Poems About the Sun Seeking Honest Critique
#sun
The_Nun_Runner
Poem Published
1st Dec 2023 1:28am
1st Dec 2023 1:28am
All The Queen’s Men II
It Speaks For Itself
#war
#sun
#moon
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1 Comment
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 5:40am
29th Nov 2023 5:40am
The Moon’s Reprisal
Upon the Creator’s image who belays this planet and rejoices in the demise of his superficial heart
Is a lost man to his own soul begging for redemption in the Sovereign dust to dark
To lay upon the thistles of his deferred dreams
Rich hands, empty offerings of soothing balm in the nature of his being
In the dense of his sanctuary, the intellect kneels for the reprieve of earth
Does not the soul in chaos still strive for rebirth
We struggle in our daily endeavors to find perfection in the evolution of the day
No seconds is...
Is a lost man to his own soul begging for redemption in the Sovereign dust to dark
To lay upon the thistles of his deferred dreams
Rich hands, empty offerings of soothing balm in the nature of his being
In the dense of his sanctuary, the intellect kneels for the reprieve of earth
Does not the soul in chaos still strive for rebirth
We struggle in our daily endeavors to find perfection in the evolution of the day
No seconds is...
#sun
#moon
#spiritual
267 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2023 00:32am
22nd Nov 2023 00:32am
Nightfall
There's nothing like November sun,
if billows will allow,
when westerlies are on the run
before the schooner prow...
as if to race the chariot,
at Apollo's command,
in beauty multivariate
above the sea and land.
And by the blaze of stellar beams
old autumn dies in gold
to set the tone for winter dreams
in polar vortex cold;
that deepest cold, where Phoebus sleeps,
and skies turn chasm blue
when argent tinsel starlight creeps...
into empyreal view!
if billows will allow,
when westerlies are on the run
before the schooner prow...
as if to race the chariot,
at Apollo's command,
in beauty multivariate
above the sea and land.
And by the blaze of stellar beams
old autumn dies in gold
to set the tone for winter dreams
in polar vortex cold;
that deepest cold, where Phoebus sleeps,
and skies turn chasm blue
when argent tinsel starlight creeps...
into empyreal view!
#sun
#sky
#fall #night
#fall #night
213 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2023 1:00am
17th Nov 2023 1:00am
THE DEEPNESS OF MANIFESTON
👋 it's been a while since we talked and spoke, I was wondering if you had a chance to explore, the true definition of what it means to be to be, open minded and confident that you are more stronger. Than you think due to the fact that you are a thinker. For example if you were given the opportunity, to be able to manifest your own thoughts, what would you. Want and need to change in your quest, for all that you have dreamed about in the still of the night, that still exists in the abyss of lost time. For example its easy to be awaken, by thoughts or imagination and to be able. To make...
#sun
#universe
#moon
#stars
#StreamOfConsciousness
253 reads
3 Comments
javalini
Poem Published
12th Nov 2023 12:33pm
12th Nov 2023 12:33pm
BRIGHT MORNING PRAYER
i am a devotee
of the star king
Ra,
touched
by silver hands
and swallowed by
heat
and light
i am healed
delivered
sanctified
saved
and resurrected
in the glory His bright
and holy day
amen
of the star king
Ra,
touched
by silver hands
and swallowed by
heat
and light
i am healed
delivered
sanctified
saved
and resurrected
in the glory His bright
and holy day
amen
#happiness
#sun
#summer #pagan
#summer #pagan
170 reads
4 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 4:32pm
17th Oct 2023 4:32pm
Man, Religion, And War
These two nations are at it again below was my comment during Lepperochan’s Forum Title “A forum to Condemn The Actions Of Israel
This was my comment below I uplifted in regard to these two nations fighting once again, I do not think it will ever be peace between these two spear-headed countries.
There is no honor in war, it only brings with it the casualties of its death.
Posted: 17th May 2021 7:32am
With much due respect, I am still researching this political conflict between the Israelites and...
This was my comment below I uplifted in regard to these two nations fighting once again, I do not think it will ever be peace between these two spear-headed countries.
There is no honor in war, it only brings with it the casualties of its death.
Posted: 17th May 2021 7:32am
With much due respect, I am still researching this political conflict between the Israelites and...
#war
#sun
#religion
#peace
#spiritual
406 reads
7 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
15th Oct 2023 7:04am
15th Oct 2023 7:04am
Mega Woman !!
Ayo uncle Luke I need the force to be with me just in case they try to get me!!
Rearrange put me aside, somewhere in the back where everybody can forget me!
So what's the price to these devices that we all dabble and dwell in, according to the church ⛪ it's all labeled as sin!!
