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Bluevelvete
Published
Today 4:28am
Today 4:28am
bond.
.. He slowly circles, an Alpha stalking his prey, as thoughts plume...
Mmm...the silkiness of her ebony hair,
a heated look of cherished stare.
Flares deep throated growls
that permeate in perfect distinct clear
charging pure, raw sexual, electrified air.
O' those protruding marks of care,
how I do brandish upon alabaster skin of fair
'Tis just a prelude of what's next to share...
Her thoughts, almost visceral.
Darkness is my sanctuary, ...
Mmm...the silkiness of her ebony hair,
a heated look of cherished stare.
Flares deep throated growls
that permeate in perfect distinct clear
charging pure, raw sexual, electrified air.
O' those protruding marks of care,
how I do brandish upon alabaster skin of fair
'Tis just a prelude of what's next to share...
Her thoughts, almost visceral.
Darkness is my sanctuary, ...
#lust
#erotic
#BDSM
#rhyming
#lover
86 reads
12 Comments
TheOralizer
Published
Today 3:14pm
Today 3:14pm
THE PROOF OF LOVE
Does saying
"I love you"
over and over
with a quickly
bought dozen
of roses grabbed
from the roadside
salesperson, PROVE
you love me?
Does having quick,
frequent, and amazing
sex after which you
fall asleep,PROVE
you love me?
Does always being right,
winning every argument
prove you love me?
After you abuse me
and apologize and say
you'll never do it again,
PROVE you love me?
Do we BOTH have
the same definition and
understanding of what
real love it.
Let's ask the jury?
"I love you"
over and over
with a quickly
bought dozen
of roses grabbed
from the roadside
salesperson, PROVE
you love me?
Does having quick,
frequent, and amazing
sex after which you
fall asleep,PROVE
you love me?
Does always being right,
winning every argument
prove you love me?
After you abuse me
and apologize and say
you'll never do it again,
PROVE you love me?
Do we BOTH have
the same definition and
understanding of what
real love it.
Let's ask the jury?
#love
#kindness
#strength
#hope
#emotions
8 reads
0 Comments
Honoria
Published
24th Feb 2021 4:57am
24th Feb 2021 4:57am
The Fudgeler
Day in
And day out
He would work with a smirk.
The stain on his chair-
The mess on his desk,
A ruse to amuse
And just plain grotesque.
His work, under siege
Could leave no response.
With no-blesse disoblige
And great nonchalance.
One day I did notice
His head was a’ slack,
His eyes were shut tight
And his chair reclined back.
Even less was his yield,
I approached madly and swore
I heard a loud belch, and then a soft snore.
As I poked him he startled
and like a...
And day out
He would work with a smirk.
The stain on his chair-
The mess on his desk,
A ruse to amuse
And just plain grotesque.
His work, under siege
Could leave no response.
With no-blesse disoblige
And great nonchalance.
One day I did notice
His head was a’ slack,
His eyes were shut tight
And his chair reclined back.
Even less was his yield,
I approached madly and swore
I heard a loud belch, and then a soft snore.
As I poked him he startled
and like a...
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
76 reads
39 Comments
KristinaX
Published
Yesterday 8:00pm
Yesterday 8:00pm
To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
Trome, I offer you my hand and heart
In other words, I give up and you do too
Finally, we nevertheless dared to anyway
To enter into a marriage union
We will arrange everything right away
I'm very exciting and very pretty
Not sure you can handle me yet
But now you are in my Captivity
And to what has been proposed, add
UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Look at My Diagnosis, you will see
Crazy, stubborn, insatiable, strange
Peculiar, deviant, depraved, sarcastic
Don't...
In other words, I give up and you do too
Finally, we nevertheless dared to anyway
To enter into a marriage union
We will arrange everything right away
I'm very exciting and very pretty
Not sure you can handle me yet
But now you are in my Captivity
And to what has been proposed, add
UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Look at My Diagnosis, you will see
Crazy, stubborn, insatiable, strange
Peculiar, deviant, depraved, sarcastic
Don't...
#marriage
#breakup
#WritingPoetry
#admiration
#respect
50 reads
16 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Published
Yesterday 9:53pm
Yesterday 9:53pm
Drill exercice
#happiness
#love
55 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Published
Today 12:54pm
Today 12:54pm
Depression is my Lover
Sick
Twisted
Bent
Depraved
Lost
Beauty
Depression
BDSM
Self
Turned
Inward
Bleak
Anxious
Postmodern
Antidepressants
Chained
Hope
Twisted
Bent
Depraved
Lost
Beauty
Depression
BDSM
Self
Turned
Inward
Bleak
Anxious
Postmodern
Antidepressants
Chained
Hope
#depression
#dark
#apathy
9 reads
0 Comments
Ljdynamic
Published
Yesterday 9:37am
Yesterday 9:37am
The Same Stanza
Loudly voicing my growth as a writer;
stanzas, styles, sweet rhymes that narrate tighter.
