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Strangeways_Rob
Published
Today 12:48pm
Today 12:48pm
Sailing Paper-Boats Poetry in a Puddle
Sail kindly
Let no ill winds
Desecrate your voyage.
Upon the beatnik bow
Fingers fold passion until they break,
Machete cuts papyrus hearts.
Tributaries of river’ed sonnets
S(wash)buckle naked verse to harbour walls,
Drip-dry verbs crack the ocean pelvic bone.
Streams of reams inked so heavy
They could sink and drown dreams.
Loneliness of long distance swimmer,
Soliloquy storms sit on listless jibs.
Farewell and Adieu to the
Poets of Barcelona and Bedlam,
Secrets buried on Shanghai shores, ...
Let no ill winds
Desecrate your voyage.
Upon the beatnik bow
Fingers fold passion until they break,
Machete cuts papyrus hearts.
Tributaries of river’ed sonnets
S(wash)buckle naked verse to harbour walls,
Drip-dry verbs crack the ocean pelvic bone.
Streams of reams inked so heavy
They could sink and drown dreams.
Loneliness of long distance swimmer,
Soliloquy storms sit on listless jibs.
Farewell and Adieu to the
Poets of Barcelona and Bedlam,
Secrets buried on Shanghai shores, ...
#identity
#PowerOfWords
6 reads
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Mocosa
Published
Today 12:36pm
Today 12:36pm
When You Touch Me
When you feel like touching my body please pay some respect to my wellbeing. Make sure that you are being sincere with yourself before you try to be with me. Don't lead me to believe that your intentions with me are for good when in reality all you want to do is put me down. Make sure that if you are to touch me you don't just do it in a physical level, but go deeper than that and touch my mind and soul.
Make me feel your touch on an emotional plane rather than just the physical realm.
I want to feel what I am to you and what you feel as you are touching every bit of me.
Let...
Make me feel your touch on an emotional plane rather than just the physical realm.
I want to feel what I am to you and what you feel as you are touching every bit of me.
Let...
#love
#emotions
8 reads
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Stoney223
Published
Today 12:06pm
Today 12:06pm
IT'S BEEN A LONG ROAD
Here I am still in the process of being able to be bless for this life, I was granted to be bless with as it is truly a blessing. As I am still standing and fighting for I've come so far, in this journey and travel and walk through the process of somethings that happens in our lives. For we don't know how strong we really are not until we have to learn to go through the process of our storm. For as much as I want to I have to honestly be real with thyself, for sometimes I didn't even know if I was going or coming, due to the illusions that have alter my life. But yet I am more stronger than I...
#strength
#courage
#uplifting
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
10 reads
1 Comment
LiamReeduus
LiamReedus
LiamReedus
Published
Today 11:59am
Today 11:59am
Unbound in flesh
#strength
#hope
#courage
#TimeHeals
#redemption
3 reads
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Hashman
Published
Today 10:59am
Today 10:59am
If at first...
fly high
crash hard
shake it off
get on up
les go
"try again"
if not today
then tomorrow
one day
it will be
ok ♥
crash hard
shake it off
get on up
les go
"try again"
if not today
then tomorrow
one day
it will be
ok ♥
#happiness
#hope
#courage
7 reads
1 Comment
Cipher_O
Published
Today 10:45am
Today 10:45am
Agonies & Ecstasies
Happiness
is
a conversion
because everything is a conversion,
such implications
to this
observation,
we, being the
the
core constituencies:
Agonies
&
ecstacies.
is
a conversion
because everything is a conversion,
such implications
to this
observation,
we, being the
the
core constituencies:
Agonies
&
ecstacies.
#shadows
4 reads
1 Comment
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Published
Today 10:44am
Today 10:44am
kNIGHT vs sUN*LiTe [CAME-ALoT]
kNight vs Sunlite
She was super tight fuse lit dynamite sweet as a berry to the taste creamy beverage all over my face Victoria secret laced vagina raced while keeping paced piercing clit Saturated with spit grabbing hips to acrobatic flips incision a vision of long division across the great DIVIDE with no hands tied just 9inches buried deep inside sword oH Lord Don't STOP I'm at the Gates of CAMe-aLOT enter hailed, sailed 9inch nailed RIGHT recited thighs hello and goodbye creampie sights blurred vision
kNiGHT. Vs. sUN*LiTe->caME.al0T :)
She was super tight fuse lit dynamite sweet as a berry to the taste creamy beverage all over my face Victoria secret laced vagina raced while keeping paced piercing clit Saturated with spit grabbing hips to acrobatic flips incision a vision of long division across the great DIVIDE with no hands tied just 9inches buried deep inside sword oH Lord Don't STOP I'm at the Gates of CAMe-aLOT enter hailed, sailed 9inch nailed RIGHT recited thighs hello and goodbye creampie sights blurred vision
kNiGHT. Vs. sUN*LiTe->caME.al0T :)
#rhyming
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Cipher_O
Published
Today 10:44am
Today 10:44am
Sometimes Sorrows
Once we divide,
the chemicals
between
us
will surface, taking their place
as material
for
sown seeds to disperse:
Sometimes sorrows and tomorrows.
the chemicals
between
us
will surface, taking their place
as material
for
sown seeds to disperse:
Sometimes sorrows and tomorrows.
#shadows
7 reads
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monovox128
Published
Today 10:40am
Today 10:40am
ENCHANMENT
He can enchant me with one single, intoxicating kiss
never to untangle me, in blissful moments such as this,
we alone, capturing tender times while we are sinning
lustful inducing romance, deep yearnings are given.
I can enchant him with my erotic and lovely poetic prose
it can excite him until the euphoria swells and than grows
he alone, rapturing my hidden passions never-ending
neither on the other's heart is ever an option pending.
never to untangle me, in blissful moments such as this,
we alone, capturing tender times while we are sinning
lustful inducing romance, deep yearnings are given.
I can enchant him with my erotic and lovely poetic prose
it can excite him until the euphoria swells and than grows
he alone, rapturing my hidden passions never-ending
neither on the other's heart is ever an option pending.
#lust
#lover
#passion #seductive
#passion #seductive
22 reads
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drone
Published
Today 7:03am
Today 7:03am
Based In
Are one's opinions
Failable
Do they become
Mortality Wounded
When one Listens
To the high Possibilities
That one's opinions
One's Perceptions
Are not based
Neck deep
In Probable facts
Failable
Do they become
Mortality Wounded
When one Listens
To the high Possibilities
That one's opinions
One's Perceptions
Are not based
Neck deep
In Probable facts
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
17 reads
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LillyValleyPoems
Published
Today 6:45am
Today 6:45am
Cringe
I’d like to think I’m a creep
A cringy crawly dismal thing,
Blackened fury— a delightful phase
Disorderly and often destructive
In all the ways
That tries too hard to hide
Like a spider roving in and out about walls
I need you to know my morals:
Body prone and very
Near the ground.
A cringy crawly dismal thing,
Blackened fury— a delightful phase
Disorderly and often destructive
In all the ways
That tries too hard to hide
Like a spider roving in and out about walls
I need you to know my morals:
Body prone and very
Near the ground.
#lust
#erotic
#dirty
30 reads
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