Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems
#spiritual
spiritual by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Stand Tall
The giraffe, guardian of my spark,
stands tall, silent sentinel.
Guardian spirit, infinite vision,
its calm presence my soul dwells.
Its gaze sweeps across the broad horizon,
as if seeing beyond the passing of time.
With graceful steps, she walks firmly,
bringing serenity that aligns me.
Our hearts beat in harmony,
gentle strength in eternal vigil.
Neck that touches stars and ground.
Unites the worlds in full communion.
I am happy to harbor such charm
and in its shadow I find my cloak.
My soul, which...
stands tall, silent sentinel.
Guardian spirit, infinite vision,
its calm presence my soul dwells.
Its gaze sweeps across the broad horizon,
as if seeing beyond the passing of time.
With graceful steps, she walks firmly,
bringing serenity that aligns me.
Our hearts beat in harmony,
gentle strength in eternal vigil.
Neck that touches stars and ground.
Unites the worlds in full communion.
I am happy to harbor such charm
and in its shadow I find my cloak.
My soul, which...
#beauty
#happiness
#love
#nature
#spiritual
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6 Comments
Evil Is My Name
Evil is the mind of the saints, resurrected.
666 is my name; untainted.
Alone at the top, but acquainted,
With all the suffering souls,
The evil of the bottomless pit.
Know me and know my name.
I am here for the fame.
Follow me to the promised land.
Marry me to your reign.
Our power will be seen on a world stage.
Come together
Let's multiply.
666 is my name; untainted.
Alone at the top, but acquainted,
With all the suffering souls,
The evil of the bottomless pit.
Know me and know my name.
I am here for the fame.
Follow me to the promised land.
Marry me to your reign.
Our power will be seen on a world stage.
Come together
Let's multiply.
#God
#heaven
#religion #spiritual
#religion #spiritual
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10 Comments
Don't ask humans for certain definitions!
The headlines being how they are, I decided to try a modest work around for the customary music group search response for the idiom "third eye blind" in order to get something like a sturdy definition for the much journalistically bandied term..."woke"...and behold, up came this well worded answer from artificial intelligence via quora.com and ChatGPT...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical #morality
#philosophical #morality
279 reads
8 Comments
Deja Vu
Take me beyond
deja vu,
beyond
The social script;
show me
something
I have never seen,
Something
supreme
O Queen
Of moon beam
frequency -
frequently
radiant,
Adjacent
Nascent
&
New;
Show me
how you do
what
You do,
Known,
By
only
a
few.
deja vu,
beyond
The social script;
show me
something
I have never seen,
Something
supreme
O Queen
Of moon beam
frequency -
frequently
radiant,
Adjacent
Nascent
&
New;
Show me
how you do
what
You do,
Known,
By
only
a
few.
#nature
#spiritual
#confessional #LifeCycle
#confessional #LifeCycle
326 reads
4 Comments
Leave that Shit at Church

#anger
#conflict
#spiritual
536 reads
6 Comments
Heaven Takes Away
Back then...
Granny had said that I was a particular child.
How I spent too much time questioning all
of the unreasonable things.
That I was tiresome to her,
when she'd take me to church, and
I wouldn't sit still while listening
to the nonsense of some mortal man
on a stage.
Because I could talk to God anytime,
without that interpreter giving me
his own version.
I'd tell granny, God doesn't see it that way.
She'd just shush me, sometimes handing me
a half-stick of gum...
Granny had said that I was a particular child.
How I spent too much time questioning all
of the unreasonable things.
That I was tiresome to her,
when she'd take me to church, and
I wouldn't sit still while listening
to the nonsense of some mortal man
on a stage.
Because I could talk to God anytime,
without that interpreter giving me
his own version.
I'd tell granny, God doesn't see it that way.
She'd just shush me, sometimes handing me
a half-stick of gum...
