Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 9:02pm
17th Nov 2024 9:02pm
You're in control
Standing on a wave in time
Distant silhouettes run through my mind
Messengers through a cloudy space
Darkness reflects onto my face
Maybe one day the sun will reflect a new vision
Walking towards the light is my decision
A warm glow on my soul,
beauty through my eyes
A new dream each day,
thankful to see a new sunrise
Distant silhouettes run through my mind
Messengers through a cloudy space
Darkness reflects onto my face
Maybe one day the sun will reflect a new vision
Walking towards the light is my decision
A warm glow on my soul,
beauty through my eyes
A new dream each day,
thankful to see a new sunrise
#dark
#happiness
#memories
#sun
#uplifting
62 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 2:21am
17th Nov 2024 2:21am
MENTALLY GO AWAY
If you had the chance to be any other place, 🤔 where will you go to escape from the very negativity, and drama and confusion and chaos. 😞 For sure what if there, were a far away place that existed, in a different time and space and place. 🤨 What would you give to be in that, kind of mentally state of well-being in your own subconscious thoughts. 🤔 For what if I told you that a place, like that does really exist in the very deepness, within your own thoughts of your mind. 🧠 Truly can put you in touch, within the very presence of the power, that you alone...
#dreams
#LifeChangingMoment
#meditation
#uplifting
#wisdom
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 10:48am
16th Nov 2024 10:48am
Possibilities around every corner
I found a way here
Led me to another view
Love gave me a clue
Led me to another view
Love gave me a clue
#happiness
#love
#motivational
#senryu
#uplifting
57 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 9:22pm
15th Nov 2024 9:22pm
Outside of The Window
Here I am just looking out the window of my space, and wondering how did I get here to find this moment.. TO just analyze the deepness of the quietness of sounds, of nature through the 🪟 pane of the window. For sure as I look as far as my own eyes could see 👁️👁️. I appreciate the realness and opportunity to releaseing, that feeling of bliss and harmony. Away from the negativity and drama, and confusion and madness and chaos. 🤨 That has changed the atmosphere of life, and dreams and endless views of possibilities. For sure it's here and now, I can...
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
#WritingPoetry
67 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
15th Nov 2024 5:41pm
YOUR ENERGY LEVEL
There will come a time in each of our lives, for the mind to develop a sense of rebuilding, your thoughts on a positive level. Because with real substance with real intelligences, with your own thoughts to believe that you can
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
😉 with the strength of your own personal connection into the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS of your own mind thoughts. For sure have you ever wondered, 🤔 what is your true spiritual energy level, of your faith for you have to believe in thyself. For do you have the ability and perseverance, and true determination and real evidence of your strength.
Along...
#CallToAction
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 9:50am
15th Nov 2024 9:50am
Just Sit In The Truck (I Got This)
If you got Nuthn to say when I'm under attack
Keep that same mouth closed when I take a swing back
If you claim your name "Wes" and you don't check your boy
Then don't get in this mess when I show "I'm not a toy"
If you say you ain't "in it" Cuz your name is Bennett
Don't you dare look my way Just cuz I start to "win it"
If you don't speak up for me, or defend me, when others come against me Don't say a MuthaFukkn word about how or when I defend myself
You cannot tell me what I'm allowed...
Keep that same mouth closed when I take a swing back
If you claim your name "Wes" and you don't check your boy
Then don't get in this mess when I show "I'm not a toy"
If you say you ain't "in it" Cuz your name is Bennett
Don't you dare look my way Just cuz I start to "win it"
If you don't speak up for me, or defend me, when others come against me Don't say a MuthaFukkn word about how or when I defend myself
You cannot tell me what I'm allowed...
#determination
#respect
#strength #uplifting
#strength #uplifting
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2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 5:57pm
6th Nov 2024 5:57pm
A RIGHTEOUS CHANGE
Here we are now going through a celebration, moment of a movement of tranquility and peace again. 🤗 For sure as we exchange thoughts on the nonsense, that we had to deal with in the last four years. 🤨 It's been hell on earth 🌎 with the increase of immigrants, with the invasion across sanctuary state. 🤨 For sure there were high prices of gas and food and homes and apartments, let's not forget, about the lies and false promises, and propaganda to get those of you who believed, that they are looking out for YOU. 😠 Just to have you believe that they care...
