Poems About Temptation by Top Critiquers
#temptation
Poems about temptation by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
a kind of liberation
Compulsion guides steady hands
obeying calls
waves
commands
Oscillating between
highs and highers
smoldering flames
singe desires
Crescendo-ing
slow slow s l o w e r
the rise
shuddering edge
from precipice, cries
Captured moans
mouth infiltrating mouth
ambrosial lips teem
moisture travels south
Hands and knees
fix to the floor
turn me into
your filthy whore
Curving back
in aching sprawl
crisp loud belts
her begging squall
...
obeying calls
waves
commands
Oscillating between
highs and highers
smoldering flames
singe desires
Crescendo-ing
slow slow s l o w e r
the rise
shuddering edge
from precipice, cries
Captured moans
mouth infiltrating mouth
ambrosial lips teem
moisture travels south
Hands and knees
fix to the floor
turn me into
your filthy whore
Curving back
in aching sprawl
crisp loud belts
her begging squall
...
#lust
#stars
#rhyming
#temptation
#orgasm
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21 Comments
You play me boldly
Cello body contour
Glows white again on the bed.
You play me boldly
And the symphony is not enough for us!
After all, my every movement,
And every cry, and my every moan
Sounds like a chord of delight
The string is stretched and thin.
Sensual and familiar,
So amazing, as if we were somewhere
in the clouds, not at home,
Received the morning as a gift.
Cello back and hips
Elastically arched towards.
With a bow you barely touch,
And immediately my petals tremble
The melody of love and...
Glows white again on the bed.
You play me boldly
And the symphony is not enough for us!
After all, my every movement,
And every cry, and my every moan
Sounds like a chord of delight
The string is stretched and thin.
Sensual and familiar,
So amazing, as if we were somewhere
in the clouds, not at home,
Received the morning as a gift.
Cello back and hips
Elastically arched towards.
With a bow you barely touch,
And immediately my petals tremble
The melody of love and...
#lover
#sensual
#temptation #passion
#temptation #passion
775 reads
42 Comments
Can't Resist
With every single note from that bass line
The groove seems to grow little by little in the heart
That tone hones the rhythm of the soul
It’s hard to resist
There’s times when your mind won’t disagree
Even if the temptation may be a little too much
Giving in and surrendering in whim
One just can’t resist
But I loved to play along to each song
It was my kind of thing whenever it was happening
The music would pull me in because
I couldn’t resist
And looking back, that was a very good year
Diana playing in my...
The groove seems to grow little by little in the heart
That tone hones the rhythm of the soul
It’s hard to resist
There’s times when your mind won’t disagree
Even if the temptation may be a little too much
Giving in and surrendering in whim
One just can’t resist
But I loved to play along to each song
It was my kind of thing whenever it was happening
The music would pull me in because
I couldn’t resist
And looking back, that was a very good year
Diana playing in my...
#love
#temptation
#NaPoWriMo2022
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2 Comments
You keep giving me chances
Dominant
submissive
switch
Not sure anymore
Who am I?
Any given day
It changes
Your heat drives me
Weather
Your primal shout
My need
I want to write a love poem
I'll keep trying
submissive
switch
Not sure anymore
Who am I?
Any given day
It changes
Your heat drives me
Weather
Your primal shout
My need
I want to write a love poem
I'll keep trying
#lust
#confessional
#lover #temptation
#lover #temptation
124 reads
28 Comments
When souls kiss
I feel your breath upon my face
lost in your eyes
Butterfly's flutter inside
Anticipation upon lips
Deprived
Electricity as two souls
Collide
animalistic hunger
amplified
Tongues slide together
Not to be denied....
lost in your eyes
Butterfly's flutter inside
Anticipation upon lips
Deprived
Electricity as two souls
Collide
animalistic hunger
amplified
Tongues slide together
Not to be denied....
#temptation
#passion
104 reads
5 Comments
pink smile
I'm in your company way too deep
the feeling I get from you is electric
I feel you thrumming in my soul
exciting the truth of me
I look at you eyes a little averted
my blush says everything
my pussy swells and I feel naked in front of you
you are always in charge of a situation
I see you ease back in your chair
and tell me come over
I'm trembling, I can't hide my need
you take my hand and lead me to you
I sit down with you and our eyes meet
there is a flicker in my look and you know
I'm a bad girl
...
the feeling I get from you is electric
I feel you thrumming in my soul
exciting the truth of me
I look at you eyes a little averted
my blush says everything
my pussy swells and I feel naked in front of you
you are always in charge of a situation
I see you ease back in your chair
and tell me come over
I'm trembling, I can't hide my need
you take my hand and lead me to you
I sit down with you and our eyes meet
there is a flicker in my look and you know
I'm a bad girl
...
