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Poems written by Top Critiquers
Phantom2426
Published
Today 4:09am
Today 4:09am
Giving It Up To You (10-29-07)
Love me like there's no tomorrow
is making my soul shiver
For the love you give me
makes me want you more
Though I want more
My body needs rest
So come back the next day
I will give my body to you.
is making my soul shiver
For the love you give me
makes me want you more
Though I want more
My body needs rest
So come back the next day
I will give my body to you.
#love
#women
#men
#sex
#sensual
51 reads
9 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Published
Today 2:39am
Today 2:39am
Mm... Make Me Softly Purr
#lust
#passion
95 reads
23 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Published
Today 6:30pm
Today 6:30pm
No clue
#happiness
#love
#hope
#respect
#emotions
34 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Published
24th Sep 2020 6:51pm
24th Sep 2020 6:51pm
Perspective
There are never adequate words
to describe the loss of a child—
that is what you must realize
when extending sympathies
Each child is individual, unique
in their own respective existence;
there is an emptiness regardless
of how many siblings remain
Things not to say to a mother
grieving the death of her child:
"At least you have more children"
"At least you have the other twin"
"Did he just die, or commit suicide?"
"At least you had years with him;
some lose them at birth, ...
to describe the loss of a child—
that is what you must realize
when extending sympathies
Each child is individual, unique
in their own respective existence;
there is an emptiness regardless
of how many siblings remain
Things not to say to a mother
grieving the death of her child:
"At least you have more children"
"At least you have the other twin"
"Did he just die, or commit suicide?"
"At least you had years with him;
some lose them at birth, ...
#grief
#mother
#children
#family
#death
158 reads
56 Comments
Bluevelvete
Published
Today 1:04am
Today 1:04am
Game 5
Tonight could be the night
After such an arduous fight
That Lord Stanley
gives it up
&
The Tampa Bay Lightning
WIN
The sought after
Stanley Cup
⚡ 💙 ⚡ 💙 ⚡
.
After such an arduous fight
That Lord Stanley
gives it up
&
The Tampa Bay Lightning
WIN
The sought after
Stanley Cup
⚡ 💙 ⚡ 💙 ⚡
.
#strength
#hope
#sports #determination
#sports #determination
46 reads
13 Comments
faithmairee
Published
20th Sep 2020 6:32pm
20th Sep 2020 6:32pm
No Point
I've often wondered
if the point really is
that there is no point.
Have you?
Sometimes life
is hard.
if the point really is
that there is no point.
Have you?
Sometimes life
is hard.
#LifeStruggles
54 reads
10 Comments
Honoria
Published
22nd Sep 2020 3:15am
22nd Sep 2020 3:15am
Suffocation of Marriage
So desperate to please you,
quantity over quality, fearing loss,
sensual in thought but,
more mechanical in reality
the love is still there
where passion is not.
Your spirit’s essence
creates imagined warmth.
For as much as I long for your company,
I’m relieved when we part.
The mental jenga which
wreaks havoc in mind and body,
leaves anguished sentence fragments
when we attempt to reconcile.
What was once unified,
was singularly envisaged
I felt free...
quantity over quality, fearing loss,
sensual in thought but,
more mechanical in reality
the love is still there
where passion is not.
Your spirit’s essence
creates imagined warmth.
For as much as I long for your company,
I’m relieved when we part.
The mental jenga which
wreaks havoc in mind and body,
leaves anguished sentence fragments
when we attempt to reconcile.
What was once unified,
was singularly envisaged
I felt free...
#AliceFulton
112 reads
29 Comments
NewBeginnings
Published
Today 8:48pm
Today 8:48pm
Wildfire
Visual Entry
#love
#passion
#emotions #fear
#emotions #fear
15 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Published
Today 12:02pm
Today 12:02pm
The older woman
The older woman
Standing there stark naked, where do i put my hands, no idea what to do but at least my penis stands
She walks across the bedroom and she took me by the hand, she leads me over to the bed, I'm going to the promised land
She slips off her clothing, such beauty I've never seen, no staples in her tummy like the girls in magazines
She is real, her skin is warm, I'm desperate for a touch, i dont want to get this wrong, i don't want to try to much
But she takes a leading role, she puts my hand upon her tit, i freeze for what...
Standing there stark naked, where do i put my hands, no idea what to do but at least my penis stands
She walks across the bedroom and she took me by the hand, she leads me over to the bed, I'm going to the promised land
She slips off her clothing, such beauty I've never seen, no staples in her tummy like the girls in magazines
She is real, her skin is warm, I'm desperate for a touch, i dont want to get this wrong, i don't want to try to much
But she takes a leading role, she puts my hand upon her tit, i freeze for what...
#sex
#erotic
42 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
Published
Today 1:46pm
Today 1:46pm
IF YOU HAVE NO CLUE
Here I am as a woman as I fight back the tears from falling from my eyes, as they fall from the depth and deepness of my heart exposing the mere truth of my hurt and pain. For you promise me that you weren't like all the others men's I had within my life, but yet I've come to realize that it was all nothing more than lies as you broke my heart in two. As you tried to convince me that what you were giving me was love, when in fact it wasn't really love at all just another knot upon your belt. For you never truly understood what it means to love someone unconditionally with honor and respect....
#sadness
#grief
#heartbroken
#disappointment
#emptiness
23 reads
2 Comments
SweetOblivion
Published
22nd Sep 2020 6:37am
22nd Sep 2020 6:37am
City Streets
#anxiety
#love
#support
133 reads
15 Comments
TheOralizer
Published
19th Sep 2020 3:15pm
19th Sep 2020 3:15pm
I LOVE THE TASTE OF YOUR KISSES
THE PROOF IS IN THE TASTE
Princess, I love the taste
of your sweet lips
as they gently, with passion,
cause my heart rhythm skips.
I love the softness
and taste of your tongue
as it ignites dueling passion
as all night kissing is begun.
I love to see your eyes
gently close as I hold your body
closer than my skin
as we kiss over and over again.
Oh, I taste you in my dream
and long for you when I awake
Oh, my beautiful Princess,
please kiss me for heaven's sake.
I AM HUNGRY TO TASTE YOU.
Princess, I love the taste
of your sweet lips
as they gently, with passion,
cause my heart rhythm skips.
I love the softness
and taste of your tongue
as it ignites dueling passion
as all night kissing is begun.
I love to see your eyes
gently close as I hold your body
closer than my skin
as we kiss over and over again.
Oh, I taste you in my dream
and long for you when I awake
Oh, my beautiful Princess,
please kiss me for heaven's sake.
I AM HUNGRY TO TASTE YOU.
#happiness
#relationships
#romantic
#honesty
#obsession
132 reads
4 Comments
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