickering fluorescent lights all along the corridor.
A long list of numbers with names no one cares about.
Except for me.
Of course, I care.
I'm a doctor.
Here to make you feel better.
Do as you're told so you won't get worse.
Don't resist my treatment.
This is for your own good.
Tell me your secrets so I can begin assessing.
Is this place where you hurt the most?
That bitch has got us lined up again.
Who's going to be her plaything tonight?
I hate myself for wanting to be the one.
I hate myself and want to kill myself!
My deteriorating mental state Is her doing.
What did she say?
"Feel better...?"
Money has erased my existence.
No birth certificate just number on a list.
I'm the one who you answer to.
Don't forget you're my responsibility.
Come to me like a moth to a flame.
This black widow is starving.
There's no one by that name.
I swear, so don't look into it.
I'm the queen of this hive.
Caring for insects everyone has no problem squishing...
Written by O_Blue
(CiRcLeS...)
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david spears
Joined 21st Sep 2011
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david spears
Lost Thinker
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if-then
if there is love in
this world
then why so many
broken hearts,
tears of loneliness,
desperation and
suicides.
if there is hope in
this world
then why so much
bigotry, division,
rage, whole sale
slaughter and war
if there is a God of
this world
then why are we
surrounded by
so many
hells
Written by buddhakitty
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Ahavati
Tams
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Tams
Tyrant of Words
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Stay Humble
We are not the big shots we think we are;
Not kings, Lords, or Magna Carta Barons,
Or any kind of Hollywood star,
Or any constable friendly Karens.
We are poets of The Underground Deep!
We are devoted to elegant verse,
And the craft of it, even as we sleep,
To all things honorable and perverse...
For nothing exists in the day or night
That cannot be improved with our skill,
At graciousness and poetic insight
Mixed with occasional erotic thrill;
That sweet icing on the existence cake
Which has every poet learning to bake!
Not kings, Lords, or Magna Carta Barons,
Or any kind of Hollywood star,
Or any constable friendly Karens.
We are poets of The Underground Deep!
We are devoted to elegant verse,
And the craft of it, even as we sleep,
To all things honorable and perverse...
For nothing exists in the day or night
That cannot be improved with our skill,
At graciousness and poetic insight
Mixed with occasional erotic thrill;
That sweet icing on the existence cake
Which has every poet learning to bake!
Written by MidnightSonneteer
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
LunaGreyhawk, AspergerPoet56, monovox128, Pinkdreams, Northern_Soul, ajay, dimpy, Her, LadyRain, Marks, Kinkpoet, MidnightSonneteer, James_A_Knight, MadameLavender, Betty, Bluevelvete
Thank you to the following members for voting:
LunaGreyhawk, AspergerPoet56, monovox128, Pinkdreams, Northern_Soul, ajay, dimpy, Her, LadyRain, Marks, Kinkpoet, MidnightSonneteer, James_A_Knight, MadameLavender, Betty, Bluevelvete
cold_fusion
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Tyrant of Words
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Congratulations Neves!!!
👏👏👏
👏👏👏
neves
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Twisted Dreamer
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Absolutely thrilled to have received a trophy for poem of the month, thank you to everybody who voted and the entries were beautiful to read. :)
Fishmander
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Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 27th Apr 2022Forum Posts: 10
CONGRATULATIONS
Kinkpoet
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Tyrant of Words
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Congratulations!
Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
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Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 15th Sep 2011Forum Posts: 2808
Definitely congratulations, Neves! Your poem was excellent, and I am happy you won. *Smiles* :)