Intricately noosing words together.
Do not choke, sit, write, use the pen feather.
Feet placed on a chair, ready for defame.
Words put together are never the same.
Are the same words never put together?
Words put are never the same together.
The same words put together never are.
Arrange those words to beautify my scars;
show current wounds bleeding words of wisdom.
Recapture...
stanzas, styles, sweet rhymes that narrate tighter.
Intricately noosing words together.
Do not choke, sit, write, use the pen feather.
Feet placed on a chair, ready for defame.
Words put together are never the same.
Are the same words never put together?
Words put are never the same together.
The same words put together never are.
Arrange those words to beautify my scars;
show current wounds bleeding words of wisdom.
Recapture...
#inspirational
#rhyming
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
26 reads
19 Comments
Phantom2426
Published
Yesterday 4:46am
Yesterday 4:46am
Naughty Salute
She's wearing the
Heart of the Ocean
around her neck
for she's the gem of
my heart who needs
to be loved with
my might because
it's my destiny to
make her heart
melt like butter
which is pleasing
her and giving me
a naughty salute
for her pleasure
Heart of the Ocean
around her neck
for she's the gem of
my heart who needs
to be loved with
my might because
it's my destiny to
make her heart
melt like butter
which is pleasing
her and giving me
a naughty salute
for her pleasure
#love
#women
#men
#erotic
#dirty
54 reads
4 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Snaggy
Snaggy
Published
27th Feb 2021 8:00pm
27th Feb 2021 8:00pm
The Ever Growing Tree
Verse 1:
What is it we're searching for,
That goal we never quite reach?
While all the while life's movin' on,
I get behind and put upon.
Why do we have to grow old and die?
Where I'm content where I lie.
This live and die, it's not for me,
I don't want it, can't you see!
I'm not happy in the now,
Knowing time's fading away somehow.
Verse 2:
Looking back, I had the knack,
No problems or responsibilities.
Every day was full of fun,
But only on reflection.
Lately I have come undone,
Looking...
What is it we're searching for,
That goal we never quite reach?
While all the while life's movin' on,
I get behind and put upon.
Why do we have to grow old and die?
Where I'm content where I lie.
This live and die, it's not for me,
I don't want it, can't you see!
I'm not happy in the now,
Knowing time's fading away somehow.
Verse 2:
Looking back, I had the knack,
No problems or responsibilities.
Every day was full of fun,
But only on reflection.
Lately I have come undone,
Looking...
#anxiety
#LifeGoals
#learning
#disappointment
#wisdom
29 reads
11 Comments
wallyroo92
Published
Yesterday 3:34am
Yesterday 3:34am
Deserted Travels and Adventures
This is the place where memories
of travels and adventures come to rest
Where old and forgotten things
are left in the sun before they’re compressed
Here they collect dirt and dust
as scavengers come to pull them apart
Looking through the endless isles
searching for pieces for a new start
You can almost hear ghostly echoes
as the wind blows through the desolate rows
A close and near past that didn’t last
is pressed and imprinted on greasy clothes
When I walk through the lonely yard
...
of travels and adventures come to rest
Where old and forgotten things
are left in the sun before they’re compressed
Here they collect dirt and dust
as scavengers come to pull them apart
Looking through the endless isles
searching for pieces for a new start
You can almost hear ghostly echoes
as the wind blows through the desolate rows
A close and near past that didn’t last
is pressed and imprinted on greasy clothes
When I walk through the lonely yard
...
#death
#LifeAsAWriter
#memories #nostalgia
#memories #nostalgia
10 reads
3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Published
Today 2:56am
Today 2:56am
I'll Keep Holding On
Turning the beautiful wheels of time
When the minds and the hearts are so aligned
A feeling that coursing through my veins
The passport to my soul as you glimpsed into my windowpane
Admiring echoes on the tip of my lips when you say my name
So many times, the uncertainty I felt, yet you pushed me on
Told me, time waits for no one, this is the time to make life my own song
Planning futures laying over your chest
Inhaling thoughts, the, petrified of the uncertainty trying to retain frightened breathes
The pillar of comforts for me
Sweet...
When the minds and the hearts are so aligned
A feeling that coursing through my veins
The passport to my soul as you glimpsed into my windowpane
Admiring echoes on the tip of my lips when you say my name
So many times, the uncertainty I felt, yet you pushed me on
Told me, time waits for no one, this is the time to make life my own song
Planning futures laying over your chest
Inhaling thoughts, the, petrified of the uncertainty trying to retain frightened breathes
The pillar of comforts for me
Sweet...
#courage
#inspirational
#determination #college
#determination #college
19 reads
3 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Published
Today 8:42am
Today 8:42am
Throbbing, soaking wet
#erotic
#dreams
#sensual
43 reads
3 Comments
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