All Poems by Top Critiquers
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Poems written by Top Critiquers
DamianDeadLove
Published
Yesterday 4:24am
Yesterday 4:24am
Backstage Episode 2
New episode
#narrative
43 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Published
Yesterday 7:23pm
Yesterday 7:23pm
The Last Upper
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
20 reads
1 Comment
TheOralizer
Published
Yesterday 4:07pm
Yesterday 4:07pm
THOUGHTS ABOUT ORGASM
#erotic
#lover
#orgasm
#seductive
#sensual
89 reads
11 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Published
10th Sep 2024 1:28pm
10th Sep 2024 1:28pm
Deck of Cards (Collab With Duice)
Splitting chakra checkered card
deck reveals a big Joker of hearts
Aligned to be circus clown renown in mastery
to circles in aerial misdirection of arts
A bachelor of scholar in jester
to whimsical false degree starts
Unbalanced on high-rise thread walks
that net catch wild reaction remarks
Cannon fodder for fun launched
on explosions blown sky high
A cardinal jeered by child eyes
or mohawk birdie sky draws nigh...
deck reveals a big Joker of hearts
Aligned to be circus clown renown in mastery
to circles in aerial misdirection of arts
A bachelor of scholar in jester
to whimsical false degree starts
Unbalanced on high-rise thread walks
that net catch wild reaction remarks
Cannon fodder for fun launched
on explosions blown sky high
A cardinal jeered by child eyes
or mohawk birdie sky draws nigh...
#inspirational
#misunderstood
#ThrillSeeking #collaboration
#ThrillSeeking #collaboration
69 reads
8 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Published
12th Sep 2024 12:56pm
12th Sep 2024 12:56pm
Explosion Clouds
Looking at the explosion clouds.
There is a complete void of sound.
The September trees
are diminishing green,
in their lazy lean.
We are not just alive,
to satisfy hungers.
To examine bruised blunders.
Nature satisfies us too.
Bombs of peace in a sky cornflower blue.
There is a complete void of sound.
The September trees
are diminishing green,
in their lazy lean.
We are not just alive,
to satisfy hungers.
To examine bruised blunders.
Nature satisfies us too.
Bombs of peace in a sky cornflower blue.
#SelfReflection
#sky
#trees
48 reads
17 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Published
9th Sep 2024 00:00am
9th Sep 2024 00:00am
Winter's Prose
In autumn's glow, the world begins to rest
And amber leaves descend in weathered flight
The summer's heat now finds a gentler quest
As chilly winds chase the lingering light
The trees, donning their robes of ember gold
Stand sentinel against the waning sun
Their branches reach with tales of seasons old
While shadows stretch as days are nearly done
The air is crisp, a breath of frost and pine
As harvests yield their bounty to the earth
The twilight hours in muted hues align
And nightfall's calm descends with...
And amber leaves descend in weathered flight
The summer's heat now finds a gentler quest
As chilly winds chase the lingering light
The trees, donning their robes of ember gold
Stand sentinel against the waning sun
Their branches reach with tales of seasons old
While shadows stretch as days are nearly done
The air is crisp, a breath of frost and pine
As harvests yield their bounty to the earth
The twilight hours in muted hues align
And nightfall's calm descends with...
#fall
#LifeCycle
#nature #trees
#nature #trees
136 reads
19 Comments
Shilohverse
Shiloh Mello
Shiloh Mello
Published
Yesterday 3:06pm
Yesterday 3:06pm
Trilling Canary
Whispers fade, truth remains still,
Cheap slams, cheap thrills,
Pounding your head as the Canary trills
Cheap slams, cheap thrills,
Pounding your head as the Canary trills
#disappointment
44 reads
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Published
Yesterday 8:54pm
Yesterday 8:54pm
Doomed mankind
In a world full of hate
Where do I stand
If I don’t try to fight
I give them a hand
I have to tell them
What is on my mind
Or there would be
Nothing left to find
I know I will be burnt
Or ground to a sand
If we don’t do it
Doomed is mankind
Where do I stand
If I don’t try to fight
I give them a hand
I have to tell them
What is on my mind
Or there would be
Nothing left to find
I know I will be burnt
Or ground to a sand
If we don’t do it
Doomed is mankind
#conflict
#morality
#peace
15 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Published
10th Sep 2024 00:04am
10th Sep 2024 00:04am
BLOOD AND STONES OF DEEP RED
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ HERE I AM AS I AM A MAN A MIRROR REFLECTION 🪞 OF JUST A MERE REFLECTION OF THYSELF. YET BENEATH I AM CALL BY MANY NAMES. 🤨 BUT YET I AM ONE IN THE SAME PAST AND PRESENT AND FUTURE. FOR sure I am the story teller of unspoken words, that will affect the very foundation of your own personal thoughts. Especially the deepness of your own mind and heart, and the WOLF spiritual subconsciousness of words written by my own hands from pen to paper ✍️ 🩸 From of my THOUGHTS AND PRAYERS OF MY OWN, BLOOD...
#LifeAsAWriter
#passion
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#WritingPoetry
57 reads
4 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Published
Yesterday 1:21pm
Yesterday 1:21pm
a gem on fire
your scent
gathers
like
heavy
seduction,
even though
i have
brought
you robes
and silk
stockings,
you will
not
need them
tonight
through
our hours
together,
you will
know more
than once
of my
talents,
you have
become
a gem
on fire.
gathers
like
heavy
seduction,
even though
i have
brought
you robes
and silk
stockings,
you will
not
need them
tonight
through
our hours
together,
you will
know more
than once
of my
talents,
you have
become
a gem
on fire.
#lust
#passion
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
68 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Published
11th Sep 2024 4:06pm
11th Sep 2024 4:06pm
Back to Regular Programming
Minimalism
New Art
Painted Chopsticks
Use what you have …
New Art
Painted Chopsticks
Use what you have …
#art
#identity
#learning
#meditation
#PersonalGrowth
77 reads
14 Comments
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