#fate
#spiritual
#philosophical
806 reads
36 Comments
The Poetic Universe
High above clouds blanketing a sleeping earth
pale horizon fades into the vast universe
Tiny dots of brilliance, so small to my eyes
possess magnitude that baffles my limited mind
If miniscule is enormous, then my big problems are small
as distance and eternity dwarf them all
A fresh perspective on our differences unfolding
as ancient light gains new meaning upon our beholding
The Creator of stars and planets and oceans
saw fit to equip me with words and emotions
So this gift I’ll employ to share a truth with you: ...
pale horizon fades into the vast universe
Tiny dots of brilliance, so small to my eyes
possess magnitude that baffles my limited mind
If miniscule is enormous, then my big problems are small
as distance and eternity dwarf them all
A fresh perspective on our differences unfolding
as ancient light gains new meaning upon our beholding
The Creator of stars and planets and oceans
saw fit to equip me with words and emotions
So this gift I’ll employ to share a truth with you: ...
#love
#spiritual
#universe
385 reads
11 Comments
Lucite Helicopter to Australia
This helicopter
in which you are riding
is entirely clear.
Lucite
Sturdy
You can see all the gears,
and the folding waves
of the lonely Pacific below.
In this helicopter,
you can see Freddie Mercury standing in the roomy cabin
this is a large model lucite helicopter)
and Brian May heading back to the cockpit.
He's an astrophysicist and rock star,
so why not a helicopter pilot too.
In this helicopter
made of lucite
for your viewing pleasure,
you can see birds
miniature breaching whales ...
in which you are riding
is entirely clear.
Lucite
Sturdy
You can see all the gears,
and the folding waves
of the lonely Pacific below.
In this helicopter,
you can see Freddie Mercury standing in the roomy cabin
this is a large model lucite helicopter)
and Brian May heading back to the cockpit.
He's an astrophysicist and rock star,
so why not a helicopter pilot too.
In this helicopter
made of lucite
for your viewing pleasure,
you can see birds
miniature breaching whales ...
#dreams
#sea
#spiritual #travel
#spiritual #travel
275 reads
10 Comments
Seek
If you can't find love
anywhere
Seek it within you
...it shall be there
anywhere
Seek it within you
...it shall be there
#heartbroken
#love
#minimalist #spiritual
#minimalist #spiritual
485 reads
38 Comments
21st Century Psychic Wars
Long worn out from the 21st century psychic wars
Shifting paradigm algorithms stimulate
The crux of slavery
Where no man is, someone goes to corrupt
Destructive deception, deceptive destruction
Emotional disposition is secondary to psychological conditioning
The law language logistics legislate logic
Hearts on sleeves beat like machines
A cover drumming to drilling for oil
Carnality, sounding crescendo
Masses concentrated convert magic to money
Money becomes nothing, like relativity meets alchemy
Family value is...
Shifting paradigm algorithms stimulate
The crux of slavery
Where no man is, someone goes to corrupt
Destructive deception, deceptive destruction
Emotional disposition is secondary to psychological conditioning
The law language logistics legislate logic
Hearts on sleeves beat like machines
A cover drumming to drilling for oil
Carnality, sounding crescendo
Masses concentrated convert magic to money
Money becomes nothing, like relativity meets alchemy
Family value is...
#humankind
#metaphor
#morality
#prose
#spiritual
17 reads
2 Comments
Lava
Your words, thick fire of molten lava
oozes over the surface of my skin.
I'm throbbing in the womb where life begins.
Sufficiently drenched in desire and sin.
I want you so deeply in.
I need, I crave.
Insanity pervades.
Lips of shiny pink copper
wait to feed on your breath.
To suck on your soul.
In my hollow.
The lava gets me Everytime.
oozes over the surface of my skin.
I'm throbbing in the womb where life begins.
Sufficiently drenched in desire and sin.
I want you so deeply in.
I need, I crave.
Insanity pervades.
Lips of shiny pink copper
wait to feed on your breath.
To suck on your soul.
In my hollow.
The lava gets me Everytime.
#lust
#sex
#spiritual
150 reads
12 Comments
anonymous
the book shop looked empty as he entered, such was his effect
#spiritual
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2 Comments
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