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Bluevelvete
Published
Today 7:26am
Today 7:26am
petal.
silken images flurry
soft wispy stragglers
how they sway a dance
fluttering tendrils seeded
of a passionate storied romance
hints of dewy skin
taunt to slowly bead
lazily drip
into a scrumptious
purpose driven need
breathless lips
that pouted grin
show a small trace
of a beguiling
devilishly smiling sin
tasting deep
those promises of silent screams
like fervent hushed allows
mouth 'pon mouth
sweet ambrosia laced growls
strong...
soft wispy stragglers
how they sway a dance
fluttering tendrils seeded
of a passionate storied romance
hints of dewy skin
taunt to slowly bead
lazily drip
into a scrumptious
purpose driven need
breathless lips
that pouted grin
show a small trace
of a beguiling
devilishly smiling sin
tasting deep
those promises of silent screams
like fervent hushed allows
mouth 'pon mouth
sweet ambrosia laced growls
strong...
#erotic
#flowers
#rose
#rhyming
#sensual
35 reads
7 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Published
Yesterday 9:22pm
Yesterday 9:22pm
Mm.. Oh So Soft To Keep Me Moist And Wet
#lust
#sex
#erotic
#dirty
#passion
89 reads
3 Comments
TheOralizer
Published
Yesterday 2:49pm
Yesterday 2:49pm
THINGS I WONDER ABOUT
THINKING.
I have always been curious
about a "101" things, no
really "1001" things.
I wonder...
do birds retire
or cease from flying?
I wonder ...
do fish quit swimming
on a certain birthday?
I wonder...
do eagles land
and stay on earth?
I wonder...
does the sun ever
get tired of rising?
I wonder...
where does love go
when it leaves the heart?
I wonder...
do dogs ever get tired
of chasing cats?
I wonder...
where does the wind go
to rest from blowing?
I wonder... ...
I have always been curious
about a "101" things, no
really "1001" things.
I wonder...
do birds retire
or cease from flying?
I wonder ...
do fish quit swimming
on a certain birthday?
I wonder...
do eagles land
and stay on earth?
I wonder...
does the sun ever
get tired of rising?
I wonder...
where does love go
when it leaves the heart?
I wonder...
do dogs ever get tired
of chasing cats?
I wonder...
where does the wind go
to rest from blowing?
I wonder... ...
#happiness
#strength
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
20 reads
5 Comments
Honoria
Published
11th May 2021 5:39am
11th May 2021 5:39am
What’s In A Name? Glad You Asked.
Had I the option of selection,
This four syllable monstrosity-
would’ve been a single
diphthong!
Having no choice in the matter,
there is no point in lamentation.
Astonishingly only my family
poked fun at rhyming my
name with a venereal disease.
Fear not!
For I am not damaged
by the unmerciful teasing at the
hands of my wretched siblings.
When they weren’t looking I took
gleeful delight in hiding their toys,
or tossing them out.
Growing into my name I felt it
my duty and...
This four syllable monstrosity-
would’ve been a single
diphthong!
Having no choice in the matter,
there is no point in lamentation.
Astonishingly only my family
poked fun at rhyming my
name with a venereal disease.
Fear not!
For I am not damaged
by the unmerciful teasing at the
hands of my wretched siblings.
When they weren’t looking I took
gleeful delight in hiding their toys,
or tossing them out.
Growing into my name I felt it
my duty and...
#SelfReflection
48 reads
23 Comments
Ahavati
Published
9th May 2021 12:31pm
9th May 2021 12:31pm
As they say. . .
A company recently contacted me
about my long-standing account;
We’re so sorry, Tammy!
Our mainframe crashed
and we've lost your history. . .
'We've lost your history. . .'
I thought about that
for a moment, but wasn't angry
Maybe some things need to be lost:
Grief. Bad choices. A virus.
Imagine the chance for a reset—
to lose all that history at once
Replace it
with what brings happiness:
Family. Friends. Health.
Animals. Two jobs I really love;
though I feel one is a gift
A...
about my long-standing account;
We’re so sorry, Tammy!
Our mainframe crashed
and we've lost your history. . .
'We've lost your history. . .'
I thought about that
for a moment, but wasn't angry
Maybe some things need to be lost:
Grief. Bad choices. A virus.
Imagine the chance for a reset—
to lose all that history at once
Replace it
with what brings happiness:
Family. Friends. Health.
Animals. Two jobs I really love;
though I feel one is a gift
A...
