All Poems by Top Critiquers
The latest poetry and short stories posted on DU Poetry. written by the DU Poetry top critiquers
(members who have given lots of useful comments to other poets this month)
Ahavati
Published
1st Apr 2018 9:51pm
1st Apr 2018 9:51pm
Anatomy of Loss: NapoWriMo 2018 Collection
Prelude
The Known Unknown:
a subconscious Being residing
amid our Living waters;
an under-pulse within reach
of understanding
Its indecipherable meaning
barely beyond explainable feeling
neonatal in our inked pens
gestating awareness
An unconscious Light Source
awakening revelation...
The Known Unknown:
a subconscious Being residing
amid our Living waters;
an under-pulse within reach
of understanding
Its indecipherable meaning
barely beyond explainable feeling
neonatal in our inked pens
gestating awareness
An unconscious Light Source
awakening revelation...
#universe
#NaPoWriMo2018
#humankind #WritingPoetry
#humankind #WritingPoetry
223 reads
70 Comments
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
jade tiger
Published
Today 9:35am
Today 9:35am
Empty Bowl
Strength does not come from winning. Your struggles develop your strengths. When you go through hardships and decide not to surrender, that is strength.”
When I’d been diagnosed,
It was the first string of
Medical jab & sting
Over the years
In longer worms
Of consequences
From that first recognition.
But it was the first one, as it
Fled the doctor's lips
Like a gypsy moth.
His stolen words,
Crude & mute,
That flew in my ear
With rice flour wings.
Before then, I was immortal,
Afraid of nothing nada nil. ...
When I’d been diagnosed,
It was the first string of
Medical jab & sting
Over the years
In longer worms
Of consequences
From that first recognition.
But it was the first one, as it
Fled the doctor's lips
Like a gypsy moth.
His stolen words,
Crude & mute,
That flew in my ear
With rice flour wings.
Before then, I was immortal,
Afraid of nothing nada nil. ...
#NaPoWriMo2018
#illness
#SelfReflection
15 reads
3 Comments
Blackwolf
Published
Yesterday 11:45am
Yesterday 11:45am
Warding Spell
Psychic Wards And Egregore ,
Protect Me House From Dark Spirits Foray ;
I Wish Them Well As Other Kin ,
Yet Me House They Are Not Welcome In ,
Not In Me Circle , Not In Me Space ,
I Wish Them Well To Another Place ;
I Charge Thee With This Sacred Task ,
Be Me Guardians , This I Ask ,
Protect Me House From Invasion ,
If Any Come , Stand Your Station ,
By The Power Of Three Times Three ,
With Astral Force , Do I Charge Thee !"
Protect Me House From Dark Spirits Foray ;
I Wish Them Well As Other Kin ,
Yet Me House They Are Not Welcome In ,
Not In Me Circle , Not In Me Space ,
I Wish Them Well To Another Place ;
I Charge Thee With This Sacred Task ,
Be Me Guardians , This I Ask ,
Protect Me House From Invasion ,
If Any Come , Stand Your Station ,
By The Power Of Three Times Three ,
With Astral Force , Do I Charge Thee !"
#pagan
#magic
28 reads
4 Comments
JusTim_
Published
Today 2:04pm
Today 2:04pm
Whore
I slept
then I slept some more
dreaming of being your whore
a kept man chained to your wall
released only for your passionate chores
I will not weep nor beg or succeed
I will pillage and mangle
attacking each need
and when you want more
this little ol whore
will excitingly feed
on your graces with greed
then I slept some more
dreaming of being your whore
a kept man chained to your wall
released only for your passionate chores
I will not weep nor beg or succeed
I will pillage and mangle
attacking each need
and when you want more
this little ol whore
will excitingly feed
on your graces with greed
#lust
16 reads
4 Comments
DanielChristensen
Published
Today 4:59am
Today 4:59am
Untitled it's not a riddle if you listen
Eta Carinae,
I want to remember.
If you listen, you can hear everything, arms raised to the sun, which extends fingers downward.
Her phantom draws a brushstroke of breath at the nape of my neck. She licks her thumb before folding a crease between then and after, subtly changing skins.
I feel you. My heart is awake. You never hid from me.
I would keep her close with a name, but a name cannot catch her.
Lennon knew genius is pain. I hurt for her, another of many I couldn't save. She suffered long before I came, carrying a bouquet of deaths.
A coal flame blazes...
I want to remember.
If you listen, you can hear everything, arms raised to the sun, which extends fingers downward.
Her phantom draws a brushstroke of breath at the nape of my neck. She licks her thumb before folding a crease between then and after, subtly changing skins.
I feel you. My heart is awake. You never hid from me.
I would keep her close with a name, but a name cannot catch her.
Lennon knew genius is pain. I hurt for her, another of many I couldn't save. She suffered long before I came, carrying a bouquet of deaths.
A coal flame blazes...
