Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#uplifting
uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd May 2025 2:08am
3rd May 2025 2:08am
Closing Down Shutting Off
Through this message I speak with truth, about the deepness of the damages, that has been inflicted on so many broken hearts 💔 Filled with love and happiness once before, yet it was suppose to be honest and truth and trust. For sure we can sit alone and cry silent whispers of tears that still doesn't change how we feel behind the mask as a disguise, for sometimes we have to learn to understand, most things aren't meant to be. FOR sure some people's, are just creatures of habits. 🤨 For sure it's necessary to understand, that what we thought we had was never ours in the...
#hurt
#sadness
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
#uplifting
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Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
2nd May 2025 8:06pm
2nd May 2025 8:06pm
Can't-Face-The-Day Cure
Dance to the euphoric beat
with Snoopy, Charlie, Linus, and Lucy
smooth Jazz and Christmas feeling
heads bobbing, shuffling feet
arms shaking off cares of the world
standing bass guide us into the day
piano send us singing on our way
drums rat-a-tat us into action
life is not such a bad thing
as long as I remember
to sing, sing, sing
who cares if you look like a ding-a-ling
whether in public
or within your four walls
dance with carefree abandon
have yourself a ball
with Snoopy, Charlie, Linus, and Lucy
smooth Jazz and Christmas feeling
heads bobbing, shuffling feet
arms shaking off cares of the world
standing bass guide us into the day
piano send us singing on our way
drums rat-a-tat us into action
life is not such a bad thing
as long as I remember
to sing, sing, sing
who cares if you look like a ding-a-ling
whether in public
or within your four walls
dance with carefree abandon
have yourself a ball
#dance
#happiness
#inspirational
#music
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd May 2025 11:39am
2nd May 2025 11:39am
Mirror Reflection
A mirror reflection is like looking at one self in the 🪞 mirror that hangs on the wall 🧱 FOR it's true that what we see is the truth of who we really are in high sight. BUT yet it reveals the deepness of the scares, that did not heal through the process of time nor did the memories of moments spent alone in the heat of the night. For sure we have to learn to be honest with thyself, for sure only you can change your own thoughts, about what you want and need to sustain your own life. For sure as we exchange our thoughts on the fact that yesterday, is gone we have to stop and...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd May 2025 2:13am
2nd May 2025 2:13am
To be invisible
Have you ever wished that you could be invisible, in another life time, within your own thoughts and, insight and imagination. But yet it's just a dream in your own mind, 🤔 as it will be a true blessing in disguise. For if you could just leave your worries behind, in search of a beautiful place, far away from society. Where would travel to in this, new found illusion, where there is no space nor time. Because in this new place, there's no hate no war no hunger no sorrow, and hurt and pain with mass destruction and death. JUST a sense of the quality of life and love for all humanity...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 6:38am
27th Apr 2025 6:38am
Who knew it existed
Who knew that a place like this does exist, in a far away place that looks like, it was created by spiritual hands. Yet still in my mind and thoughts I wonder, what else awaits me as I continue to walk, and be inspired by the depth and deepness of my surroundings. For it's not like no other place that I've ever seen through my own eyes 👁️👁️ But yet it's here and now I feel the very deepness of the calmness come over my spiritual soul. Reaching into the very deepness of my, own soul and beliefs, that I realize here there's no walls 🧱 nor 🚪 doors,...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
80 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 1:52pm
25th Apr 2025 1:52pm
Spiritual Healing
Through this life we are sometimes faced with challenges that will break even the strongest of us, whether it's a relationship or marriage or friendship or lover even family. 🤔 But yet it's a huge thing to have, to learn to navigate through the process, of the ups and downs. As this to is apart of life 😔 For sure sometimes it will affect us, in ways that we may never truly really understand, For sure it's necessary to understand, that there are those things that will be, out of your own control as this is true, with honesty and truth and trust. Which will leave you alone and...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
78 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Apr 2025 1:30am
24th Apr 2025 1:30am
Just drifting with the winds
Here I am going through the process of cleaning, out my mind thoughts with my inner emotions, begins to calm me from within my own spiritual, subconsciousness of my new beginnings of my search of peace. For sure we will have to learn how can you, make it easier for you to be able to get away from the negativity 😔 For do you believe in your own dreams, that come with endless possibilities, can you imagine. WHAT it means to find a place that would be, just what you need and want. A beautiful place of calmness, by the grace of the sea, were you look out in the distance as far as you can...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 00:23am
23rd Apr 2025 00:23am
Kalamazoo Kathedral
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Don't try and find me here
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
Someone tried to finger my rear
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Kathedral has no flock
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
The priest tried to suck my kock
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
My backside is red and raw
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
My aunt is a part time whore
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Religion is never on my mind
Last time my mother got naked here ...
