Poems About Temptation Seeking Honest Critique
#temptation
Poems about temptation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
monovox128
Poem Published
Today 6:01am
Today 6:01am
LET US
Let us
explore
every facet of our beings
with our tongues
as it dances
across our skin
that tastes
like the ambrosia
we've delighted in.
Let us
suck
the lifeblood that drips
from between our legs
as our fingers dance
across our skin
and thinly caresses
as we explore
every facet of our
imaginations
together as one
beneath the stars.
explore
every facet of our beings
with our tongues
as it dances
across our skin
that tastes
like the ambrosia
we've delighted in.
Let us
suck
the lifeblood that drips
from between our legs
as our fingers dance
across our skin
and thinly caresses
as we explore
every facet of our
imaginations
together as one
beneath the stars.
#lover
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
74 reads
6 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
17th Apr 2024 11:24am
17th Apr 2024 11:24am
LINGERING NAKED
I want to feel your lucious lips on mine
to remember exactly how you taste
I want to so indulge in all your sins.
SHHH! No talking...
I place my finger on your delectable lips
We have not a moment we can waste
I want to share in a mesmerizing time.
Do you not want to forever be my thrill?
Do not misjudge my wings for innocence
I am standing before you stripped naked.
With only my amble breasts, rosy cheeks
A mischievous but, intoxicating smile
That's all dressed up to ensnare and kill!
...
to remember exactly how you taste
I want to so indulge in all your sins.
SHHH! No talking...
I place my finger on your delectable lips
We have not a moment we can waste
I want to share in a mesmerizing time.
Do you not want to forever be my thrill?
Do not misjudge my wings for innocence
I am standing before you stripped naked.
With only my amble breasts, rosy cheeks
A mischievous but, intoxicating smile
That's all dressed up to ensnare and kill!
...
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#passion
#seductive
123 reads
10 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 7:19am
15th Apr 2024 7:19am
WAITING TO SHARE DESSERT
Lying on your bed in the cool darkness,
My small body clothed in your loose, large t-shirt,
I wait for you, my lover, to come to me;
We've had dinner, but I crave dessert.
My body is sprawled out on the soft sheets
With my legs spread apart,
As I leisurely finger my pussy and
Taste my juices, which are sweet yet tart.
My heart quickens as you step in the room
And switch on the overhead light;
When your searching eyes find mine,
I thrill at the tangible hunger filling them tonight.
...
My small body clothed in your loose, large t-shirt,
I wait for you, my lover, to come to me;
We've had dinner, but I crave dessert.
My body is sprawled out on the soft sheets
With my legs spread apart,
As I leisurely finger my pussy and
Taste my juices, which are sweet yet tart.
My heart quickens as you step in the room
And switch on the overhead light;
When your searching eyes find mine,
I thrill at the tangible hunger filling them tonight.
...
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#orgasm
#seductive
168 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 9:48pm
12th Apr 2024 9:48pm
I'll Be Staying Late At The Office, Honey.
Laura called Roger and said she'll be at
the office working late just
before George humped her hard.
the office working late just
before George humped her hard.
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
#temptation
#deception
60 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 4:23pm
10th Apr 2024 4:23pm
From the Heart
I started to write you several poems
Then deleted them all
I know I’m going to fail you
My natural inclination is Lust
Lust for your heart
Lust for your soul
Lust for sex
I feel failure
I don’t know how to be good
I’m drawn to you
Without editing
I’m not an actor
Then deleted them all
I know I’m going to fail you
My natural inclination is Lust
Lust for your heart
Lust for your soul
Lust for sex
I feel failure
I don’t know how to be good
I’m drawn to you
Without editing
I’m not an actor
#lust
#sex
#crush
#temptation
#seductive
172 reads
43 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 3:29pm
8th Apr 2024 3:29pm
Novella Chapter 4:Dinner, Wine, and More
Chapter 4 Dinner, Wine, and More
The evening air was alive with the buzz of conversation and laughter as Brittney found herself seated at a cozy restaurant with David and his friends. The dim lighting and the clinking of glasses created an atmosphere of warmth and intimacy, but beneath the surface, Brittney couldn't shake the gnawing sense of guilt that had been haunting her all day.
As they dined on delicious food and shared stories from their lives, Brittney found herself drawn deeper into the circle of David's friends. They were a diverse group, united by their...
The evening air was alive with the buzz of conversation and laughter as Brittney found herself seated at a cozy restaurant with David and his friends. The dim lighting and the clinking of glasses created an atmosphere of warmth and intimacy, but beneath the surface, Brittney couldn't shake the gnawing sense of guilt that had been haunting her all day.
As they dined on delicious food and shared stories from their lives, Brittney found herself drawn deeper into the circle of David's friends. They were a diverse group, united by their...
