Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:30pm
Yesterday 11:30pm
Oh to feel Alive
I want to feel alive
What good is it to live
When somedays it's just as easy to shrivel up and die
I want to feel alive
I want to be molded into the likes of the statue of David and bare my nakedness to the world
With a body that I see as modelesque, love handles, extra fat and all
Letting all of my insecurities and setbacks desolve
I want to feel alive
Show my inner and outer scars to the world
Relish in my imperfections
Walk away from every care in the world and strut on a runway, where those who truly love me are in...
What good is it to live
When somedays it's just as easy to shrivel up and die
I want to feel alive
I want to be molded into the likes of the statue of David and bare my nakedness to the world
With a body that I see as modelesque, love handles, extra fat and all
Letting all of my insecurities and setbacks desolve
I want to feel alive
Show my inner and outer scars to the world
Relish in my imperfections
Walk away from every care in the world and strut on a runway, where those who truly love me are in...
#courage
#happiness
#inspirational #uplifting
#inspirational #uplifting
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2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 2:13am
19th Dec 2024 2:13am
This Guy's Indeed In His Happy Place
You
could say
that once I'm
inside my own
apartment, this guy's
indeed in his happy
place for he could do what it
is without having anyone...
including his family... come to
drive him out of his mind whatsoever.
could say
that once I'm
inside my own
apartment, this guy's
indeed in his happy
place for he could do what it
is without having anyone...
including his family... come to
drive him out of his mind whatsoever.
#confessional
#dialogue
#home
#nonfiction
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 10:53am
17th Dec 2024 10:53am
Musical Dimension
To me,music can be used to travel.
To lands far away.
Mysteries,unravel.
And we play it as begin to travel.
We travel to a magical land.
A gate covered by magic.
Where you say the magic words.
And escape anything tragic with a tap.
A click,or a snap.
If you just sing the magic words.
You'll travel new worlds.
And unravel the mysteries of life.
Listen,headphones on and thrive.
As you watch the glowing moon at night.
Maybe you'll go to a concern tonight.
And music,magic will take flight. ...
To lands far away.
Mysteries,unravel.
And we play it as begin to travel.
We travel to a magical land.
A gate covered by magic.
Where you say the magic words.
And escape anything tragic with a tap.
A click,or a snap.
If you just sing the magic words.
You'll travel new worlds.
And unravel the mysteries of life.
Listen,headphones on and thrive.
As you watch the glowing moon at night.
Maybe you'll go to a concern tonight.
And music,magic will take flight. ...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational #uplifting
#inspirational #uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 10:48am
15th Dec 2024 10:48am
Sweets
I still remember the scent.
Of chocolate,wet cement.
When I was still a child.
And all of the pain was mild.
I remember the scent of pastries.
With cream and chocolate chips.
I remember her cookies.
So good,you would lick your lips.
And maybe homemade,vanilla cake.
That you and your family would make.
Maybe the scent and taste of caramel.
If only I could remember the smell.
I would have a fairytale to tell.
One day,I will also try to bake.
Maybe while painting an ethereal lake.
I will...
Of chocolate,wet cement.
When I was still a child.
And all of the pain was mild.
I remember the scent of pastries.
With cream and chocolate chips.
I remember her cookies.
So good,you would lick your lips.
And maybe homemade,vanilla cake.
That you and your family would make.
Maybe the scent and taste of caramel.
If only I could remember the smell.
I would have a fairytale to tell.
One day,I will also try to bake.
Maybe while painting an ethereal lake.
I will...
#happiness
#hope
#memories
#nostalgia
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 7:15pm
14th Dec 2024 7:15pm
You All Deserve Praise
I'm not writing a tribute to one particular person or even several.
I'm just going to say to all that are following me, THANK YOU!
Your all very unique in your own ways. No one is better or greater then the other. We're all equals here.
I read your poems, I comment. I occasionally give an award and many of you have done the same for me.
It's appreciated beyond what I can write here.
To the DUP community that I'm in contact with everyday. You know who you are. I have lots of respect for all of you.
You intrigue me, enlighten me, you've influenced me...
I'm just going to say to all that are following me, THANK YOU!
Your all very unique in your own ways. No one is better or greater then the other. We're all equals here.
I read your poems, I comment. I occasionally give an award and many of you have done the same for me.
It's appreciated beyond what I can write here.
To the DUP community that I'm in contact with everyday. You know who you are. I have lots of respect for all of you.
You intrigue me, enlighten me, you've influenced me...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#friendship
#inspirational
#nonfiction
#uplifting
102 reads
13 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 3:10pm
14th Dec 2024 3:10pm
Harmony mix with Peace
It's another day here on earth 🌎 that I am here by myself in this atmosphere of no time only space. as I let the entire world slowly slip away from my mind and heart and soul. For AS I am looking around this very transition, is a welcome site to find out here in natures beauty, as it is surroundings me yet
I can relate to this day as I continue to pray. 🙏 Thanks again for another day in my life and world, 🌎 that I've been blessed to see another day on this earth. For sure I am grateful and thankful and blessed, to have this opportunity for a righteous blessing....
I can relate to this day as I continue to pray. 🙏 Thanks again for another day in my life and world, 🌎 that I've been blessed to see another day on this earth. For sure I am grateful and thankful and blessed, to have this opportunity for a righteous blessing....
