Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems
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spiritual by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
A Gruesome Affliction
As I experience dehydration
My body faces trauma
this progresses into suffocation
Chronic infection
echoes my demise
out of body experience
reduced to ash, hear my cries
My body faces trauma
this progresses into suffocation
Chronic infection
echoes my demise
out of body experience
reduced to ash, hear my cries
#death
#rhyming
#spiritual #suffering
#spiritual #suffering
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Closer To You
Someday, I'm gonna rise
With no tears in my eyes
When will the pain go away
Will today be the day
I keep on searching
For anyone that cares
Then my heart turns so cold
And I don't want to pray
The answer is simple
And I know what to do
I just pray anyway
To get closer to you
With no tears in my eyes
When will the pain go away
Will today be the day
I keep on searching
For anyone that cares
Then my heart turns so cold
And I don't want to pray
The answer is simple
And I know what to do
I just pray anyway
To get closer to you
#dark
#God
#spiritual
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An Open Door
There is nothing accidental
upon the road to dimensions of your destiny.
Within connecting energies
there is extraordinary electricity.
Encounters with certain random people
are an expansive open door.
A soul laser invitation to know the more.
The granting of dangling dreams
you've achingly yearned and adored.
Enlightened entry through your
seizing turquoise and navy swirled
sweet daggering eyes.
Do I really want to know
the revelation of my demise?
It will no longer matter,
in your rapturous realm divine.
upon the road to dimensions of your destiny.
Within connecting energies
there is extraordinary electricity.
Encounters with certain random people
are an expansive open door.
A soul laser invitation to know the more.
The granting of dangling dreams
you've achingly yearned and adored.
Enlightened entry through your
seizing turquoise and navy swirled
sweet daggering eyes.
Do I really want to know
the revelation of my demise?
It will no longer matter,
in your rapturous realm divine.
#universe
#spiritual
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IMPOTENCY OF LIES
TRUTH
I've never forgotten
the lessons I learned from
the Dharma taught by
Tibetan Buddist priests
in my quest for enlightenment
and reality.
I've recently been resurrecting
and meditating on a principle
related to Yin-Yang, the power
and role of opposites:
There is light and darkness,
Day and night,
Good and evil.
Truth and lies.
Etched in my cranium
are the words from a
teacher:
"A lie has never liberated
anyone, it may make it seem
to be so for a moment, but
in the end, will be...
I've never forgotten
the lessons I learned from
the Dharma taught by
Tibetan Buddist priests
in my quest for enlightenment
and reality.
I've recently been resurrecting
and meditating on a principle
related to Yin-Yang, the power
and role of opposites:
There is light and darkness,
Day and night,
Good and evil.
Truth and lies.
Etched in my cranium
are the words from a
teacher:
"A lie has never liberated
anyone, it may make it seem
to be so for a moment, but
in the end, will be...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#sacrifice
#tradition
423 reads
7 Comments
Biosemiosis
in nature there is a poem unwritten
conversation had through root systems
about the nature of itself, smitten
with all of life’s pulsing rhythms
the psalm of melodious birdsong
or show of a soulmate dancing along
life as we know it witnesses, each dawn
what is unspoken from mother to fawn
lives entangled together in chaos
words woven under a bed of damp moss
poetry a hymn among woodland gods
from forest river to mountain tops
from sun-kissed fields lit up bright
to the dark depths of ocean’s dive ...
conversation had through root systems
about the nature of itself, smitten
with all of life’s pulsing rhythms
the psalm of melodious birdsong
or show of a soulmate dancing along
life as we know it witnesses, each dawn
what is unspoken from mother to fawn
lives entangled together in chaos
words woven under a bed of damp moss
poetry a hymn among woodland gods
from forest river to mountain tops
from sun-kissed fields lit up bright
to the dark depths of ocean’s dive ...
#nature
#pagan
#spiritual
#symbolism
#WritingPoetry
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THROW THOSE CURTAINS WIDE
Throw those curtains wide,
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
#sun
#spiritual
#dawn
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4 Comments
I...We...She
I am a masterpiece
of misfiring wiring
half healed wounds
carefully tended to keep fester at bay
sometimes they need to remain open
for proper healing
from inside out
ventilating
because sealing to scar...
while infection brews within
can be fatal
I am a conundrum
of empathy & mistrust
guarded nature with an open heart
compassion
tempered by damage
both understanding
and afraid
experienced in hidden daggers
lodged in caring back
as open palms offer solace
...giving is done ...
of misfiring wiring
half healed wounds
carefully tended to keep fester at bay
sometimes they need to remain open
for proper healing
from inside out
ventilating
because sealing to scar...
while infection brews within
can be fatal
I am a conundrum
of empathy & mistrust
guarded nature with an open heart
compassion
tempered by damage
both understanding
and afraid
experienced in hidden daggers
lodged in caring back
as open palms offer solace
...giving is done ...
