Poems About Temptation Seeking Honest Critique
#temptation
Poems about temptation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
runningturtle87
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 7:50am
19th Jan 2025 7:50am
A Few Tornadoes
A Few Tornadoes
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
It seems
only a matter
of some discussion
before the wires
are crossed,
and,
at
that
point,
beyond which
memory
can hold its head up,
resilient winds
can bare
withstand the charms
of those
wobegone days
in a few tornadoes.
Our losses then
make all the more
this rarer field,
these fireflies
and
daily shield.
#BDSM
#passion
#temptation
142 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:14am
19th Jan 2025 3:14am
Submissive scholar
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#passion
#temptation
237 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 3:23pm
18th Jan 2025 3:23pm
The Doctor is Always Right
Your lab coat
White and virginal
But I know what lies beneath
A song bird, a vixen, a powerhouse
Of want, desire and lust
You've got the prescription
I've got the rock hard passion
Colliding in your warm regions
Science, literature, erotica
We serve
Each other....
White and virginal
But I know what lies beneath
A song bird, a vixen, a powerhouse
Of want, desire and lust
You've got the prescription
I've got the rock hard passion
Colliding in your warm regions
Science, literature, erotica
We serve
Each other....
#erotic
#lover
#lust
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
214 reads
21 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 11:10pm
17th Jan 2025 11:10pm
Let's go to the woods
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
221 reads
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 4:55pm
15th Jan 2025 4:55pm
Face Sitting
You want me to sit on your face
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
This is neither the time nor the place
I'm not feeling to do anything in haste
In other words, what's the race
If I do decide
To let that mouth come inside
It has to be as sweet as pie
Makes me so wet as the tide
You say you can take me to the sky above
What's between those lips is as tender as a dove
What is wrong I'm giving you a little push do I need to shove
If I sit on your face, I'll suffocate you love
More like I will drown you in the depths
As I ride...
#BDSM
#bisexual
#erotic
#sex
#temptation
374 reads
23 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 11:32pm
10th Jan 2025 11:32pm
Up to you
#BDSM
#passion
#porn
#sensual
#temptation
225 reads
0 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 1:55am
10th Jan 2025 1:55am
Poker House
He says, "You are the distraction, my love,"
She gets all dolled up,
Which means onyx liner and a messy bun.
They Walk in, arm in arm, heads turning,
All eyes on her, his beautiful wife.
He goes and checks in,
And she sits perfectly positioned,
Everyone can see her.
There’s something inherent
About a room full of men vying for her attention.
They call over the intercom, “Proxy Kin”
He sits down,
The dealer deals the cards—six and jack.
Most would fold, but not him. ...
She gets all dolled up,
Which means onyx liner and a messy bun.
They Walk in, arm in arm, heads turning,
All eyes on her, his beautiful wife.
He goes and checks in,
And she sits perfectly positioned,
Everyone can see her.
There’s something inherent
About a room full of men vying for her attention.
They call over the intercom, “Proxy Kin”
He sits down,
The dealer deals the cards—six and jack.
Most would fold, but not him. ...
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
#temptation
97 reads
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 11:44pm
9th Jan 2025 11:44pm
Spice things up
#lust
#passion
#sexy
#temptation
#threesome
203 reads
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Nvmb
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 1:46pm
9th Jan 2025 1:46pm
Parasite
You sink your teeth into my spine,
A hunger endless, yet divine.
I feel you crawling through my veins,
A whispered curse I can’t contain.
You are the ache that pulls me close,
The kind of love that hurts the most.
And every breath feeds your desire,
I’m just the host; you’re the fire.
Drain me—
Take what you need.
Leave me hollow,
Let me bleed.
Your love, a wound I can’t escape,
A parasite I learn to crave.
I tried to carve you from my skin,
But every cut let you back in.
You leave your marks...
A hunger endless, yet divine.
I feel you crawling through my veins,
A whispered curse I can’t contain.
You are the ache that pulls me close,
The kind of love that hurts the most.
And every breath feeds your desire,
I’m just the host; you’re the fire.
Drain me—
Take what you need.
Leave me hollow,
Let me bleed.
Your love, a wound I can’t escape,
A parasite I learn to crave.
I tried to carve you from my skin,
But every cut let you back in.
You leave your marks...
#abuse
#addiction
#SelfHarm
#temptation
#weakness
100 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 11:28pm
8th Jan 2025 11:28pm
Mailman
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
138 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 8:44am
8th Jan 2025 8:44am
Express
#erotic
#lust
#orgasm #temptation
#orgasm #temptation
261 reads
10 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:04pm
7th Jan 2025 11:04pm
Right here right now
#dirty
#passion
#sex #temptation
#sex #temptation
293 reads
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