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Vision_of_insanity
Published
Today 11:14am
Today 11:14am
I live for sin
Burn the little panties off of cuties with a flaming stick
Maturity ain't for me, Jesus wants you to suck his dick
Pick them up for the cinema and I guarantee they'll give you some head
If not, that's ok, cause your mom will sodomize you in her king size bed
I live for
I live for
I live for sin
Friday afternoons I go through people's mail
Usually old mother fuckers who are old & frail
Ripping people off is a talent that I can't give up
I'll piss in your coffee, taste good right, you stupid fuck
I live for
I...
Maturity ain't for me, Jesus wants you to suck his dick
Pick them up for the cinema and I guarantee they'll give you some head
If not, that's ok, cause your mom will sodomize you in her king size bed
I live for
I live for
I live for sin
Friday afternoons I go through people's mail
Usually old mother fuckers who are old & frail
Ripping people off is a talent that I can't give up
I'll piss in your coffee, taste good right, you stupid fuck
I live for
I...
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
#morality
#peace
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Vision_of_insanity
Published
Today 11:03am
Today 11:03am
I don't give a...
I don't give a fuck about your mom & your dad
I don't give a fuck if your mad or sad
I don't give a fuck that I' am a deadbeat
All I really care about is when I can cheat....on you!
Hell fucking yeah!
I really don't care what you have to say
I don't give a fuck about you anyway
I don't give a fuck about your future plans
All I really care is that you find another man....soon!
Fuckin Right!
Now that you know, you can be dismissed
I don't give a fuck on how much I'm missed
I don't give a fuck if you want to...
I don't give a fuck if your mad or sad
I don't give a fuck that I' am a deadbeat
All I really care about is when I can cheat....on you!
Hell fucking yeah!
I really don't care what you have to say
I don't give a fuck about you anyway
I don't give a fuck about your future plans
All I really care is that you find another man....soon!
Fuckin Right!
Now that you know, you can be dismissed
I don't give a fuck on how much I'm missed
I don't give a fuck if you want to...
#apathy
#relationships
#rhyming
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Liziantus-Marantus
Published
Today 11:03am
Today 11:03am
Autumn
On a cold,autumn day.
Leaves fall and dance the day away.
Like ballerinas up in the sky.
They fly and crunch under your feet.
And their grace is what you meet.
You go onto the bench,on your seat.
With leaves crunching under your feet.
While the other leaves fly.
And they dance in the sky like ballerinas.
Only to fall onto the ground.
They sway like dancers on the cold,autumn ground.
Maybe just one cold,autumn day.
You'll join them and dance the day away.
Leading to a starry night.
With no leaves left...
Leaves fall and dance the day away.
Like ballerinas up in the sky.
They fly and crunch under your feet.
And their grace is what you meet.
You go onto the bench,on your seat.
With leaves crunching under your feet.
While the other leaves fly.
And they dance in the sky like ballerinas.
Only to fall onto the ground.
They sway like dancers on the cold,autumn ground.
Maybe just one cold,autumn day.
You'll join them and dance the day away.
Leading to a starry night.
With no leaves left...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#nature
#trees
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DamianDeadLove
Published
Today 8:07am
Today 8:07am
Just My Opinion
My mind can only take so much input before I have to rant it out. I try not to complain because I chose to be informed, and make it part of my writing style. That’s on me, and I’m too old to learn any new tricks it appears. I’m beginning to think I’m just a glutton for punishment.
I’m kinda glad I never made it to the big time, when it comes to music. The whole Diddy thing is really exposing the underbelly of the music industry. I knew there was always a dark and secretive side of the business, but some of the things that’s been spilled made me come to one conclusion. “The...
I’m kinda glad I never made it to the big time, when it comes to music. The whole Diddy thing is really exposing the underbelly of the music industry. I knew there was always a dark and secretive side of the business, but some of the things that’s been spilled made me come to one conclusion. “The...
#prose
34 reads
4 Comments
sharadejahan
sharad
sharad
Published
Today 7:41am
Today 7:41am
Pleasure Please
#erotic
#orgasm
#seductive #sensual
#seductive #sensual
24 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Published
Today 7:25am
Today 7:25am
Queen Marie Laveau
Marie Laveau I hear your name.
They praise you in the streets and have no shame.
You hexed the good and gave love to the wicked.
You even healed the sick and conjured one way tickets.
Spells and chants still that last.
And voodoo dolls that shaped men's past.
There's no other like you, even the devil took notes.
The honor would have been mine just to hear the words that you spoke.
They praise you in the streets and have no shame.
You hexed the good and gave love to the wicked.
You even healed the sick and conjured one way tickets.
Spells and chants still that last.
And voodoo dolls that shaped men's past.
There's no other like you, even the devil took notes.
The honor would have been mine just to hear the words that you spoke.
#culture
#curse
#Halloween #tradition
#Halloween #tradition
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michaelslove2
Published
Today 7:11am
Today 7:11am
African American Man
African American Man
Hey there African American man takin' a walk tonight.