#lust
#marriage
#temptation
88 reads
1 Comment
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 2:27pm
8th Apr 2024 2:27pm
Novella Chapter 3: A Shared Day of Learning
Chapter 3: A Shared Day of Learning
As Brittney entered the large conference hall, the hum of conversation and the scent of freshly brewed coffee filling the air. The first general session was about to begin, and she couldn't help but feel a flutter of anticipation as she searched the crowd for any familiar faces.
Then she saw David standing near the entrance with a smile that lit up his face as soon as he spotted her. Before Brittney could wave to him, he was making his way through the crowd toward her.
"Brittney, there you are!" David exclaimed...
As Brittney entered the large conference hall, the hum of conversation and the scent of freshly brewed coffee filling the air. The first general session was about to begin, and she couldn't help but feel a flutter of anticipation as she searched the crowd for any familiar faces.
Then she saw David standing near the entrance with a smile that lit up his face as soon as he spotted her. Before Brittney could wave to him, he was making his way through the crowd toward her.
"Brittney, there you are!" David exclaimed...
#marriage
#crush
#temptation
79 reads
1 Comment
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 6:40pm
7th Apr 2024 6:40pm
Novella Chapter 2: Unexpected Connections
Chapter 2: Unexpected Connections
Brittney stood in the bustling airport terminal, her heart fluttering with a mixture of excitement and nerves. She was on her way to a professional conference in Kansas City, Missouri—a rare opportunity to immerse herself in the latest developments in her field and connect with colleagues from across the country.
As she scanned the crowd for her gate, she felt a familiar presence at her side. Turning, she saw her husband, Alex, smiling down at her with that same warmth and affection that had drawn her to him twelve years ago.
...
Brittney stood in the bustling airport terminal, her heart fluttering with a mixture of excitement and nerves. She was on her way to a professional conference in Kansas City, Missouri—a rare opportunity to immerse herself in the latest developments in her field and connect with colleagues from across the country.
As she scanned the crowd for her gate, she felt a familiar presence at her side. Turning, she saw her husband, Alex, smiling down at her with that same warmth and affection that had drawn her to him twelve years ago.
...
#marriage
#temptation
90 reads
1 Comment
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 1:05pm
7th Apr 2024 1:05pm
Novella Chapter 1 The Longing
Chapter 1: The Longing
Brittney sat in her cozy living room, surrounded by the familiar trappings of home. Outside were the sounds of her two daughters playing after school. The sun was setting, casting a warm glow through the curtains, but inside, Brittney's heart felt cold and empty.
At thirty-two, Brittney had everything she had ever dreamed of—a loving husband, two beautiful children, a successful career, and a close-knit family. Those who knew her often commented on her beauty. She did work to take care of herself, but her attractiveness was the natural type,...
Brittney sat in her cozy living room, surrounded by the familiar trappings of home. Outside were the sounds of her two daughters playing after school. The sun was setting, casting a warm glow through the curtains, but inside, Brittney's heart felt cold and empty.
At thirty-two, Brittney had everything she had ever dreamed of—a loving husband, two beautiful children, a successful career, and a close-knit family. Those who knew her often commented on her beauty. She did work to take care of herself, but her attractiveness was the natural type,...
#happiness
#temptation
103 reads
1 Comment
monovox128
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 4:38am
7th Apr 2024 4:38am
GARDEN of LOVE
Come along and play with me
in my garden beside the sea
Where love blooms every day
Satisfaction found in every way
We will simply drift in serenity
as birds coo in serendipity
My soul will feed in sanctuary
as you feed your lust out of me
Come along and carefully listen
to the colors of love and glisten
They will whisper our names
as we play our final games
Come along and play with me
Let joyous contentment come to be
within my garden beside the sea
in my garden beside the sea
Where love blooms every day
Satisfaction found in every way
We will simply drift in serenity
as birds coo in serendipity
My soul will feed in sanctuary
as you feed your lust out of me
Come along and carefully listen
to the colors of love and glisten
They will whisper our names
as we play our final games
Come along and play with me
Let joyous contentment come to be
within my garden beside the sea
#lust
#lover
#temptation
#passion
#seductive
156 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 5:12pm
5th Apr 2024 5:12pm
Suck--tion
#sex
#erotic
#dirty
#temptation
#seductive
198 reads
4 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 4:57pm
5th Apr 2024 4:57pm
The morning
One fine day fromle
Leaf of paper work
And the office is gerald hinch.
Of Days agony in sweet
Tears.
The graff of traffic
Blue is the best way
To avoid the sick
Night. And sunny days.
A rainy faint morning.
And the night pink
Partike is the highest
Hoke of coke blended
Blue from red and
Nest.
Leaf of paper work
And the office is gerald hinch.
Of Days agony in sweet
Tears.
The graff of traffic
Blue is the best way
To avoid the sick
Night. And sunny days.
A rainy faint morning.
And the night pink
Partike is the highest
Hoke of coke blended
Blue from red and
Nest.
#temptation
47 reads
1 Comment
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