#lust
#temptation
#seductive
169 reads
5 Comments
Oppressive U Be.......Ah Mouth Me

#lesbian
#gay
#BDSM
#temptation
#healing
63 reads
0 Comments
You Don't Want None Of This..
QUINTESSENTIAL TRIBECA LOFT
New York, New York
The Next Day
Zaniyah laid on Marcus’ chest wall. She uplifted her face.
“I had a very very nice time last night in your bed.” She kissed the side of his neck. “In the shower, and in this bed this morning.”
Zaniyah kissed Marcus under his chin.
Marcus kissed Zaniyah on top of her forehead. He hugged her body closely to his. He bent his head down to detain her eyes.
Zaniyah tilted her face upward.
“Why do you make it seem as if you’re not going...
New York, New York
The Next Day
Zaniyah laid on Marcus’ chest wall. She uplifted her face.
“I had a very very nice time last night in your bed.” She kissed the side of his neck. “In the shower, and in this bed this morning.”
Zaniyah kissed Marcus under his chin.
Marcus kissed Zaniyah on top of her forehead. He hugged her body closely to his. He bent his head down to detain her eyes.
Zaniyah tilted her face upward.
“Why do you make it seem as if you’re not going...
#anger
#violence
#temptation
#risk
#seductive
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10 Comments
I COULD NOT RESIST
I could not resist
the perfume on wrist
spot meant to be kissed.
It led to a trail
as, like creeping snail,
I kissed arm skin pale
Up to her shoulder
I moved, got bolder
to round waist hold her.
the perfume on wrist
spot meant to be kissed.
It led to a trail
as, like creeping snail,
I kissed arm skin pale
Up to her shoulder
I moved, got bolder
to round waist hold her.
#rhyming
#sensual
#temptation
230 reads
2 Comments
ILLUSION OF THE MOMENT
Excuse me but there is nothing I would rather do then show you, the truth about my sensual feelings and affection that I am imagining me doing to you. For they say a mind is a terrible thing to waste just like time, for instance when you are in the mood for sexual stimulation in body and soul and mind. You have to reach out to touch and feel the texture of their skin, from head to toe as your hands become invisible moving across skin and flesh. For let me show you that I wanna be able to see, the difference between a little girl and a grown woman, for I want to release that side of you that...
#lover
#sensual
#temptation
#passion
#StreamOfConsciousness
425 reads
5 Comments
Chocolate Chip Cookie
Chocolate Chip Cookie, Oh Chocolate Chip!
Why do you torment me,
with your mouthwatering taste.
Like the apple in the tree,
you are forbidden by my waist.
Yet your Devilish charms,
sweet texture, and aroma seduce me.
Just a taste a small bite,
it'll be alright.
But a bite doesn't suffice.
For once I've sinned, the furor begins.
One won't do.
As long as you have brother and sisters,
I'll continue to score.
Even when they are gone,
I'll search for more.
Like an addict,
I cannot stop. ...
Why do you torment me,
with your mouthwatering taste.
Like the apple in the tree,
you are forbidden by my waist.
Yet your Devilish charms,
sweet texture, and aroma seduce me.
Just a taste a small bite,
it'll be alright.
But a bite doesn't suffice.
For once I've sinned, the furor begins.
One won't do.
As long as you have brother and sisters,
I'll continue to score.
Even when they are gone,
I'll search for more.
Like an addict,
I cannot stop. ...
#food
#temptation
656 reads
19 Comments
pursuit
my thoughts
are of her,
a gentle softness
of intimate touches,
a caress of kisses
trailing
over soft, warm
curves,
her scent
now overwhelms me,
i grow hungry
in my pursuit
to taste her
more desirable
moments.
are of her,
a gentle softness
of intimate touches,
a caress of kisses
trailing
over soft, warm
curves,
her scent
now overwhelms me,
i grow hungry
in my pursuit
to taste her
more desirable
moments.
#lust
#sensual
#temptation
#passion
#seductive
231 reads
10 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Temptation by Top Critiquers