#love
20 reads
3 Comments
AEMelia564
Y
Y
Published
Yesterday 7:47am
Yesterday 7:47am
Kismet
Adorn me
Drape these scents
Liquid lunar longing
Transparant tissue
Initiates us
These searching hands
Palm pressing
Your face
While in this space
Of one heartbeat
We breathe eachother in
Magnetising lips
Open towards eachother
Velvet venusian entagled
Circle sets in motion
Tasting
Warm river
Streams
Rotating tongues
Chalice of your chest
Enticing rippled
Breath
Till
Sun sets
#lover
66 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Published
Yesterday 4:04pm
Yesterday 4:04pm
No Sex Please, Massage Parlor if I'm Desperate, $120 Minimum Here, Better off Wanking your own Pony
Men need sex
We're grouchy and useless without it
Relationships are hard
Robots still new and not gritty enough yet
Artificial Intelligence is a con
Like fake sugar substitutes
Better off sucking on sugar cubes
Real deal, no cancer chemicals that kill rats in tests
If I want grab and go sex
No happy ending massage for me
Save the green
Stuff it in your Roth IRA
60 seconds of porn
Jack my own donkey
Mental sex is best sex
Don't get any on you
No wet spots either
Win Win
We're grouchy and useless without it
Relationships are hard
Robots still new and not gritty enough yet
Artificial Intelligence is a con
Like fake sugar substitutes
Better off sucking on sugar cubes
Real deal, no cancer chemicals that kill rats in tests
If I want grab and go sex
No happy ending massage for me
Save the green
Stuff it in your Roth IRA
60 seconds of porn
Jack my own donkey
Mental sex is best sex
Don't get any on you
No wet spots either
Win Win
#lust
40 reads
10 Comments
samael
Published
Today 3:13pm
Today 3:13pm
Coster shops at Knoxville
Could i bother you for a father?
run run the rails
up into Virginia,to parked Bristol motel rooms.
run run the rails into bourbon soaked Kentucky,
back in the wooded hollers.
ringing in the gravel,
the lead seeped train yards.
is it Norfolk?
two white bay mare steeds besting each other,
burning black as coal into the night.
thoroughbred,
content on cutting through the winds old ways.
drifting through the days at dusk,
as detaching as train cars,
but cabooses cease to...
run run the rails
up into Virginia,to parked Bristol motel rooms.
run run the rails into bourbon soaked Kentucky,
back in the wooded hollers.
ringing in the gravel,
the lead seeped train yards.
is it Norfolk?
two white bay mare steeds besting each other,
burning black as coal into the night.
thoroughbred,
content on cutting through the winds old ways.
drifting through the days at dusk,
as detaching as train cars,
but cabooses cease to...
#family
#death
#fate #aging
#fate #aging
1 read
0 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Published
Yesterday 9:28pm
Yesterday 9:28pm
Nirvana
Drinking in your passion
Is nirvana
Like a piranha
I wanna devour you
Shower you
With ecstasy
Your sexiness
Begs my sperm exodus
With an effortless
Flow of words
Your love infers
Loss I incur
When I’m without you
I don’t doubt you
Love me too
I’m just confessin’
My love for you
Your flesh
Is best
When undressed
Caressed
And tasted
Your love
Is not wasted
On me
It’s clear to me
That ecstasy
Exists for me
Because you generously ...
Is nirvana
Like a piranha
I wanna devour you
Shower you
With ecstasy
Your sexiness
Begs my sperm exodus
With an effortless
Flow of words
Your love infers
Loss I incur
When I’m without you
I don’t doubt you
Love me too
I’m just confessin’
My love for you
Your flesh
Is best
When undressed
Caressed
And tasted
Your love
Is not wasted
On me
It’s clear to me
That ecstasy
Exists for me
Because you generously ...
#sex
#erotic
#lover
55 reads
14 Comments
Shadow_Dancer
Published
12th Apr 2018 11:37pm
12th Apr 2018 11:37pm
Aries...
First Sign of the Zodiac March 21st-April 19th~depending on the year~
Created among Mars icy canyons a fiery flame of white-hot heat sparked Aries into existence
My aggressiveness
my domineering airs my very essence whispers to one and all seek tolerance seek patience
for my worth depends upon it
Infused by birthright with fights inner battle cry a mighty and fierce warrior most noble and true charges leading all into the calamitous fray of blood soaked battlefields
Creations first Zodiac Alpha you can...
Created among Mars icy canyons a fiery flame of white-hot heat sparked Aries into existence
My aggressiveness
my domineering airs my very essence whispers to one and all seek tolerance seek patience
for my worth depends upon it
Infused by birthright with fights inner battle cry a mighty and fierce warrior most noble and true charges leading all into the calamitous fray of blood soaked battlefields
Creations first Zodiac Alpha you can...
#universe
#fire
#astrology
11 reads
9 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Published
15th Apr 2018 4:21am
15th Apr 2018 4:21am
Thug Hard Pussy Rider
#sex
#erotic
#porn
325 reads
15 Comments
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