Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems
#spiritual
spiritual by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The Joy of Knowing
The Joy of Knowing. . .
that in Spirituality
there is room for everyone,
no matter the god they serve,
nor how old or young.
Because we are all Spiritual
beings at the core
of this human cocoon
just waiting to emerge.
that in Spirituality
there is room for everyone,
no matter the god they serve,
nor how old or young.
Because we are all Spiritual
beings at the core
of this human cocoon
just waiting to emerge.
#spiritual
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Equality
She has my heart in
Holy water for it's an
Enigma it will clean me
Bound to the theories
Accepting what happens
Now we live to
Get going or die trying
So live life in moment
Make sure to Love not Hate
Equality should be now
Never judge people
Obscure the may be
World is watching us
Holy water for it's an
Enigma it will clean me
Bound to the theories
Accepting what happens
Now we live to
Get going or die trying
So live life in moment
Make sure to Love not Hate
Equality should be now
Never judge people
Obscure the may be
World is watching us
#women
#men
#spiritual
#acceptance
#emotional
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Don't ask humans for certain definitions!
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What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
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"The term 'third eye blind' is often used to describe someone who is unable to see or understand the...
What does it mean when someone is third eye blind?
ChatGPT
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#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical #morality
#philosophical #morality
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Will You
Ah will you let go, let go
Of everything you know, of everything you know
For thirty pieces of silver, thirty pieces of silver
Will your tongue fork and slither, fork and slither
Ah will you deny,deny
Before the sunrise, sunrise
Everything that you know, that you know
Before the cock crows, you deny what you know
Is the truth in you, after all that we've been through
How many times did I defend you, proving that my words are true
You placed your problems like wishes on my list
Claimed an undying love for me then did me like...
Of everything you know, of everything you know
For thirty pieces of silver, thirty pieces of silver
Will your tongue fork and slither, fork and slither
Ah will you deny,deny
Before the sunrise, sunrise
Everything that you know, that you know
Before the cock crows, you deny what you know
Is the truth in you, after all that we've been through
How many times did I defend you, proving that my words are true
You placed your problems like wishes on my list
Claimed an undying love for me then did me like...
#spiritual
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Cosmic charms
The divine will of the cosmos surrenders to me
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry
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Spirits we are
I considered her a light breeze
and i
a leaf
when i fell
she picked me up
took me
far away.
in my slow death
she caressed me
until once again
i rose
somewhere else.
she never
leaves me.
and i
a leaf
when i fell
she picked me up
took me
far away.
in my slow death
she caressed me
until once again
i rose
somewhere else.
she never
leaves me.
#nature
#spiritual
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Even Ten More Haikus
Conjuring:
Dissociable sleight
Phantom antagonism
Never really there
In The Air:
Demonolatry
Suggestible manipulation
Poses ironic
Naked and Famous:
Personable man
Fed unto the tempest wolves
Tattering attire
Observation of Above:
Allusive heavens
Seasonal makeshift bemused
Harvesting courses
Heart in Man:
Stubborn to the core
Intellectuality ...
Dissociable sleight
Phantom antagonism
Never really there
In The Air:
Demonolatry
Suggestible manipulation
Poses ironic
Naked and Famous:
Personable man
Fed unto the tempest wolves
Tattering attire
Observation of Above:
Allusive heavens
Seasonal makeshift bemused
Harvesting courses
Heart in Man:
Stubborn to the core
Intellectuality ...
#haiku
#humankind
#metaphor
#morality
#spiritual
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Sister, removed
I wish I had known you better.
I wish I could say I tried.
But I – buried under small bodies
and schedules and needs,
with just enough distance between us to be
inconvenient –
And you – for so long obscured from my view,
with my lifelong tormentor between us --
I just thought we’d have more time.
Eclipsed by his tortured shadow
of bluster and opinions and judgement,
she tossed out colourful sparkles
of beauty and care into our family,
touching us all with a thoughtfulness
much deeper than...
I wish I could say I tried.
But I – buried under small bodies
and schedules and needs,
with just enough distance between us to be
inconvenient –
And you – for so long obscured from my view,
with my lifelong tormentor between us --
I just thought we’d have more time.
Eclipsed by his tortured shadow
of bluster and opinions and judgement,
she tossed out colourful sparkles
of beauty and care into our family,
touching us all with a thoughtfulness
much deeper than...
#family
#shadows
#spiritual
#cancer
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Mmm… Inch Closer With Your Handsome Self
Eclipsing the feeling of a pulsating heart is a beautifully lassoed
Heart in midnight oasis bathes in its dew to fortified is consoled
The tender recipient of earth’s clandestine rule
Worn sentiments on the sleeve
The mind gently speaks when infinity seeps
Lust, desires, rapture merging under my sweeten honeyed grace
Whispered undulations of love to my ear from his handsome face
My love reaches across the vast of the sea
Passion and ecstasy from the...
Heart in midnight oasis bathes in its dew to fortified is consoled
The tender recipient of earth’s clandestine rule
Worn sentiments on the sleeve
The mind gently speaks when infinity seeps
Lust, desires, rapture merging under my sweeten honeyed grace
Whispered undulations of love to my ear from his handsome face
My love reaches across the vast of the sea
Passion and ecstasy from the...
#lover
#passion
#spiritual
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Solstice Eyes
With winter solstice eyes
of Shaman's creation
whispering to the gods
softly spoken
filtering the soul
healing in sleep
the touch of nature
behind the blinds
of Shaman's creation
whispering to the gods
softly spoken
filtering the soul
healing in sleep
the touch of nature
behind the blinds
#nature
#spiritual
#philosophical
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Because I believe....
Mary did you know?
and when did you believe...
Was is upon the most Oh Holy Night...
Did you Go tell it on the mountain?
Did you witness your baby boy
walk on all that water?
And when you did,
did Oh come all ye faithful
or did they think you were crazy
only because you did indeed
see what was needed
and Mary, I do believe...
and when did you believe...
Was is upon the most Oh Holy Night...
Did you Go tell it on the mountain?
Did you witness your baby boy
walk on all that water?
And when you did,
did Oh come all ye faithful
or did they think you were crazy
only because you did indeed
see what was needed
and Mary, I do believe...
#spiritual
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when there are no more wars left to fight
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe our gardens
will grow
greener
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe couples will
hold hands and
walk in the
sunset
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe hymns will
fill the
air
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe people will grow
old and die
naturally
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe love will
come out of
hiding ...
wars left to fight
maybe our gardens
will grow
greener
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe couples will
hold hands and
walk in the
sunset
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe hymns will
fill the
air
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe people will grow
old and die
naturally
when there are no more
wars left to fight
maybe love will
come out of
hiding ...
#spiritual
#morality
#karma
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