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POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
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SweetOblivion
Published
Today 7:01pm
Today 7:01pm
Simple Friendliness
#sex
#beauty
#BDSM
10 reads
2 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Published
Today 6:56pm
Today 6:56pm
BLACK BEAUTY
Vinyl midnight
stockings
stilettos
and that shock
stamp: wicked
hourglass figure—
glowing
red light district
all your own!
You might bite my head off—
I'm just glad
you find me tasty.
Would you like to find
a dark, undisturbed place
...and disturb it?
stockings
stilettos
and that shock
stamp: wicked
hourglass figure—
glowing
red light district
all your own!
You might bite my head off—
I'm just glad
you find me tasty.
Would you like to find
a dark, undisturbed place
...and disturb it?
#dark
#sex
#scary
4 reads
0 Comments
Nari
Spellbound
Spellbound
Published
Today 6:09pm
Today 6:09pm
Scotch
You
Poured
It up
Just
To see
How
I
Could
Get
Down
On
Ice.
Poured
It up
Just
To see
How
I
Could
Get
Down
On
Ice.
#lust
#lesbian
#sex
#alcohol
#metaphor
8 reads
1 Comment
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Published
Today 5:17pm
Today 5:17pm
sWEEt-->STUFF [OKAay]
#rhyming
29 reads
0 Comments
Catman555
Published
Today 5:10pm
Today 5:10pm
There Was A Girl Named Georgia
#anxiety
#rejection
#frustration #UnrequitedLove
#frustration #UnrequitedLove
5 reads
1 Comment
Diamondz
Dia
Dia
Published
Today 4:19pm
Today 4:19pm
• Him •
A soft smile slowly begins to appear on my face
As my heart begins to beat a new beat.
I stand up and dust the brokenness that had consumed me, as it rolls to the floor.
Taking my time to heal, I begin to walk forward taking one step at a time
Letting go of the what ifs.. N embracing the lil moments of the now.
He'll alwayz have my heart.. no one can take it away.
I will alwayz treasure the great memories n I now have hope not for me.. cuz of how I am.. but for this amazin man who even thou we aren't together.. I'll alwayz see him as my Knight in Shining...
As my heart begins to beat a new beat.
I stand up and dust the brokenness that had consumed me, as it rolls to the floor.
Taking my time to heal, I begin to walk forward taking one step at a time
Letting go of the what ifs.. N embracing the lil moments of the now.
He'll alwayz have my heart.. no one can take it away.
I will alwayz treasure the great memories n I now have hope not for me.. cuz of how I am.. but for this amazin man who even thou we aren't together.. I'll alwayz see him as my Knight in Shining...
#love
#BestFriend
#friendship #confessional
#friendship #confessional
17 reads
4 Comments
ArianellJones
Published
Today 4:00pm
Today 4:00pm
Intimate Conversation
Long walks and innocent talks
the fire in thier eyes felt warm
First time kisses leaping
with secrets held back inside
Silence wrapped her tongue
as white nights turned to run
Long lost lyrics played down under
stolen from artistic walls
momentarily her hesitancy stalled
tell this girl all
In solitude her black dress pled
alone with the solemn sky
Is it now when she should cry?
the fire in thier eyes felt warm
First time kisses leaping
with secrets held back inside
Silence wrapped her tongue
as white nights turned to run
Long lost lyrics played down under
stolen from artistic walls
momentarily her hesitancy stalled
tell this girl all
In solitude her black dress pled
alone with the solemn sky
Is it now when she should cry?
#morality
15 reads
1 Comment
SweetOblivion
Published
Today 3:13pm
Today 3:13pm
Rude Awakenings
#erotic
#corruption
#dreams
49 reads
0 Comments
Solesleftsoul
Published
Today 2:57pm
Today 2:57pm
[Untitled]
We're all the way up
Flying, spiralling without a care
I'm the dark, you're the light
Thermals rising in the air
We ride this convective current
Through this torrid love affair
The study of shared aerospace
Fireworks, as rockets flare
Flying, spiralling without a care
I'm the dark, you're the light
Thermals rising in the air
We ride this convective current
Through this torrid love affair
The study of shared aerospace
Fireworks, as rockets flare
#science
#universe
#astronomy #passion
#astronomy #passion
9 reads
2 Comments
Solesleftsoul
Published
Today 2:44pm
Today 2:44pm
[Untitled]
Fragile soul exposed
I'm lost in a zombie world
My bleeding heart’s dry
I'm lost in a zombie world
My bleeding heart’s dry
#love
#loneliness
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#SelfReflection
4 reads
0 Comments
one
Published
Today 2:00pm
Today 2:00pm
she and her are just pronouns
she sits
she rocks
she thinks
her mind reviews the story
her decision changes
constantly
she stands
rooted to the spot
the night beckons
the silence roars
a tear escapes
she turns, and
stops
inorganic
her life
a
three cup shuffle trick
she rocks
she thinks
her mind reviews the story
her decision changes
constantly
she stands
rooted to the spot
the night beckons
the silence roars
a tear escapes
she turns, and
stops
inorganic
her life
a
three cup shuffle trick
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
14 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Published
Today 1:44pm
Today 1:44pm
hallelujah
the red of you
dazzled my eyes
so I plucked them out
in the darkness, I grew
morbid thoughts of hallelujahs
at midnight
saw me shaken
I ate the bitter pill of sin
my flesh it ruled
so I put on a new skin
it fits tight
I feel strangled
I rebel against the notion
of crows mocking me
inside my plight
in hell, I found myself free
with knowledge I navigate
stepstones of glass
see through pits of danger
I hopscotch out
leading the way
for...
dazzled my eyes
so I plucked them out
in the darkness, I grew
morbid thoughts of hallelujahs
at midnight
saw me shaken
I ate the bitter pill of sin
my flesh it ruled
so I put on a new skin
it fits tight
I feel strangled
I rebel against the notion
of crows mocking me
inside my plight
in hell, I found myself free
with knowledge I navigate
stepstones of glass
see through pits of danger
I hopscotch out
leading the way
for...
#freedom
#escape
31 reads
4 Comments
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