Tanka by Top Critiquers Poems
#tanka
~deadweight
viz :: ~deadweight/ tanka
#sadness
#love
#war
#memories
#tanka
888 reads
11 Comments
The Relativity of Speed (a Tanka)
..is when a small snail
Hangs tight to a turtle shell
While the turtle sails
At full speed running like hell
The snail will yell: Please, SLOW DOWN!
Hangs tight to a turtle shell
While the turtle sails
At full speed running like hell
The snail will yell: Please, SLOW DOWN!
#animals
#nature
#funny #tanka
#funny #tanka
515 reads
6 Comments
Art horny
poets turn me on
musicians-- sexy as fuck
artists of all sorts
stir the lava inside me
I bring it all home to you
musicians-- sexy as fuck
artists of all sorts
stir the lava inside me
I bring it all home to you
#lust
#marriage
#tanka
#art
#sensual
387 reads
7 Comments
blossomary I: anemone
( Tanka )
#nature
#spiritual
#tanka
#minimalist
#philosophical
967 reads
18 Comments
Desiccated
burning outside in
breathing in satanic dust
how I long for rain
pelting me with cold life force
hydrating my soul
breathing in satanic dust
how I long for rain
pelting me with cold life force
hydrating my soul
#desert
#rain
#tanka
144 reads
9 Comments
Wet vs Wood
Which one is stronger
wood is masculine and hard
wet is hot and soft
always seem to be opposed
but wet will always win over wood
wood is masculine and hard
wet is hot and soft
always seem to be opposed
but wet will always win over wood
#relationships
#tanka
726 reads
42 Comments
Polar
As your air frostbites
tears form with the overflow;
shaping icicles
from the emotions that rage
in the chambers of my heart.
tears form with the overflow;
shaping icicles
from the emotions that rage
in the chambers of my heart.
#heartbroken
#sadness
#tanka
35 reads
16 Comments
Conundrum
..
A switch in the dark,
using light to find the Light
and now for a spark...
TV was down way too low,
it is now up far too high.
A switch in the dark,
using light to find the Light
and now for a spark...
TV was down way too low,
it is now up far too high.
#philosophical
#tanka
190 reads
1 Comment
Making good
Who better to trust
than he who fixes all things —
rebuilds vehicles,
restores engines, repairs clocks,
builds, constructs and renovates?
than he who fixes all things —
rebuilds vehicles,
restores engines, repairs clocks,
builds, constructs and renovates?
#father
#men
#family
#cars
#tanka
535 reads
13 Comments
Don't Tell Me You're Against Sharing
Jordon came home and
became shocked at the sight of
her mother naked
and letting her college love
Boston hump Mom from behind.
became shocked at the sight of
her mother naked
and letting her college love
Boston hump Mom from behind.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
141 reads
0 Comments
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