#epic
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 10:25am
4th Nov 2024 10:25am
Student Teacher Poem
Sorry madam, I can’t you follow
Don’t move son, I’ll come to your row.
I can’t understand a word from your mouth
Next time I’ll bring my PC and a mouse.
English makes me look stupid and ill at ease
Well then, I’ll teach you English in Chinese.
Teacher, teacher I have lost my book
Never, ever instead use your face book.
Blessed having connexion in our classroom
A pity! for your smart phone you have no room.
Studies, homework and revision yet, not ready for the exam
Sacrifice...
Don’t move son, I’ll come to your row.
I can’t understand a word from your mouth
Next time I’ll bring my PC and a mouse.
English makes me look stupid and ill at ease
Well then, I’ll teach you English in Chinese.
Teacher, teacher I have lost my book
Never, ever instead use your face book.
Blessed having connexion in our classroom
A pity! for your smart phone you have no room.
Studies, homework and revision yet, not ready for the exam
Sacrifice...
#learning
#motivational
#success #uplifting
#success #uplifting
104 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 9:35pm
2nd Nov 2024 9:35pm
AS IT DRAWS NEAR
Here we are in a place that has been changed by so many things, on so many levels of humanity. 🤨 For sure it's to the point we can't tell the difference, between the lines or what is TRUE and what is the lies that have to do with now. 😞 YET it has a lot to do with what is happening now. 😭 For it's that time of year for election, to choose a candidate 🤨 that you want to place your trust within them. For sure what do you want and need to sustain your own life 🤔 who do you believe that has your best interest in mind and heart and soul. For from generation...
#CallToAction
#epic
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 11:37pm
1st Nov 2024 11:37pm
WISE WORDS OF WISDOM
As those who know what is fact and not fiction, truly how do you visualize the world. 🌍For sure just ask thyself what would you rather, have bad or good, for sure what would you rather have four years ago, 😊 Or would you rather have right now. 🤔 Yet I wonder if you will have the perseverance, to survive in a place, that has been changed by the powers that be. 🤨 For as this very existence has become, something out of a bad horrible dream. But yet it's here in full bloom in visions of our lives and eyes 👁️👁️.
...
...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
1st Nov 2024 10:59am
1st Nov 2024 10:59am
Exploring Imagination
When you enter the world of imagination.
You arrive at a whole another nation.
This land is empty of woe.
And makes you feel whole.
As it puts on a magical show.
You will meet characters,kind and sweet.
Fictional or real,you could meet.
In the land of imagination we sing along.
To the song of acceptance and pumpkin song.
You will meet new friends on the way.
When you walk on the colorful pathway.
Whether characters from books or games.
And no matter who it is or who blames.
In this land we don't judge. ...
You arrive at a whole another nation.
This land is empty of woe.
And makes you feel whole.
As it puts on a magical show.
You will meet characters,kind and sweet.
Fictional or real,you could meet.
In the land of imagination we sing along.
To the song of acceptance and pumpkin song.
You will meet new friends on the way.
When you walk on the colorful pathway.
Whether characters from books or games.
And no matter who it is or who blames.
In this land we don't judge. ...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational #uplifting
#inspirational #uplifting
57 reads
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Duice
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 11:50pm
27th Oct 2024 11:50pm
Milestones
Surrounded in vibrant sharp beauty
to checkpoint the unknown
Survived experiences devoured
that could’ve sever hip bone
In jungle thorns of life
machete swung at carnivorous dense thicket
Would be insane to run the same path
and more a fool to twice pick it
Resilient in conviction I beat trails
to pave thin fragile success
Fought demons at trials in my wake
asleep woke sweat grapple in stress
Stick a [milestone] at this juncture
to save repeat of heredity queue
S.O.S. walking tight circles to arrive
in...
to checkpoint the unknown
Survived experiences devoured
that could’ve sever hip bone
In jungle thorns of life
machete swung at carnivorous dense thicket
Would be insane to run the same path
and more a fool to twice pick it
Resilient in conviction I beat trails
to pave thin fragile success
Fought demons at trials in my wake
asleep woke sweat grapple in stress
Stick a [milestone] at this juncture
to save repeat of heredity queue
S.O.S. walking tight circles to arrive
in...
#choices
#LifeChangingMoment
#memories
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
204 reads
4 Comments
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