#strength
#women
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
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10 Comments
Flash Love
I give you my soul… daily
You take it and massage it
You know when I’m hurting
Then you say the perfect things
The words that allow me to come back..
To you
Even stronger than before
I live for that
You take it and massage it
You know when I’m hurting
Then you say the perfect things
The words that allow me to come back..
To you
Even stronger than before
I live for that
#love
#kindness
#spiritual
#LifeAsAWriter
#StreamOfConsciousness
217 reads
34 Comments
lasting impressions
you can
gather me
up in
your angel
like wings,
hide me,
tuck me
safely
next to
your breast,
i am
happy,
contented
here,
no dream
could
be better.
gather me
up in
your angel
like wings,
hide me,
tuck me
safely
next to
your breast,
i am
happy,
contented
here,
no dream
could
be better.
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual #redemption
#spiritual #redemption
129 reads
12 Comments
Manipulated Spirits?
Manipulated spirits?
Insinuation hears it.
Particulate the jeering.
Within you hate endearment.
Proliferate appearance.
Administrated weirdness.
Affiliated cheering.
Commiserate sincerest.
Anticipate a leering.
Origination gearing.
Capitulate some fearing.
Your indication clearest.
Initiation nearing.
Delineation dearest.
Deliberated fierceness.
Participation lyrics.
Articulated peering.
Assimilate from Seering.
Reciprocate what's realest.
Equivocation stealing.
...
Insinuation hears it.
Particulate the jeering.
Within you hate endearment.
Proliferate appearance.
Administrated weirdness.
Affiliated cheering.
Commiserate sincerest.
Anticipate a leering.
Origination gearing.
Capitulate some fearing.
Your indication clearest.
Initiation nearing.
Delineation dearest.
Deliberated fierceness.
Participation lyrics.
Articulated peering.
Assimilate from Seering.
Reciprocate what's realest.
Equivocation stealing.
...
#drugs
#metaphor
#morality
#rhyming
#spiritual
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5 Comments
I am Libra, Faithful and True
I am Libra, faithful and true
in the veiled realm of mysticism
with the mysterious shadows dance
to my heritage my birth sign
under the scales of samhain
I dance to the end of summer
looking towards its temporary death
to welcome the twilight hued autumn
and face spirits in their mystic trance
For upon this cosmic tapestry the veil between realms opens
and Libra's grace a beacon of love
entice them out who repose in otherworldly realms
Being born beneath the autumn's waning moon
I know Samhain's embrace my...
in the veiled realm of mysticism
with the mysterious shadows dance
to my heritage my birth sign
under the scales of samhain
I dance to the end of summer
looking towards its temporary death
to welcome the twilight hued autumn
and face spirits in their mystic trance
For upon this cosmic tapestry the veil between realms opens
and Libra's grace a beacon of love
entice them out who repose in otherworldly realms
Being born beneath the autumn's waning moon
I know Samhain's embrace my...
#spiritual
#SelfReflection
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10 Comments
The Kingdom Of Israel (Jezebel Part I Of Part II)
Oh, thy King Ahab of the fairest of thy sacred land
You are the most influential above any God, where you stand
I am the Queen who sits by you, and you are your own man
I will rule as your second voice of reasoning
Your words, the law of our covenant will be exorcised among many seasonings
Let not thy heart be worried with God’s law
We are here among the giants, we are the vision the sinful, divinity have not saw
Turn your heart away from this... this ruler who calls himself a deity, unspeakable blasphemy until he kneels at my...
You are the most influential above any God, where you stand
I am the Queen who sits by you, and you are your own man
I will rule as your second voice of reasoning
Your words, the law of our covenant will be exorcised among many seasonings
Let not thy heart be worried with God’s law
We are here among the giants, we are the vision the sinful, divinity have not saw
Turn your heart away from this... this ruler who calls himself a deity, unspeakable blasphemy until he kneels at my...
#spiritual
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1 Comment
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