Self Not Me
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Poetry Contest Description
Use the image for inspiration and paint a self poem while NOT using the words listed.
Best Topic Ever!
Write a poem about yourself.
But follow the rules in terms of the words used.
Do NOT Use..
I
I'm
You
Me
We
Our
Myself
Your
Them
Their
There
Heart
Soul
It's harder than you think!
Poems only
2 Entry limit per profile
3 weeks
Old / New Writes
No collabs
All content accepted
Picture attached for inspiration!
Oh and most importantly have fun!
This comp will be judged by myself and won't go to public vote unless the roof falls on my head.
Enjoy!
crimsin
Unveiling
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Unveiling
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vulgar
down trodden hooker for need's sake
greedily feasting till the void within overshadows dignity
everyday seeking to feed the famine to assuage the hurt
inside the psyche a broken brain is to blame
seeking to understand the divine is implored
admonished to dig deeply and learn from the chains in place
sinking lower into a place of desolation
a surreal mind speaking madness causes poverty
the feeling of oppression is immeasurable
flitting from vice to vice to cure what ills
another day prostituting want, it's disturbing how low one can sink
Written by crimsin
(Unveiling)
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Wow! That's an awesome awesome start Crim!
Thank you so much for starting us off!
Good Of You!
Thank you so much for starting us off!
Good Of You!
robert43041
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How
On the steps
Sitting, musing
Reflecting.
How does one
Get so blown away
So tired of the world
So quickly?
Sitting, musing
Reflecting.
How does one
Get so blown away
So tired of the world
So quickly?
Written by robert43041
(Viking)
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Weak4hissmile
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the.LittlestSP-EXPO
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been traveling in
The deserts of a mind
try desperately
To run through the sand
How frustrating and
sooooooooo degrading the time
wasting away
huh (chuckles)
remember waking up
plastered and stumbling
A full night of gin,
pale sweat and ..... seduction
lit a match burned the whole place
to the fucking ground
In a ghost town paid symphony remember...........
the saying goes
An artist
should create beautiful things
"but
should put nothing
of ones own life into art
The deserts of a mind
try desperately
To run through the sand
How frustrating and
sooooooooo degrading the time
wasting away
huh (chuckles)
remember waking up
plastered and stumbling
A full night of gin,
pale sweat and ..... seduction
lit a match burned the whole place
to the fucking ground
In a ghost town paid symphony remember...........
the saying goes
An artist
should create beautiful things
"but
should put nothing
of ones own life into art
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Joined 24th July 2012Forum Posts: 1257
How
On the steps
Sitting, musing
Reflecting.
How does one
Get so blown away
So tired of the world
So quickly?
Sitting, musing
Reflecting.
How does one
Get so blown away
So tired of the world
So quickly?
Written by robert43041
(Viking)
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Hello Aemilie
Thanks for joining.
Would you read the rule words again. I see you missed some. You could edit it still as long as the final entry is before closing.
Thanks so much
Al
Thanks for joining.
Would you read the rule words again. I see you missed some. You could edit it still as long as the final entry is before closing.
Thanks so much
Al
Weak4hissmile
the.LittlestSP-EXPO
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the.LittlestSP-EXPO
Lost Thinker
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Thank you its my first comp lol ty for allowing me remove the word used
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Every Step an Everest
Climbing slowly
out of hell
fist fighting anxiety
wrestling depression
mid consequential addiction's
Irresistible spell
Compassionate friends
able hands extending
no longer reach down to assist
exclaim in frustration
“this one is not changing”
summarily crossed-off life’s list
Enter the hero
by divine spark driven
filled with stuff of deity
power-lifts to safety
exhausted downtrodden
showing true love’s
unwavering loyalty
Who came to rescue,
supernatural power wielding?
one using inherited strength
from heaven brought nearer.
whose heroic visage
can be seen in the mirror
.
out of hell
fist fighting anxiety
wrestling depression
mid consequential addiction's
Irresistible spell
Compassionate friends
able hands extending
no longer reach down to assist
exclaim in frustration
“this one is not changing”
summarily crossed-off life’s list
Enter the hero
by divine spark driven
filled with stuff of deity
power-lifts to safety
exhausted downtrodden
showing true love’s
unwavering loyalty
Who came to rescue,
supernatural power wielding?
one using inherited strength
from heaven brought nearer.
whose heroic visage
can be seen in the mirror
.
Written by Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Yaaaas!
Oh Goodness! Thank You for joining us GW! Grateful to see your name in the lights!
Blue Skies At You!
Oh Goodness! Thank You for joining us GW! Grateful to see your name in the lights!
Blue Skies At You!
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Whooohooo!
Thanks You for joining us England!
Fantastic to have you here!
Whhhhoooooo!
Thanks You for joining us England!
Fantastic to have you here!
Whhhhoooooo!
Weak4hissmile
the.LittlestSP-EXPO
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the.LittlestSP-EXPO
Lost Thinker
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We isn't aloud but we're is a different word there for it is ok right? I got a message from a user advising to remove it. But isn't finding a loop hole in a word ok lol
robert43041
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With respect: go over the rules. Don't fight them. Work harder on your text.