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PoetSpeak
Published
Yesterday 4:10pm
Yesterday 4:10pm
Voyeur in the Darkness
No story
Just watch your step
I'm out there on the perimeter
Voyeur in the darkness
Know when your turn your lights out
Soft glow
Female curvature
I'm by your window
Dark clothes
You know I'm there
Quiet, peering in, whisper
You want to let me in
You're excited but scared
You tease me relentlessly
Hands on breasts
Twisting nipples
Fingers moving to your slit
Spreading lips
Wet mecca
My breath fogging your window
What should she do ?
Just watch your step
I'm out there on the perimeter
Voyeur in the darkness
Know when your turn your lights out
Soft glow
Female curvature
I'm by your window
Dark clothes
You know I'm there
Quiet, peering in, whisper
You want to let me in
You're excited but scared
You tease me relentlessly
Hands on breasts
Twisting nipples
Fingers moving to your slit
Spreading lips
Wet mecca
My breath fogging your window
What should she do ?
#dark
#erotic
#temptation
#risk
#ThrillSeeking
68 reads
8 Comments
KristinaX
Published
29th Nov 2022 1:00am
29th Nov 2022 1:00am
Crying
you don't see my tears
somehow you know anyway
that I am crying
somehow you know anyway
that I am crying
#sadness
#mother
#illness
#senryu
#suffering
135 reads
wallyroo92
Published
24th Nov 2022 10:11am
24th Nov 2022 10:11am
Stargazers in Awe
There is a nostalgia in her eyes
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
#love
#universe
#stars
86 reads
2 Comments
Honoria
Published
20th Nov 2022 5:54am
20th Nov 2022 5:54am
The Clock and The Ferryman
What price will i pay
As the Ferryman rows
He accepts my coin
my purse feels light
i am apportioned
my number of minutes
How did i use them
i won’t be spared
The greatest equalizer
Row Ferryman, row
The clock advances
The ticking seems louder
Am i afraid?
Only, for whom i’ve offended
As the Ferryman rows
He accepts my coin
my purse feels light
i am apportioned
my number of minutes
How did i use them
i won’t be spared
The greatest equalizer
Row Ferryman, row
The clock advances
The ticking seems louder
Am i afraid?
Only, for whom i’ve offended
#death
#SelfReflection
164 reads
36 Comments
moroccanpoet
Published
Today 12:17pm
Today 12:17pm
Want to want
#lust
#sex
#dirty
#passion
#seductive
5 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Published
27th Nov 2022 1:42pm
27th Nov 2022 1:42pm
UNDER THE INFLUENCE
#sex
#alcohol
#rhyming
76 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Published
Today 1:36am
Today 1:36am
lust becomes me
I'm in awe of you
let me tell you what I feel...
with an intellect razor sharp
masculine truths hold me accountable
in my need i crave
you growl, wait
I need
the boundaries are set and yes I know them
I test you to see if you are rigid
but you remain in control
and let me tell you I rattle most
discipline is given if I cross your soul
I am admonished to be honest with you
to tell you my honesties
I hurt in truth
my ache is real
I hunger for you
I taste you inside me
I...
let me tell you what I feel...
with an intellect razor sharp
masculine truths hold me accountable
in my need i crave
you growl, wait
I need
the boundaries are set and yes I know them
I test you to see if you are rigid
but you remain in control
and let me tell you I rattle most
discipline is given if I cross your soul
I am admonished to be honest with you
to tell you my honesties
I hurt in truth
my ache is real
I hunger for you
I taste you inside me
I...
#lust
47 reads
0 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Snaggy
Snaggy
Published
2nd Dec 2022 7:22pm
2nd Dec 2022 7:22pm
The Poet Plagiariser
(Billy Snagg / Hemi / Lightnin' Ray)
You may call me the poet plagiariser,
I'm stealing lines but you're none the wiser!
I will excite you with some words of passion,
And delight you with my sense of fashion!
I'll ride on their coattails while sippin' your cocktails,
And may even drop in on the recording sessions.
You'll find me penning some words of love,
Though I may be strugglin', init, bruv!
I don't need X-Factor exposing my talent.
When Simon says JUMP! I'm stayin' silent,
But still marching forward all the same - ...
You may call me the poet plagiariser,
I'm stealing lines but you're none the wiser!
I will excite you with some words of passion,
And delight you with my sense of fashion!
I'll ride on their coattails while sippin' your cocktails,
And may even drop in on the recording sessions.
You'll find me penning some words of love,
Though I may be strugglin', init, bruv!
I don't need X-Factor exposing my talent.
When Simon says JUMP! I'm stayin' silent,
But still marching forward all the same - ...
#curse
52 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Published
2nd Dec 2022 3:42am
2nd Dec 2022 3:42am
Poinsettia Red Lipstick
As the festive wind howls its cheer
For the upcoming Christmas Year
I always light a candlestick
To a time of Poinsettia Red Lipstick
When my Abuela would sit and sew me
Dresses on her singer sewing machine
With smoke threading the holiday air
By a single abandoned cigarette
Stub wedged into the slot
Of her black acrylic ashtray
Decorated with red halo rings
Of mini Poinsettia wreaths
My home now adorned with
Embracing hugging presents
Each vibrant plant display
Her essence and presence...
For the upcoming Christmas Year
I always light a candlestick
To a time of Poinsettia Red Lipstick
When my Abuela would sit and sew me
Dresses on her singer sewing machine
With smoke threading the holiday air
By a single abandoned cigarette
Stub wedged into the slot
Of her black acrylic ashtray
Decorated with red halo rings
Of mini Poinsettia wreaths
My home now adorned with
Embracing hugging presents
Each vibrant plant display
Her essence and presence...
#death
#holiday
#memories
86 reads
27 Comments
Phantom2426
Published
19th Aug 2022 5:43am
19th Aug 2022 5:43am
Dark Angels
Darks Angels are coming
to help us
fight the devil's forces
because we have
been treating the
Earth as our toilet
Now we fight to
clean up the Earth
to destroy the
Devil's Forces but it's
very difficult cause
they are very hot
women that are
trying to lead us
into their sin
to help us
fight the devil's forces
because we have
been treating the
Earth as our toilet
Now we fight to
clean up the Earth
to destroy the
Devil's Forces but it's
very difficult cause
they are very hot
women that are
trying to lead us
into their sin
#dark
#women
#men
#angels
#temptation
255 reads
14 Comments
Styxian
Published
Yesterday 2:35am
Yesterday 2:35am
Dash
There's a hummingbird in my heart
Yet I'm a tired tree
It won't remain there, I fear
too long.
That rapid flutter I feel
shakes Winter off my limbs
A cold sun takes notice
-Will point the bird
in another direction
Will offer it fresh nectar
as I clasp my wound closed
and cherish the momentum
of what was, even in brevity.
For this while;
Place your shoes upon my ribs
so that others will know
inside is taken.
I need more friends, quickly
Just so I can introduce you ...
Yet I'm a tired tree
It won't remain there, I fear
too long.
That rapid flutter I feel
shakes Winter off my limbs
A cold sun takes notice
-Will point the bird
in another direction
Will offer it fresh nectar
as I clasp my wound closed
and cherish the momentum
of what was, even in brevity.
For this while;
Place your shoes upon my ribs
so that others will know
inside is taken.
I need more friends, quickly
Just so I can introduce you ...
#happiness
#inspirational
#admiration
73 reads
SweetKittyCat5
Published
Yesterday 11:50pm
Yesterday 11:50pm
Mm.. Loving Me In the Mist Of Night
#lover
#sensual
#passion #seductive
#passion #seductive
42 reads
4 Comments
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