Don't you know the police will get you cuz what you doin' there ain't right?
They're gonna come harass you,
it's their way.
You know they just can't leave you be.
Hey there African American man
have we learned from history?
Hey there African American man,
what'chu up to bet no good?
Watched and labeled by many folks
the ones who never understood.
You're searchin' for a break-in,
you're dealin' drugs.
Here come the car now...
Hey there African American man takin' a walk tonight.
Don't you know the police will get you cuz what you doin' there ain't right?
They're gonna come harass you,
it's their way.
You know they just can't leave you be.
Hey there African American man
have we learned from history?
Hey there African American man,
what'chu up to bet no good?
Watched and labeled by many folks
the ones who never understood.
You're searchin' for a break-in,
you're dealin' drugs.
Here come the car now...
#culture
#ignorance
#inequality
#morality
#racism
20 reads
0 Comments
michaelslove2
Published
Today 7:09am
Today 7:09am
Today
Today
I long for you to whisper your words of contentment
while I listen with a bloody ear.
In those brief moments when hearing your song
for a time existence feels right.
Time's come with your voice
when pain dissolves into absolution,
when I feel there is a place of mind.
Time's come through you where for a little while
I feel I am right and at home.
I have time to think for now
and I have purpose where before I felt there was none.
It is not time for embracing your welcoming arms however, ...
I long for you to whisper your words of contentment
while I listen with a bloody ear.
In those brief moments when hearing your song
for a time existence feels right.
Time's come with your voice
when pain dissolves into absolution,
when I feel there is a place of mind.
Time's come through you where for a little while
I feel I am right and at home.
I have time to think for now
and I have purpose where before I felt there was none.
It is not time for embracing your welcoming arms however, ...
#identity
#loneliness
#love #SelfDiscovery
#love #SelfDiscovery
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Published
Today 6:32am
Today 6:32am
STOP WASTING YOUR TIME
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ How many of us who have been invaded, in your email address box ? 🤔COMING from the negativity of nonsense, from the Democrats party. Now I know some of the people's, who see👁️👁️ this may think totally differently, about what I say yet you are entitled to your own opinions. For sure we can agree or disagree but yet it's still your opinion. 🤨 For sure we the people who are aware of the truth of the good verse evil. 🙊🙉🙈 Know what it's like to have to learn how you vote,...
#corruption
#LifeStruggles
#politics
#power
#StreamOfConsciousness
25 reads
1 Comment
oldmanG
Published
Today 6:03am
Today 6:03am
Rancid Love
My love is rancid
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
Can I find a sunny side
My love is not enchanted
But it’s my only love
Walk in the park singing
Wishing that this was not so
But it is and it hits me in the jaw
Can’t find a redeeming quality
So I am rancid and I don’t smell so good
I’m rancid what does that mean for you
#forgiveness
#love
#respect #support
#respect #support
14 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Published
Today 5:57am
Today 5:57am
Diggin n Dyin (Cool Hand Luke)
Diggin n dyin livin n flyin(cool hand Luke)
Where are you now Plastic Jesus
You lived through me as I suffered
Nothing can be a real cool hand
Do everything you wish you did
You say boy I love you you’re a hero
Blue eyes pierce your fiction
Go fetch it Luke
Deader than hell won’t let go
You made a mistake about me
Took dog boys keys and off I go again
Living your dream
While I’ll suffer
Cool as the other side of the pillow
He can’t be deterred or broken down
A rebel with a cause ...
Where are you now Plastic Jesus
You lived through me as I suffered
Nothing can be a real cool hand
Do everything you wish you did
You say boy I love you you’re a hero
Blue eyes pierce your fiction
Go fetch it Luke
Deader than hell won’t let go
You made a mistake about me
Took dog boys keys and off I go again
Living your dream
While I’ll suffer
Cool as the other side of the pillow
He can’t be deterred or broken down
A rebel with a cause ...
#God
#prison
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not_accounted_for
Published
Today 5:13am
Today 5:13am
Uncertain Path
The uncertainty
Making it hard to see
Through the darkness
How can it be?
It's cloudy
My future, I mean.
I'm worried
I'll never achieve what I can be.
I know it's
Not set in stone.
And that's what worries
Me so.
I want it badly,
More than I could ever know.
Then why is it so hard
To find a way to go?
To go to my future,
my rightful place.
To find all the hardships
I must eventually face.
To go to the sky,
where all dreams take place.
Why is it so hard to...
Making it hard to see
Through the darkness
How can it be?
It's cloudy
My future, I mean.
I'm worried
I'll never achieve what I can be.
I know it's
Not set in stone.
And that's what worries
Me so.
I want it badly,
More than I could ever know.
Then why is it so hard
To find a way to go?
To go to my future,
my rightful place.
To find all the hardships
I must eventually face.
To go to the sky,
where all dreams take place.
Why is it so hard to...
#anxiety
#dreams
#fear
#hope
#LifeStruggles
28 reads
1 Comment
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