#healing
#kindness
#LifeChangingMoment
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 10:47am
14th Dec 2024 10:47am
The Diamond Tree
One day,you were walking home at night.
In the storm,with no fright.
Something was sparkling in the sky.
But not just the stars.
You find something far away.
That looks like it will never decay.
It resembled a tree.
With diamonds on it,that will set you free.
Maybe it was all in your head.
Maybe it was an illusion,a threat.
But when you followed the thread.
You became amazed.
With diamonds so shiny,you became dreamy and dazed.
Your feelings were happy,amazed.
With your fascination unphased.
...
In the storm,with no fright.
Something was sparkling in the sky.
But not just the stars.
You find something far away.
That looks like it will never decay.
It resembled a tree.
With diamonds on it,that will set you free.
Maybe it was all in your head.
Maybe it was an illusion,a threat.
But when you followed the thread.
You became amazed.
With diamonds so shiny,you became dreamy and dazed.
Your feelings were happy,amazed.
With your fascination unphased.
...
#dreams
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 1:21pm
13th Dec 2024 1:21pm
It's here I am free now
🙊🙉🙈. It's here I am free in this space without time. ⌚ For sure it's necessary to separate our mind, from our body as we believe that it's not impossible, cause you truly believe that anything is possible. When you believe in your dreams. 😔 For the elders say if you want good you gotta stop, doing that what is 😞 bad. FOR your thoughts and mind for sure we must not deviate. FROM the mission at hand 🤨 For above all else you must breathe, out the bad karma and replace it, with good karma into your heart and mind. 🧠 For there will be a...
#metaphor
#minimalist
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 10:51am
12th Dec 2024 10:51am
When Flowers Bloom
When it's spring it's a surprise.
The glowing stars in the skies.
The flowers all begin to bloom.
And you give them to a wedded bride and groom.
The colors,you can arrange.
And maybe get a chance.
Of a colorful,new romance.
Roses represent grace.
And put a smile on your face.
They come in so many varieties and ways.
Daisies,white petals.
In the cold,midnight rain.
When flowers bloom,you feel no pain.
All the colors on the field.
And the pollen that they shield.
It's like a game of...
The glowing stars in the skies.
The flowers all begin to bloom.
And you give them to a wedded bride and groom.
The colors,you can arrange.
And maybe get a chance.
Of a colorful,new romance.
Roses represent grace.
And put a smile on your face.
They come in so many varieties and ways.
Daisies,white petals.
In the cold,midnight rain.
When flowers bloom,you feel no pain.
All the colors on the field.
And the pollen that they shield.
It's like a game of...
#happiness
#hope
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
NIGHT TIME THOUGHTS
Here I am just a mortal man in the wee hours in.a beautiful, place to just unwind and shut my mind off. AS I clear out my thoughts amongst the spider webs 🕸️ of deepness of the world. For sure as I sit here amongst, the darkness in the silent of peace and tranquility. AS the fire 🔥 slowly starts warming, my body and spiritually lifting, my spirit to new highs. For it's here in this space and time, I can be free to dream as I think about, what has happen that has change, my own outlet about life. 🤔 For sure in this moment of no time. just space. I slowly began...
#evolution
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 11:03am
9th Dec 2024 11:03am
Christmas
There's a time of year we all await.
When everything is as white as a ceramic plate.
When there are snowflakes on the ground.
And under the tree, a present is found.
When everybody sings carols.
And everyone is nice.
When everyone says his name.
Once,twice,thrice.
When they sing,cheerful mice.
And everyone gets a chance.
Under the mistletoe,a happy new romance.
When December arrives.
And everyone thrives.
This fairytale,once upon a December.
In December,not November.
When everything is in...
When everything is as white as a ceramic plate.
When there are snowflakes on the ground.
And under the tree, a present is found.
When everybody sings carols.
And everyone is nice.
When everyone says his name.
Once,twice,thrice.
When they sing,cheerful mice.
And everyone gets a chance.
Under the mistletoe,a happy new romance.
When December arrives.
And everyone thrives.
This fairytale,once upon a December.
In December,not November.
When everything is in...
#Christmas
#happiness
#holiday
#hope
#uplifting
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Nachiyobe
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 4:02am
8th Dec 2024 4:02am
Poetry Is
Poetry
In the grip of days
when the heart feels
like a wild thing,
teetering on the edge
of clawing itself
free from my chest,
something shifts,
like the weight of love
breaking ribs,
pouring forth,
desperate to taste
the sweetness of those lips—
Oh, how easily it forgets the cost,
the time it took
to mend from the wreckage,
from honey to bitterness,
those flavors now mingling.
Poetry,
always a balm,
cradling my raw edges
when I want to...
In the grip of days
when the heart feels
like a wild thing,
teetering on the edge
of clawing itself
free from my chest,
something shifts,
like the weight of love
breaking ribs,
pouring forth,
desperate to taste
the sweetness of those lips—
Oh, how easily it forgets the cost,
the time it took
to mend from the wreckage,
from honey to bitterness,
those flavors now mingling.
Poetry,
always a balm,
cradling my raw edges
when I want to...
#emotional
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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2 Comments
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