#SelfReflection
#meditation
#philosophical
66 reads
29 Comments
Phantom2426
Published
6th May 2021 3:37am
6th May 2021 3:37am
Heart of Butter
You share your life
with her and you
communicate with her
while watching her
Heart melt like Butter
Because you listening
Driving her emotions
Insane because
your hearts are
becoming one
with each other
Letting your emotions
run completely wild
with passion
with her and you
communicate with her
while watching her
Heart melt like Butter
Because you listening
Driving her emotions
Insane because
your hearts are
becoming one
with each other
Letting your emotions
run completely wild
with passion
#love
#women
#men
#sensual
#passion
41 reads
8 Comments
PoetSpeak
Published
Yesterday 9:00pm
Yesterday 9:00pm
Black Swans Night Call with KristinaX
Push me tightly into the walls,
With a jerk, steal my breath
I feel the veins tremble,
With you dominating my mind
I haven't been forceful enough
Let you down
You need CONTROL
Things will be different now
You will tell me: “Baby, cry!
After all, no one hears you ... ”
You are my Lord, the Executioner,
Who writes the script
I let love get in the way
Broke my own damn rules
Push and pull
Heart strings need stretching
Weaving a knot in my braids
You twine like a boa around my neck ...
With a jerk, steal my breath
I feel the veins tremble,
With you dominating my mind
I haven't been forceful enough
Let you down
You need CONTROL
Things will be different now
You will tell me: “Baby, cry!
After all, no one hears you ... ”
You are my Lord, the Executioner,
Who writes the script
I let love get in the way
Broke my own damn rules
Push and pull
Heart strings need stretching
Weaving a knot in my braids
You twine like a boa around my neck ...
#dark
#erotic
#BDSM
#TruthOfLife
#collaboration
41 reads
2 Comments
RiAN
Published
Today 11:27am
Today 11:27am
nebel
Rasping rivulets
ravenous raven
rebuilding
invisible invocation
iron impaled
intoxicate
past purpose
predestined
profound
your bones
will be
carved
into
skull
beyond
red
and
violet
you
will
enter
the
eighth
color
of
the
spectrum
called
light
ravenous raven
rebuilding
invisible invocation
iron impaled
intoxicate
past purpose
predestined
profound
your bones
will be
carved
into
skull
beyond
red
and
violet
you
will
enter
the
eighth
color
of
the
spectrum
called
light
#dark
#shadows
#magic
3 reads
0 Comments
Remy_L
Published
10th May 2021 4:32am
10th May 2021 4:32am
your four o’clock bro
A M A Z O N I A N
captured feelings with one look
s e n s u a l i s t i c
captured feelings with one look
s e n s u a l i s t i c
#beauty
#senryu
#admiration
27 reads
11 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Published
10th May 2021 00:30am
10th May 2021 00:30am
Another scar
Hey peeps this is to you all. I'm due major surgery Wednesday so I won't be about from Monday night. I just wanted to show my thanks to you all. I'll see you soon.
Love and light
Ron
Another scar
Well it's nearly time, to be sent off for a big long sleep, as the spinal surgeon again operates, he goes into me real deep
Another battle scar on my body, proof of a battle won, inside me will be a anti spasm pump, when the surgeons done
A pocket cut into my stomach, then the pump is stuck inside, then hopefully my legs will stay still, like...
Love and light
Ron
Another scar
Well it's nearly time, to be sent off for a big long sleep, as the spinal surgeon again operates, he goes into me real deep
Another battle scar on my body, proof of a battle won, inside me will be a anti spasm pump, when the surgeons done
A pocket cut into my stomach, then the pump is stuck inside, then hopefully my legs will stay still, like...
#love
#gratitude
48 reads
22 Comments
goldenmyst
Published
Today 6:35am
Today 6:35am
His Strudel is Her Methadone
His Strudel is Her Methadone
She tells her fellow girlfriend and Barista wrapped in one, “When I get in this mood I laugh at everything. I laugh at customers in their faces which isn’t good at work. This happens to me once a week. I spilled coffee on my skirt and it was hilarious.”
A patron says, “Are you are in a funny mood?”
She focuses on her customer at hand, “Oh, sir I’m all ticklish. Give me Xanax to calm me down.”
“Is it my beard or my tattoo that tickles you?”
“Your beard would have to touch me to give me the giggles. My humor is an inside...
She tells her fellow girlfriend and Barista wrapped in one, “When I get in this mood I laugh at everything. I laugh at customers in their faces which isn’t good at work. This happens to me once a week. I spilled coffee on my skirt and it was hilarious.”
A patron says, “Are you are in a funny mood?”
She focuses on her customer at hand, “Oh, sir I’m all ticklish. Give me Xanax to calm me down.”
“Is it my beard or my tattoo that tickles you?”
“Your beard would have to touch me to give me the giggles. My humor is an inside...
#brother
#sister
#coffee
#funny
#sensual
4 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Published
Yesterday 6:36am
Yesterday 6:36am
FOUND EMPLOYMENT
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming
50 reads
1 Comment
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