Don't try and find me here
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
Someone tried to finger my rear
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Kathedral has no flock
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
The priest tried to suck my kock
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
My backside is red and raw
Last time I was in Kalamazoo
My aunt is a part time whore
Kracked-out, Kolostomy Konnection in Kalamazoo
Religion is never on my mind
Last time my mother got naked here ...
#family
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
82 reads
8 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 10:58am
21st Apr 2025 10:58am
Fireflies At Night
You might not believe your eyes at the sight.
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
#hope
#motivational
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
55 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 10:03pm
15th Apr 2025 10:03pm
A work of art
Ash to ash and dust to dust, we are only ENTITY'S of our former self, born to live only to die, like a precious flower 🌷 that only needs the Sun and Water to survive. But yet beneath the surface of our skin, as the blood flows through our veins inner locking our heart ❤️ to our brain 🧠 and to the deepness of our minds thoughts. 🤔 We are here and now in this space without time, to accept our fate and the spiritual subconsciousness of ourselves. For it's true that we are only human, and we have a choice of how we want to live our life story ✍️...
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#redemption
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 10:59am
13th Apr 2025 10:59am
Still Aflame
I don't know what's about it.
And I don't know how to say this.
I don't know how to tell this.
Or how to explain it.
On one side is a dimlit light.
Strong,powerful firelight.
Near a strong,warm fireplace.
Yet at the same time,something feels cold.
Like a forming disease or mold.
The fire is slowly burning out.
But you can still see it well.
The fire still seems bright.
After everything I tell.
Long ago,a fire burned.
Screeches sounded and peace hurled.
At first,the fire was...
And I don't know how to say this.
I don't know how to tell this.
Or how to explain it.
On one side is a dimlit light.
Strong,powerful firelight.
Near a strong,warm fireplace.
Yet at the same time,something feels cold.
Like a forming disease or mold.
The fire is slowly burning out.
But you can still see it well.
The fire still seems bright.
After everything I tell.
Long ago,a fire burned.
Screeches sounded and peace hurled.
At first,the fire was...
#despair
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 00:04am
13th Apr 2025 00:04am
The Great Big Canvas
When the grand fire in the sky goes to sleep
In the darkness comes a different kind of light
It watches us closer with that pale mystic hue
That glows softly and feels cooler in the night
But behind it there are others that seem further away
Twinkling like faint sparkles amidst ocean waves
They must be the gods who come to visit us in dreams
Those figures we must capture and illustrate in caves
Those distant lonely lights seem to send us a message
Telling tales and stories we have yet to understand
As we ponder and wonder about...
In the darkness comes a different kind of light
It watches us closer with that pale mystic hue
That glows softly and feels cooler in the night
But behind it there are others that seem further away
Twinkling like faint sparkles amidst ocean waves
They must be the gods who come to visit us in dreams
Those figures we must capture and illustrate in caves
Those distant lonely lights seem to send us a message
Telling tales and stories we have yet to understand
As we ponder and wonder about...
#inspirational
#stars
#universe
#uplifting
#WritingPoetry
84 reads
6 Comments
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