A star 🌟 child filled with fire 🔥 full of knowledge wisdom and power!
Clairvoyant at will able to quench any thirst or desire!!
Always at one with the universe, able to break free of any curse, spiritually, mentally or verbally expressed...
Rearrange put me aside, somewhere in the back where everybody can forget me!
So what's the price to these devices that we all dabble and dwell in, according to the church ⛪ it's all labeled as sin!!
A star 🌟 child filled with fire 🔥 full of knowledge wisdom and power!
Clairvoyant at will able to quench any thirst or desire!!
Always at one with the universe, able to break free of any curse, spiritually, mentally or verbally expressed...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#moon
#stars
354 reads
6 Comments
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
The Gardener
Poem Published
5th Oct 2023 9:06pm
5th Oct 2023 9:06pm
Bed
Bed
I slept on the papyrus of your chest,
unafraid, and navigated
that testosterone trail of dark hair,
contrast to your light,
free of fear,
that stomach,
the leaned, left thigh -
soft fingers, laced on fingers,
pressed against cotton -
Sun blew her ghost
through the ruffled curtain pleat,
and we fumbled underneath words,
beyond rational thought,
beneath the natural merging
of hope and an ideal
we went on,
made sighed out promises,
traded elements of ourselves
replaced by something...
I slept on the papyrus of your chest,
unafraid, and navigated
that testosterone trail of dark hair,
contrast to your light,
free of fear,
that stomach,
the leaned, left thigh -
soft fingers, laced on fingers,
pressed against cotton -
Sun blew her ghost
through the ruffled curtain pleat,
and we fumbled underneath words,
beyond rational thought,
beneath the natural merging
of hope and an ideal
we went on,
made sighed out promises,
traded elements of ourselves
replaced by something...
#sun
#sleep
#dawn
282 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Oct 2023 7:57pm
4th Oct 2023 7:57pm
Making A Play For Some Other Bikini Chick
Rebecca went
to the beach
to catch some sun
only to see Jason
making a play for some
other bikini chick
who is unlike the one he's hitched to.
to the beach
to catch some sun
only to see Jason
making a play for some
other bikini chick
who is unlike the one he's hitched to.
#friendship
#corruption
#sun
#beach
#fiction
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Angeliki
Poem Published
26th Sep 2023 10:01am
26th Sep 2023 10:01am
His eyes
One look
And I know
I'm going to
Blow
He is my luck
I know by the way
He walks he talks
And the bright lights
I'm going to kill
I sigh like
The devil
Fire burning
Through my vains
A million times again
I want you
And spaceship
Thunder strikes
As my eyes meet
Yours
We cry from the moment
And you heal your
Destiny
To embrace my
Good fortune
I strip down
To my knickers
You smoothly slide
Them off
I wait for lust
To fill my breast
God thou art ...
And I know
I'm going to
Blow
He is my luck
I know by the way
He walks he talks
And the bright lights
I'm going to kill
I sigh like
The devil
Fire burning
Through my vains
A million times again
I want you
And spaceship
Thunder strikes
As my eyes meet
Yours
We cry from the moment
And you heal your
Destiny
To embrace my
Good fortune
I strip down
To my knickers
You smoothly slide
Them off
I wait for lust
To fill my breast
God thou art ...
#love
#sun
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Sep 2023 8:29pm
25th Sep 2023 8:29pm
While She Lays On The Beach
Her skin
keeps getting
wet by
the tide coming in
while she lays on the
beach in order to
relax
and get a
suntan.
keeps getting
wet by
the tide coming in
while she lays on the
beach in order to
relax
and get a
suntan.
#sun
#beach
#summer
#fiction
#dialogue
152 reads
4 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 9:54pm
24th Aug 2023 9:54pm
A Seam of Sapphire
Blue sapphire seam
Between shore and sky
Winter is far away
No sirens no trouble
The loud ones sleep off their hangovers
The red sky
The pink sky
The blue sky
Belongs to those who gaze
Up from the small world
A seam of sapphire
Between shore and sky
Glimmers under the sun
Winter is far away
The water is warm
No sirens no anger
No police
Quiet like a Victorian Sunday
Men walk about bare chested
If only the women could to
Every tree sings its own...
Between shore and sky
Winter is far away
No sirens no trouble
The loud ones sleep off their hangovers
The red sky
The pink sky
The blue sky
Belongs to those who gaze
Up from the small world
A seam of sapphire
Between shore and sky
Glimmers under the sun
Winter is far away
The water is warm
No sirens no anger
No police
Quiet like a Victorian Sunday
Men walk about bare chested
If only the women could to
Every tree sings its own...
#sea
#sun
276 reads
4 Comments
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